Gentle

by PegasisBrony

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Comedy, Big Macintosh, Fluttershy
Length: 4012

Fluttershy would never have thought that a stallion like Big Macintosh would be so gentle. She found it simply... adorable.

Fluttershy once saw a strong red stallion taking care of animals. Never had she been so amazed. The pegasus had been secretly watching him since that day, whenever Big Mac would take care of animals. It was secret, but fun.

EDIT: OKAY. I AM SO SO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING THIS in such a long time! AUGH. Let me explain:

*I kind of lost my passion for my little pony
*Writers block
*School

Yeah, yeah, i knoow i shouldn't make excuses and all but its true. Just let me thank you all for the wonderful comments and thumbs up!
As a thank you for commenting, rating and favouriting I'll take my time to complete this story ASAP. But please give me more feedback, they really do mean a lot for me. And I want to know if my old readers are still out there!

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Published 2012-01-05 23:07:16 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-02 15:08:25 UTC

The meeting

Big Macintosh stared up to the sky. His back hurt and his hooves were sore. Exhaustion was the one feeling he'd use to describe how he felt at that moment. For several days the stallion had applebucked non-stop.

Never had there been so many apple trees. Bucking all of them was tiring. Many thought that being so strong as Big Mac, it ought to be a piece of pie, but it's actually quite the opposite.

Always did he have to think about how much power he'd have to buck with. If too light, all the apples wouldnt fall down, and if too hard he'd perhaps break the tree. The latter had infact happened sometimes. A bit too often, if you ask Applejack.

Finally his sister had allowed him to have a break.

The stallion had in a slow pace trotted to the outskirts of Sweet apple acres, where he'd always go when having a break. It was long ago he last visited that place, and had not been able to visit it as much as he wished to. The place was on the border to Everfree forest.

It was his beloved place. And only his.

Happiness filled him when he saw the many animals whose face brightened upon seeing him.

Harmony ringed in his ears when he heard the mild noise of the river, chirps from birds and animals.

Always at this loved place of his, his body would always feel light as a feather.

It was a weird but welcomed feeling.

Fluttershy was feeding a baby bunny outside in her garden when one of her blue humming birds came back from a flight. The bird looked somewhat excited, and was humming playfully in a familiar tone.

This brought the attention of all the animals around to the bird. And as concealed as Fluttershy could, she lifted her ear softly and listened to the humming of the bird intensly.

All kinds of animal eyes looked at Fluttershy expectantly after the message, and so was Angel.

Fluttershy kept holding the bottle of milk between her mouth, still feeding the baby with lowered head, hoping that her friends wouldnt notice how her eyes glistened with joy. Still, in eager silence, the animals stared at her, waiting for an answer.

The pegasus stopped feeding the bunny, seeing it was full and placed the bottle by a table that was right beside her. Still with her lowered head, she shut her eyes and allowed herself to nod.

The many animals gave out happy shouts and rushed into the Everfree forest.

By now it was only Angel, Fluttershy, and the half-sleeping baby bunny left.

Fluttershy raised her head softly, hearing her heart pound in her chest and her face heated up, giving her cheeks a small tint of pink. "O-oh my, he's back Angel! What should I do, what should I do?" She panicked silently, holding her hoof for her mouth.

Angel facepalmed and pointed to the forest.

"I can't do that. Last time he almost caught me... Last time... That was so long ago." A smile formed on her face "I can't believe he's back."

Angel gave her a look, making Fluttershy gulp.

"O-of course I'd like to go. But what happens if he sees me?" Fluttershy's already blushing face blushed deeper at the mere thought of it.

The white bunny rolled its eyes and started walking into the Everfree forest. Fluttershy stared after the bunny as he walked, she was slightly surprised and raised one of her hoof hesitantly. She almost started walking, but stopped her hoof from taking a step forward, having it hang just above the ground.

Just before Fluttershy would lose sight of Angel, the bunny turned around and ogled at her.

The pink maned pony sighed before her hoof finally met the ground. And it did, over and over again.

Fluttershy's heart beats were beating loud in her ears, the wind in her mane when she galloped to the waiting Angel.

Finally. After so long, she'd see him again.

Fluttershy quietly sneaked up to the tree that she usually hided from. There were branches and stones everywhere, but it was easy for her to avoid them. From the tree you could see the side of him, but he was quite far away.

Carefully she peeked out. And she felt herself blush immediately.

She didn't know how many times she had watched him take care of the animals, but it was always as amazing to watch. To see how his gentle big hooves would make their magic, and to see how he'd sometimes encourage them with his warm voice, all while having that wonderful smile plastered on his face. It looked all so natural for him. The sun glittering in his green eyes, and that ungroomed tufty mane that still looked great without him trying. Things like that would always make her day more exciting.

Fluttershy was so surprised the first time she saw him, that that big and muscular stallion was almost as good with animals as she was. It was simply... adorable.

Of course her animals had also noticed this and had become drawn to him. Even Angel, who usually had a hard time with strangers.

Angel gave a wondering look at Fluttershy while pointing at Big macintosh, which snapped her out from her thoughts. The mare quickly shook her head. "No, i can't," she whispered, almost inaudible.

Angel nodded and skipped over to Macintosh.

Fluttershy sighed. There she was, standing in the shadows while he was there, only a few metres away, in the bright sunlight.

Suddenly one of the animals stood in the way for her. Fluttershy bit her lip as she leaned more to the side. It felt risky to do so as the stone she was standing on was slippery. But atleast she wanted to see his eyes.

She leaned a little bit more, feeling her hooves shake as she strained them. "J-just a tiny bit left and i'll b-" She encouraged herself quietly but was quickly cut off from herself screaming.

Big Macintosh and the other animals quickly turned their attention to the yellow pegasus who rolled down the small hill, down to the river, landing with her head down in the water and with her flank up in the air for some seconds.

The earthpony reacted quickly and galloped forward fast, making his way through the animals. "Holy hay- Are ya alright?" He looked down at her, worried.

Fluttershy sniffed and got up on her hooves, face lowered in embarassement. Her mane was dirty, wet, and even had branches sticking out from them. Tears burned in the corners of her eyes and her head pounded from the fall. The thought of that she had had her flank swaying in the air made her want to bury a hole, go into it, and never come out again. She started crying.

This was not the way she wanted to present herself for him.

It felt silly how she had thought about how she'd greet him for several days, and this was his first impression of her in the end. Clumsy.

It felt ironic that she was often called graceful. What does that matter if your legs became shaky as soon as you're close to Big Macintosh.

The apple pony stared at the crying mare infront of him, unsure what to do. "Ah reckon... yer' not okay?" Never had the stallion felt so helpless.

Fluttershy raised her hoof to wipe her tears, but then she stomped the hoof to the ground as hard as she could, which was shockingly strong. She even caused some animals to watch in awe and shake in terror. "Okay? OKAY? Of course I'm not okay!" Her voice was raising, ever so uncharacteristically, making the very confused and nervous Big Macintosh back. "DUH, if YOU wouldn't have shown u-" The pegasus had raised her head violently to glare at him while speaking, but she quickly lost her words.

Those green concerned eyes were even more handsome up close. Breathetakingly... nice.

Big Macintosh also became stunned, when two big cyan eyes stared right into his own. The beautiful eyes softened. And there was a moment of silence. Even the animals remained quiet.

Big Macintosh cleared his throat, making Fluttershy flinch. "Ah... Ah'm very sorry fer whatever ah did-"

The pink maned pony blushed furiously, hiding behind her mane, "Oh no. I don't know what happened to me. Oh, dear. I-i-i-i'm so sorry" She squeaked.

" 'ts okay. Ah understand" As a part of the apple family, his poker face wasnt exactly the best.

Fluttershy was surprised that he said so, but couldn't exactly believe his statement. "You ...do?"

Big Macintosh frowned. "Nah. Not really," he admitted.

The yellow pony blinked her eyes, expression puzzled. But in the end she giggled, blushing softly.

The stallion couldnt help but chuckle along either, yet he was still quite confused. This feeling was mutual. "Fluttershy, was it?" He guessed, remembering that that was the name other pony's had called her.

Fluttershy nodded. "B-big Macintosh... right?"

"Eeyup. A pleasure makin' yer acquaintance." He reached out his hoof. Fluttershy stared nervously at it before reaching hers out also. They both were smiling, ever so softly, and shook the others hoof gently.

"Yes... N-nice to meet you too," whispered Fluttershy. She dared herself to peek out from her mane slightly and against her will pulled back her hoof. "You're... You're very good with animals, Big Macintosh."

The stallion fumbled with his hooves bashfully. "Aw, shucks...Ya saw? Well ah really like them animals"

Fluttershy visibly beamed "I do too! My special talent's actually taking care of animals. See?" She then adjusted her position for him, so that he could see her cutie mark. She added a small wiggle to her hips to show him. This all happened in quite the haste for the shy pony. In all honesty she couldnt think right, she still couldnt believe that she was talking to him.

Fluttershy's face quickly flushed bright red when realizing her actions. Rapidly she hid behind her mane once again, minimizing herself to a small ball of pale yellow fur and pink hair.

Did I just wiggle my hip and brag? How could i be so assertive? He probably thinks im all too bold.

Big Macintosh couldn't force back a blush he either. "That's a nice... cutie mark," he mumbled as encouraging as he could, not wanting her to shy away again. He compelled himself to take his gaze of her flank.

What in tarnation are ya doin' Big Mac? Yer a gentle colt. A gentle colt.

Fluttershy's blush turned deeper. "Thank you," she squealed. She was still curled up, and was sending a pleading look for help to Angel. But of course the bunny wanted her to manage it for herself, and pretended to be unaware of her look.

"Mmh..." replied Big Macintosh again. He stared up at the sky, unsure what to do, and was taken by surprise when he saw how late it actually was. The sky was starting to turn orange. "Ah mus' excuse mahself, Fluttershy. But ah hafta go."

The pegasus panicked, and was fast out of her curled position. "No please! Don't go, " she told, sad and disappointed at herself. She had been with him so long now, and it felt like she hadnt made any progress at all.

Big Mac was surprised, once again, by how desperate the mare in front of him seemed to be. He furrowed his brows and looked at her, slightly concerned. "Ah'm sorry. But ah shoulda been back fer sum moments ago"

Fluttershy bit her lip, but then gave in and lowered her head. "Oh. I'm very sorry for holding you back then."

The stallions mind was racing, he hated to see her spirits low. He was brainstorming with himself for witty things to say, and then carefully picked out some words that had been in the back of his mind all the time, but never had the courage to speak them."W-would ya like to meet up tomorrow?"

Fluttershy raised her head, unsure if she had heard right. "Huh?"

Big Macintosh pawed a hoof to the ground gently and looked away when he realized he had to repeat the question. At that moment he was really happy that his coat color was red. "Would ya like to meet up tomorrow here? Ya know... Like a picnic. Or somethin' " He swallowed nervously and turned to look at the dumbfounded pegasus to await an answer.

5 slow seconds went, and no response. The only thing he got was an utterly surprised expression from Fluttershy. A gaping small mouth, wide eyes and raised eyebrows.

"Nnnope?AhSee,forgetThatAhEverAskedSumthin'. Okay, thanks, bye!" Big Mac spoke quickly, feeling himself drowning in outright embarrassment. He turned to gallop away.

Fluttershy started reacting, although very late. The pegasus turned to the deepest shade of crimson possible for a pony without getting diizzy, and her eyes glittered with inexplicable joy."Yes, i'd love to!" She shouted with all her might after the running stallion.

Upon hearing her voice shouting after him, his hooves dug into the ground when braking and he turned around, doubting his ears. "Did ya just say yes?" he asked perplexed.

From the distance between them he could merely see her nod.

Date

"Ouchie." Fluttershy fluttered her eyes open, surprised when seeing floor beneath her. "Angel," she complained, getting up on her hooves, "You could try less hurtful ways of waking me up next time... Please?" She stared at the white bunny that was holding her beds sheet in his paws. The bunny shrugged and hopped off to somewhere else.

Like perhaps not flipping me over she thought for herself whilst she sighed and fixed her bed again, tucking the sheet in every corner of the mattress neatly and then placing the pillow and blanket on just as carefully. While doing that she couldn't help but feel a little angry about Angel waking her up. She had been in the middle of a perfectly wonderful dream.

Big Mactinosh and her having a picnic today. She blushed with excitement and started humming happily. Any signs of her being upset from Angel's little stunt was gone.

Today was gonna be perfect, just like in the dream, nothing could go wrong.

She hopped her way down the stairs to the kitchen where she then fed all the animals in a rare haste. She had to hurry up so she had enough time to cook the most flawless meal for the picnic.

"The best way to a stallion's heart is through his stomach," she sang quietly.

After a while she put the food in a basket and put a red-white checkered cloth on top. Eagerly she checked for something nice to wear. She had avoided asking Rarity because she knew that she'd exaggerate and make something over the top. Fluttershy didn't exactly have that much clothes and was near giving up when Angel and the other animals showed a flower wreath they'd made for her.

She squealed and thanked her friends.

This is kind of like Cinderella, she thought, giggling, as she put her mane up in a simple ponytail, leaving some locks hang loose to frame her face. She then put on the flower wreath on. It was like her own crown. She considered making a flower wreath for Big Macintosh, so he could have one too. She thought about his red fur and what kind of flowers would look nice together with it.
Some of the birds put some flowers in her tail also.

Fluttershy couldn't stop smiling, even if she wanted to.

"Thank you once again everyone, but I'll be fine on my own now." The pegasus took the basket in her mouth and gave everyone an appreciative nod.

If she was going to do this she was going to do this right.

And with that she left her home and flew off to the meeting place until she heard the familiar noise of the mild river, harmony ringing in her ears. No chirping from birds and animals, though.

She was on her own this time. And she wasn't scared.

Fluttershy placed the basket on the soft grass gently and spread the checkered cloth out. She then sat on it, eyes averted when she looked around for her date. Date. Her stomach felt light butterfly wings fluttering. A date. She and Big Macintosh. Big Mactinosh and she. Dating.

It was almost to good to be true.

***

Big Macintosh woke up extra early that morning with a big sheepish smile on his face. He got up from the bed and planted his hooves on the wooden floor before tucking Smartypants back to bed.

"Sorry fer' waking you up," he whispered, being aware of that this was far earlier than the usual time they both usually woke up.

He then rushed to the window and slided the curtains out of the way. It was a beautiful day today. The sun was half way up, coloring the sky a light shade of orange, and there were no cloud at sight, and judging by how the trees moved there were also a light breeze going on.

He opened the window slightly and inhaled the refreshing air, looking beyond the horizon, knowing that somewhere over there he would meet Fluttershy in some hours.

He was quickly interrupted in his deep thoughts when he heard some violent coughing. The stallion quickly located the coughing and began trotting to Applejack's bedroom carefully.

"Applejack...?" he frowned when seeing that her door was left a little bit open, hearing both Granny Smith's and Applebloom's voices in there as well.

He leaned his head against the door, opening it more only to see an ill looking Applejack in her bed and Granny Smith and Applebloom by it, both looking very worried.

They all turned their attention to him when seeing him standing there in the doorway, looking very confused. "Applejack? What's wrong?" he mumbled looking at the pale earthpony.

"N-nothing's wrong, Big mac," she replied, "Ah'm perfectly fine." Her throat gave her away though and the orange pony was soon coughing heavily once again.

"Nonsense," spluttered Granny Smith with a scowl, glaring half-heartedly at Applejack, "Yer' obviously not 'fine' at all. That's it. Yer' clearly not in shape 'f doing any bucking today."

Applejack opened her mouth to protest but was interrupted by her own coughing. "It will be to much for Big Mac," she said in-between, looking at her brother with green concerned eyes.

Big Macintosh felt the guilt coming at him. Maybe if he hadn't taken that pause yesterday... She'd be alright. He pursed his lips.
"Ah," he started and a picture of Fluttershy flashed through his mind but forced himself to push it away, looking down at his hooves, "Ah'll be fine. Just you rest, sis." He then tilted his head slightly upwards to show her a reassuring smile.

She didn't look too convinced.

"Don't be so stubborn, it's no good for ya." Granny stated, "I'll go make you a lil' something fer' your throat," she then walked out of the room.

Applebloom smiled at her sister, "And it will be fine! The cutie mark crusaders can help Big Mac out," she quipped.

"Eeyup," Big Macintosh agreed, "It will be fine. The cutie mark crusaders are helping me, after all." His voice dropped a little bit at the end.

He just hoped that Fluttershy would forgive him for this.

Sleep

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Fluttershy quivered as she brought her soaked hoof up to her face, wiping water from her eyes to clear her vision.

Anytime now.

Her lips were tightly pursed, trying to keep her mouth shut so her teeth wont clatter. Her body felt really heavy because of the extra weight the water put on, making her fur wet and uncomfortable and only a small movement like that was making Fluttershy quite tired. But she was determinded to wait for her date.

The nice weather from earlier today was no where in sight, grey clouds covering the skies and gushing rain that turned everything into a blur.

It was cold, wet and exhausting.

It'll be worth it, It will be magical. We will talk about animals and he will say that he loved the picnic and perhaps I will make him laugh a lot and-

How long had she waited? It felt like an infinity. She told herself that it probably only had been a half an hour or so and that it only felt longer because of how excited she was, but deep down she knew that hours have passed.

Her stomach gave out a noise again and Fluttershy pinched her eyes together.

She couldn't eat the picnic just yet! Big Macintosh hadn't come, after all.

He'll come anytime now.

The pegasus half-opened her eyes lazily, just gazing into the forest even if she was practically blind at the moment.

The flower wreath's petals dropped down in front of her eyes. Being slightly bothered by it she shook the flower wreath off of her head, making it fall to the ground with a small thud.

Fluttershy just stared at the flower wreath for a moment, staying like that until she realized what actually had happened.

He won't come. I've been stood up.

A silent lonely tear fell down from her eye. She broke down quietly. It wasn't her usual crying with loud sobs, wailing and shaking. The tears just shed peacefully, blending with the rain water.

After a while the rain ceased and a white bunny approached her. Fluttershy picked up the wet picnic basket, her head lowered when walking. And then Angel lead her back home so she could go to sleep.

Big Macintosh's had this horrible gut feeling growing inside him. She couldn't possibly be waiting for him in this weather, right?

Right. She must have gone home already, that's what everypony would do.

The stallion sighed, But she isn't like everypony.

He couldn't believe that he left a unique pony like her waiting. If only Applejack hadn't become ill.

The three fillies were now playing in the rain, hopping around,

"If yer' not gonna buck them apples you might as well go back inside. You'll catch a cold." he scolded tiredly at them.

The three of them went back to bucking again but after a while they were back to playing. Big Macintosh told them to return to the house shortly after.

After he was done with all chores and his muscles were completely and utterly sore he also returned to the house as well to go to sleep.
It was late now and the rain had finally ceased. The gut instinct of that something was wrong was still there though.

He stood in his room and trotted to the window to look beyond the horizon, knowing that somewhere over there he would have met up with Fluttershy.

Big Macintosh was sure he couldn't go back to sleep like this and was soon galloping to the forest even if his muscles protested.

When he arrived all that was left on the meeting place was a flower wreath lying on the ground. You could tell that it had been very beautiful before with what had been very colorful flowers.
But now it was soaked and ruined by the rain, the flowers looking almost grey because of the sky, petals drooping as if they were dead.

It looked... sad. Yes. That was the right word for it, Big Macintosh decided, the flower wreath looked heartbreakingly sad.

Even if it now was clarified that she still wasn't waiting for him he still had this horrid feeling inside him.

Not wanting to go the long way back to the farm he settled down on the cold grass and closed his eyes.

Really short, but hey, it's an update!

Oh and the flower wreath is totally a metaphor.

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