(Ok so I like the feedback,but im just putting this out there. Im not much for this kind of thing. This is my first legit fic, so if we could cool it with the harsh "itsterribledieinaholewhileIfap" XD

Anyways. for now I wont have much time to make more chapters, I will try to heed some of this advice and put alittle more into it. And i can agree with the gay guys thing. Life is much better with gay guys ;)