Major Alsea is the pilot of a C-130 and is headed to china for a very important peace drop off but six hours in to the flight a mysterious white light appears, and the next thing the major knows he’s flying over a forest with two engines online and is rapidly losing altitude… can he and the small spec opps squad survive this new world…

(Rated teen for gore and harsh language and possible racist remarks)

This is my first story ever so i would really appreciate some comments on my writing skill and what needs to be improved

And so i say let the adventuers begin!