Love Fiend

by Chaos_Origins

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 4127

Twitch the changeling server his Queen Chrysalis by stealing the love from ponies through mating.

Twitch is a changeling that has been one of the most productive collectors of love, the energy that drives life for changelings. Of course, he gets his energy a little, well, differently than the others. While others get it through being around ponies in love, he gets his through mating! Mass amounts of Clop, just so ya know.

Published 2012-11-05 04:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-05 23:21:56 UTC

Chapter 1: All Your Love is Mine

Twitch nervously sat outside of Angel Heart’s door. He went to raise his hoof to the door, but then shrank away and let his nerves get the best of him. He knew she would want to if he asked her. He could feel it in her love; after all, he was a changeling. Maybe that’s what made him feel nervous. She didn’t know it; he could never let that happen. He had always kept the form of a light gray Pegasus, never showing his true form. He pushed back the butterflies in his stomach as he raised his hoof and knocked on her door. He watched as the door slowly opened and a gorgeous mare stood before him. She had a light pink coat with a flowing white mane and a pair of white fluffy wings. She began to speak in a voice that could melt even the coldest of hearts.

“Hi Twitch. Sorry if I look bad, I didn’t have a chance to do any makeup since I didn’t know you were coming…”

“No no no, don’t worry. You look great. If it’s any value to you, I think you look just as beautiful without makeup as you do with it.”

She tucked her head back and a blush appeared on her face, “Thank you. Please, come in.”

Twitch followed her into her house and sat down in the living room with her on the couch.

“Can I get you anything? Maybe some tea?”

“No, no. It’s quite alright. I actually have something very important to ask you.”

“Really? What is it?”

“Well… It’s kinda hard to say. I feel like if I do you won’t like me anymore…”

Angel wrapped her hooves around Twitch and nuzzled into him, “You can tell me anything. I promise it won’t change how I feel about you.”

“That’s just it though; I want it to change how you feel about me.” Twitch swallowed, “I want to be more than just friends.”

That’s when he felt it. He could feel energy flowing from her like a river. He felt her love wrap around him and become part of him; feeding him; exciting him.

“Twitch… I… I’ve wanted to be more than friends for a long time.”

Twitch was about to ask how long she had felt that way when he felt her lips press against his. He was stuck in a moment of bliss, uncertain what to do. He felt her tongue pressing against his mouth and slowly allowed her entry. As her tongue entered his mouth he felt a wave of energy crash over him. He’d never fed on this much at one time before. He pushed his tongue against hers until he had gained dominance over the kiss. He proceeded to explore her mouth until she broke away and gently pushed him onto his back.

She straddled his chest and leaned over, kissing him once more. Their lips parted quickly and she moved her marehood to his mouth. Twitch stared incredulously at the already soaking slit in front of him. He got close and blew hot air on it causing Angel to shudder. He gingerly placed his lips on it and she released a small eep. He dragged his tongue across the slit and her breaths began to quicken until she was near panting. After he felt like he had teased her enough he pushed the entire length of his tongue into her slit. She let out a low moan as he sent tingling sensations up and down her body. He took his hoof and pressed it against her clit, rubbing it in small fast circles. She began to shudder as she felt heat building up between her legs.

“Twitch… I’m gonna…”

Before she could finish she let out a scream as an orgasm rocked her whole body and her wings shot straight out. Twitch happily swallowed her fluids as they entered his mouth, her taste reminded him of a cool drink after a day of hard work under a hot sun; it tasted sweet and refreshing. She moved her slit from his face and slumped down on top of him, wrapping him in her arms. She looked exhausted, but he wasn’t about to let the fun stop there. He slowly moved her hips backwards until her marehood has pressed against the side of his member. He ground against her slit and her eyes slowly widened.

“Twitch… I’m… I’m not sure I’m ready for this…”

“Trust me, you’ll like it. Just believe in me.”

“Okay. This is my first time though, so be gentle…”

Twitch nodded as she raised her hips up, her marehood begging to be filled. He pointed his member up and watched as she dropped straight onto it. She let out a shriek as it pierced her and buried her head into his chest, tears in her eyes. He quickly wrapped her in his hooves, kissing through her mane in an attempt to comfort her through the pain.

“I know it hurts, it always does the first time. Just try not to move too much and I promise the pain will fade.”

Angel nodded and kept her head against him, taking in his warmth. She felt the pain starting to ebb and slowly moved her hips up and down. The pain was quickly replaced by pleasure as she picked up speed. Twitch began to groan as he felt her begin to throw herself down more violently and at a faster pace. Twitch placed his hooves on her flank and pushed her down onto his member which caused her moans to become louder and her panting to increase its speed. She slowed down her bouncing until she came to a complete stop. She started grinding forwards and backwards causing Twitch to throw his head back in ecstasy. He wrapped her in his arms and spun around, placing her gently beneath him. He pulled back and viewed her in all her glory. He buried his head in her stomach causing her to start uncontrollably laughing as he rubbed against it. Her laughing was slowly replaced by moans as he pushed himself into her again.

He gently pushed both legs apart, spreading her wide across the large couch. He pushed his full length into her and pumped slowly. She let out a shriek of pleasure as the full length of member stretched her marehood to its max. He slowly picked up speed as he felt heat begin to build up in his groin. He felt it reach its near-max and prepared himself for what was to come. Not just his climax, but what would happen afterwards. After all, that was the reason he was here. He slammed his full length into her and released his seed deep into her womb. She let out a cry as the hot fluids coursed through her, causing her to release yet another orgasm of her own.

As she lay back on the couch, her energy completely exhausted, Twitch started his process. He sucked the love and her energy directly from its source. He was the only changeling that got its energy through this method. It was harder to feed, but when he did he could be satisfied for months, even years. Most changelings simply absorbed the love from their host from the aura that surrounds them, but that was inefficient and yielded smaller gains of energy. His method was very similar, but he pulled the energy while he was already inside the pony he wanted the love from; he pulled it directly from inside their body. Luckily for him, a mare’s marehood was the perfect place to do this. It gave an easy way to enter another pony's body and was much easier that cutting them open and doing it that way.

After he had completed his feeding he left one last kiss on Angel’s forehead before he walked out of the house, never to return to her. She would be left heartbroken, but she would eventually move on. They all did. After all, that was the effect of a changeling. They loved, fed, and then moved on. Twitch spread his wings and began his long journey from Manehatten back to his birthplace to return the energy so they could feed the young changelings who were starving.

Twitch flew for many hours before he reached the hive. He deposited his spare energy and then returned to his home. Every week it was the same thing. Mate, deposit, return home; every damn week. He trotted over to his couch and released his disguise. He looked no different than any other changeling, save the different coloring. While most changelings were a form of teal or turquoise and black, he was black and orange. It had always made him stand out, but he was different after all. He had finally gotten comfortable on his couch when he heard a knock on his door.

“Are you kidding me…?”

Twitch got up and opened the door. He stepped back surprised to see two of the royal guards.

“The Queen wishes to speak to you. Please come with us.”

Twitch just nodded, his mouth hanging open in awe. What did the Queen want with him? He followed the guards through the intricate maze that was the Hive until they arrived in the throne room. The guards stepped back and closed the doors leaving Twitch alone with the Queen.

The Queen slowly rose and walked towards him. Twitch bowed in respect, but she raised him to his feet with her magic.

“Your highness…”

“Please, call me Chrysalis.”

“But… You’re a Queen… I have to show my respect…”

“And you have single-hoofedly fed seventy percent of this Hive. So allow me to show you some respect.”

Twitch nodded slowly, “Okay… Chrysalis… What did you call me in for?”

“I wanted to thank you for your services. What you did is beyond impressive and it has gained my attention.”

“Well, thank you for your commendations.”

“Also, I have a task for you.”

“What is it?”

“Before I tell you, there is something I need to do.”

“What’s that?”

Chrysalis walked to him and placed the tip of her horn on his flank. He felt a burning sensation as she poured magical energy into him. When she stepped back, there was a mark of a green coat of arms on his flank.

“That symbol is something that I only give to my highest ranking subjects. Congratulations, as of this day you are now Sir Twitch, Knight of the Hive.”

“Wait so I’m a Knight?”

“That’s correct. Also, I have your first assignment.”

“What is it Chrysalis?”

“There’s a town we found that has an abnormally high amount of energy. I believe this town is currently in heat and the number of stallions is very… well… limited.”

“What town? I will bring back enough energy to last us a lifetime!”

“Such enthusiasm… I may have to try you out myself sometime…”

Twitch ducked his head down, a blush on his face.

“The town’s name is Ponyville. Your first task as a Knight of the Hive is to go there and retrieve as much energy as possible. But remember, the better your relationship with them, the more energy you’ll get from them when you mate with them.”

“I understand.”

“Then you shall leave tomorrow, the best of luck to you.”

Twitch nodded and departed. He returned to his home and laid down on the couch. This would be his last day at the hive for some time. If there was really as much energy as she acted like there was… He could be there for months. Twitch began to drool as pictures began to fill his head. He imagined pictures of mares lining the streets, all dripping and flaunting their plots. His dreams slowly overtook him as he fell asleep to the images of endless mating playing in his head.

Note: I am currently in search of an editor. I will not be releasing any more chapter (even though chapter 2 is already up) until I can find an editor. If you would like to be an editor for my story, please send me a message and I will get back to you as soon as I can.

Chapter 2: And so it Begins

Just a notification, since changelings can change gender, so will the pronouns associated with Twitch. If Twitch is male I will say "he". If Twitch is female I will say "She". Just a heads up.

“Oh yes, harder! I want more Twitch! Twitch! TWITCH!”

Twitch eyes shot open as he was ripped from his dreams by a shouting Chrysalis.

“Finally you’re awake. You’re a really heavy sleeper. I must have said your name ten times before you actually woke up.”

“Why would you wake me up form such a great dream..?”

“You need to begin on your way to Ponyville if you plan to make it there by nightfall.”

“It’s that far away?”

“Yes it is. Now please follow me, I have some things I wish to give you to make your stay there easier.”

Twitch nodded and began to follow her through the Hive tunnels. He couldn’t help but notice how toned her flank was as he walked behind her. He followed with his eyes as it swayed from side to side. Slowly his eyes moved a bit lower until he could easily see her moist…

“Enjoying the view are we?”

Twitch took his focus off her flank and saw that she had been watching him the whole time. Chrysalis just laughed and bounced her flank causing Twitch to look down with a huge blush on his face.

“There’s no need to be embarrassed. I’ve caught plenty of my subjects staring before, but none of them were nearly as good looking as you…”

Twitch looked up with a confused look on his face, “What do you mean?”

“I’ll tell you what, you do this mission well and I’ll reward you with a… Special reward. If you catch my drift.”

“Oh… Yeah I do, and I accept! Now what do I need to make this mission go easily.”

“Well, if you had stopped staring at my flank you would have noticed were in the storage rooms.”

“Oh… Well I see that now…”

“Good, now on the wall in front of you are ten profiles. You can select to become any of these ponies, but you have to go with their story. Also there is a bag with bits on the counter, all of that is yours to use freely.”

“Wow, thank you. I’m going to start reading the profiles.”

“Of course, and good luck my Knight.”

With that Chrysalis left leaving Twitch to his work.

“Let’s see… Well three of these are mares. I guess that means some of them must be filly foolers… I’ll start with the mare form and see if I can find out who likes what gender and then work from there. Now… Unicorn, Earth Pony, or Pegasus…”

Twitch pondered on the thought for a while.

“Well, Earth pony means more stamina so I could mate more in one day, but Pegasus can reach anywhere… I guess the Unicorn could also use magic to please others as well… decisions decisions… I think I’ll start with Pegasus.”

Twitch swiped the profile off the counter and tied the sack of bits around his waist. He trotted to the nearest window and jumped out. He quickly spread his wings and took off, reading the profile on his way to Ponyville.

“Alright so let’s see here… My name’s Lone Star. Intersting… So what do I do?”

Twitch flipped through the portfolio until he came across a page that listed abilities and talents.

“Alright so I’m a flyer, sounds simple enough. I am currently training to become the fastest flyer in Equestria and I’ve been training for five years. Well this is easy enough…”

Twitch flipped to the job section.

“I was recently re-assigned to help manage the weather around Ponyville, alright got it. This should be a piece of cake! Ahh I hope they have cake there, I love cake… Now what does this mare look like…”

He flipped back to the front cover and got a good look at the picture of the mare. She had a deep, silky black coat and a long silver mane and tail. She had a cutie mark of a shooting star and had light purple eyes. In his opinion she looked pretty cute.

Twitch slipped the profile into the same bag he had the bits in and tied it on tightly. He focused on the image of the mare in his head and began to force magic through his veins. His body was surrounded by an orange aura and then flashed, leaving in its place an exact replication of Lone Star.

“Damn this feels good; I’d forgotten how it feels to be a mare since it’s been so long.”

She flapped the wings and smiled as she realized how big they were. She caught a huge amount of air in the pocket of her wings and thrusted herself forwards, easily tripling her previous speed. She ran her hooves through her mane and against her coat, taking in the feeling of the silky smoothness and lightness of the new body. She carefully placed one of her hooves on her nether regions, carefully rubbing it. Her face turned bright red as a familiar tingle swept her body. She quickly pulled her hoof back and began moving as fast as she could to Ponyville, beyond eager to test out her new body.

After almost ten hours of flying Lone Star finally reached Ponyville. She landed in the center of the town, utterly exhausted. She took a quick look at her surroundings. It was nothing fancy. Just your run of the mill average town. She turned to go elsewhere in the town when she found herself inches away from a pink pony with a smile that could make even the most depressed of ponies cheery once more.

“Hi my names Pinkie Pie what’s your name are you near here you must be new here because I know everypony and since I don’t know you that must mean your new and if your new that means I need to throw you a party which means I need to go get prepared bye!”

With that the Pinkie Pie shot off leaving a pink blur behind her. Lone Star just sat there, one of her eyes twitching, totally confused as to what had just happened. She just shook her head and continued on her way through the town to try and see what it was like.

In her opinion, the town really was nothing special. It had a town hall, library, food shops, a boutique, and some homes. Just an ordinary town.

“Why did she say the energy concentration here was so high… I don’t feel anything unusual. Maybe it’s just because everyponies working because it’s mid-day…”

Lone Star decided that the best thing to do would be to try and find the Pegasus who is already working in Ponyville. She spread her wings and shot up into the clouds. After flying above the clouds for a while she spotted a rainbow blur on one of the clouds. She flew closer slowly, trying to get a better look at the pony without the pony noticing her getting progressively closer. She got close enough where she could here small moans coming from the rainbow mare. Lone Star figured she must be clopping and thought that it might be best to return at a better time. But as usual curiosity got the better of her and she landed about ten feet behind the rainbow mare.

She sheepish greeted the rainbow mare, “Um… Hi…”

The mare shot around, her face bring red, “Oh… Um… Hi, I’m Rainbow Dash.”

“Lone Star.”

“So… about what you just saw…”

“Don’t worry about it. From what I understand you’re in heat correct?”

“Well, yeah… It’s almost mating season after all.”

Lone Star pointed to the puddle behind Rainbow, “So… Would you maybe like some… Help… With your little problem?”

“Well… I’m not sure…”

“Cmon, it’ll be fun! Besides, nopony has to know.”

“I don’t know… I mean, you just got here and…”

Before Rainbow could finish Lone Star pressed her lips against hers and had wrapped her wings around Rainbow. Rainbow slowly laid lack Star and straddled her legs around her waist. Star pushed her tongue against Rainbows mouth until she allowed Star to explore her mouth. Rainbow let her twirl around in her mouth, enjoying the sweet taste of lust and saliva. Rainbow began grinding her marehood against Star’s stomach, slowly dampening her coat with her fluids. Rainbow slipped one of her hooves inbetween Star’s legs and began rubbing her clit. Star pushed her tongue as deep into Rainbow’s mouth as she could and grabbed Rainbow’s flank, grinding it against herself even harder until Rainbow began to let out small, fast pants.

Star felt pressure building up inbetween her legs as she neared her climax. She let out a muffled cry as her fluids sprayed across the cloud. Her fluids soaked into the cloud and made it turn a slightly darker shade of gray. Rainbow on the other hand, continued to grind against Star, not even near her climax. Star had to admit, the mare had stamina, but that wasn’t going to stop Star. Star pushed against Rainbow’s lips hard, taking the mare by surprise. Star lifted her flank and pushed her backwards, tossing Rainbow onto her back. Star wrapped each of Rainbow’s legs under and arm and took a more dominant pose over Rainbow. Rainbow looked up at her, a small grin on her face.

Star wasted no time in getting into it. She put her mouth right against Rainbow’s marehood and inserted the maximum length of her tongue. Rainbow wasn’t expecting it to be so quick and let out a small cry. It soon was reduced to a whimper as Star twirled her tongue in and out of Rainbow, tickling her insides and racking Rainbow’s body with waves of pleasure. Rainbow felt heat building up in her marehood as Star continued her attack on Rainbow. Star moved her face away and rubbed Rainbow’s slit with her hoof in quick, small circles. Rainbow let out a shriek of pleasure as she climaxed, spraying her fluids into the air and all across the cloud. Rainbow and Star both laid down, absolutely exhausted.

“That… Was fun…” Rainbow muttered, barely being able to speak between breaths.

“Yeah, it was.”

“You know, it’s getting dark. If you don’t have somewhere to stay the night you can come stay with me.”

“No, it’s okay. I like lying out under the stars.”

“Well, would you mind if I joined you then?”

“No, not at all.”

Rainbow scooted over next to Star and laid back next to her, staring up at the sunset the shone across the sky. The pinks and purples of the magnificent sunset reflected off Star’s mane, giving it a shimmering, mystical appearance. Rainbow couldn’t help but notice how pretty Star looked, not to mention how toned she was…

“You like the view?”

Rainbow snapped out of her trance and realized that she had seen her staring at Star. Rainbow’s face turned slightly red, but Star just giggled and moved closer to her. Star wrapped her forehooved around Rainbow and pulled her tight so that their chests were pressed against eachother. The two wrapped around eachother until they were like one rainbow and black ball. Star gave Rainbow one more quick kiss before she prepared for sleep.

“Star.”

Star nuzzled into Rainbow’s neck, “Yeah Rainbow?”

“We’re friends right? I mean, I’m not really a filly fooler… I just sorta got… carried away…”

“Don’t worry about it; I’m not a filly fooler either. Your secret’s safe with me.”

“Ok good, but you didn't answer my first question.”

“Yes Rainbow, of course we’re friends.”

Rainbow nodded and a small smile grew on her face. Star held her close as she began to fall asleep. The day had been an overall success. She had made a connection to the town and could now learn all about its civilians. It was a bit sad that she couldn't take a ton of Rainbow’s love though. For some reason a mare to mare bond barely worked with her abilities. It wasn't of huge concern though, she had still had fun. Plus, how often does a pony get to taste a rainbow? Almost never. A small smile grew on Star’s face as she drifted off to sleep in the arms of her newly found friend, Rainbow Dash.