Naruto in Equestria

by hatbat1234

Chapter 1

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Chapter 1

Encounter of the pony kind

The warm rays of the sun illuminate him as he slowly starts to regain consciousness. His body seems unusually stiff.

“Ugh my body, what in the world did I do yesterday”? Naruto said as he as he is inspects his body to find that his white T-shirt has been burned and burn marked on his torso, arms and legs.

“Well I’ve been through worse, though Sakura is going to scold me again for being and idiot hehe” he said as he pats the back of his head (one of his signature moves) while looking to the sky, for the first he actually starts to take in his surrounds.

“That’s strange I don’t remember being out of the village last night, maybe Sakura launched me outside of the village, Ha! she must have broken her own record, but that still doesn’t explain the burns, Dam it! Why can’t I remember anything from last night! He said as he puts his hands to his face, trying to remember details that could help him find out he had been injured and wound up in a forest.

“Wait a minute, those trees!” he said as he lift his head to investigate the nearby trees that surrounded him, as he took notice those trees seemed strangely different none of them were the species of trees that surrounded konoha, in all his traveling he has done he has not once seen trees that has the appearances as the trees that were in front of him. To make matters worse it wasn't just an ordinary it was very thick he couldn’t see more than a few feet in front of him, and the only open area was the small spot he was in which was only about 10 feet wide>

“I got a feeling I’m not in Konoha anymore” He says as he lets out a loud gulp

“I must have gotten in to a fight somehow, But with whom? I’m not even dressed unless I had already fallen asleep, maybe I just sleep walked in the middle of nowhere?” Naruto scratched the last one as just plain silly even by his standards.

“How am I going to get back?!  Do I even want to go back and confront Sakura, geez” He looked panicked.

“Well only one thing left to do” Naruto picks himself off his body parts burning as he does so, but he is able to take the pain.

“Let’s see which way to go” he stretches out his arms and puts to a random direction.

“eenie, meenie, miney, mo” point his fingers at random directions finally stopping at one.

“Hmmm let’s try that again just to be sure” He says to no one in particular. He repeats, and this time making sure he does one more time.

“Well time to get moving, you've never been wrong before finger so don’t fail me now”

He slowly makes his way to the thick bushes only his boxers and torn t-shirt protecting him from whatever may lie in the in the poorly lit forest.

He starts walking, hoping that his finger didn't point him to his own death.

Pinkie pie and twilight make their way to fluttershy’s cottage that is just located at the edge of the everfree forest.

“Come on pinkie let’s just get this over with so I can get back to my studies, I don’t want to be behind schedule, remember what happened last now do we?” She said as the memories of the time that she nearly lost her mind trying to schedule her plans months in advance only to have it back fire on her.

“Oh don’t worry Twi just trust me ok! You never know this yet to meet friend of ours could be into all that sciencey stuff your into too!” she a happily as one could say.

“Well I find that highly improbable but there is always still the possibilities” she said, not believing her friend only just to get to shut up because if she would say no, she’d never hear the end of it.

As pinkie was about to open her mouth to begin one her endless conversations of who knows what the small just appeared in sight, Twilight to this opportunity to stop her for she could no longer withstand another.

“Oh look we’re here come on now let’s get fluttershy we don’t want to keep her waiting” Fluttershy didn’t know they were coming but she wanted to get there as fast as possible.

The cottage itself was small and simple yet it looked very well kept and an ideal home for someone who enjoyed being close to nature.

In the front of the cottage a butterscotch color pony waters her plants while humming to herself that sounds like the most beautiful voice you've ever heard.

“Hey fluttershy, over here!” pinkie says in her usual happy way. This causes the butterscotch pony to give a barely audible

“eeep!” and quickly hide behind a bush. As the name would imply she is unnaturally shy and is scared very easily if she is catched  by surprise.

Twilight angrily looks at her friend for the sudden outburst

“Sorry for that fluttershy it just me and pinkie, we wanted to ask you a favor that’s all”

“Oh you scared me for a second there” came from the timid pony. She sticks her head revealing her large teal eyes, shifting her head from side to side to confirm there is no danger.

Fluttershy makes her way out of the bushes to meet up with her two close friends.

“Sorry there fluttershy didn't mean to scare you, I’m just super duper excited because today we’re going to meet a new pony friend in the everfree forest”.

“Oh but its dangers and scary to go in there by yourselves” Fluttershy said with a worried face

“Well that you’re coming with use silly!”

“Oh mmm I have to take of my animals I couldn’t just leave them, who’s going to feed “

“don’t worry silly it’s not like we’re going to be gobbled up be a big scary monster and never returning again” pinkie said

This caused fluttershy’s worried state to turn into panicked as the thought of never returning to her animals and end up as a meal for whatever beast lurked in the forest.

“Pinkie!” twilight said

“oh sorry hehe!” she finished a small giggle

“I promise fluttershy nothing is going to happen, we need you to show use the way and this pony might injured, there is a good possibility that they might be injured and we need your help if that’s the case, Please fluttershy” twilight gave a pleading face.

“Okay I’ll go, but I’m bringing angel, if that all right with you” Fluttershy said in her natural timid voice.

Ten minutes later of saying good bye to her animals as if she was never coming back, she was ready, on her back was a small fluffy white rabbit and a saddlebag to her side in them were medical supplies just in case something went wrong. She knew always to trust pinkie senses for they were never wrong.

The four (including angel) enter the everfree forest the light quickly dimming by the dense canopy above them.

“Ugh, I've been walking for almost two hours and still nothing, I’m going to need some extra bowls of ramen to recover from this” Naruto said

Naruto could have easily hoped from tree to tree but in his current state it made almost impossible for any quick method of travel. The walk had been slow and painful the bottoms of his feet were burning almost as much as the burns on his body.

“Dam I can’t take this any longer I better find konoha or at least a nearby village to get some rest, I don’t have any money so I can’t buy ramen or a place to stay, This is just great, Here I am the great Naruto Uzumaki hero of konoha burnt and half naked in the middle of a forest that I've never been before, how could it possible get any worse?!” Just as he said that a growl is can be heard to his just a few feet ahead of him.

“Me and my big mouth, I can’t take on whatever that thing is in this condition, I need a place to hide and quick”

He searches for a good hiding spot as the beast nears his position but finding none, He looks up he might as well just go up the tree and hope that thing wouldn't find him.

“Well here goes nothing” he quickly runs up the tree and great speed just as the beast becomes visible. What he sees stuns him. There only 20 feet below him is what appears to be a lion

“A lion out here in these dense forest? “

“No wait, are those wings?”

“What next, a huge poisonous tail?” he whispered as not to alert the beast of his location.

Once again naruto mouth betrays him as the large wing lion turns it’s body to investigate some bushes nearby it reveals a large poisonous   that appeared to belong to a scorpion.

Naruto, at that instinct face palmed himself for opening his mouth when not supposed to.

“There’s no way in hell I can take that thing on, might as well stay up here and wait till it moves on, that’s if it doesn’t have my sent already”.

The beast spent one more minute moving around bushes to find its next possible meal with nothing uncovered it moved on.

“That was close I better be careful there might be more of those things lurking around I don’t want to be kitty food”

With that he climbed down and continued his walk.

twenty minutes have not past as he began to hear rustling directly ahead of hind no more than a  fifty feet away. This time it was different It appeared there was more than one.

“Oh what now” he quickly made his way another tree making sure he was well hidden he watched and listened and the rustling become louder, he began hearing what appeared to be a conversion?

“People” were all that came in to naruto mind “finally I’m saved!” naruto says in a happy voice, just as he was about to make his way down out of the bushes came out the three most strangest creature he had ever laid eyes on.

“Pinkie we have been walking for almost  2 hours it’s almost six in the afternoon, my hoof are killing me and I really need to get back to my studies. Now if would you please stop the search so we can head back to ponyville before it gets dark!” twilight said in an angry and annoyed voice.

“Pinkie can we please turn around now I really need to get back to my animal and angel is really hungry” Fluttershy said in her normal timid voice.

“I know they are here somewhere I can feel it we are close very very very close” pinkie said in a excited but determined voice.

The long walk and dirtied up their mane and fur now leaves and stick every where they could.

Naruto on the other hand had never seen animals like this before they more closely resembled ponies but they large colorful fur and there large oval eyes made him think twice.

“Dam what is up with today first lion/bat/scorpion hybrid and now colorful talking ponies, not just that the lavender one seems to have a horn, are those wings on the yellow one?” He said to himself as quiet as possible.

“the bright pink seems to be the normal one, wait where is the pink one?” just as he said that he heard rustling to his right he turns his head around his find, the largest eyes he had ever seen in his life yamato’s eyes could even compare to these, a massive grin on its face it appeared that it could eat him up in just one bite.

Seconds seem like an eternity; finally it spoke in the most excited of voices that almost made his ears bleed.

“HI THERE!”

“THE FUCK?!!!!!!!!” was all he could get out as he stumbled back he quickly loses his balance and begins his decent towards the ground.

Looking up he sees the pink pony grinning at him as he fall, Naruto didn't have time to prepare for landing as he lands his head makes a loud “thump”

As darkness takes over his vision only one thing comes to Naruto's mind

“So long ramen my delicious friend”

And then darkness.

“What in the name of celestia is that thing” Twilight said as the creature land only a few feet behind her.

Fluttershy is nowhere to be seen.

“I found him I found him!!” pinkie bounces around twilight.

“You sure this is it, it’s not even a pony for all we know it could be dangers!”

“I not an animal he’s just different, see it wears clothes and he said hi back went I talked to him” pinkie said

“well the clothes seem odd, kind of looks like a diamond dog but still it seems different compared to them almost like a chimpanzee, and you said it spoke to you, what did it say?” twilight asked pinkie

“I didn’t really understand he said “the fuck” I bet it the way he says hi!”

“I’m not sure pinkie I've never heard the word “fuck” before it could mean anything most liking it was from him being startled by you”

“Also it appears to be burn somehow”

The moment she said that fluttershy appeared from the bushes and quickly made her way to the unconscious of the strange creature.

“Oh! My look at those burns it must have be in some much pain”

She quickly pulls out her medical equipment and begins to care for the creature.

Sometime later of cleaning the burns as best a she could she turn her head up to the girls

“We must take it back to my cottage so it can rest, poor thing” fluttershy said as she placed a hoof on its torso.

Twilight levitates the creature and heads back where they came from. After a few hours a walking they make it back to fluttershy’s cottage, the sun had already gone down revealing the stars in the night sky.

“Finally where here “twilight said exhausted; as walking while using magic drained her energy twice as fast. She gently places him on the bed and quickly realizes it is too small for his legs stick out to his knees causing him to bed at the foot of the bed.

“well fluttershy we’ll leave him in you care for the meantime if it wakes up came us me it could be just another wild animal for all we know” twilight said

“Oh boy when he wakes up I’ll throw the most superduper funnest welcome to ponyville party!!!!”Pinkie said overly excited.

Twilight finally makes her way back to the library, tired and dirty she decides it’s best to take a bath. After a long and hot shower she is finally ready to hit the hay. Still one thing was on her mind, what was that strange creature?

“I’ve never seen anything like it” she said to herself. Looking over to a small basket to her right; there lays a small purple dragon, better known as spike, twilights personal assistant.

“I might as well go do some research on the strange creature, it wouldn’t take that long” She makes her ways out of bed and heads downstairs.

“Let’s see now” she quickly scans the book shelves finding the book she’s looking for, levitates it to her and begins reading.

As the sun raises the beams of light illuminates the library reveals that the once organized shelves of books are now all on the floor, it seems that a small tornado has passed through there.

“Twilight wake up already” Spike pokes twilight's horn in order to wake her. She is in the very same spot that she was the night before, only now she is half buried in books and her mane is a complete mess.

“uumm five more minutes spike” she mumbles

“wake up twilight! I can’t clean this mess up with you in the middle”

“hhmm wait what mess” twilight finally wakes

“oh sorry spike just had some of my night studies that all” she chuckles remembering she had planned to make short and wound up waking up half eaten by books.

“Anyway we should get some breakfast before we clean up I don’t work well on an empty stomach” spike said in annoyed voice knowing he would have to do most of the cleaning.

“That sound nice spike” as they both head towards the kitchen.

Note-

Here you go this is my first chapter, since English is my second language please leave a review on what you think.

For those few dozen that are following my story note that on Monday I’m starting my finals and I wouldn't be able to post the next chapter until past next week,

Entonces ya nos vemos prontos mi amigos bronies hasta la próxima!!!! 

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