Tale of The ManWhorse

by MrMusicalPony

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Comedy, Romance
Length: 3738

When Twilight tries the ManWhorse service, she can't help but develop feelings for him

When the ManWhorse comes to town, eveyone just HAS to get a jump on him! Who knew the Mane 6 would be so naughty! Even Twilight's using the service; but when Twilight lets the colt take her virginity, and shows her kindness, she can't help but start to have feelings for him.
Will Twilight be able to overcome her feelings for the colt, or will she have to suffer through all of her friends doing him?

Lol Iunno, just read it.

Can you tell I'm not really even TRYING to be serious anymore?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-16 02:06:23 UTC

The Jealousy Begins

Fluttershy hummed a happy song as she walked through Ponyville. She was on her way to pick up some more bird seeds for some of her birds. She stopped at a kiosk in the marketplace, getting a few small bags. She started to head back to her cottage, when she approached Twilight’s Library, as it was on the way.

“Please, come inside.” She overheard Twilight say. Fluttershy took a peek from the side of the library to see who she was talking to.  A colt stood at the door, facing Twilight whom had only her head outside the door. She looked side to side, making sure that no one was around. Fluttershy had hidden away well enough that she didn’t see her. She opened the door more for the colt to come in, and shut it quickly afterwards.

“I wonder who that was.” Fluttershy muttered to herself. She decided she would ask Twilight about it after she fed her birds. She didn’t want to leave them without any food for long, so she hurried home.

***

“So… how does this work?” Twilight twiddled her hooves around, sitting on her couch with the colt. The black colt only smiled at her.

“Your first time?” He asked. Twilight only looked away, the answer showing for itself. “It’s alright. I work with first timers all of the time. Which package are you paying for?” He asked. Twilight turned back to face him, and handed him a small bag of bits.

“The full package,” She nervously told him. “Plus a little extra more to cover how horrible I’ll be.” She looked down at the ground. She started to have second thoughts. “Maybe I’m just not ready.” She thought aloud.

“Don’t sweat it,” The colt swiped his hoof in the air, acting casual. “Here,” He reached into the bag and handed her a few bits. “No need to pay me extra.”

“Twilight?” Spike called downstairs. Twilight looked towards the stairs, shocked.

“Spike? I thought you went over to Rarity’s!” She yelled up. She started to panic. She looked around the library. Where to hide him, where to hide him? The colt put a hoof on her mouth, the other hoof used to make a ‘shush’ sign. He got up and went over to the closet, opened the door, and closed it behind him.

“I guess he’s had this happen before…” Twilight assumed, as Spike came down the stairs.

“I was going to, but I slept in later than I wanted to.” He admitted, rubbing his eyes. “Who were you talking to?”

“Nopony!” She lied defensively. “Nopony at all. How about you just head on over to Rarity’s?” Spike looked at her with a worried face.

“Twilight, are you okay?” He asked.

“I’m fine.” She smiled nervously. “How about you just run along? I’m sure Rarity’s waiting for you!” She opened the front door with her magic, urging him to leave. Fluttershy was at her doorstep, however. She had been about to knock, but Twilight opened the door before she could.

Spike left the library, but not before whispering to Fluttershy, “She’s a bit uneasy right now. I don’t know why, but maybe you can calm her down.” He told her, leaving for Rarity’s.

“Fluttershy! My friend!” Twilight quickly ran up to the door. “How’s it going? What do you need?” She quickly asked. She had gotten a bit horny from looking at the colt and thinking about what she paid him to do, and she could barely hold it back any longer.

“Oh, I just wanted to know who your friend was that came by earlier.” She smiled, but then went into a nervous tone. “I just overheard you asking him to come in earlier, and you seemed a bit nervous. I just wanted to know if you were okay, mostly.”

“He’s a cousin from out of town.” Twilight lied quickly. She had already come up with stories beforehand. “But he’s gone now.” She lied. “Thanks for checking up on me! Ta-Ta!” She shut the door quickly.

Twilight jumped on her couch, lying on her back and spread her legs. “You can come out now!” She yelled towards the closet. She started to rub herself. The colt came out of the closet, walking over to Twilight who was moaning softly while rubbing herself.

“I see you’ve gotten started without me.” He got on the couch over Twilight. Twilight opened up her pussy with her hooves, as he started to descend on top of her, sticking his cock into her. She let herself relax, knowing that he would do most of the work. She moaned with every push deeper inside of her.

After a while, Twilight reached her hooves around the colt’s neck, dragging him down enough for her to kiss him. They locked their muzzles together as the colt continued to pound into Twilight’s pussy. Finally the colt broke the kiss, starting to cum inside of her. She came with him, screaming aloud.

***

Twilight was exhausted. She had only laid there after they had finished. The colt had started to clean himself and her up in silence. Twilight couldn’t move or speak; she had just had the best experience of her life. The colt came over to her, flipping her over and starting to massage her back. She relaxed even more, feeling her body loosen up.

“I had planned to give you a massage first, but I realize first timers sometimes just want to get to the good part. You bled a lot.” He added.

“What?” She was a bit surprised. “I was bleeding?”

“You’re a virgin- well, were.” He corrected himself. “Most virgins bleed their first time. Don’t worry though, while you were so exhausted afterwards I went ahead and cleaned it all up for you.” Twilight blushed; she was embarrassed that she had been so idle that she didn’t notice that he had cleaned her up.

After a massage, the colt grabbed his bag of bits, put his business card on the table, and started to walk to the door.

“Wait… You’re leaving?” Twilight stood up. She didn’t want him to go. He cocked his head, looking at her.

“I do have other appointments; besides, I think I’ve satisfied you enough.” He winked. Twilight contemplated this for a moment. She had been satisfied, so why did she want him to stay so much? She looked down at the ground, accepting the fact that he had to go. The colt noticed that she was saddened; he walked up to her and lifted up her chin, kissing her. “My card is on the table. Call me again.” He headed for the door and opened it.

“Wait!” Twilight called. “I never caught your name!”

“Tom,” He smiled, leaving and closing the door behind him.

“I like that name.” A voice came from upstairs.

“I do too… Wait.” Twilight turned around, looking at the stairs. “Who’s there?” Pinkie Pie came trotting down the stairs, happy as could be.

“You did great, Twilight! You were like ‘oh yeeeaaahhhh’,” Pinkie acted it out, “and he was like ‘mhm mhm, you’re doin’ good.’” Twilight hid her face in the cushions of the couch. Not only was she embarrassed about the entire situation that had happened with her being so brain-dead after the sex, she was embarrassed that one of her friends watched her be done.

“Now, if you excuse me, I have an appointment at Sugar Cube Corner that I just can’t miss!” Pinkie bounced towards the door. Twilight perked up from the statement after realizing Tom also had an appointment

“Wait… what appointment?”

“With Tom, silly!” Pinkie opened the door and shut it behind her.

“With Tom…” Twilight repeated. “But he’s my colt!” She lied to herself. She knew he was a ManWhorse, but she remembered how nice he was to her and how great he made her feel; not to mention that he cleaned her all up while she was being lazy on the couch. She had feelings for him now, even after only knowing him for an hour.

Suddenly, without a warning, Spike opened the door and walked inside.

“How was your date?” He asked, chomping on an apple.

“How do you know I was on a date?” Twilight couldn’t believe it. Two people knew about the colt being here.

“Rarity told me.”

Three.

“How did she know?”

“She saw that colt walking over here. She said she knew the colt, and said you two were going on a date.”

Great, she knows I was fucking. Twilight thought to herself. At least Spike only thinks it was a date

“Did he pleasure you well?”

Or not.

Twilight dug her face back into the cushions of the couch.

“Twilight? Are you okay?... Twilight?”

To Be Continued

I'm missing a thought sentence that should be italicized, please let me know if you see it.

Waiting List

Twilight scavenged through the library for more bits. She almost had enough bits to use the service again. She had already used her extra money for the week on yesterday’s service call for Tom. She received money from the town’s taxes for running the library, since there was no other income for running it other than late fees. She also got a bit of an allowance from Princess Celestia. Without the allowance from the Princess, she would have had to get a second job to cover everything extra things.

Twilight couldn’t find enough bits, and groaned.

“I want to see him again.” She laid her head down on her desk. She had only one option now: ask the Princess for a little more money. She didn’t want to bother the Princess, and come off as someone who was taking advantage of her generosity, but the desire to see him again was great.

Dear Princess Celestia

I need more money. I know you already give me an allowance every month, but I need just a little bit more. Just this one time? I know I’m asking for a lot, but I need just a little bit.

Your faithful student

Twilight Sparkle.

“Spike!” She called, and Spike quickly came running down the stairs. “Send this letter. Now, now, now!” She used her magic to float the letter over to him, who quickly obeyed without a question due to her uneasiness.

“Twilight, what’s the matter? Why did you need to send a letter to the Princess so quickly?”

“Because… Because…” she tried to come up with an excuse. She didn’t want to tell him she needed more money. With her frantic behavior and the fact that she was asking the Princess for more money, Spike might think she was trying to get her fix on some kind of drug. She knew that he would find out that she had asked the Princess for money eventually, however. “I just need a bit of extra money for… my dry-cleaning!” She lied. “This dress that Rarity gave me has gotten a little smudge on it, and I need to get it cleaned right away.” She quickly went upstairs and grabbed the simplistic dress Rarity had made for her for her birthday. She took a bit of ink and smudged it on, running back downstairs to show Spike.

“Oh!” Spike took the bait. “That is pretty important. Something that Rarity made has to be kept in as good condition as possible!” Twilight nodded in agreement. Suddenly, Spike burped up a letter. Twilight frantically opened it, a bag of bits falling out of it.

Dear Twilight, my faithful student

Here’s some money that will hopefully cover whatever you need.

Princess Celestia

The letter was very short, but Twilight didn’t care. She got what she asked for. She added it to the money she already had.

I have enough for two. She thought excitedly.

***

“You’ll just have to wait mam. Mr.Tom has become very bust lately with the services. It’s the reason her hired a secretary in the first place. It seems that a lot of mares need the service.” Twilight held the phone between her head and her shoulder. She was looking in her mirror, trying to find a way to be more attractive while talking on the phone.

“What if I pay more bits? Will that quicken it up a bit?” Twilight asked.

“No, Mam. I’m sorry; you’ll just have to wait until Tuesday afternoon at 1’o clock. Have a good day.” The phone began to buzz after the secretary hung up. Twilight used her magic to float the phone back on the receiver. Twilight sighed. She didn’t want to wait until Tuesday to see him; that was three days away! Twilight needed a way to see him sooner.

She was starting to go mad over this unhealthy obsession with Tom.

***

“Don’t you think you’re getting a little worked up over nothing?” Rarity was putting clothes away in their proper drawers. Twilight paced around the room. “You’ve only known him since yesterday, and even then you only had about an hour with him. He’s just a ManWhorse who had sex with you for money. There’s no connection between you two, darling. Are you sure you’re just not ankling for sex?”

“Rarity, I just… feel something more than an urge to have sex with him. If that were the case, I would try to get it from any other service I could find. There’s just something about Tom…”

“I know its hard darling, but you’re just going through a phase. It’s just what happens the first time you’re with a colt.” Rarity assured her. “It happened to me the first time as well. Now I just use the service for the sex.” Twilight thought for a moment about her last statement.

“Are you using the same service?” Twilight asked. Rarity looked at her and nodded. “He’s coming today at seven.” Rarity smiled. “I know it bothers you that he’s sleeping with other mares, but Twilight, you can’t just have him to yourself. You need to accept the fact that he’s going to sleep with any mare that gives him money.”

 Rarity walked over to Twilight, putting a hoof around her, as Twilight looked at the ground defeated. “I know it’s hard, but I’m not going to lie to you about it. I learned that when Fluttershy became famous; we have to be honest with each other even when it’s hard and may hurt each other’s feelings. Twilight, it’s just a phase, and you’re not really in love with him.” Twilight started to cry. Rarity hugged her.

“Please Rarity… give me your time slot.” She begged. Rarity shook her head. “You’re the element of Generosity, please be generous and give it to me?” Twilight exploited this fact. Rarity’s face turned from a sympathetic face to a furious one.

“Twilight, I’m surprised at you! Never have you tried to take advantage of someone like this. I understand you’re in turmoil about this situation, but you can’t just try to take advantage of people.”

Like Princess Celestia… Twilight thought.

“You’re right Rarity…” She sniffled. “I just want to see him. He made me feel so… good. Not in just a sexual way, but just…” She couldn’t explain the feeling. Rarity’s anger quickly dissipated, turning back to sympathy. They were both quiet for a moment until Rarity sighed.

“I’ll call in and change the address.” Twilight’s face brightened. She hugged her friend tightly.

“Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! Oh, Rarity, you’re the best friend a mare could ask for. I love you!” Rarity smiled.

“I love you too, Twilight. Now, go home and make yourself look pretty! I’ll be over in a bit to ask Spike to come help me collect some gems.” She winked. Twilight couldn’t stop smiling.

***

Twilight waited patiently on the couch. She had a little bit of makeup on, and a little bit of lipstick. She didn’t want to make herself look like she was trying too hard to look pretty. It was five minutes till seven. She watched the clock as it ticked slower and slower. The more Twilight wanted the time to speed up, it slowed down instead.

Rarity had taken Spike a little while ago to help her design a new dress. She waws originally going to take him out to look for gems, but Twilight suggested that they work on a new dress instead, seeing as it was getting dark out.

She finally heard a knocking at the door. She almost gasped from the excitement, but she tried to play it cool. She was a normal mare that didn’t about what colt it was, just that she needed to get off; at least what she told herself.

“Come in!” She yelled as she tried to lay on the couch in the sexiest pose she could muster. The black colt opened the door.

“You’re a very peculiar mare, Ms. Sparkle.” The colt smiled. “Most clients don’t want to use my service two days in a row.”

“Please, Tom, call me Twilight.” She tried hard to muster up a sexy voice, but ended up voice cracking at ‘Please’.

“Might I say, Twilight, you’re looking very beautiful tonight.” He complemented her, making her a bit wet. She knew he said that on purpose to get her aroused. She wanted to talk a little bit before they started. The longer he stayed, the better it was.

“Well, thank you Tom.” She winked. She tried so hard to come off as sexy, but she only came off as nerdy. Tom didn’t show any notice to that fact, however. He approached her slowly. She turned on her side on the couch so her back was towards him, looking back at him. She stuck out her plot a little bit. She tried to simply be flirty, but the colt went a bit faster than she intended. Once he was up to her, he started rubbing her plot gently.

Twilight blushed, getting a little more wet. She resisted, standing up on the couch nervously.

“Would you like some coffee?” She asked nervously, giving a large smile.

“I don’t drink coffee. Are you still nervous, Twilight?” He bluntly asked.

“…No.” She didn’t make eye contact with him for that answer. He tugged her hoof for her to sit down, which she obeyed.

“No need to be shy. Here, I’ll help you relax. I won’t beat around the bush.”

But I want to She thought to herself. Suddenly, he kissed her. They shared the kiss for a while, as Twilight closed her eyes. She felt like she was flying.

The door swung open suddenly, as Fluttershy stood at the doorway.

“Twilight,” She began. “He’s mine.” Twilight opened her eyes, confused by the statement even more than her sudden interruption.

Follow Up

Twilight broke off their kiss, looking at Fluttershy, enraged.

“What do you mean, Fluttershy?” Twilight stomped her way past Tom, whom watched the scene unravel with a blank face, over to Fluttershy. “I paid for this session,” She made the excuse, trying to make it seem that all she wanted was the sex. “So for the moment he’s mine.” Fluttershy’s angry demeanor disappeared, leaving her submissive to Twilight’s rage.

“Well, it’s just that I… he… Made me feel so good.” Fluttershy spoke shyly. “I just couldn’t stand to see him with another mare.” She stood silent from a moment, looking at the ground, but returned to her anger. “So I want you to stop kissing him, because he’s mine!” She collected all of her bravery as she could, trying to overtake the situation.

“Listen here, Fluttershy! I-”

“Ladies,” Tom cut them off. They both turned to him, looking at him intently, hanging on every word he would speak. He walked over to them, handing Twilight her bag of bits back. “Call me again when you two have gotten your heads straight. I am a ManWhorse, not a first place trophy. If you excuse me, I believe I’ll pay a visit to the original client of this hour.” With that, Tom walked past them out the door.

“Tom…” Both of the mares sighed. They looked at each other with an indescribable loathing. “We’ll settle this tomorrow!” They both rang, Fluttershy walking out of the library and shutting the door behind her.

Twilight’s eyes began to water. “I’ll just have to wait until Tuesday, then…”

***

Dear Princess Celestia Twilight wrote

I’m having a bit of trouble. I’ve yet to learn anything about Friendship, as this problem I’m facing has gotten larger than most of our other issues as friends. I want to say that I have learned that friends should never fight over something and should come to a compromise, but this is un-comprisable.

“It’s a colt, isn’t it?” Twilight stopped what she was writing. She looked behind her, seeing the Princess walking through the open window. Twilight sighed and nodded. “Fluttershy has also written a letter to me about this colt. She asked my advice, as she doesn’t want to ruin her friendship with you, but she also doesn’t want to give up the colt.”

“I don’t want to ruin our friendship, either…” She sighed, “But I can’t let her have him.”

“I think for the moment Pinkie has him.” The Princess gave a nervous chuckle. “You can’t have every colt that walks your way, Twilight. This is a ManWhorse we’re talking about.”

“I know…” Twilight turned away from the Princess. “I’ve only known him for a little while, yet I feel an overwhelming connection between us. I’m just craving to see him again.” She admitted. “He makes me feel so wonderful. It’s an indescribable feeling.”

“Well, Twilight, I suppose you’ll just have to figure out if losing a friend over it is worth it.” Celestia bluntly said.

Everyone’s being so crude lately about my problem…

“Princess, I-” Twilight turned around to face the Princess, but she was gone.

Intermission: The Whale

Something to tide you guys over until the next chapter.

Once upon a time there was a pony and a whale.  One day, the pony started talking to the whale.

“Hey whale! What’s up?” The whale said nothing back.

“Hey whale! I’m talking to you!” But again, the whale didn’t answer. Finally the pony got so upset; he started to yell at the whale.

“Hey whale! I am talking to you!” Then the whale ate him.

Turns out the whale couldn’t talk at all.

The End

I'll probably delete this when the next chapter is out.