Teh Life and Tims of Donut Steel

by TehDonutSterl

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Adventure
Length: 662

I cam up wit dis OC, and evry1 likd it, so I dcided to put his story her.

Tis is the advnture of Donut Steel, my super aweosme alicron OC dat I made and every one liked so I put it on fimfic becuase pepole likd it.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-01 07:04:50 UTC

Chatper 2: Eletic Boogalo

Ten won day, doonut steerl wuz wakin don teh road wen he saw a statchue, it was Discrod! Discord ten laffed at Doonut and sed. “I am free from teh statchue now and I am mad.” he was mad. “Y are you mad” asked Donut. Then Discordd madded at him and sed. “Im mad becuz you stole my won tru luv!!!11!1!!” “Hoo?” Aksed Doonut with with a question mark face.

“Nu! Not Hoo! Painkie Pai!” “Don’t u tak bout may wife like tat.” “I thot u wer marred to Twilite Skyarle.” “I am.” “Oh...” Discord than turns Donut into a Bagel... Iron... “Congrachulations Donut, you are teh new Bagel Iron!” “Nooooooooooooo!” Sed bagel, all sad-like.

Discrod disapperd and left Balge (Donut) alone... Then all of teh mane 6 and Luna/ Celestia showed up! “Look! Its Bagel Iron!” Tehey said before startint to ches him. Ranbow Dash tripped and fel and borke her wings and cryed cuz she thought tat shed never see doonut again now tat Bagel Iron was gthere (but he relly insnt u kno ;)

They chesed him thru teh Evererfee froest, wher he met teh maenticore. It grred and sniffed at Doonut, but it’s accute since of smell allooed it too know tat it was Donut and not Bagel, so it did not atack him. He b-frinded it and roed it through the Everfree forest 2 get alay from teh anry mob of his wives dat were chasin’ him. But, Twilit Spalke felt deep in her heart dat it mite not be Bagel, but her one ture love, Donut Steel!

Chapther 1: Enter Donut

`Donut Steel cumz (geddit cumz lolol ;P) frum da fucher wear he lifes on difrent planit wif his alacron harem in da futre.

Wen he wuz grownig up he feld in luv wit a unicron naemd Skylite ]Twarkal hoo wuz a unicron woh leikd boks n scralls but hiz evul twin brother sadoosed her and killed her and maed her dedz cuz he wuz jelus of Donut Steels harem this maed Donat Steel verry verry mad and verry sad :(

Donut Steel den challunged hiz bro naemd Bagel Iron 2 a lite saber dull up on top of mt. doom mowntan wich wuz a valcano that shot lava

“YOU DIE THIS DAY DONUT STEEL” sed Bagle Irun evil like at Donut Steel

“U KILLED SKYLITE MY ONE AND ONLY TRUE LOVE I CANT LOVE ANYPONY ELSE AND HAVE NOTHING SO U WILL FEEL MY PAIN!!!”

And den tehy faut.

“ITS OVER DONUT I HAVE THE HIGH GROUND”

“NO” showted Donut at Bagel. And den wif his rage and alicron powrs he shot a kamehameha that nocked Bagle into daw volcando

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”

“Sorry bro” sad Donut wif a smiley face “I like my Bagels toasted” and then Donut Steel put on sunglasses and showted YEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

all of Donuts Alicron frends saw how cool and powerful he wus so tey desided 2 make Donut empreror of plantet alicron

ten yeers later a portle opend b4 Donut this portal goed 2 Equestrea becuz he was destend 2 rule there as there alicron god however even wit his harem of alicron mares he was still sad but desteny alined to maek twilight Sparkle fall in luv wif him so he wuld be happy becuz he deservd 2 be for how he defeeted his bro on mt. Doom mowntown

Donut Steel is marryed 2 twilite and ate Spike cuz spike was his brother reborn and wus planning to kill Twilight just like he killed Skylite

Donut Steel can use all of teh elemints of harminy and can use there power wiht out using the elemints. He also marrys Twilits frends cuz they love him as well as marry Luna and Prinses Selestea

He had a dark past about loosing his love but is very nice in spit of that cuz he is teh new god of harminity and wants to proof hismelf to evry1.