Creatures of Old Equestria (Draft)

by MrMusicalPony
When the Pony Empire takes over Kyris' homeland and eradicates his species, he sets out for safety

It has been two years since the Pony Empire has destroyed Kyris' homeland and species. Only a small amount of humans now live in the world. Kyris is among the last few, and when his plans to gather a following against the Pony Empire, he must search for a new way to bring peace and prosperity to his people.

Reason why this is called 'Draft' is because the first chapter isn't finished yet. I've hit a wall in terms of how to make it better, but I know it needs improvement. That's why I'm uploading it here. Maybe I can get some advice? It'd be greatly appreciated.

Watch as no one reads this because there's no MLP characters.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Sad
Tragedy
 

3963 words: Estimated 20 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1: Remembering 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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