The dawn of a new day

by Scientificbrony

Chapter 3: An unexpected surprise

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Chapter 3, an unexpected surprise

Green dawn was faced with a posh pony, with the voice to crack diamonds
“you’ve started a tussle with the great and powerful Trixie” she smirked. ok I didn’t know exactly what was going on but I had a party to go to and I still need to meet everyone “shut up, I’m late now will the great and powerful show off, shove off” a little mean for my taste but her voice was annoying. She hung her head and walked away walking to the party the sun was full the sky was blue and sunshine poured in through the clouds until a few pegasi moved the clouds it was about to rain I saw a red barn in the distance my salvation. I started to gallop a few drops of rain pierced my coat and touch my skin sending a chill up my spine I made it and just walked in pinkie pie was hanging up green and black streamer a cake which seemed to have the exact symmetry of my had sat on a table “Hi pinkie” she faltered “oh” then fell from the ladder she was on she hit the ground rubbed her head “hello” disregarding her fall “you’ve ruined your surprise” she had an expression of happiness “but I need help apple jack, spike, twilight, rainbow dash, rarity and fluttershy are all out getting stuff, and I’m a little blocked up may I get some help” I smiled helping make my own surprise party I nodded she threw me a golden streamer thingy and pointed to a cannon in the back “you’re going to shoot me with a cannon” I said with immediate urgency “she spit out the ribbon in her mouth “no silly willy, that’s my party cannon go ahead pull it” I walked up to the pink cannon assuring myself pinkie wouldn’t lie to get me hurt I closed my eyes and bent over and grabbed the wick in my teeth.

many spectacular sounds nestled into my ears music, balloons, games. After about an hour of setting up supplies everyone showed up. I decided to meet up with rainbow dash I needed to get to know everyone I set up a sort of checklist in my head 1) rainbow dash 2) fluttershy 3) apple jack 4) spike I needed to meet them all. Approaching her she had a mane of rainbows slightly more alluring than the tail of the shadow stalker “hey, uh I’m green dawn I was told that you’re an awesome person and we should meet” she smiled spit in her hoof and held it out to me at first I was appalled, but decided that it was an invitation and rudeness is not allowed I quickly spit in my hoof and stomped hooves. “well you catch on fast you’re the talk of the town, I mean you fought a shadow stalker your one of the only ponies to survive without being cripples” I felt flushed great now everyone knows about my secret well not secret I just don’t want to be seen as more than I am I put my hoof behind my head and rubbed “ ha-ha, yea I guess I did how did it spread so fast” she motioned to a friend’s “I’m sorry kid I have to catch up with an old friend well catch up later go party” feeling like I was pushed away fluttershy was on my list moving to a crème colored pony with a wavy pink mane nowhere near as bright as pinkies she was just sitting there “hey there care to dance” she looked up her eye’s widened she looked down “oh no, I’ll just watch I don’t like crowds” she squeaked “your fluttershy right” she looked up and barely squeaked yes “well fluttershy would you at least like to talk “ she waved her head I assumed it was yes “what do you do for a living fluttershy” a little white rabbit popped from her mane and onto her back fluttershy nestled it with her nose “oh its ok angel he’s friendly” the rabbit gave me a stare down then shrugged its shoulders and walked back into fluttershy’s mane “well I love animals, I walk through the everfree forest seeing all the new animals” I opened my mouth to talk when the barn door opened up in a smash a magical aura surrounded them “ok get ready for a real party” said a drenched ice mane’d pony “Trixie” twilight said “you’re not welcome here” Trixie smirked and used magic to restrain everypony I ran up to stop her. Running up I was able to head butt her she fell over her spell was broken she stood up, eyes glowing and a rage seeming to flow, the glowing white eyes turned black and expanded “I’ve learned a lot while I was away I made good friends with, oh what was her name oh yea chrysalis she taught me a lot of magic” she exploded in a magic aura freezing everything and slowing me down in a rage I flipped a table spun around and kicked it flew in her direction she dodged it and a lasso came out of nowhere and got her she was yanked back magically she turned herself and used to rope to wrap up the orange pony with the blond mane.it gave me enough to tackle the pony and finally get to attack her I head butted her I bet her horn a gash filled my skull blood poured onto my muzzle I was gurgling with my own blood that hurt, it enraged me I was unstoppable I was dodging floating objects being thrown with massive force my head cake flew at about a thousand miles per hour in actually connected with me disintegrated into a sugary mass from icing my vision was clouded by cake but I wiped off and the cake sucked up some of the blood.

Dipping and dodging the attacks I was close my hind leg connecting with her chest; my leg snapped in half pain strutted through my body. An almost to similar aura grabbed around me but this time she was slowly squeezing me my organs chided against touching each other I felt something rupture, possibly my spleen I started to pee myself, it was my bladder I wasn’t afraid it was the only explanation my eyes closed I started to feel faint a thud, me and the adjacent pony fell, me hitting the ground I sputtered up a little bit of blood it rested on my lip, I was heaving and gasping. It seems I couldn’t get enough oxygen looking to my right a few ponies were restraining the evil pony, apple jack lassoed her legs. Their attention left her and was directed to me ponies gathered around I was a crumpled mess, I was in a type of fetal position in my own excrement I felt like a joke, like trash. They started speaking they I assumed were talking to me my eyes closed, their voices becoming more and more faint.

I for the second time this week, I was in a hospital but something was different I felt bigger, and stronger I looked to my right I was older my mane was longer, and I was greeted by celestia, the woman I prayed to, to get out of that damned orphanage I was graced with her presence “I’m sorry my subject you may have noticed you are older about 5 years older to be exact, but do not fear five years had not passes and you are only mentally older and physically but you will still have those extra five years” she paused for breath “I’ve performed one of the strongest spells ever performed it aged your body so your organs can fix themselves you were to unstable to go into surgery, but your organs are fine and you are healthy, I deem you protector of Ponyville and you’ve earned a personal favor.” another breath “now if you will excuse me that magic drained me heavily and I need rest, if you ever come to Canterlot please visit me.” I stood up on my hooves I had a better stance and I looked so much better walking out I was greeted by cheering “Howdy, you saved dang near every one of us” I looked with a quizzical look “but I lost I mean look at me” she looked sympathetic “I’m sorry for that, but you weakened her grasp on us so we could get in and finish the job without we would have all died”

I felt good; rarity was floating a box over her head “hello dear, oh you look great I’ve finished this for you free of charge of course just as a thank you.” Opening the box it was a vest black with a green under shirt with a rose a green cape and a fedora I quickly put them all “How do I look” rarity came closer and grabbed the fedora in her teeth adjusted the position “there, fabulous what a handsome stallion” I blushed and hid my head from sight. I was given a room in sugar cube corner which pinkie was more than tolerable with giving me laying in the bed I closed my eyes my life was turning out ok I was the protector of Ponyville, I’m going to visit Canterlot tomorrow to get situated with the princess. I started to think about my new friends great friends not people from my orphanage, like wish star. I still had a bone or two to pick with him but that’s another day tomorrow will be the closest I will be to happiness and from there on out I will continue happy.

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