Bloodstained: The Beginning

by Captain Grim

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 1146

This fic is an Explanation for my first fic "Bloodstained"

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Felix is a man in his twenties that got a very dark and miserable life after his whole family was murdered. One day he takes his own life with an overdose of drugs. He just hoped for the angels of heaven to embrace him in their arms. Instead he wakes up in Ponyville, Equestria. He get's well treated there and he starts to think that he actually came to heaven. But there is one dark secret with him that not even he knew about…………

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Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-14 00:27:36 UTC

Chapter 1: Dark and miserable

BLOODSTAINED: THE BEGINNING

Chapter 1: Dark and miserable

It has been five years. Five years since he saw the bloody mess of what was left of his family, lying at the kitchen floor.

"Who did it? Why did he/she/they do it? Why me? Why my family of every family in the world?"

Those were some of his million questions he had that day, the worst part was that none of those questions could be answered. his soul has always been half since that day. Most of his "friends" said that he still could live a happy life with all the money he would inherit... Pftt, if he only knew where those so called "friends" of his went after the lost of his family. "And what about the money?" you are surely asking. Well, to put this simple, he bought drugs for them! And i know you are asking, "Did he buy drugs for ALL his inherited money? didn't he earn like, millions or something?" Well his family wasn't the most wealthiest you know. But anyways, after those 5 years of drug addiction, he could finally see him self as who he was in the mirror. He was a 27 year old drug addict that lived in a dark and miserable world with no friends, no family, no one to be loved of, and nothing to live for. That's why he decided to kill himself, to live a good life in heaven! Or hell, he didn't really give a shit. "At least it's warm in hell." He said. He have made a decision......

Felix was nearing his arm with a syringe, whose tip was burned with help from a spoon and a lighter. He could feel his heart beat faster with every inch closer he got. This what was he wanted right?. Why was it so hard for him? He stopped for a moment, just tried to get the motivation. Finally, he decided. With a smack he drove the syringe into his arm. He could feel the syringe content rushing through his body like a shockwave. After a couple of minutes he started to feel sleepy and tired. He lay down on his couch, just waiting for the effect to take it's place. After a couple of more minutes the overdose finally did it's job, and Felix fell into a deep, sleep.....

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Felix finally woke up.... But not from the annoying neighbours fighting over the newspaper this time. Instead he woke up from the sun. The lovely warmth and rays felt like a slap to the face. Felix finally rose up to notice that he was laying on grass. Beautiful, green, grass.

"Wait what?!......Where am i? How did i get he-" Felix couldn't finish his sentence before he realised where he was.

.......Wait?.................Is......I-is this.................H-heaven?

Felix could feel mixed emotions. Why did he get here? After all the drug addictment and things he done in his life. He didn't know if he should feel hatred or happines for being here. Maybe he wasn't in heaven... Maybe he was in world of his own imagination? Maybe he was in a coma or something and was laying in the hospital, just dreaming about it all.

"Is....Is this real?"he asked himself. He stroke a nearby tree. "It sure feels real."He said he felt the dark and scratchy bark on his fingertips. But suddenly the tree he stood under dropped an appel from one of it's branches, Right on his head. "OW! Yep, definitely real." He said through gritted teeth. He looked down at the apple and saw that it,  for the most part, was almost completley red. He couldn't prevent from picking it up and take a tasteful bite of it. Just as his tastebuds felt, he felt inside. For him, It was like taking a bite of the apple of eden. About 20 minutes later, after the last apple on the tree was eaten to the core and tossed away. Felix leaned back at the tree, and fell asleep.

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A bit from where Felix was sleeping, Applejack, an orange pony mare with a stetson hat and three red apples at each side of her haunches (Also know as Cutie marks) was dragging out a waggon with small barrels on top of it that she used when she was applebucking. She drove the waggon near a tree and disconnected her self from the waggon. She made her way to the back of the tree and bucked it with her back hooves. The apples from the tree gracefully landed in the barrels on her waggon.

[A FEW BUCKED TREES LATER]

Applejack was very tired as she made her way to her last tree of the day. As she was nearing the tree, she could hear light snoring."Not again." She said as she got closer to the tree."Rainbow Dash, this is like ya hundred time i find y'eh sleeping in one of my tre-" Applejack could only stare as she saw the big bipedal hairless monkey she tought was Rainbow Dash, was heavily sleeping against one of her trees."WHAT IN TARNATION!" Applejack loudly blurted out. As if on cue, Felix woke up from the noise he just heard."What? Who's Shout- OMG! A FRIGGIN TALKING PONY! Before Felix could do anything more, he got one of Applejack's award-winning bucks straight to the face and fell unconscious...

A/N: Ok! so this was my first chapter on my second fic. I thought it came out pretty well if you ask me. I'm not the most well learned kid in english you know. And i'm pretty proud of myself for making this chapter longer then i usually do. If anyone find any spell errors or grammatical errors then please, say what it is so i can fix it. Any help on how i can make it better would also be very nice of you :). CRITICISM IS ALLOWED.

Bad news

A/N: It is with a deeeeeeeeeeeeeeep sorrow that i need to say that my fic has been cancelled. I can't make DRAMA and HAPPY fics. I actually just wanted to make GRIM-GRIM-GRIM DARK fics. I maybe will cancell this one but i will actually make another fic that almost 100% Grimdark. Why? Because my mind is so sick and twisted that i NEED blood in my stories. You don't like it? Well then i'm sorry cause grimdark is the only thing i can write. BUT! If there's anyone that would like this story to continue and have some ideas for it, then i say: YOU CAN CONTINUE ON IT! That's right! I'm giving it to you. I know that there are many people here that would bbe abble to make this story PERFECT. So please..... Be my guest and help :)

PS: Crackshot, if you read this....... Then it means that i have failed you master. Forgive me.