Light, Night(Mare?), and Day

by Heart 97

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 2136

a foal falls in prey of the luxury of three Mares.Will he know love?who will get the prize?

A talented musician,Broken, will travel to Ponyville on vacation.
Unfortunately(maybe) he falls to love with a winged pony.
Nothing so bad at first glance,but she reveals to be sadistic yet still gentle in her way.
Like the sadic experience was nothing,he gets raped by somepony else who he could never expect.
He will,however,cheat the one he fell in love with,because she had not believed him when he talk to her about his rape.
Who will he choose?Will his choice be wise?
Everything just happened so quickly those days…

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Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-04 23:40:27 UTC

Rainbow asshole Dash

Broken is a pony with a majestic talent in music. He doesn't have a girlfriend or never had Sex,despite being enough popular.

After his last concert in a pub in Manehattan he has gone to Ponyville to pass a vacation week.

He couldn't ever know what those days would happen...

The train halted to a stop, and the doors open. He jumped off the train and took a moment to observe his surroundings, before heading to the hotel.

The journey to the hotel was quiet, surprisingly. He had expected the typical noise of a marketplace but the serene quietness was a welcoming experience.

He finally reached his destination after a long journey. He pushed the door and headed towards the receptionist. He paid for the room and received his key. It didn't take long for him to find his room.

He twisted the key in the keyhole and pushed the door open. As he took in his surroundings, his tired mind registered one item, and his eyes shifted to the large white mattress, an essential to a hotel room. Quickly, he locked the door and dropped everything he was holding before he jumped onto the bed. Instantly, he felt the feeling of fatigue overcoming him. With that, he fell into a deep slumber.

His eyes frowned when the slightest bit of sunlight pierced through the curtains. He look at the sun and berated it.

"An hour more, you damn sun!"

Trying as he can, he pushed himself out of bed wearily and washed his face in the toilet. After putting on a new set of clothing he went to the hotel lobby, which conveniently had a buffet, and settled down to serve himself a wide variety of food that will fuel him with the needed energy for the day.

After a hearty meal, he walked to Ponyville' s park and couldn't help but smile at the same serene feeling that welcomed him yesterday. He walked to the nearest bench and opened his violin case. He needed a daily dosage of violin play. He set the bow on the strings and started playing away.

The melodic sounds coming from his expert play filled the surrounding. He closed his eyes and let himself immerse in the music world. His ears picked up the sound of birds chirping along with every movement of his bow. A blur of rainbow shot through the sky as he continued playing. The blur halted to a stop and watched Broken play the melody that caught her ears

They crossed eachother 's sight for a second, before Rainbow resumed her flying.

everything of her is so beautiful! I feel so inferior compared to her beauty! May Celestia forgive me but she is way prettier!-he thought.

He posed his bow and called the pegasus with a gentle tone: You, miss pegasus up there, can you land for a second?

She landed in a mud puddle, splashing Broken of mud.

Oh you were so near! Let’s use some of the pegasi magic to clear your dirtiness!

Rainbow used her magic over the weather to create a little cloud of rain who released much water on Broken.

After the cloud expired, she looked the pegasus in front of him: he was quite cute, with shiny maroon eyes, grey fur and black wings.

She thought: "he is cute, and is a musician, maybe i can do something with him, since

Has passed so much from the last sex with Applejack, and i wanna try with a male pony this time".

Can i ask your name, stranger? -said Rainbow with a kind tone.

my name is Broken, Broken Heart, miss -said Broken.

i heard some of your concerts and your plays here today: they were awesome!!Replied Rainbow

-t-thank you miss! said Broken heavily blushing.

-My name is Rainbow, so stop calling me miss!- she said, but she thought something else:

you'll need to call me mistress, so isn't necessary from now already, ahaha!

Then Rainbow said with a malicious smile: would you like to play for me? Just for me alone, no one else.

Broken thought about a second and accepted.

What hurt could i get? It will be a pleasure to play for a so cute mare!- said then Broken

Rainbow Dash made an insane smile and hardly resisted to laugh: what she was planning of so "fun"?

They slowly flew to Rainbow's home, during the magnificent sunset of that day.

When they arrived her home they drunk some non-alcoholic cider, but Rainbow started to behave quite strangely.

She made Broken play his violin but after his performance she started to laugh brakeless, thinking of the poor creature in front of her was about to experience.

Why are you Laughing?- said Broken.

Ahaha, i just can't stop thinking of what I’m going to do with YOU!- said Rainbow with an insane smile.

She started by wildly slapping Broken, who enraged uttered:-what are you doing? I-i don't like your look...

Please Rainbow, stop!

She didn't care...

Rainbow Dash didn't care about how much pain she vas inflicting to him, because that her slaps were only caresses, in front of what she was planning to do.

-I'll make you suffer so much that you'll beg me to stop after just a minute!- She said.

In a split of a second, she jumped on Broken’s body, with her knees pressing on his belly.

She started slapping wildly his face, before punching him with a mad smile.

May this end soon, i would like to be a corpse now, rather than surviving...she'll kill me within atrocious pain! - thought Broken.

Rainbow stopped her punches for a second, just to say what she would like to have done for her:

i want you to do everything i want, i don't care if you are sad or happy, healthy or sick, everything you must do is my will, and nothing else.

you'll not regret to worship me!

Do you have the strange idea of not obeying me?

Well, do you see that whip exposed, the one with the broken glass shards?

I'll tear you apart with that if you not obey! now choose!

Broken just thought: I' m so ashamed...

Slave to a mare, she is so sadistic, and probably this is just the warm up.

how this could happen? I did nothing to her, maybe this is what my friends call sadomasochism...

i thought it was funnier...

what in the name of Celestia i' m thinking just now? Surely is funny, but just for her!

Somepony, please help me...

Rainbow saw tears of fear dropping from Broken' s cheeks and slapped him:

Why do you cry? I order you not to cry!

how i could? I fear you!-said Broken, hugging Rainbow without thinking

you see? You shouldn't cry, and if you just obey me and enjoy my treatment, i will not harm you.

how could i like suffer?!-said Broken, trying to convince Rainbow.

The first time is the most difficult, because tour nerves and your brain are not ready yet.

I'll go easy on you, for the first minutes.

Now, rest with me. Let's go to my bed.

they slowly walk through the big house of Rainbow, and Broken did never move his sight from Rainbow, trying to find a chance to run away.

When they arrived in her bedroom, she invited Broken to rest some time on her bed, and reluctant he accepted.

On her bed, they were much near and Broken said:i can rest a bit?

Rainbow hinted a yes, and after a bit of time Broken fall asleep.

Rainbow Dash hug him tightly, not knowing why, but even if he was sleeping, Broken peacefully smiled.

It'll be a job hearing your screams, and i think you'll like my way to be sadistic...

Just sadism?

Broken was sleeping on Rainbow Dash's bed, with his head on her belly.

She stroked him,slowly, with her soft hoofs, and Broken moaned of pleasure.

Even if he was sleeping, he said:

Rainbow,hit me stronger...

make me suffer as much as you want...

She thought:   what is he thinking right now?why he said exactly those words?   Rainbow slapped the face of the sleeping musician, having an idea on what she could do to him just there, in that moment.

"Wake up, you will accomplish my joy,here and now!"

Broken was still half-sleeping,then answered:

"Let me sleep some minutes more,mom".

"M-mom? what are you thinking,i'm your gracious princess,not your mother! " Said Rainbow with a nervous expression.

Broken suddenly woke up completely and said quietly:

Sorry,Rainbow,i was sleeping so fine on your soft belly,and i felt your gentle hoofs, even if i was sleeping.

You were so kind...

Rainbow blushed so much that she turned away ho hide it.

Broken,i'm going to take some "toys" .do not dare to make a single step out of this room,understood?- said Rainbow recovering control of herself.

Broken was aware of what could happen to him should he disobey Rainbow's order,but his curiosity took over.

When he knew that he was far enough he tried to ear what she was preparing.

Sounds of slashing whips,chains and other unspecified noises were heard by the colt.

What is she going to do with me?- thought the musician,shaking, just  before falling on ground, passed out.

Broken woke up just few minutes later,blindfolded and with his movements completely locked.

"What is happened?Rainbow can you ear me?"-said Broken uselessly trying to free himself.

Rainbow,help!!"-shouted just before being kissed on his forehead.

The lips were soft,gentle and delicate,but they made him feel a chill.

Broken...you disobeyed my order to stay here...

Suddenly a whip hit him on his stomach,giving Broken great pain.

that voice...Rainbow?said then Broken,still recovering from the hit.

The mare took his blindfold away and said:"i did not want you see what i was preparing.

it was a surprise ! "

"Are you crazy? why i should see it as surprise?you want to torture me!!"

"Oh,yes,i want to make you scream of pain,so much that you'll enjoy it".-Replied the Cyan pony with a mad smile.

Rainbow took a razor and started looking over a place where to cut.

"R-Rainbow...whar are you going to do with that thing?"-said Broken shivering with real terror.

the mare just ignored him and slowly inserted the razor in Broken's ,slowly engraving his grey skin.

The horse tried to not cry or shout in pain and resisted until rainbow finished what she had started.

"Rainbow,why are you doing this?"-Asked broken bravely.

"Quite simple:i am sadistic and i take pleasure when i make you suffer by my own hoofs.

Let me say this,is sexual pleasure in your case...-"

These words hit Broken deeply: he unconsciously loved her and in a way he liked her manners, gentle yet mean.

Without wanting,his heart made him weak and submittive: he would have done everything for please her, even undergoing atrocious pain.

" Princess i can... -"

He did not end the phrase because someone knocked Rainbow dash's home door.

Who the hell dares to  interrypt my carnal pleasure?!may he have a good justfication!-

Angrily snarled the sadistic mare.

When she opened his door,he saw Pinkie Pie who exhibited an enourmous smile.

" Dashie, could you come with me to cook some cupcakes ? "

Rainbow dash nearly exploded from the rage: the wrong pony in the wrong moment stopped her pleasure ;

she someway mantained her control and gently said to Pinkie:

Tomorrow i'll help you...is the night of Nightmare Moon, isn't  ?

" yes and you will help me!!! "

Okay Pinkie,now leave me alone,okay?

" Yes, but clean your face,you have some blood on it...-"

Said Pinkie with an ironic tone,like she knew why Rainbow had that stain on her cheek.

Rainbow thought, returning to her room:

shit,she knows something?however, i have a colt to make suffer...

Arrived in her room, Rainbow said:

" with what i'm going to make you now, for  today you will accomplish your daily task of pleasing me ".

The mare took a ligther and passed much slowly onto the wounds she made on Broken's belly,cauterizing them showing a merciless, breakless laugh, despite the poor colt's tears.

"More!cry more for my pleasure!"

Said the crazy mare,before acknowledging that the musician passed out from two minutes already.

"Well,at least you suffered enough to make me happy!!" said with a mad smile.

Rainbow flew all over her her bedroom,laughing and feeling strong about what she had done that day.

before sleeping, however,showed a little mercy to his sleeping victim:She cleaned the blood that remained on his body,she set him free and she hugged him, caressing his cheeks with her hoofs.

She then kissed him on his belly,where she had engraved:

Property of Rainbow Dash

"I really had fun with you today, my darling..."whispered before falling asleep, hugged to him.