A storm

by some random guy 1

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Romance, Tragedy, Slice of Life
Length: 474

Dash was doing her job moving clouds when she was hit in the back with lightning.

While Rainbow Dash was moving clouds she was hit by lightning. She suffered from a broken spine, Broken leg, and she was in a coma for 2 months. The doctors said if… She did make it out of the coma that there was almost no chance her back would recover.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-11 01:49:04 UTC

Will she make it

~~~~~That night... all of Rainbow Dash's friends slept in the hospital.~~~~~

     When Twilight awoke next to her friends pictures of Rainbow's limp body filled her head. She shuddered as she sat up yo see and Applejack sitting up and looking at her. She could tell they were equally devastated.

     "Hey... twi" Applejack said with a grim tone "how ya doin'?"

     "...Okay." She said weakly.

     A nurse pony approached them. "Is she okay?" said Twilight and Applejack simultaneously.

     The nurse frowned "She is in a coma... If... She does make it... She'll be lucky to fly again..."

     Twilight and Applejack grimaced. A Rainbow Dash that can't fly is a worst case scenario? Suddenly commotion came from Rainbows room. The nurse's face turned pale and she hurried into the other room.

     Twilight began to cry. She was comforted by a crying Applejack. But this also woke Pinkie Pie and Rarity. They both were frowning. Even Pinkie's attitude couldn't help this situation.

     Twilight and AJ sucked it up. "hey y'all" said AJ.

     They just sighed.

The storm

      Dash swooped to round up the storm clouds into a big storm. All the ponies were Advised to stay inside and possibly board up windows for this one. It was possibly the biggest one since the one 9 years back.

      She had almost finished getting all the clouds when she saw derpy wandering around splashing in the ever growing puddles. Dash had to fly under the clouds to get her inside and away from harm.

      The storm was now directly above the cyan pegasus. She realized this and flew as fast as she could away from it.

      But it was too late... she was hit square in the back with lightning. "AAAAAAEERRRGH!!!!" she screamed with agony as she fell on her heal and broke her leg. She then faceplanted in the mud and lay there, motionless.

      Rainbow was there for an hour and a half, Without anyone noticing. It's amazing she didn't drown, although her lungs had some water in them.

      When fluttershy came out to see if her frogs were alright after the storm, she saw a light blue figure in the distance.

      She walked closer to find out it was Rainbow Dash.

      "eeeeeeeeeeeeekkk" she said in the loudest screaming voice possible "someone help!" she said fairly loudly.

      Many other ponies came out to see what the commotion was about.

      "Who is that?" one said

      "Is she dead?" said another

      "we need to get her to a hospital! said a purple pony.

      Twilight levitated Dash onto her back and started trotting off to the hospital followed by fluttershy.

      When she arrived she yelled: "WE NEED IMMEDIATE ASSISTANCE!!! This made fluttershy squeak.

      A nurse pony came out, nodded, and took dash into an emergency room.