Way into the darkness

by Yobikir

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad, Romance, Tragedy
Length: 538

Sour Viez has a happy live, that is until everything goes wrong.

My first fic so criticism is very much welcome.

A long time ago there was a nice Colt with the Name sour Viez. He had a wonderful Job as Royal Guard (and in a position where he can see the most beautiful ponykind, and relatively new Ruler of Equestria Princess Celestia every day), he two great friends and a loving Family (even through twin-sister Sweet Viez can be very annoying at times).
In short he has a very good live, and it reaches its climax on the day Celestia asks him out for a date. But like everypony knows, when your on Top the only way is down.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-08 11:32:21 UTC

It's my Birthday today

“I want you to tell me your side of the Story.”

“You still want to hear that?”

“Yes, at the moment I don't understand a lot of things, but the most important is why are you so different from everything I heard about you? No more stalling, no more distractions or I go crazy.”

“Heh very well,.since you're the first who reached the third step I will tell you about my past, but before that let me talk about another stallion.”

“Seriously? I said  no more stalling!”

“Yes, seriously I promise it's relevant. Now listen to the Saga of Sour Viez.”

“But isn't that ...”

“NO, ... he was just an innocent stallion who died a long time ago. Now be quiet and listen, before I change my mind.”

It all started one night a long long time ago in the residence of a lower noble of the brewery-family.  There in the corridor in front of the bedchambers runs a royal blue earth pony in circles while a white Unicorn sits in front of the door to the previously mentioned bedchambers and observes him with a worried expression.

Lord Apple Cider, the stallion who walks in circles, asks with a little bit of annoyance in his voice “Silver Lining, please tell me again why can't I be with my wife right now?”

The addressed Unicorn sights and answers for the Question for 14th time: “Well my Lord, we all agreed that as soon as you enter you will most likely drop down unconscious, which only serve to increase the work for everyone present. Not to mention that you would make the ordeal much harder for Lady Cider by needlessly worrying her.”

Now it is the Lord turn to sight. ”Thanks for reminding me, now I can go back to the fulfilling exercise of worried circle-running. Please don't mind me when I ask again in a few ...” he said with a forced smirk before being interrupted by the crying of a foal.

For a few seconds the Lord stood there with a blank expression, before he started running towards the bedchambers screaming“MY BABY,” before being stopped by a white hoof.

“My Lord please let me remind you that I can’t let you enter before I get notice from Miss Drop or Doctor Medicine,” was the answer with adeadpan voice.

“Silver I just became father. So if you want to keep your job stand aside and let me enter.”

“Well My Lord we both know what Lady Cider would do if you end my employment here because of this,” with that the Lord flinched and the Unicorn went on “and if I would let you in Miss Drop will make me wish that I never started working here. Not mention what Doctor Medicine would do to me if you lose consciousness because of ...” Suddenly the servant gets interrupted by the crying of a second foal.

The Lord stopped moving completely, he didn't even breath until he almost whispered “Twins?” and fell down.

The Butler just sighted. 'Luckily we prepared a room for this reason, I better put him there and then tell the Ladies.' he thought and lifted Lord Apple Cider with his magic