Bloodstained

by Captain Grim

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 702

This is my absolute first time writing a fic.

This is just a try. If you like it, then i will continue. If you hate it, then i will stop. Criticism is allowed.

English is not my main language but i will try as hard as i can :)

YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN'T HIDE DASHIE!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-08 15:05:42 UTC

Dead end

She was running as fast as she could, but she could still hear the psychopathic laugh through the corridors like an echo in a cave.

"YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN'T HIDE!"

Her wings were not there anymore. Instead there were two huge flesh wounds taking the place.

She was bleeding. Badly. She had deep cuts and bruises all over her body, and her manes colour had a majority of red instead of  a rainbow. As she was running, she could hear her chaser come closer and closer. She had no idea where she was running. All she wanted was to come so far away from that maniac as possible. She could feel her adrenaline pump through her body like a train as she was running.

"WHY ARE YOU RUNNING DASHIE! DON'T YOU WANNA HAVE FUN WITH ME?! JUST LIKE YOU OTHER FRIENDS HAD"

At the mention of her friends she could drop a tear to the cold corridor floor as she was running. She felt like she had run for hours, only thought she had run for at least 5 minutes. As she was running, she could only feel all hope just drain itself out of her as she came in front of the only thing in the world you NOT wanted in a situation like this.

...A dead end.

She turned around just in time to see her chaser enter the same hallway as her. She could she her chaser now. There was a smile on his face that only somepony who had lost it's mind completley could possibly be ABLE to make. But something was wrong... He wasn,t a pony. Instead of a pony it was a bipedal creature that looked like a hairless monkey. The creature wore a bloodstained shirt that looked like it had been mauled by a manticore. It also had some bloodstained trousers on it's lower part of the body. It also wore blood filled bandages all over it's face, except for it's eyes and mouth. It carried a huge fire axe in it's hands that  were stained dried blood. For her, it was like staring in to a demon.

"Well looky here! A dead end! That's sad...I LIKED IT MORE WHEN TOU WERE RUNNING!"

At those words he began to sprint towards her with the fire axe over his head. For Rainbow Dash it seemed like the time slowed down and everything happened in slow motion. She could hear her own heartbeats like a drum. THUMP THUMP, THUMP THUMP She knew she was going to die, so she thought about the only thing in the world she could think about in this moment. Her life.

....She rememberd when she learned to fly as a filly....

....She rememberd how excited she was when she started school....

....She rememberd her first kiss....

....She rememberd her friends....

At the thought of her friends she dropped small tears on the floor. But then she realized she would be meeting them soon. The thought gave her a small smile on her face, she slowly closed her eyes and imbraced for the impact.

"gonna be nice to see you again." she said with her last breath.

Rainbow Dash world came to a stop as the axe entered her skull, and she drifted into a deep sleep..................

A/N NOTE: Ok so this was my first fan fic EVER. i know it was REEEEEEAAALY short but this was my first time and i really did't have any ideas :P. If ANYONE thought this was kind of good then please tell me want i need to improve. I,m not excpecting any 5 stars. And all those who hate it......Please be gentle on the comments :(.

Critcism is allowed :).

link to MAIN story

Okay! So after a lot of thoughs i made a WHOLE story about this man and how he got there, and why he started killing ponies etc etc. This story will be ALOT etter than this one, and that's a promise. The chapters are also much longer. to those who wants to check it out can click on this link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6246/Bloodstained%3A-The-Beginning

And just be cause i like you so much.....Here's a cute picture of two cats in cups