The heart of a killer

by XxwolfiexX

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Sad, Dark
Length: 1055

This is my first completed fan fiction hope you like it

Fluttershy almost is brutally murdered the experience will never alow her to be the same

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-22 08:03:05 UTC

Chapter 2

When fluttershy came to she was outstretched across an old bench still in the cold dark barn she forced herself up onto her rump she iched her bloody scalp shocked to the feel of blood soaking into the fun on her hooves "I'm glad to see you awake" a familiar voice called fluttershy quickly spun around to see Big Mac standing with a sickle in his left hoof fluttershys eyes widened as he wade towards her she tried to scream but all she could make out was muffled squeaks and pants he razed the sickle and quickly slammed it down on her left wing a bloodcurdling cry escaped from her mouth with that he reared his weapon again and slammed it downwards on to the bloody wing and with the third swing it severed letting fall to the floor as he went for the second one again with three swigs it breaks off the poor mare released gut reaching crys with every blow tears cascaded down her blood stained cheeks. The evil work horse turned towards the pony "why don't you fly away, oh that's right I have your wings don't worry you never were a good flyer, actually I think I just did you a big faver" "why are you doing this" the wingless Pegasus managed to say threw the tears and agony that showed clearly in her trembling voice " your filthy critter have been running around MY orchard eating MY apples" "that's not my fault there animals and all they want is to survive and they can't without food and besides I can't keep track of every animal in equestria" whined the beaten pony "well then ill just have to kill all the critters than" the enraged mare stood up on her haunches "you can't hurt them they don't know any better!" "Watch me." Growled the staleon as he picked up a small rat that was darting across the gound he held the struggling rodent in his hoof than slammed it head first hard wooden bench that fluttershy was  on. The impact shattered the rats skull and broke its neck and to finish the attack Big Mac slammed his hoof on its back making gut reaching cracking sounds the final blow shattered its spine causing he lounges to crack and puncture its lungs the pressure of his strong hoof smashed its organs leaving them to burst and allow small pieces to escape threw his open mouth. The rat was very much dead and now the completely enraged mare had seen to much she sucked the tears back that had escaped her tear ducts breathing heavily shivering in pain disgust and anger "I'll kill you!" Screamed threw her stressed vocals as she leaped of the bench and at the chuckling red horse nocking him on his backwards that knocked the air out of his lungs and the sickle out of his hoof fluttershy dove for the weapon and jabbed it into his shoulder "I'll gut you like a pig!" She grawled in a voice drained in sanity, as she pulled it out of his shoulder, slit  his wrists aorta and jugular quickly grabbed some chains wrapped it around his ankles and lifted him up letting his dead body hang by the rafters and letting all the blood drain out on the cold barn floor as she began to gut him within a cupple moments his body was hallo her job was done eyeing her victim "how dose it feel Big Mac" she said with an evil grin behind muffled giggles of delight and fun

Chapter 3

" hey Big Mac!" Called  a familiar voice, that she recognized as one of her friends apple jack. With a gasp she hid behind the bench waiting, hopping she wouldn't go into the barn, but she did her eyes widened at the carnage in front of her the matted up ball of skin blood and fur with the entrails out starched across the barn floor. the sight made apple jack scream unaware it wold be the last sound she wold ever make as the yellow bloodstained mare swung the sickle at the orange pony's neck and with a couple shapes fluttershy had severed the head of her dear friend apple jack. The once innocent, sweet, caring, loving Pegasus was now a wingless heartless murderer. But there was one more victim she had to overcome, herself. She rose the weapon that was soaked with blood and pressed it tight on the ball of her throat "I'm sorry everypony" her last words lingered in the air for a while then faded, just like the life she took out of Big Mac applejack and herself.

Chapter 1

It was a worm sunny day in ponyvill when fluttershy emerged from her house to go for a walk to sweet apple acres to meet with Big Mac he had wrote to her Pryor from today inviting her over to help with the rat problum in the barn of corse the sweet and generous pony agreed for she would never let down a friend. Moments passed and she had arrived at the buetiful apple orchard were she was greeted by the large red stalon "hey fluttershy let me show you to the barn" the deep voiced staleon said headwind towards the bright red barn fluttershy followed in behind he rather strong pony. They stopped at the closed barn door big Mack opened the door and gestured her in. Fluttershy was hesadent at first, all the lights were off and she was very afraid of the dark but she shrugged her uncertainty off and advanced into the pich black barn, bigmac followed in behind the mare and closed the barn door, the only source of light. The slamming of the door made the started Pegasus  sqeal a little "uhm Big Mac" the mare began in a soft voice "uhm do you mind turning on the lights please" she begged "no ma'am Im afraid I can't" the staleon said fluttershy was getting a bit worried "can you turn on a flashlight or landen or something" she said on edge "nope" replayed Big Mac. And with that the strong pony reared up his hind legs and bucked the yellow mare as if she was a apple tree. And with that the mare was out cold