Cranky Doodle Christmas Carol Chapter 1

by HenryTruong

Rating: everyone
Tags: Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Derpy Hooves, Pinkie Pie, Cranky Doodle Donkey, Crossover, Dark, Doctor Whooves, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1352

A short christmas fanfiction story

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Published 2012-12-01 21:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-01 21:50:01 UTC

Cranky Doodle Christmas Carol Chapter 1

Cranky Doodle Christmas Carol

A ‘My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic” Short

Note: Attention everyone I’m not great with my grammar, nor my spelling if anyone is interested in fixing up my work I would gladly appreciate it.

CHAPTER 1:
Cranky Doodle walked up to his accounting shop he was passing by all these ponies in pony vile. Whenever he passed by any pony they would look at him with fear in their eyes well you see Cranky wasn’t a pony he is a mule a very rich one indeed he hated Christmas with a passion because he never found out what was so great about Christmas. The reason why these ponies feared him was because this maul was very heartless he didn
Cranky Doodle finally made it to his accounting shop where he took out his key to unlocked the door opening to his accounting house. Cranky proceeded to enter the shop inside the shop there was Hooves his loyal worker that has served Cranky for quite some time. Cranky caught Hooves using a piece of coal for the fire “Hooves are you using another piece of coal for the fire? If so you know that will be coming out of your pay check” said the grouchy old mule.
Poor old Hooves he hasn’t noticed that his boss had returned, with shock on the poor pony face he dropped the coal from his mouth, “No… I mean yes Cranky I was just thinking of lighting up the fire place to keep warm sir, because it is quite cold in here” Hooves was looking toward his boss to help him take off his jacket which he placed onto the coat hanger next to the door.

“Thank you very much Hooves now there one thing I would be glad you did for me” the old mule coughed Cranky screamed “GET BACK TO WORK!” This frightened the mares which made Hooves jump onto his stool to continue his work. Cranky proceeded to his desk but soon was interrupted by a relative of his it was Pinkie Pie his niece.
Cranky looked at her with an unpleasant face then said with an unpleasant tone “good day niece what bring you here, to my humble shop?”
Pinkie was putting a riff onto the door hook” Well Merry Christmas Uncle Cranky sir, Gummy and I are inviting you to our Christmas party I would love for you to meet him, and Have Christmas Dinner with us”
Cranky stared at her with an angry face then said” Bah humbug who need Christmas it just about some fancy party with cake, cookies, and other delicious treats, Christmas isn’t the time for partying it was the season for working not that you’ll ever understand my dear niece”.

Pinkie look at him with a very shocked faced then repaid” My dear uncle Cranky Christmas is the time to be with friends, and family I know that Christmas hasn’t given me any pony coins within my life but god bless it I’m a happy little pony, and I would like to scream these words out loud MARRY CHRISTMAS EVERY PONY CELESTIA BLESS YOU!”

Hooves looked up at Pinkie and clapped his hooves together then said “Very good work Ms Pinkie Pie, well done encore” he soon heard his boss Cranky yelled at him and quickly stopped so he wouldn’t get into trouble.

Cranky then looked at his niece, he told his niece that she needed to leave right now, which Pinkie agreed because she didn’t want to upset her uncle, but before she left she said “uncle the invitation is open to you if you would love to join Gummy, and I for Christmas dinner you are very welcome to do so”

Cranky repaid with only one word humbug, the door ranged again, which made Cranky really mad because he thought his niece returned, but this time he saw three hard working filly coming into his shop, it was Sweetie Bell, Apple Bloom, and Scooitlo. “Good day sir we are here to ask for a request “said apple bloom. Sweetie Bell replied “yes we are here to collect money for the poor ponies, and fillies that are less wealthy, we only ask for a small portion of money pretty please”
Cranky looked at them with a shocked face as if this world was about to come to an end “well isn’t there any farms? Aren’t there anymore Celestia Prisons?” was what his replied.

The three little fillies looked up at the old Mule, they all said “yes there are but, I mean oh…” Cranky looked at them and waved his hand this message was for them to leave. “Alright well then it better if you three be best on your way” was his replied he pushed them out of the door.

Cranky waited for a few minutes just to see if anyone else was going to come and interrupt his day of work, since he didn’t have a feeling there would be anyone else coming he went back to doing his daily task which was counting money. Hours have passed by Cranky yelled out for his worker that was working in the room where he could already see him, Cranky cried out “Hooves get ready to go home also don’t forget to come to work early tomorrow”.

Hooves look at his boss with a sad face “but sir tomorrow is Christmas I was wondering maybe I could stay home with my family tomorrow?” said Hooves The grouchy old maul replied “alright Hooves I’ll give you half a day off tomorrow if you come early, and you’ll have your money reduced as well have yourself a great night Hooves.”

They both left the shop, and departed separate ways going home Cranky left to his house that was next to Twilight house, and Hooves went back home to his beloved family and wife Derpy Hooves.

Cranky started walking the path toward his house he has heard a lady calling out for him “Cranky!” The ghost moaned. This frightened him quite a bit, but he thought nothing of it until he got closer to his house, and heard it moan once more “ Cranky!” cried out the voice again. Cranky Doodle routed himself to see if anyone was behind him calling his name, after not seeing any pony or maul behind him he soon said to himself “bah humbug”. Cranky made it to his front porch of his mansion taking out his silver key to unlock his door so he may enter his warm home. But before he could put the key into the keyhole there was a woman head on his door to his surprise it was the woman he once loved. Cranky was curious about this so he gently poked her nose the ghostly apparition began to scream this frightened the old maul to unlocking his door, and entering his house fleeing into the house then followed with a slam to his front door which sounded like thunder after it has hit the floor.

“Was that Isabella my wife? I was pretty sure she has died 2 years ago” said Cranky with a frightened voice, he then opened the door again to see if the Ghostly Appreciation was on his door, but it disappeared he then shut his door then locked it so the snow wouldn’t get in. Cranky took his candle that was located on top of his desk that was already lighted by his worker Ms Ranger is his maid who served the old maul while he was away on work, also when he was at home but Ms Ranger didn’t live with him she lived elsewhere.

Cranky started walking up the stairs to his room but felt as if he was being followed from some pony or maul that wasn’t there, he began to walk up the stairs with a candle in his mouth the old Maul was very frightened then dashed into his room locking all of his locks on his door, then sat down on his chair with his instant tea.