negitives rampage

by therainbowvortex

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 1243

hate beads hate and hate brings forth death

this is the some what dark story of the dark pony lord my oc negitive

( and yes I know I spelt his name wrong its just what I do deal with it )

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-13 14:21:40 UTC

his name is negitve

The night was unusual warm as a dark figure walked down the street, nopony knew that this rare sighting meant that somepony was going to die. The hooded pony carried on down the dirt path, Its a shame about my last apprentice good help is so hard to find especially if you carefully buried the remains. He thought,  the dark pony lord look into the sky and there they where, two perfect targets, Alicorns were the rarest of the rare and this would be a bloody fight but one he would very much enjoy.  The black alicorn is the first to spot the dark pony, interested in him he flies down to see him and his brother shortly follows him down. Standing proud the dark pony announced him self "I am Negative, and you two are truly amazing."  Negative began to gaze into the eyes of what he had started and for the first time he knew what fear felt like  their is fight in this one I cant take them both alone he panicked.Seeing the dark pony the black alicorn senses something and says "I am Black Diamond, this is my twin White Diamond. Why have you come here?"

Stay calm Negative demanded of him self. "That is of my business you dog, show some respect  when you address me. I am Negative." Black Diamond stared at Negative for a few seconds, "You have got to be kidding me! You want respect? Earn it." Upon hearing this Negative pounced on White Diamond and began to beat respect you want me to stop tell me you respect me" he scremed  "I'm gonna kill your twin unless you show me proper respect". "get off my brother or die do you want to meet the most powerful being in the world" says black diamond  "black you ready" white starts to jump around and shake trying to get negitive off his back im as ready as ill ever be" says black diamond white drags himself over to black diamond there horns touch and in a flash of light and darkness a new figure is standing in their place. " we are summer eclipse you tried to kill white diamond but in truth as long as either white or black diamond is alive you can not kill either. now do you want to die" "ha are you serious now i need only kill one of you's" Negative hungry for the kill rushed in to the attack not noticing black diamond creeping up from behind. "Do me a favor and kiss the void " negative. yelled and charged forward. Black diamond taking his chance tackled negative and wrapped his hooves around his neck . negative was now staring his own death in the face was this really the end he felt every thing go black as he was plunged into the void from this new unholy plane he herd the whispering of his attacker i don't want to kill you i want to be your apprentice im sick of every pony telling me what to do i hate it i hate every pony negative eyes snapped open the get off me you fool and let us make our escape yes let us go black diamond lets go of of him, grab my sholder and i will teleport us away i know of a hideout where no pony else does. your help couldn't have come at a better time my last apprentice has joined my pathetic father. in the void. "what happened to him." says black diamond negative gazed right into  his eye and said with a laughed why i killed him of course black diamond looked at his new master and just laughed, "i guess he wasn't what you were looking for in an apprentice"  "he wasn't  he developed a back bone and stood up to me"  he situation was bad he couldn't keep his new pet on his leash alone that's when he realized she could do it. negative smiled and said i need you to pick my daughter up from the morgue she should be done playing by now" black diamond looked before the dark pony with a look of shock  " well okay "  black diamond confused at this point started towards the door  "don't forget any thing happens to her I will personally escort  you into oblivion is that clear" yes sir black replied as he left their new base in the mountains

meeting zircon

alpha sat in the park  reading a  very old book titled signs and omens he was so distracted with it he didn't notices the large gathering of crows on the other side of the park this gathering was not natural it was because the truth was death was coming to ponyvill or more likely had all reddy arrived he wanted to stay and keep reading but was disrupted when a small purple filly ran past her and dived under a bush  he couldn't help but feel interested in the young filly for reasons she couldn't place  she seemed just like a normal young filly then from under the bush he saw a sparkle of a chain  and... at this point alpha steeped back "is that bone" he said  a little to loud the purple pony had herd him and begun to race off down the street  spedaly turning down the rood to the hospital. across from town a dark shadow  strolled in to town he  wore a  menacing look badly scratched

from being forced to climb down the mountain instead of fly  black diamond was not in a good mood as he walked though the street nearby pony fled in fear of him he could hear the muttering about him  they feared they reeked of it  he continued down the path trying to attract little attention as he begun his search for the morgue finely finding it down an alleyway as soon as he entered the coldness hit him  and  a gust of wind sent the door slamming shut   shuddering black  spoke up " zir.. zircon   you here n. negitive sent me black  heard small hoofsteps followed by a small voice " what's that a fly caught in my web  looks like my daddy sent you to die what a shame" black smiled slightly before replying well you must be zircon your daddy sent me to get you.  " aww you sure are lucky " zircon muttered   coming out from behind a hanging body " did daddy get me a new  charm yet " the excited filly  yelled  "im not sure lets find out shall we" black said going for the door   as they walked out and down the street  they saw a pony lying on the ground dead ripped apart his blood was spilled soaking the ground zircon couldn't help but smile as she herd the blood splash on the ground  black was impressed this pony had been killed recently " daddy has been busy" zircon piped up  black found his eyes fixed on the body as he saw one eye slowly open and he saw the pain in his eye " finish him you fool " black almost fell over as he looked over seeing his master negitive beside him kill him or are you scared he repeated    black flys in to the air using magic he enlongates his horn and flys straight down impaleling the pony straight through the head breaking off a piece of bone and handing it to zircon smiling he says heres a new charm for you zircon"  zircon smiled and gave black diamond a big hug as she screamed  "oh thank you thank you thank you I love it"