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Am I... not a human?

by Dhuradhan
He wanted revenge... and he took it.

NOTE: Don't take it too seriously. Just a random idea... And sorry for the grammar. Still learning english...
EDIT: Alright! I fixed the grammar as much as I can. I hope I made it enjoyable...
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As I'm standing over this ruined city. The sun is setting and I can't hear the birds singing. All I hear is them... screaming and crying. They deserved it... all of it! They thought they can hold us as slaves. Now look where are they! This is the end for them. No sorry, no mercy, NOTHING!

I know... I shouldn't punish her subjects, but they kept us captive. Used us as some kind of dirty rats. And what surprise and disturbs me, is that they didn't know it's bad. Are they really that stupid?! Didn't they think about our feelings? Or what would it be like, if THEY are the ones, who have to serve a different specie? And I haven't mentioned how they treated us...

Her eyes... they showed me sympathy. Now I know, she never wanted this. Neither do I. But our species couldn't find peace after all of this.

And still... I feel nothing. I will never forgive them. I don't care about them. I hate them...

But... as I stand here... I remember what I have done. What I went through to free my people.

And I have only one question...

Am I... not a human?


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Dear readers!

I say it simply and shortly... I had a really bad time recently. The anger built up inside me and I had a lot of thoughts about, how to kill and destroy something. And being a brony, made me to ponify ( I think that's how you say it) those thoughts. End of story...

My first one shot. It feels strange...

This song inspired me to name this fic. like this and make it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTiIZ4pqETk

The mature warning is there for a reason!
Gore, killing ponies, rage, really nice words, rape (Nothing serious, just mentioning some things and NO CLOP!), slavery etc...

Complete
Sex
Tragedy
Gore
Dark
Alternate Universe
Human
 
ODPO

9592 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Revenge 2012-11-28 19:29:28 UTC
    9239
  2. Response 2012-11-24 17:51:04 UTC
    233
  3. Song! 2012-11-29 20:49:09 UTC
    120