negitives rampage

The night was unusual warm as a dark figure walked down the street, nopony knew that this rare sighting meant that somepony was going to die. The hooded pony carried on down the dirt path, Its a shame about my last apprentice good help is so hard to find especially if you carefully buried the remains. He thought,  the dark pony lord look into the sky and there they where, two perfect targets, Alicorns were the rarest of the rare and this would be a bloody fight but one he would very much enjoy.  The black alicorn is the first to spot the dark pony, interested in him he flies down to see him and his brother shortly follows him down. Standing proud the dark pony announced him self "I am Negative, and you two are truly amazing."  Negative began to gaze into the eyes of what he had started and for the first time he knew what fear felt like  their is fight in this one I cant take them both alone he panicked.Seeing the dark pony the black alicorn senses something and says "I am Black Diamond, this is my twin White Diamond. Why have you come here?"

Stay calm Negative demanded of him self. "That is of my business you dog, show some respect  when you address me. I am Negative." Black Diamond stared at Negative for a few seconds, "You have got to be kidding me! You want respect? Earn it." Upon hearing this Negative pounced on White Diamond and began to beat respect you want me to stop tell me you respect me" he scremed  "I'm gonna kill your twin unless you show me proper respect". "get off my brother or die do you want to meet the most powerful being in the world" says black diamond  "black you ready" white starts to jump around and shake trying to get negitive off his back im as ready as ill ever be" says black diamond white drags himself over to black diamond there horns touch and in a flash of light and darkness a new figure is standing in their place. " we are summer eclipse you tried to kill white diamond but in truth as long as either white or black diamond is alive you can not kill either. now do you want to die" "ha are you serious now i need only kill one of you's" Negative hungry for the kill rushed in to the attack not noticing black diamond creeping up from behind. "Do me a favor and kiss the void " negative. yelled and charged forward. Black diamond taking his chance tackled negative and wrapped his hooves around his neck . negative was now staring his own death in the face was this really the end he felt every thing go black as he was plunged into the void from this new unholy plane he herd the whispering of his attacker i don't want to kill you i want to be your apprentice im sick of every pony telling me what to do i hate it i hate every pony negative eyes snapped open the get off me you fool and let us make our escape yes let us go black diamond lets go of of him, grab my sholder and i will teleport us away i know of a hideout where no pony else does. your help couldn't have come at a better time my last apprentice has joined my pathetic father. in the void. "what happened to him." says black diamond negative gazed right into  his eye and said with a laughed why i killed him of course black diamond looked at his new master and just laughed, "i guess he wasn't what you were looking for in an apprentice"  "he wasn't  he developed a back bone and stood up to me"  he situation was bad he couldn't keep his new pet on his leash alone that's when he realized she could do it. negative smiled and said i need you to pick my daughter up from the morgue she should be done playing by now" black diamond looked before the dark pony with a look of shock  " well okay "  black diamond confused at this point started towards the door  "don't forget any thing happens to her I will personally escort  you into oblivion is that clear" yes sir black replied as he left their new base in the mountains