The War of Titan

by justinltyler

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Adventure, Alternate Universe
Length: 1868

A military brony is stuck in Equestria. He's turned into a pony and calls himself Comet Spark

A story about a human who is forced to live in a world of ponies and he turns into a pony himself and being a military brony as well.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-02 19:24:16 UTC

Chapter 1:Getting used to pony ways

I was finally getting used to being a pony.  And not being a gender as well.  I live in Ponyville in a cloud house i made myself.  I live right above Twilight Sparkle.  At first I visited daily to learn how to use magic better.  Me and her have become great friends.  I’ve been here a week and only Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash know me.

One day as I was in the library and I asked Twilight If there's any war/fighting spell books.  She answered and questioned "Yes, But why would you want to read them."  I answered "Because I just want to be prepared if anything came up."

Chapter 4:Down Goes The Barrier

We arrived at Canterlot within a few hours.  Moving though the city at a moderate speed killing any puppets that get in our way until we meet the entrance to the labyrinth.

Twilight knows this entire labyrinth by heart, how weird is that?  We get to our war room and Twilight explains how she knows how to do all this stuff.  We were all given orders. Twilight told me to go get my Humvee and drive to the barrier and wait for them.

I waited exactly 20 mins until they arrived.  I waited for the barrier to go down.  To my surprise it went down in 5 mins then i drove to the next entrance to the labyrinth.

Chapter 6:Recuiting Ponies

After Twilight reuniting with her family.  We talked about unimportant stuff.  "Tomorrow we have a meeting." Twilight said.  At 12:00 AM all of the important loyalists, the mane six, me, one unimportant loyalist and, Luna gathered in the war room.  First we did introductions.  Soon enough it was my turn I said "I'm Comet Spark I have more advanced technology than anypony in Equestria and a apparently I'm the most powerful unicorn in all of Equestria."

Noble asked "What kind of technology do you have that we don't."  I responded "Guns, Computers, and, a vehicle known as a Humvee."  Noble responded "Okay then?"  Twilight said that I was from a different world and her mother asked which world.  I said "Earth."  Then she stared at me in shock.  I couldn't take the look she gave me and I teleported next to Fluttershy.

When the meeting was over I teleported back onto the table.  Twilight asked Luna "How did I do?'  Luna responded "Nice."

(The next day) Sir Unimpressive was training Pinkie Pie and some of the other soldiers I was there because I wanted to see how good Unimpressive was at blade casting.  At the end of Pinkie Pie's and others training I asked Sir Unimpressive to a duel.  He said "Challenge Excepted."

The Duel:First Short scene

When everypony left the room Myself and Sir Unimpressive both went our into fighting positions.  Before we started fighting he asked my sword's name was. I answered I.M.D. (short for Invaders Must Die) Then he made the first move by striking fast but blocked every single attack he made. Then I attacked in which I won because i made him lose his hold on his weapon.

Chapter 10:My Name is Comet Spark

In a few moments after fleeing from the fight of Titan 's avatar and General Esteem I heard a cry of help from Twilight In my mind I saw Titan pinning her against the wall behind her.  My rage outburst my entire body had become pure light as I drowned in power a few seconds later I had turned into an alicorn.

  I teleported behind Titan and punched him across the face he looked stupefied then he teleported himself above canterlot castle.  I fought with his avatar for five minutes then cut off it's head.

Chapter 8:The General of Titan

As Esteem walked though the hallways of canterlot castle he heard a large shattering noise out side the castle.  He ran towards a window and just has enough time to see the first barrier go down.

Esteem had a special talk with Prince Imperian about he had to go into the battlefield.  But the almighty god refused to let him go.  Esteem knew why the son of titan was afraid that he may go down like Nihilus.  He told the Prince he was going into the battlefield whether Prince Imperian liked it or not.  Titan's avatar entered the room and overheard the conversation.  He let Esteem go fight for he knew it was the better choice.

As I entered the the battlefield I heard "The General is coming!!!" I immediately got I.M.D. out as a white unicorn who resemblances Rarity. What I immediately thought The General was Rarity's father.  As he attacked me though he was skillful I still managed to both dodge and block all of his attacks. I struck him once and cut a long gash across his face.

Esteem said "Thou has great skill I shall face you again my friend." and then proceeded to flee.  As I killed many unicorn puppets along the way to the second barrier.

Chapter 2:The Start of The War

When I woke up I heard explosions and sword fighting.  I looked out my window and saw a darkened Twilight and Princess Luna fighting her.  I got my Five Seven the only gun I brought with me to Equestria and immediately teleported to Twilight to see what the commotion was about.  But as soon as I was in her sights she shot war spells at me.  I teleported to my flying Humvee.

As I got in the vehicle I wondered where I should go. As I got engine started I remembered a beautiful pond south of Ponyville and that's where I decided to go.  A few hours later Princess Luna, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and, Fluttershy arrived.  They asked me who and why I was here I responded "I'm Comet Spark and I'm here because this was the safest place I could think of to go to." Luna said "Alright you can stay here then, but may ask you a few questions?" I answered "Yes." She asked me "If I have ever had a fight in my life?"  I responded "Yes, I have been in 2 wars though out my entire lifetime." Luna said "May I ask for help training the main six?" I replied "Of course."

"One more question though, which wars and how old are you?" I answered 35 years old and World War 3 and Afghanistan.  Luna paused, then said "Where are you from?  I answered "U.S.A, Earth." Luna then said "Were you a human when you first came to Equestria."  I answered "Yes Ma'm."

Chapter 3:The Defeat of Nihilus

As soon we arrived to Cloudsdale I parked my Flying Humvee on the nearest rooftop.  A few hours passed and Nihilus's Flying Castle arrived.  I was given a signal to go behind Nihilus's castle. I waited 20 or 30 mins.  Then the castle started to fly upwards.  I started to fly upwards to stay behind the castle.

After few mins or so I heard a message to attack Nihilus from Princess Luna I went to the highest balcony and saw fluttershy's corpse.  I got very mad knowing Nihilus had killed her and started to fire all of the machine guns I had on the Humvee at the doors.  A small amount of time later Nihilus with a shield, shot a very powerful war spell at me and I stopped firing and tried to dodge but she hit what she was aiming for.

Before I knew it I was falling to my death.  But I wasn't going to die so easily, I tapped into my repairing magic and fixed my Humvee within a second.  And went to fly up there when I saw Pinkie Pie falling.  As I catched her I went to fly up there again.

By the time I got there Rainbow Dash was back to being herself again.  I let Pinkie Pie get off into the castle and watched Nihilus being defeated and twilight turning back to normal.  I picked the mane six up but had no room for Luna so she had to fly down herself.  When we got to the ground I parked my Humvee next to Luna and got with the rest of the mane six.

Chapter 5:The Rebellion

I was wondering how to get my Humvee into the labyrinth.  Then I remembered a spell I learned from one of twilight's books.  The spell was a shrinking spell.   I casted the spell on me and the Humvee then drove in.

Unfortunately I got lost.  I waited 2 hours until I saw somepony. It was Luna.  I called from my microphone "Luna can you see me."  She said "No where are thou Comet."  I said "Look down."  She looked down and saw me then she said "What happened to you."  I said "I used a shrinking spell on the Humvee and myself."  Then she asked "Can I carry you with my levation."  I answered "Yes."  She carried me to the rebellion's war room and put me down on the table.  I saw an adult mare who resemblances Twilight.

Luna said her name was Starlight Sparkle.  Starlight attacked Luna which was at least for me was surprising.  Starlight said the reason why she attacked Luna.  She said this "Of course I attacked her she killed my daughter.  I was about to speak when Luna said "Don't speak a word."  So I didn't.

Applejack burst though the wall beside us. Luna said to them the words she had said to me.  Then 5 of the mane six, Luna and, me started to hear Twilight's voice soon the loyalists heard her as well.  She came though the door a sec later and herself and her parents stared at each other for a moment then ran torwards each other and gave each other hugs.  Then Luna said "I present to you Twilight Sparkle."

Chapter 9:Escaping the Labyrinth

As I entered the labyrinth I heard a explosion behind me the entrance had collapsed then I noticed something a crack in the ceiling.  Then my eyes widened as the tunnel began to collapse. I ran as fast as i could without magic.

I heard voices up ahead I called "THE TUNNEL IS COLLAPSING!!!"

Then after I knew it I was teleported and ran into the wall beside Twilight.  As I woke up everpony stared at me in shock I asked "Why are you guys looking at me like that?"  Then I see the crack in the I made and asked "Did I make that?"  They all nodded.  I told them the collapsing of the south tunnels and entrance.

Twilight was the first to speak she said "We need to devise a plan to get everypony out of the labyrinth."  She gave me orders to go see if the north tunnels and entrance was still there.  When I saw the northern tunnels were fine I was about to contact Twilight when suddenly General Esteem appeared in front of me I instantly had I.M.D. out to fight him.

I had two minds at the moment one focusing on the battle the other on talking to twilight.  This is what I had said to Twilight "You're going to have to evacuate faster because enemy forces have found out where we are hiding." Twilight responded "How do you know that they know we're in the labyrinth?" I answered "Because I'm fighting General Esteem right next to the north entrance."

I fought for about 24 Minutes before Titan's avatar showed up then I told twilight I can't keep up with both of them fighting me and told her I had to flee.