"I'm not going to lie. Being trapped by dog monsters isn't a very pleasant experience. Especially if you get caught talking to the pony your trapped with, you get spear at your throat. Now, I got a plan to escape from here, but it won't be easy. I have to find a way to free the other pony trapped too because I'm such a gentlecolt and leaving them here is a death sentence. I'll deal with not having a cutie mark or any memory of myself later. Escape is my number one priority."

This is my first story so constructive criticism would be appreciated.