The lone warrior

by viciousmandatory

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Crossover, Alternate Universe, Sad, Adventure
Length: 3412

A pony who wants revenge for his mother who has died because of a werewolf sets out of a quest

In the dark times of war thereâ��s a Pony that is so mysterious that no one wants to be near him but in the darkest times he fights mysterious creatures of day and night of the country of Equestria. This Ponyâ��s name is Magnum, heâ��s had a trauma experienced since he was five years old but now heâ��s hunting down the Pony responsible for his motherâ��s death.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-18 07:56:15 UTC

Chapter 1

In the city of Anchor Dents there’s a Pony in a, cloak his name is Magnum Elusion but everyone in his home town call him Vanhelsing. As he was known for hunting down mysterious creatures in every sector. One day he was just on the bridge looking at the river when suddenly a Pony walked up to Magnum. As Magnum saw the Pony walk up to him Magnum recognized the Pony as Dr. Zeora, Zekora said to Magnum “How you doing Magnum?” said Dr. Zeora to Magnum. Magnum started talking to the doctor when he had a flash back shaking it off like it wasnt nothing, “Zekorae as usual doc you know how it is for me these days still cant get over my mothers death” said Magnum as he has a flash back of his mother being murdered that night by a werewolf that had nasty clothing with a ripped shirt and pants and shoes and socks, he also recognized the creature by sedum montorez, a visitor from America. Zekora started talking again, when he saw Magnum expression “still having those flash backs Magnum, I understand but revenge isn’t a solution to your problems.” Said Dr. Zeora with a wise look, Magnum said to Zekora “I can do whatever the fuck I want doc.” “You don’t know what it’s like losing a mother that loved you so much.”  He Had a angry look on his face and just walked away in a angry way and dr. Zeora thought’s raced through his head, ‘does Magnum always act like this when he’s angry like that’ as Zekora watched Magnum walk away.

Later on that day Magnum walked into a bar he saw a bunch of guys with scars on their faces. He heard a Pony speak about somepony: ”yeah the guy’s clothes were ripped ya know the guy from America.” As Magnum drank his beverage he suddenly had an immediate flash back, he grabbed the Pony and said “where was the last time you saw the guy at?!” the Pony and his friend didn’t know which guy he was talking about. But then they had to tell him otherwise he’s not going easy on them “ok um the last time I saw him he turned into a werewolf and took off running into another country.” Magnum thought he really isn’t going to slow down anytime soon. Then Magnum heard a murderous scream cry out “somebody help me am bleeding from my neck, ive been bitten by a vampire.” Magnum left his drink, went out side and started talking to the mares “where’s the vampire ms, show me the way.” Then the mares pointed towards the direction “the vampire is that way but be careful.” Magnum replied “don’t worry am careful as a dog is careful with its prey.” As Magnum ran off to find the vampire in the direction the lady pointed to. Later Magnum found the vampire but not alive.

Chapter 4

"How can we prevent this apocalypse of undead creatures and wildly mutated cursed mortals from going to town and cursing others?" Magnum asked himself as he was riding back to town on a transportation wagon. As he was returning to town, Magnum saw one of his good friends waiting for him to return, it was his best friend Braeburn, Braeburn and Magnum knew each other for a long time, since his moms death. "Hey Magnum long time no see how's the doctor up to these days." Said Braeburn, "not much Zekorae as usual checking up on me whenever am on the town's bridge always asking me the Zekorae old question every single time." Said Magnum "well you know what they say ask the Zekorae question you get the Zekorae answer." Said Braeburn "how bout we get a drink old friend from the bar." Said Magnum with a silent grin.

Chapter 6

“I don’t know why I bother talking to my father.” Said Magnum as him and Braeburn were walking around the township. “Want somepony to walk back with you to your home.” Said Braeburn as they stop in front of the bar. “Heeeeeelllllllp!” as a Pony screamed in terror. “Not that creep again.” Said Braeburn with an angered expression, the two burst in and sees a half Pony, half octopus. “He’s a crockapus I seen one of those before.” said Magnum with a non-surprised face. As Magnum just did something horrible like blow the crockapus into billions of pieces. So Magnum and Braeburn picked the Pony up who was covered with the crockapus guts. “What are these creatures doing here on earth?” Said the frightened Pony who was confused. “How do we stop them?” “Am not sure yet.” Said Magnum.

Chapter 7

As Magnum, Braeburn, and the mares had a drink in the bar, Magnum was thinking what the crockopus wanted with the mares in the first place and why was it after her? Did she have something the creature wanted from her “why was he after you?” said Magnum asking the mares with a confused face. “Huh? What do you mean?” said the mares seeming as if somepony asked her to do something for them. “The crockopus why was he after you?” said Magnum with a serious look. “Just tell Magnum why the creature was after you.” Said Braeburn with the look of somepony interrogating a suspect. “Well, the creature wanted my soul in the first place but I refused.” Said the mares with a scared look on her face. The creature wanted her soul? Magnum thought “so he wanted your soul?” said Braeburn with a questioned face. “yes and he also told me if I didn’t he would force it out my body but before you guys heard my scream he said the demons of the night were coming here in ten days.” Said the mares who still have that terrified look on her face remembering the creatures hideous face the look of somepony who almost died bleeding to death in the depth. “So if he was after your soul then why would he warn you about the vampires at that time?” Said Braeburn with a confused look that tells everyone he has a bunch of questions on his mind. “So what’s your name then? Cause you haven’t introduced yourself to us.” Said Magnum forgetting to ask for an important person’s name. “The names Trixie Cauterize, I was named after my mother after she had gotten killed by those freaks from few years ago.” Said Trixie who was still mad that happened to her mother. “Magnum mother was murdered by a rogue werewolf but my name is Braeburn Jeff montorize an expert at weaponry and mechanics.” Said Braeburn who was glad to introduce himself. “My name is Magnum Lucian, a monster hunter looking for my mother’s murderer who killed her.” Said Magnum who just introduced himself in a cold blooded voice. “So shall we go find these bastards?” Said Trixie with a confident look on her face.

Chapter 10

The day Magnum was little at the time he was about five or six years old at the time so, Magnum thought about how he could have prevented his father from going out into the woods by himself. As Magnum thought about it he could have also prevented his mother’s death from happening but the past is the past Magnum thought but how could things have happened in the flash, he could have prevented Braeburn from turning into undead things or saved that lady from turning into a vampire but then again if those things haven’t happened he wouldn’t have gotten this far hunting down the tracks of the Pony who murdered his mother. “Magnum it’s time to depart we have to continue our journey without Braeburn besides he’s in a better place.” Said Trixie who was ready to continue their journey. “Who’s going to take care of that wounded Pony besides he’s probably in a deep agonizing pain scenario right now.” Said Magnum who the first time started caring again since Braeburn’s death. “But there’s no one that wants to take care of the wounded Pony c’mon Magnum please lets just go because I don’t like seeing anyone that bloody especially when they are wounded.” Said Trixie with an angsust voice. “I say we stay and treat the wounded Pony and that’s final.” Said Magnum with a serious voice. “Fine but am going to stay outside avoiding vomiting everywhere.” Said Trixie with a calm voice. Sixteen minutes later Magnum walked in and saw the wounded Pony on the bed still bloody. “Vanhelsing good your here can u fix this Pony up?” said a nurse not having the tools to sow the Pony up. “It’s Magnum and yes I can fix him up just give me some time to sow him up is that fine?” said Magnum with a patient voice. “right so please hurry he’s slowly fading away please!” said the nurse scared to lose the patient when the doctor’s office actually have the tools. As Magnum was fixing the Pony up, the Pony was regaining consciousness. “That should do it he should be ok by tomorrow but keep the Pony in bed and let him rest is that understood.” Said Magnum with a sweat full on his face. “Thank u Magnum ill make sure he stays in bed and recovers.” Said the nurse with a graceful smile on her face. As Magnum was walking away he noticed that Trixie had one of her eyebrows raised as to ask Magnum why the nurse didn’t have any tools to sew the Pony up herself. “Why didn’t she have her own tools to fix him up with?” asked Trixie as she was confused about the nurse. “She probably misplaced her operating tools.” Said Magnum with a devious look on his face. “But still she might be a demonic entity I can feel it.” Said Trixie suspecting the nurse isn’t really a Pony being but a demon from hell. “Leave it be if she tries attacking us ill shoot her with an arrow that contains holy water in it and plus that’ll give us time to find the source if she’s a demon or not.”  Said Magnum as he gets the point of what Trixie said. “But how will you know if she tries attacking us when we are leaving?” asked Trixie as her voice sounds confused to what Magnum knows if it happens or not.  They got bored though so they went to eat cupcakes with Pinkie Pie and the end.

Chapter 2

As Magnum saw the dead body of the vampire, he was thinking        this Pony killed the night creature and then he spoke to himself saying:” what in the world how the hell did she kill this blood sucking bastard.” Then Magnum saw the source that killed the vampire it was a sharp stick, which had a sharpened tip that had blood on it. So Magnum head back towards mid-town area he saw the bartender on the ground holding a towel to his neck, Magnum asked the Pony "what happened to you?" he said with a stern voice. The bartender then spoke "the Pony with the bitten neck she turned into o-o-o-one of them." Magnum thought how she could have turn into one of them.

Chapter 3

"where did she go bartender!?" asked Magnum in an furious voice as the bartender was trembling in fear of what he saw of what the mares became so Magnum asked again "where is she bartender where is she?" in an anxious voice of furiousness then a moponiest went by and the bartender answer in a trembling voice "sh-sh-she became a vampire while you were gone to find the vampire s-s-speaking of I-it did you find the vampire that bitten the mares I-is I-it alive or d-dead sir." Magnum was shocked hearing this so he answer in a deep voice "it was apparently stabbed I suspect that the mares stabbed it in the heart with a stick that was sharpened she knew the vampire was stalking her so I need more information of what caused it to bite her neck." Magnum said as he was explaining to the others what kind of information he needed. Later on that day Magnum looked for his friend Zekora so that he can explain what happen outside the bar today but couldn’t find him so Magnum grabbed his hunting gear and searched for the Pony who turned into a vampire, so he started his hunt nothing no sign of the vampire until he found the vampire Pony at the lake by the looks of it he can tell who is a creature and who isn't so he went up to the vampire Pony and staked her in the heart and she was dead and it was the vampire Pony so Magnum took the body to the desert and buried it.

"why cant we Pony hunters just keep the undead creatures from coming up to the surface?" said Magnum as he was sitting on top of the pile of dirt, so Magnum still thinking what's wrong with this world and why his mother was killed by a werewolf so the question is why?

Chapter 5

As they walk in the bar that Magnum and Braeburn entered in. Braeburn recognizes somepony at a table as Magnum saw him his mind flash back the night before his mothers death "daddy lets play catch" said young Magnum. "son I just got back from work let me rest for a moponiest" as his mind finishes playing that flash back he also recognizes him as his father, named Lemon Lucian "father?" the sound of his voice sounded shock "Magnum surprise to see you my….." Magnum runs up to his father and hugs him "I thought you got killed in that accident six years ago?" said Magnum crying in his fathers arm. "Well seems like I brought back a son and father together right hehehe" Magnum thanked his friend for the blessing of a reunion. Later Braeburn, Lemon, and Magnum got a drink together "so tell me father how did you survive that horrific crash?" Magnum asked with a smile, Lemon looked at his son and said "I somehow got knocked into unconsciousness and six years later I woke up in a coffin and decided to break out of that dusty thing" said Lemon with a smile on his face thinking he shouldn’t smile since the spider that he saw when he woke up from six years unconsciousness. “So Magnum almost ready to head out to see the doctor.”  Said Braeburn with an anghast face. “Well you do seem like in a hurry.” Said Lemon with a check book in his hands. “Let me handle the check father because I know how you are with your check books all the time.” When Lemon saw that his son had grew up taking care of things he’d realize that his son was a monster hunter, he looked at him and said to Magnum. “I see that you are a hunter looking for revenge to revenge your mother’s death.” Said Lemon with a disappointponiest on his face. “I am only doing that because you weren’t there to protect mother so why didn’t you come back and protect mother. “I don’t know Magnum but I wasn’t responsible for your mother’s death and am sorry that you are traumatized by that event.” Magnum got up and just walked away in silence. “That was harsh Lemon” said Braeburn in an empathy voice. Braeburn finally found Magnum at the bridge thinking about stuff. “Hey Magnum I know you don’t want to talk…” Braeburn was cut off by Magnum “don’t even start like you always do” said Magnum with an angered expression on his face. “I remember now.” As the flash back gone back when he was a kid “papa where you going.” Said little Magnum. “Am going to go convince our town mayor that he needs to take care of the problem.” Said twenty year old lemon “but papa when are you coming back.” Said little Magnum “don’t worry son I’ll be back as soon as I can.” And then the flash back ended as Magnum starts to get angry about that flash back that he just had. “Maybe we should take a walk Magnum.” Said Braeburn.

Chapter 8

As the three walked to look for the creature of the dark, Magnum, Braeburn, and Trixie heard a foot step, Magnum readied himself and the others for an ambush. “Be careful somepony or something is watching us.” Said Magnum as he sensed the presence of somepony watching them. As Magnum prepared himself but a Pony fell from the roof with fresh opened wounds on his body. Magnum walked up to the Pony to see if he was alive or not. “What happened to you sir?” said Magnum in a sort of curious voice. “The creatures of the night had found an easier way to hunt during the day they got these rings on their hooves that lets them walk in broad day light.” Said the Pony who had a way to kill them now that they walk in day time. “Impossible the only rings I can think of is the mortal day light rings.” Said Braeburn with a very confused face. “But they do have those rings they might use them to kill us all at once.” Said the wounded Pony with a concerned face. Then right when Trixie was about to say something she heard running hoofsteps on the roof. “What the hell was that sound?” said Braeburn with a creeped out look on his face.

Chapter 9

As Magnum prepared himself for the ambush, Braeburn and Trixie carried the wounded Pony to safety. “Make sure to get everyone in town in a lockdown understood?” said Magnum as he is still preparing himself. “Right ill notify the town people as soon as possible.” Said Braeburn who was running towards town hall to notify everyone about the situation. But as Magnum stood his ground, twenty weird creatures drop down where Magnum was at so the killing party begun for Magnum. As Magnum grabbed out his signature weapon: his sword of the sinful souls, so as he started to attack one of the creatures, he saw Braeburn running back towards the building where Trixie was, Braeburn was tackled down and Braeburn was trying not to get bitten by the creature but the creature got on top of him infected Braeburn. Magnum had no choice he put the creatures out with his sword and stabbed Braeburn and stopped the infection from spreading all over Braeburn, but Braeburn’s body had gotten reanimated and brought back to life. Magnum and Trixie were horrified that Braeburn had come back to life, Magnum had to cut Braeburn’s head off in order to keep the body down, after that incident Magnum needed some time alone then Trixie spoke “not like it’s your fault Magnum it had to be done if anyone didn’t put him down we’d be like him but were safe now don’t worry.” Then Magnum spoke up, “bull shit Trixie Braeburn was my friend he knew everything about me he was like a father figure to me, hell I even wanted to have victory drinks with him but now I know for sure we can’t trust nobody or something as an ally if he hadn’t sacrificed himself I would have become great friends with the guy but now he’s dead never mind just leave me alone I need some time to think.” Said Magnum as his anger swell down to a calm state. “we still have time to live as one Magnum and how will you know if you want to be alone, you need somepony right beside you thinking things through with so if you need anything just let me know cause I’ll be at the bar having a drink.” Said Trixie as she walked away. “wait if you say that two people are supposed to think things over together than you can sit by me and think this over ill just be thinking about other stuff.” Said Magnum, as a flash back washed over Magnum head he saw something and as he saw it, he saw the younger self of himself: “papa can I go hunting with you today?” said little Magnum. “No Magnum its way too dangerous I’ll be back as soon as possible.” Said lemon.