The super Adventures of my super selfinsert Alicorn OC ofc

by 9gagarmyguy

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Discord, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Romance, Original Character, Adventure
Length: 1048

This is my first story about a new Alicornpony who just came to ponyville and discovers his passion

This story is about a new Alicorn pony coming to ponyville and discovering his greatest passion. It is my first story and i got great impression from things like others and some stuff about love n drama and the most important thing: the passion of my new alicorn OC, i call him Redspike Alicornthunder. I planned this as a oneshot but if it gets as much likes as i hoped I may write more.

Published 2012-11-28 23:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-28 23:50:01 UTC

The Arrival of Redspike Alicornthunder

Redspike Aliconthunder departed from the train at 9 a.m, his favorite time of the day. Just as he thought it couldn't be any better, he ran of to see some of the super interesting Elementz of Harmony, he heard much about Twilight Sparkle and her friends.
So he decided to visit the Library first, even though he didn't knew the actual reason for his vacation in a small town like ponyville at all. Since he was the dear father of pincess Celestia herself, he didn't knew better than knowing the saviors of her daughters kingdom.
Just as he tried to pass the marketplace he saw the Boutique Rarity owned, back then, before Ponywar II, where half of the magical land of Equestria was destoryed. So Redspike Aliconlighting thought: "Why shouldn't I visit Rarity's first." He thought it, unlike all the other mentally ill ponies who keep talking to themselves out loud.
Just as he arrived at the Boutique and Rarity greeted him he went in and got some of these cookies from Rarity offered and thought nothing of it.

After a while Rarity asked: "Why is you arround here anyways, Alicorntempest, or may i call you Redspike?"
Reddott responded:" Oh dear, please call me Redstring, i beg to differ." He somehow registered that talking to Rare was pointless, just as she mentioned what a honor it was to have he here at all. Rarity said:" Ah reckon y'all better keep going, dear Redspike Alicornhurricane, since your folks may be concerned since that arrival of a Redspike is unusual." He decided that he could maybe befriend Rarity more than just a normal Ponyfolk pony-folkpony, but just as he asked if she wanted to spend some time at the castle of Canterlot, he stated that she was unsure of it and asked if anyone has actually really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like it.

He bid her farewell and moved on.

All of a sudden a Discord popped out and right before he could get on the floor, a sudden wave of dismissed Elementz of Harmony came to stand by Redspike Alicornthund3r, barlely noticing his Alicornesshigh. As they tried to banish discord back to wherever he came from. Just as Discord was about to be sealed right away again, he decided to overclock his magic to overclocked magic and was about to beat the Maine Six, RedAngle AlicornCloud moved between them and showed his Uber-overlord off, defeatening Discord in one fatal strike. Man, that would still hurt tomorrow, he thought.

After that uneventfull morning, he went the the nearest Starapplebucks, a new store that is completely new to buy a hot chocolate, since he wanted.

After he drank it, he saw a Babydragon moving towards the Marketplaced marketplace and Redbubble wasn't even certain where the Dragon headed, wether to the actual marketplace or more to the Boutique of that one Pony mentioned before.

He decided to sneak after him for the sake's sake. He packed up some of the meat and decided to hide in a nearby bush (a bush close to the Boutique, he could tell the dragon was ohw to there, he is a frickin alicorn) and listended closly as they spoke. After Spike (that's the name of the dragon) poured all containments of his heart over la fashionísta, he could smell something, unsure if it was the meat he bought earlier or the spaghetti the litle dragon was launching everywhere at the moment. Hower, this event being boring as a duck, he went on to Sugarcube corner.

Redspoke Alicoonhunter watched how the Cakes closed the door of their restaurant. He wasn't hungry and still had meat he bought earlier, so this didn't bother him that much.

He chilled with rainbowpony for some time, but that was uneventfull.

He always though that Fluttershy was really kawaii and qt, so he went there without any no obstacles. Just has he arrived he observed Flutershy sitted there, playing something while cracking open a bear. That day was a good day. He rested in the sunflower field to not be cracked up to. He really ought to know that it was Oktoberfest around this october, so he went back in town for a beer and a place to sleep over his steddaughters night.

Day 1 at the night:
He was woken up by a loud noise, coming from somewhere down his current residence, so Redspike Alicornelectricity went up, away from that screeching sound, coming from the basement. He didn't want to start again from scratch, so he went to get some kool-aid rest without it. After this suprising action, he went to bed.

Day 2:

As he rose up, he was as far as decided and went full of his confidence to run the leafes of three trees and went to a refill station to get going. After he was fully charged, he went down to a open playground, building a casle for some time. That really amused him, as much as pinecones would do to to do.

After that, he moved on to Sweet Apple Acres, since the farm was moved near the marketplace and the bouthique after that horrible earthquake that demanden all the good earth before he could even decide as to use french words.

Applebloom was the first honored pony that had the luck to meet him and instantly saw that his blank, was flank, at least Cheerlily said that sometimes, to her, he just appeared pretty naked.

Moving on, Redspike Alicornstorm would not give to bucks, he still hasn't got his Qtymark, why should he ahve it have though. His special talent was everything at all eversince.

Just as he met Twilight in her Housetreehouse he wanted to tell her that everythings seems to be weirdly written with a overwhleming bad grammer and tons of typos, but before she could even react, Redsquare noticed that he couldn't believe anything that was stated above, so he left Ponééville forever and ever, it doesn't really matter, at least he was on the internet.

Author's notes:
Thanks for reading, please subscrice and rate, like and subscribe if you want more of it. I still got some ideas. Till then, see you later innovator :)