The first portion of the tale is intermixed with a poem by Rainer Maria Rilke, used for flavor and appropriateness to the thematic of each section.

The Narrator is having difficulty grasping at comfort in his new life in Ponyville, as a pony. He is frustrated in many ways overt and covert by the attitude most of the ponies take to life. This disdain is felt most sharply in his opinion of Pinkie Pie. We see her confusion and then resolution as she finds a way to deal with it.

The second part is simply a more explicit continuing of the inevitable details found at the end of part 1. Non-descriptive, right? Let us just say that it explores some of the things Pinkamena sees fit to do with our Narrator.

More specific details will require a reading. :D

Sexuality is explicit towards the end, so any reader who for any reason legal or personal-ethical should not view such material is asked to refrain from reading.


(coverpic by SirShiggyDiggy. Scene from part 2)