Blaze Blue Fire mane

by HurricanePigeon

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 11857

Blaze Blue, an ex-thieve trying to change his life. He find's it alot harder then he imagined

Blaze Blue was once a part of an elite group of thieves but when he is asked to do the unthinkable, he quits and heads out to start a new life but can forget his past and can his past forget him

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-03 18:13:54 UTC

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

“Okay here is the plan and I’m not repeating it you got that” snapped a green unicorn with a dark green mane In a military tone.

“Yes mother” giggled a golden Pegasus with A pure White mane

“Very funny” snarled the green unicorn “AS I was saying, Thunderous and Tornadus will fly up and sneak in through the skylight. Once there they will open side where Blaze and Psy-psy will enter. Then me, smasher and the boss will enter the front to collect our earnings. You got that?” They all nodded.

“Let’s go” said confidently as the Pegasus twins fly to the roof.

“Carefully bro” whispered Thundurus.

“Don’t tell me what to do. I’m older then you” replied Tornadus.

 “By what, two minutes?” argued the youngest Pegasus.

“Anyway be quiet, this is a stealth robbery.” as they snuck in through the skylight closing it as gently as possible

“Okay, lets get the keys” they whispered.

Outside: “Remember blaze, low flame” whispered  gray unicorn with a coal black mane.

“Right” nodded blaze as his mane decreased in size.

Then door creek open. “Let’s go” blaze said as they snuck through the house.

“Whoa! this family must be loaded. A Crystal Neck-less and oh a safe! Smasher is gonna love this” Psy-psy whispered with glee as the colts continued scavenging around the house, when a young voice spoke out.

“Who- who are you and w-what are you doing in house” but before any pony could react she screamed.

 “MOM ,DAD HELP” psy-psy quickly silenced the young unicorn with his hoof but it was to late.

“Whats the matter darling” said the mother.

“Yes what the problem” the father asked as they rushed in to see his daughter.

The young unicorn pushed psy-psy away and sprinted to her parents.

“Oh no! not you lot-” but before the mother could finish her sentence blaze Yelled as mane grew back to it’s proper size.

“Boss we been compromised”

“Oh for goodness sake smasher open this door now” Snapped the boss.

“Yes sir” he said as he smashed the door right off it hinges, nearly taking out Thunderous.

“Watch it you big lug” Thunderous yelled angrily, Smasher only smiled and chuckled to himself.

Silence fell as both the unicorn family and the colts stared at each other when the young unicorn asked,

“Who are people mommy?”

“They are an elite group of thieves some say there best in all of Equestria” replied the mother.

“But your not getting away now” the farther yelled as he charged towards smasher who simply knock him away like it was nothing. A sinister laugh came form the boss

“I have three things to say one. Psy disable there magic”

“Yes sir” psy-psy replied as his disable the unicorn family’s horn’s

“Two, Commandos seal all the exits apart form the front door” Commandos nodded  as he barricaded all the Windows and doors.

“Three, blaze burn down this house” the boss said as he laughed.

“What you must be joking sir?” blaze asked in shock out of his bosses extreme actions.

“Blaze. Think of it this way all, seven of us rotten in prison or the three lose there life” the boss argued confidently The unicorn family was now huddled together, looking at blaze with tearful eyes waiting for his choice.

“I'm so sorry” blaze muttered as lunched  fire balls at the walls and floor

“Good now if you don’t mind, we will be leaving now” the boss laughed as he walked out of the burning building with rest off the colts

“You monster” screamed the mother holding her family tight as Commandos sealed the front door, trapping the family with in as the colts were walking away, head hung up high. In their good night finding, blaze stopped and looked at the building which by now is engulfed by flames. He gritted is teeth and turn around and ran toward the flaming building as parts of house collapsed around the family as they hugged tougher and prayed. When suddenly they heard a loud thud and again when the block-aid fell.

Blaze yelled. “Get out now” as he started to absorb the flames as the unicorns walked out. The building began to collapse as the family looked as blaze collapsed. The young unicorn in shock asked “Whats wrong mister?”

Blaze replied in pain “A fire-mane is only able to absorb so much before it the power is too much to handle. Stand back” blaze continued. Then when the family was a safe distance blaze releast the excess power skyward which woke the whole town up. As blaze stared to leave, the mother asked “Where are you going?”

Blaze replied, “I’m turning my self in” and walked away in to the night

End of chapter

Chapter 4

Chapter 4

Location Outside canterlot

day of trial left 365

time 12:34

“Hmm... where is the nearest city?” blaze pondered to himself. “There Fillydelphia but that's a good 4 day walk and with winter approaching I might not have the supplies to survive. Well I will just have to get a job” Blaze rolled up the map and left on his journey. As he was walking along, blaze couldn't help but notice a small crowed around a makeshift stage.

“Come one come all to the greatest show in all the land as I, the Great And Powerful Trixie, has magic strong enough to vanquish an Ursa major!” the boastful unicorn spoke. The crowd was shocked until an earth pony spoke out, “Yeah right and I’m a super pony”

The crowed laughed then Trixie replied in over confident tone “You doubt me? Well then any-pony that wants to try to beat me, just stand on this stage”

Blaze look over a thought to himself “Well this might be fun. If this unicorn did really defeat an Ursa Major, then I have to see”

Many ponies tried but no-pony could beat Trixie’s magic.

“Just as I thought, none of you could beat me” she laughed. She spotted Blaze at the corner of her eye.

“You there, do you think you beat me?” she asked blaze.

“Well?” blaze replied, “Well if you asking for it” he said as he stepped on stage.

“Can your magic do this” blaze asked as he made an tornado of fire around him. Trixie looked stunned as the crowed was puzzled. Do they cheer for the fire mane or fear him.

As blaze walked away he said “I was hoping for more of a challenge but I guess your just a wannabe”

Trixie tired to argue but she just packed up her stage and left.

Hours past and blaze was getting hungry. That stunt he did used more energy than he thought and as darkness fell blaze noticed a large group of storm clouds were heading his way.

“Great if it rains it will take even more time to get to fillydelphia and I don't have time to waste”

As he walked on he noticed a cabin.

“I hope that they let me stay there until the rains stops”

As walked up to the house it started to rain heavily.

“Well I'm stuck hear then“

As blaze knocked on the door, he look around. He had never been in this part before. The door then opened.

“Can I help you?” asked the owner of the cabin.

Blaze turned and said “Yeah, I was wounder-” as he noticed who owned the cabin.

“Its you!” they both said both in a shocked manner.

“What are you doing here? Come to gloat some more” Trixie snapped.

“Well no I was hoping I could stay here until the rain stops?” blaze replied.

“Why should I do that? Your clearly more powerful then me” she ranted.

“Well you see water if deadly to me. If my mane and tail get extinguished, I die. So please, just until the rain stop” Blaze explained.

“Fine” Trixie groaned. “You can stay.”

Blaze smiled as he walked in to Trixie’s house. There were many photos and news paper articles scattered around the house with all one thing in common: They were all about her.

Blaze though to himself “Wow, ego much”

As he turned to Trixie, she look away in disgust

“Thanks by the way for letting me in” Blaze softly said.

“Well don’t get comfortable the rain will stop soon” Trixie snapped.

“Hay I was trying to be nice. Maybe if you stop thinking about yourself and respect others, you might have friends” Blaze yelled insultingly, being over whelmed by guilt as the blue unicorn burst into tears.

“Well you don’t know what it’s like being over shadow by your older brother. Even when I got my cutie mark my parents payed more attention to him” she sobbed.

“I... I'm sorry, I didn't know” Blaze tired to explain but then rain stopped.

“Good the rain stopped now you can get out and never come back” she screamed as she forced blaze out and slammed door on him. As blaze walk away he said

“Way to go, first day in and you all ready made some one hate you. Great start”

End of chapter

Chapter 5

Chapter 5

Location Fillydelphia

day of trial left 357

time 07:46

 So this is fillydelphia. It took longer to get than thought but now that I’m here, time to get a job” Blaze spoke to himself. Blaze spent hours looking for any job but most owners forced him out or panicked on sight, until:

 “I know this place. This has a huge list of undiscovered crimes. Maybe I could use that to my advantage” thought Blaze as he smirked. As he entered the restaurant everypony stopped and looked at blaze as walk to the counter.

“I'm looking for the manager” Blaze asked. The colt at the counter was busy telling the chiefs what had been ordered.

“You’re talking to him” he grunted.

“Good, I was wondering if you had any job vacancy's?” blaze asked. The manager turned around slowly

“Well lets see what you got-” as he saw blaze he began to laugh. “This must be a joke blaze blue the infamous fire mane asking for a job” he continued to laugh.

Blaze replied “what’s so funny. I'm a bit low on cash and besides, you don't want the world to find out about your dirty secret do we?” the manager started to sweat. Blaze smirked as he repeated “Do we?”

The manager groaned “Fine, I need a new delivery boy. It pays ten bits per a successful delivery, 8am to 9 pm and you start today. Sound fine Blaze?”

“Yes, that will do nicely” Blaze said in a confident tone as the manager gave blaze his uniform and blaze happily started his sift.

At the end Blaze hung up his uniform and left.

“One hundred and twenty bits in one day. I guess he paid me more to keep my mouth shut. Well it’s getting late. I better find some shelter for the night” Blaze thought proudly. As he was walking past some back alleys he heard a couple of voices

“So have you got our money?” one asked. He sounded male.

“I told you, I don’t owe you anything!” this one was female

“You owe the don a lot of money and he said if you don’t pay today, we get to do whatever we what to you” said a different voice.

“Back off you scum! Um h-h-help” screamed the female.

Blaze looked around the corner and saw two earth ponies: One with a bald head and one with an over the top amount of tattoos and a unicorn with purple shades on. The bald one slapped the unicorn, then took off her shades and smashed them

“Shut it! You have one last chance pay up or else” he said, glaring at the unicorn.

“Or else what” Blaze replied, walking down the ally. They look at Blaze.

“Who do you think you are?” one asked. Blaze stared and didn't say a word.

The tattooed one spoke in surprise, “Wait, your Blaze Blue. One of the Catastrophic colts!”

Blaze replied confidently, “So you have heard of me and now your going to leave her alone or I will have to beat you within an inch of your life”

The bald stallion replied “Wow, do you really think you can beat us? I bet you all bark”

The tattooed one interrupted him and whispered to the other.

“Wait, don’t forget Commandos is a part of the colts”

“So?” the other replied out lowed

The tattoo one continued, “So Commandos is a master at military style hoof to hoof fighting and maybe he taught Blaze a few killing moves”

The bald one completely disregarded everything and said “Meh, lets just beat up this weakling and then have some fun with little Vinyl here”

As they both charged Blaze’s mane began surrounding himself and then the fire formed the image of dragon. The thugs stopped as the fire dragon approached them.

“OK! We are sorry. We’ll leave her alone” they said, running away as the fire dragon turned back in to Blaze’s mane. He turned to the unicorn and asked

“Are you ok?”

The unicorn giggled and said “Man thanks for the help. By the way, the names Vinyl Scratch or DJ-P0N-3”

Blaze smiled but then asked “Why were the con-artists after you?”

Vinyl quickly replied “Well you see, a couple of weeks ago some drunk idiot broke my turntable and I didn't have the money to get a new...”

Blaze interrupted “...so you asked the don for a loan to get a new one but every time you went to pay he increased the amount until you refused to pay. Am I right?”

Vinyl nodded “Yep”

Blaze grinned as he said “Well they won’t be bothering you again”

Blaze began to walk away

“Wait, where you going?” Vinyl asked.

Blaze replied “Some where with some shelter”

“Why” asked Vinyl in confusion.

Blaze turned and began to explain his story.

“Well you saved me so you can stay with me for a while and I wont take no for an answer” Vinyl said as she grabbed Blaze’s hoof and lead him to her place.

End of Chapter

Chapter 6

Chapter 6

Location fillydelphia

Days left of trial 266

time 15:30

Journal Entry One

 “Its been three month since I came to fillydelphia and met Vinyl and I have had many adventures. I made enough money to move on but that’s not to say I wont miss Vinyl. I'm sure that we’ll meet again and we will most probably go to a club or something. It seemed like every other night she was out and of course she insisted I tagged along. Every time I did I either got thrown out because of my past, watching Vinyl mix it up or spending time back stage after the ten minutes of searches or until Vinyl told them to stop with the pointlessness of it. You can guess my presents caused a lot of trouble and almost lost Vinyl her job but luckily she didn't and after a few weeks they started to accept me as a good guy and not a thieve. But of course it was a small amount of trust, you know to have a conversation with out security breathing down my neck all the time and they even allowed me to join in a couple of card games but I'm never ever playing poker again. I lost way to much on that stupid game, in fact I lost one firth of my total to it and I bet you were laughing at all my mistakes weren't you Celestia.  And as the second month ended the group of DJ’s and other clubbers began to be my friend and some even offered me a round but I don’t drink alcohol because, well put it this way, the last time I got drunk I apparently set the place on fire six times. I don’t even know that was possible but I did it some how and even when I stayed in for a quiet evening and got some sleep, it didn’t last long because most nights Vinyl was loud. I mean loud. I just figured that she forgot she had a room mate with a job that requires an early rise but luckily my boss couldn’t do much to me because I had his company’s secret. Now that I have left I don’t mind telling you Celestia, as you said this neck-less allowed you to see my every action, so well that man is the leader of those con-artists that we saw back when I met Vinyl. Well that’s my good deed done. I told you I wouldn’t let you down. Well its time to go to Manehattan which according to Vinyl is a month walk but I think she is over estimating. Well its time to go.”

Blaze blue

End of Chapter

Chapter 7

Chapter 7

Location Manehattan

days of trial left 242

time 19:43

Looking over at the large city, Blaze thought to himself “There it is: The largest city in all of Equestria and as Vinyl said, it took about a month but it was worth it because of the countryside and I met with Trixie again. She wasn’t too happy at first but after I said that I was sorry for what I said she began to lighten up. She was still stuck up but at least I made her happy”

Blaze began to walk into the city.

“Winter has definitely arrived. The nights are longer and there seems to be more rain then ever” Blaze spoke to himself as he continued looking into his bag.

“Hmm... I don't seem to have that much money so I guess I'm roughing it tonight” he said as he searched the best he could. All he could find was a side ally with little cover but he sat down and tried to get some sleep. He smirked as laid his head down “Goodnight Celestia”

Later it started raining heavily.

“Great its raining this is all your fault” some pony moaned.

“Hay, she started calling me slow. Hmm I'm the fastest stallion in equestria!” the other replied. “Well Soarin, if you just shut you mouth he wouldn't be soaked” the other replied in a tired tone. Soarin was about to speak when the other stopped him.

“Who's that?” asked the Pegasus looking at Blaze.

“What are you going on about now spitfire?” soarin replied.

“Him” spitfire ask pointing at blaze. “Wait I recognise him” she paused to think. “Yeah, that's Blaze Blue. I recognise him form the wanted poster”

Spitfire and Soarin walked up to Blaze who was fast asleep. As they got closer he began to wake up.

“Who are you and *yawn* what do you what?” asked Blaze who was half asleep. Blaze stood up “Well?” he re-asked and then spitfire punched Blaze. Before he could ask why she punch him again, “What are you doing spitfire?!?” Soarin asked in shock. He had never seen her so angry

“I'll make you pay for my father you filly rat!” Spitfire said enraged.

Blaze got up and in an aggressive tone, “look i'm sorry-” before he could finish Spitfire screamed “You lier” before she punched him once again. Then she picked him up and forced him into the rain and slammed him into the wall. Blaze screamed in pain as his mane began to shrink.

“You broke my father’s spine and thanks to you he can’t fly. Do you know what it’s like for a Pegasus that can't fly?!?”

Blaze was still screaming.

“No you don’t do you!” screamed spitfire as she threw him back into the shelter. Blaze’s mane was very low. Blaze tried to stand but he couldn't. His breathing was weak

“Time to pay fire mane!” spitfire said as she raised her hoof preparing to strike

 “Stop it spitfire! He’s had enough!” yelled soarin as he stood in the way “Look at him! He can’t even stand” soarin continued.

“Get out of my way soarin!” Spitfire yelled. Soarin shook his head “Look, I'm taking Blaze back to my room in the hotel. He needs help and if you’re not going to help then go!”

Spitfire groaned and began to walk away.

“Ok Blaze, the hotel isn't too far away and its pretty sheltered. It just there. Crossing is worst part, do you think you cam make it?”

Blaze nodded as Soarin picked him up.

“Ok lets go” Soarin grunted as they began to walk though the rain. Blaze screamed as his mane got even smaller.

“Hold on. Just a couple more steeps” Soarin said as he continued but as they made out the rain Blaze collapsed.

“Blaze? BLAZE!” yelled Soarin “Come on! Don't do this. Come on!”

Blaze’s heart had stopped due to the pain.

Soarin screamed out, “SOME PONY! ANY PONY HELP!”

“Hold on” yelled a voice. It was Spitfire. She pounded on Blaze’s chest

“Come on! Don't die now”

After several rounds, Blaze began to breath and he opened his eyes. He was very weak though.

“Phew” said both of them as they picked up Blaze

“Thanks” Blaze said a he slipped back into unconsciousness

“Quickly Soarin, he needs rest” Spitfire commanded.

 “Yeah, lets go” agreed Soarin as the two Pegasi carried Blaze back to their hotel.

End of Chapter

Chapter 8

Chapter 8

Location Manehatten

Days of trail left 240

Time 18:53

“Man, he’s still out cold” sighed Soarin.

“Yeah. Well is mane was almost out and now look at it, its almost back to normal” replied Spitfire.

About an half an hour past, “Ugh my head” groaned Blaze as he slowly woke up.

Blaze looked around “Where am I?”

He rubbed his eyes and tried to stand but he quickly stumbled. Then Soarin rushed in to the room.

“Whoa! Easy there” he said as he helped Blaze up. “How you felling Blaze?” asked Soarin.

“I'm fine but how long have I been out for?” Blaze responded.

“Umm about two days” Soarin answered. Soarin continued, “Hay, could I ask a few questions?”

Blaze look at him and sighed “Let me guess, you want to know why I was there and why none of the other colts came to help”

Soarin look surprised he scratched his head and nodded.

“Well to put it, bluntly I left on my own accord and I don't plan on returning any time soon” Blaze replied.

Quickly Soarin asked “Why?” but then there was a knock at the door.

“Its open” Soarin yelled.

The door open “Hay Soarin. Oh hi Blaze. I see you woke up” Spitfire said with a hint of guilt in her voice. “Umm sorry about the whole attacking you thing. I kinda lost it”

Blaze look at her and replied “Don't be. You had your reasons and I'm sorry to hear about your father”

Soarin interrupted “I have one more question: Where did you get that neck-less and how do you take it off? Me and spitfire tried everything”

Blaze look at the princess neck-less “Oh this thing? The princess gave it to me. Apparently she can see everything I do and its enchanted to never come off unless the princess uses some spell or something”

Spitfire and Soarin were in shock as the clock chimed.

“Oh man, if we don't hurry we’re gonna miss our reservations” Soarin panicked.

Spitfire face-hoofed

“Soarin I think we have more important things to worry about then food” she groaned.

Her stomach then growled and she giggled, “Umm sorry”

“I know, why don't you tag along Blaze. We could, you know, get better acquainted” Soarin said as he jumped about.

Blaze thought to himself then said “Might as well”

“Then it’s settled” Soarin said as he rushed out the room with Blaze and spitfire walking behind.

As they got to restaurant Blaze looked and said “Whoa, fancy”

Spitfire got everything sorted while Blaze and Soarin sat down.

Blaze looked around and said “Great, everypony is looking right at me”

Spitfire joined them “Wow, I knew we get a few strange look but the whole restaurant? Staring right at you?”

Blaze sighed.

“Umm could I- I- t- take y- y- your o- o- order” nervously asked the Waiter.

 “I'll just take a salad” Blaze replied. Blaze continued “You two?”

Soarin and Spitfire gave their orders and the three began to chat, mainly about Blaze’s past but there was some other things like life as a wounder-bolt.

“Here is your order” said the waiter then, on purpose, tripped and spilled all there food on Blaze. The restaurant laughed at blaze who just sat there and said nothing.

“Hay you did that on purpose!” yelled Spitfire.

“I did not” giggled the waiter as he walked away.

“Leave it Spitfire, I'm use to it” Blaze moaned

“Are you sure? Its not fair for them to bully you like that” Soarin replied, cornered for his friend. Then from across the room a tomato flew and smacked Blaze right in the back of the head and a little bit of steam came of Blaze’s mane. Blaze gritted his teeth as the other diners laughed again.

“You alright Blaze?” whispered Spitfire. Blaze nodded then another tomato flew across the room and hit blaze again. Blaze’s flame began to increase.

“Come on lets go” Soarin suggested.

“Yeah, its obvious that they don't want us here” agreed Spitfire. Blaze nodded. As the three left a third tomato came and hit Spitfire right in the eye Spitfire screamed in pain. Blaze looked around and saw two colts laughing in the corner. Blaze growled as he said “That’s it!” as he stormed towards the two colts. Their smiles shrunk.

“Ok you little punks, I don't care if you throw food at me, insult me or whatever but you do not hurt the people that saved my life! You got that?!?”

Then one of the two said “...or what?”

Blaze pinned them by their throats and a threatened them.

“I will burn your eyes out of your head. Do you what that?”

They started to cry as Blaze let them go. They ran out.

Blaze followed.

“Lets go” said Blaze as the three started to walk away.

Soarin asked “Won’t princess Celestia come and arrest you now?”

Blaze replied “I don't care. Nopony should get hurt because of me”

“Thanks blaze” smiled Spitfire

When they got back to the hotel, Blaze began to pack his things and said “Well I should get going now”

“Wait, you can't be serious. Its winter! It rains practically every day. You will never survive”  Spitfire argued.

“Yeah and besides, would you rather be out in the cold every night or be on a nice comfy bed?” Soarin asked.

Blaze smiled “I guess I could stay but just till the end of winter, then I must get going”

“Its getting late” yawned Spitfire

“Yeah, I'm gonna hit the hay” agreed Soarin.

“Me two” Blaze said in a tired tone.

The three got ready and went to bed.

End of Chapter

Chapter 9

Chapter 9

Location Trottingham

days of trail 0

time 08:30

“So I finally did it thanks to the help of my friend that met from my travels I have done a year without committing a single crime” Blaze thought to himself as he saw the royal carriage approach him. The princess landed and everyone bowed.

She approach Blaze and spoke “It is as we agreed but before I give you your freedom, you must come back to the castle”

Blaze looked at the princess puzzled but he nodded and stepped onto the royal carriage.

As they approached the castle Blaze noticed a large group of ponies of all species. Blaze look at the princess even more puzzled but he didn't speak a word. As they entered the throne room the princess looked at Blaze and told him ”Wait here, I need to get something related to the manner”

Blaze nodded “Yes princess”

Blaze sat down and waited the a few minuets. Later the princess returned but she was not alone

“I'm sorry to keep you waiting Blaze. We may continue now” said princess Celestia. “Oh how rude of me; This is princess Luna” she said pointing to her sister.

Blaze looked over and thought “Wow she’s beautiful. I heard of her return but I never imagined some one that amazing”

But what he spoke was “Its a pleasure to meet you princess Luna”

She said nothing, just smiled.

“As we discussed Blaze, as you have made it one year without committing any crimes and I'm willing to forgive you on your outbursts on the fact you were defending others and I shall remove my viewing neckless” Celestia spoke as her horn glowed.

The neckless detached form Blaze as he spoke in a joyful tone, “Thank you princess”

The princess continued “I have to leave now. I have some gala preparations to do”

Blaze smiled “I understand”

Blaze left but before he could leave the front gate a voice spoke out “Wait Blaze Blue”

It was Luna.

“What is it your Majesty” Blaze replied trying to not gaze at her

“I have a gift for you as well as your freedom. I would like you to have this”

Blaze was shocked. “A ticket to the grand galloping gala for me? Thank you”

Luna smiled “I’m glad you like it but I must be off”

Blaze nodded and they went their separate ways. Blaze smiled as he though to himself

“Me going to the gala? Wow and now that I'm not a criminal, I wont get thrown out for disturbing the peace. Wait what am I going to wear? I need something Fancy”

Blaze looked around many many shops until he noticed a magazine which on the cover had the headline “Hoity Toity discovered maybe the best fashion designers of the century! Read more... see page 7”

Blaze turned to the page and began to read:

“A miss Rarity from Pony-ville” Blaze pondered to himself. “Pony-ville eh? There’s a train that goes right there and its not too expensive either. Well I’ll give it a shot”

Blaze went to the train station got his ticket and sat down and waited. As he look around he noticed some royal guards were taking down Blaze’s wanted poster. As the train arrived Blaze boarded and headed out to Pony-ville

End of Chapter

Chapter 10

Chapter 10

Location Pony-Ville train station

Time 13:30

“Well for my first train ride as a free colt, I was expecting a little more glaring but why am I complaining? Anyway what was that shop called again” Blaze thought as he got the magazine and stared, flicking though the pages.

“There it is, Carousal Boutique. Well I better get moving then” Blaze said before putting the magazine back into his bag and headed towards the center of town.

After about twenty minutes of searching, he finally found the Carousal Boutique.

“There it is and luckily it looks open still”

Blaze entered the shop. As the bell rang a voice spoke out from up stairs.

“Please feel free to look around. I'll be with you in a moment”

Blaze started to look around the store and it large collection of very well made outfits.

The voice spoke again, “Sorry to keep you waiting, I was in the zone”

She stopped and stared at Blaze who was about to speak but then the white unicorn screamed loudly. “Thieve! You’ve come to take my gems haven't you?!?”

Blaze tried to explain but the unicorn continued her rant.

Outside the store, “Hay, that's Rarity I wonder what has got her mane in a twist” said a young mare. “I better check it out then” she said as she entered.

As the bell rang again the white unicorn screamed “More of you ruffians?”

Blaze turned around to see who it was. He was in shock at who he saw. As the mare realised who Blaze, she gasped.

They both spoke out “Its you!”

The white unicorn was puzzled.

“Twilight you know him?”

Twilight replied, “Of course rarity, I know him. He saved me and my family's lives”

Rarity was confused, “Him? but he... just... I... Can somepony explain this to me”

After one long explanation Rarity reviewed:

“So let me get this straight: He set fire to your house before you moved here but then he protected you from the flames and let you free. Then when he was going to be punished you, Twilight, asked the princess to give him a second chance which Blaze would get if he went a year with out committing a crime, which you did today so now you are no longer a thieve but just a normal pony looking for a place were you fit in?”

Blaze and Twilight nodded, “That’s about it”

Rarity continued “but why are you here blaze?”

Blaze smiled “Oh I was looking for something smart. You see, princess Luna has invited me to the gala to say well done on completing my trial”

Rarity giggled, “Well if that's the case then lets get started” as she grabbed Blaze by the hoof. Suits flew left, right and centre as Blaze was forced to try practically every single one

“There, you look marvelous”

Blaze study the suit. It was plane black suit with fire ruby encrusted in to the collar which sparkled by Blaze’s flame.

“You know, its perfect! I'll take it”

Blaze payed for it and met Twilight whom was looking at a picture.

“Twilight you know you shouldn't look at other pony's stuff with out permission”

She put the picture back into Blaze’s bag and blushed.

“I'm sorry, I was wondering why you still had a picture of the colts...”

Blaze frowned, “Its because they are my family. I never knew my parents”

Twilight said with guilty tone, “Oh... I didn't mean to upset you...” she continued “I know, I’ll walk you back to where ever you re staying in Pony-ville”

Blaze looked at her “I haven't got any where to stay yet...”

Twilight thought then said “You can stay at mine. I got a spare bed”

Blaze smiled, “Thanks. I guess I could stay until after the gala, if that’s not a problem?”

Twilight stood up and open the door, “Not at all”

Blaze followed Twilight back to her house. As they entered, Blaze was in awe

“Wow, I’ve never seen so many books”

Twilight giggled, “I like to study. Oh and your room upstairs and on the left”

Blaze walked up and got settled when there was a knock at the door.

“Hmm... I’m not expecting anyone today”

She opened the door.

“Oh hay Applejack and Applebloom” Twilight said, excited to see her Friends.

“Sorry Twi but Applebloom here has a big essay to do but I’ve got nothing on the subject” Applejack explained

“Well I’m always happy to help. What’s the subject then” Twilight asked.

Applebloom told her about the topic.

“Its on the great war between the Fire Mane’s of the west lands and the ponies of equestria” Twilight looked around but then a voice said “Its right here Twilight”

Twilight took the book with her magic said “Thanks spike”

“Well its my job” replied Spike.

Applejack looked at her friend and asked “Umm Twilight, have you got anything else on the Fire Manes?”

As spike heard that he thought and then stated, “Its in the spare room, second shelf”

Twilight smiled, “Perfect, Blaze can get it”

She yelled up the stairs, “Blaze could you get me a book about the Fire Manes! Its on the second shelf!”

“Sure thing Twilight!” he replied.

Applejack asked “Who’s Blaze?”

Blaze then open the door and started walking down the stairs. As Applebloom saw Blaze she hid behind Applejack and whispered.

“Please don’t kill me. Please don’t kill me...”

Applejack, cornered, asked “Hay Applebloom, what’s the matter?” she looked at blaze whom just gave twilight the book.

“Wait, I know you. You’re that no good thieve Blaze blue”

Twilight interrupted, “Wait Applejack let me explain”

After twilight explain, Applejack apologised to Blaze.

Applebloom asked “So you’re not going to kill me?”

Blazę was shocked “Kill you? Why would I do that?”

Applebloom replied “Well you see Miss Cheerilee said that you were dark and twisted and that you wouldn’t think twice about killing anypony”

Blaze replied “Well Applebloom, you tell your teacher that statement is false”

Applejack looked at the clock, “Golly look at the time, we better get going. Its getting late and if we don’t get this home now, we won’t have much time to do it because we have a lot of apples to buck in a small amount of time”

Blaze looked at Applejack and asked “Could I help you? I need a job and you sound like you need help”

Applejack pounded then replied “Are you sure? It a lot of work for little pay”

Blaze nodded, “I'll help you as much as possible”

Applejack smiled “All rightly then. If you’re sure then I will see you on the farm, five am sharp”

As they left Blaze turned to Twilight and sighed, “I better get some rest. I’ll need it”

End of Chapter

Chapter 11

Chapter 11

Location Pony-Ville twilight’s house

time 04:30

“Wake up blaze you got a busy day and if your not prepared you won't be at one hundred percent” Twilight ordered.

Blaze opened his eyes and yawned

“I've got spike to prepare you a nutritious breakfast and I have packed your bag with everything you need”

Blaze, still half asleep, said “Thanks Twilight but I'm only apple bucking. The only things I need are my two hind legs”

Twilight used her magic to bring over a clipboard “Um... let’s see... Woke Blaze? Check. What next? Ah, wave good bye as Blaze leaves for work...”

She looked up and saw Blaze had left.

“Um... Spike, where did Blaze go?”

Spike replied tiredly, “He took his breakfast and left while you were checking your clipboard and now if you don't mind, I'm going back to bed”

As the baby dragon went up stairs, Twilight sighed and moaned to herself.

Blaze yawned, “So this is Sweet Apple Acres. Its a lot bigger than I imagined. I hope I can manage”

As Blaze walked up to farm he noticed applejack bucking away.

“There you are Blaze I'm glad to see you didn't chicken out”

Blaze smiled “Me? Chicken out? No way!”

Applejack continued “Good. Big Macintosh will show you to your row for the day”

Blaze nodded and began to follow Big Mac

“You start here and you finish five rows down”

Big Mac walked off before Blaze could even comprehend the amount of trees he would have to buck.

Hours past and at last Blaze was almost done.

“Good going Blaze! I didn't believe that you could do it by yourself but you did and in pretty good time too” Applejack said as she checked on Blaze’s progress. It was about half nine now and Blaze look at the sky and saw a Pegasus flying about doing loops and spins and everything.

Blaze asked “Hay Applejack, who’s the show off?” as he pointed to the Pegasus.

“Oh that’s rainbow Dash. She’s supposed to be clearing the clouds but she mainly flies about doing tricks”

Blaze looked at the sky again, “Wait she seems to be coming in pretty fast. I hope she know what she’s doing”

*Thud*

“I've got you now” said Rainbow as she pined Blaze to the ground.

“Rainbow get of him” Applejack said as she forced the Pegasus off and then help him up. Rainbow was shocked

“Applejack?!? Your helping this blood thirsty murderer?!?”

Blaze interrupted, “Wait a sec! I WAS a thieve but NOT a murderer! If you’re going to insult me then you better at least get your facts right!”

Rainbow got right in to Blaze’s face

“What do you mean you WAS a thieve?”

Applejack split the two hot heads apart

“I'll explain Blaze as you finish your work okay?”

Blaze walked away as Applejack dragged the cyan Pegasus

“Look Rainbow Dash, I don't trust him at all but Twilight says he’s changed so can you at least pretend to be nice to him?”

“Fine” sighed rainbow dash.

After blaze finished he was asked to bring some apples to Fluttershy’s cottage and to sugar cube corner.

“Ok that’s Fluttershy cottage”

Blaze knocked on the door and it slowly opened. A face appeared  then quickly slammed the door.

“WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU WHAT?” screamed a voice.

Blaze replied, “Umm I just came to deliver some apples and then I will be gone, ok?”

The door open and Fluttershy saw the cart of Apples “Oh ok, just leave them there and go!” she shouted.

Blaze left the cart and and took the amount for sugar cube corner and left.

“Ok, according to this map this is sugar cube corner”

Blaze knocked on the door and was greeted by a pink pony who gasped as she ran in to the back of the shop. She came back holding a bucket of water.

Blaze panicked, “Wait wait! Do not throw that yet!”

The pink pony stopped, “but your manes and tail is on fire!”

Blaze still panicking, “they’re supposed to be! I'm a fire mane! It’s natural”

The pink pony giggled, “ooooooooooooooooh! In that case, I'm Pinkie Pie. Its nice to meet you. Are you new in town? If so, you must not have friend... I know!!” she dashed off leaving Blaze.

“Um... I'll just leave the apples here then?”

Blaze walked away to go tell Applejack that he was done

After few more tasks Blaze began to walk home. As open Twilight door it was pitch black.

“Hmm...” Blaze shrugged as he shot a fire ball up. The fire ball’s glow illumined the room.

“SURPRISE” Pinkie Pie screamed but only her...

“Hay! Why is nopony else cheering?” she continued.

Twilight spoke out, “Blaze did you just try to burn down my house again? I thought you changed!”

Blaze spoke out, “Wait Twilight, I wasn’t trying to burn down your house. It’s a special talent, its just a harmless flare. You can even grab a hold of it. It wont burn you”

Pinkie Pie but-in “You see! I told you he was nice!” as she gave Blaze a hug.

“Pinkie wait!” everyone screamed.

“Why? Its just a hug...” she said as her hoof went right thought Blaze’s mane.

Everyone gasped.

Rarity asked Pinkie “Darling, doesn't that hurt?”

Blaze interrupted, “Let me explain, you see as a Fire Mane I can control the temperature of fire as well so I can make my mane and tail as hot as I want or cold enough so you can touch it”

Twilight was in shock “I knew Fire Manes had power over fire but not that much and I read five books on Fire Manes”

Before Blaze could speak Pinkie Pie interrupted “Enough with chit chat lets party!”

As the party went on Blaze began to feel something like this is where he belonged.

End of Chapter

Chapter 12

Chapter 12

Location Pony-Ville Rarity’s shop

Time 18:00

“Come you guys let us in” Spike pleaded as he banged on the door.

“Sure thing spike” Rainbow replied before being stopped by Rarity.

“Heavens no! We’re getting dressed”

“Dressed? Uhh beg your pardon but we don't normally wear clothes...” Applejack stated

Rarity sighed as she open the door “Sorry spike and you two Blaze but some of us DO have standards”

Blaze rolled his eyes, “Man, you sound like Psy-Psy”

Everyone looked at Blaze, “Who is Psy-Psy?”

Blaze replied, “Psy-Psy is a member of the colts when we weren't on a heist. He always wanted some privacy... Anyway I should warn you that many low class thieves will try to steal form you at the gala so keep anything of value close to you at all times”

“Well then we’ll just have to be careful then...” said Twilight as she was getting her make-up on

“Oh dear, look at the time! If we don't hurry we will be late” Rarity panicked.

Later Blaze and the Mane sixboarded the apple carriage and left to canterlot.

“So what you all going to do when we get then?” Blaze asked.

“I’m going to meet with the princess and catch up on all that I have learned about friendship” replied  Twilight.

“I'm going to sell a bunch of apple treats to earn money for the Apple family” said Applejack.

“I’m gonna party like I never partied before” Pinkie Pie said Joyfully.

“I'm gonna to see all the wonderful flowers and animals in the places garden” Fluttershy said softly.

“I’m going to find my true love” Rarity giggled.

“I'm gonna hang with the wounder bolts” cheered Rainbow.

Blaze smiled, “Well good luck to all of you”

“Attention lady’s and Blaze! If look out side your window you will see that we are entering the royal city of Canterlot” Spike announced.

As everypony got out of the carriage Spike turned to Blaze, “Hay Blaze, what your plan for tonight?”

Blaze thought for moment and said “Hmm... I plan to see a couple of old friends I met on my journey and try to have a good time...” Blaze and the others walked into the grand hall and went their separate ways.

Later:

“Hay Spitfire, isn’t that Blaze over there?” asked soarin.

“Hmm... Yeah. It’s been a while. I wounder how he’s been...” Spitfire replied.

The two Pegasuses walked over, “Hay Blaze long time no see...” Soarin yelled.

As he approached Blaze turned and smiled at the sight of his old friends.

“Soarin! Spitfire! Great to see you again! It’s been almost a year since we last hung out” Blaze giggled. “Well it didn't help that you were always going to different towns to perform and I was all ways travelings”

The three began to walk and talk about there adventures though out the year.

“Hay Blaze, sorry to leave so soon but we’ve got to do another show soon and we need to get in some last minute rehearsals” Spitfire said disappointed.

“Hay don't sweat it. You got to do what you got to do. Oh and could you do me a favour; a friend of mine, Rainbow Dash, is a big fan of yours so could you possibly save her a ticket to your ‘End of the year’ show because she has been so upset that she cant afford to go this year. So if you could that would be great”

Soarin smiled “Of course we could get her and you a ticket definitely if she your girlfriend”

“She’s not my girlfriend!” Blaze snapped.

“Of course she’s not” Soarin said as he walked away.

Blaze’s stomach growled, “Hmm... I wonder where the buffet tables are”

Blaze walked around until he found them and when he did he saw a someone quickly take one of the plates and dash out of sight.

“Hmm... I wonder...” Blaze thought as followed the shadow.

“Wow, these ‘what ever you call them’s’ are good” said a very happy voice as he stuffed his face.

“Enjoying the food Thunderous?” Blaze smirked.

Thunderous coughed and turned around, “Blaze! What are you doing here?! Have you come to rat us in?!”

Blaze shook his head, “No. I don't have any reason to but I have a question. Why are you guys here?” Thunderous shrugged.

“I don't know but ever since you left, the boss has been on edge and he thinks everyone’s out to get him and take a look...”

Thunderous lifted up his wing. On his stomach were letter almost spelling traitor.

“He been interrogating us and every time we say something he don't like, he puts a new letter” Thunderous spoke in disappointment.

“How are the others” Blaze asked.

“Everyone’s fine but we are all worried about the boss. He keeps muttering he was perfect over and over again...”

Before Blaze could ask some more, another voice spoke out.

“Hay bro! Boss said he found something”

Thunderous turn to Blaze who had already gone.

Later Blaze was walking along.

“Help its the catastrophic colts” screamed a lady in fear as the colts were running for the exits. Blaze ran and tackled the boss to the ground.

The boss looked at Blaze and yelled, “You traitor! I'll make you pay for what you did!”

Before Blaze could react Smasher bashed him out of the way and they left.

Blaze got up and began to walk away in thought.

“For what I did? What does he mean I'm gonna pay?”

End of Chapter

Chapter 13

Chapter 13

Location: Sweet Apple Acres

Time: 08:24

One week after the Gala

“Blaze are you almost done with that row?” asked Applejack.

“Just one more tree... there... done” Blaze replied as he collected the last of the apples.

As Blaze and Applejack were walking back to the storage room a small metal disk flew in front of them and straight in to a tree.

“What in tarnation?” Applejack asked as she pulled out the strange metal object.

It was in the shape of a cloud with a thunder bolt in the center.

Blaze panicked “Oh no! This is bad! This is Thunderous Cutie Mark! You’ve been targeted!”

Applejack began to worry, “What do you mean targeted?”

Blaze turned to Applejack.

“Its when the colts want something or someone; they launch metal disks with one of Cutie Marks on it to show who’s after you. Applejack! Go to Twilight’s. I will meet you there as soon as I find out who else has been targeted”

Applejack nodded and ran to Twilight’s.

Blaze searched and found all of the target markers.

“Ok everyone present?” Blaze asked.

“Blaze what’s going on? Why are we being targeted” asked Twilight.

“I'll tell you why! It was a trap by Blaze to get his hands on the Elements of Harmony!” Rainbow Dash stated.

“It is true that you have targeted because of me. It’s not for the elements but, knowing the colts, there is a prize they can’t resist. Now show me your targets...” Blaze explained. The group got out there targets.

“Fluttershy, you got smasher. He is unbelievably strong. Some ponies say there is nothing he can’t smash. Rarity, you got Psy-psy he knows everything about pony anatomy. He could stop your heart without even trying, make anything faint in a matter of seconds. Rainbow Dash, you got tornadus, a master an making Tornado's and he’s pretty fast too. Applejack you got Thunderous, Tornadus’ twin brother. He can make storm clouds in a blink of an eye. He likes a good laugh and can sometimes make stupid mistakes but don't let down your guard for a second. Pinkie, you got commandos, he’s full blown military. He knows what he’s doing all the time and he will always have two back ups. Twilight, you got the boss and well... I don't know what he’s like. I don't even know what his cutie mark is. In fact none of the colts do. Be very careful Twilight”

They were all worried until Fluttershy asked, “Blaze, what do you want us to do?”

Blaze replied “I want you to act out your lives normally but keep an eye out for anything strange ok?”

They all nodded and left.

The next day Rainbow was flying about as normal.

“Oh my gosh, its Rainbow Dash!” said a unfamiliar voice.

Rainbow turned, “Yeah that’s me. What do you want?”

The other Pegasus had a smile. “I'm a huge fan of yours and I was wondering if I could get an autograph”

Rainbow smiled with glee, “Of course. Anything for a fan”

She noticed his cutie mark, “Wait... You’re...”

Rainbow tried to fly away but it was to late. Tornadus had already made a small tornado around her. She was trapped. As he created his tornado, he had chained Rainbow so she couldn't move.

“Hay! Let me go you jerk!” Rainbow struggled but it was no use, Tornadus took her away.

Location: Fluttershy’s cottage.

There was a knock at the door. It sounded loud, then there was voice.

“Look, I'm just gonna be blunt. I'm here to capture you miss Fluttershy so please open the door and it will be ten times easier ok?”

The door flung open.

“I’ll do whatever you want, just don’t hurt me” Fluttershy pleaded.

Smasher smiled, picked her up and walked away.

Location: Rarity’s shop

The door opened and the bell rang.

“Hello, how can I help you?” Rarity asked.

“Yes, are you Rarity?” asked a mystery voice.

“Umm yes I am” Rarity began to panic.

“Good” smiled the mystery unicorn.

He continued, “My name is Psy-Psy and, as you probably guessed, I'm here to capture you”

Rarity began to run but her body wouldn't  move.

“What are you doing to me” Rarity whimpered.

“To tell you would ruin the surprise. Wait a second... Is that genuine gold silk? Oh and perfectly hoofed stitched and oh the colours go so well! You know it makes me feel bad to capture you but I must, so lets go...”

Psy-psy forced Rarity to go with him.

Location : Sugar Cube Corner

 “Okie Dokie... What’s on the baking list today? Hmm...” Pinkie Pie was stopped by a sharp pain in her neck.

“Ow! What was that?” Pinkie’s words slurred and she fell with a thud.

“humph, the boss said that this would be tricky... I guess he was joking” commandos laughed to himself as he picked up Pinkie Pie and left the bakery.

Location: Pony-ville market

“There she is and...” Thunderous sniffed.

“...man that smells good. Maybe a small bite to eat won't hurt”

He left cover and casually walked up to Applejack stand.

“Hay there, how can I help you?” Applejack asked.

“I’ll take those apple dumplings” asked Thunderous.

“Ok that will be twelve bits”

Thunderous paid and sat down on a near by table. Applejack then noticed his cutie mark.

“Oh no... It’s him! What do I do?” Applejack thought.

Tornadus then flew down, “Bro! Are you stupid or something?!”

Thunderous interrupted, “Dude you got to try these! They’re delicious”

“Not now! Capture the mare then eat ok?!”

“Fine” sighed Thunderous.

He flew up to Applejack and formed a massive cloud around her. As Applejack try to escape she got shackled and was soon taken away.

Location: Twilight’s house

“Ok Spike, we have to be prepared for the worst” Twilight said as she was preparing for the boss of the colts.

The door flew off and slammed into the shelf.

“Hello Twilight. I've been waiting for this moment for so long now” the boss grinned.

Twilight put up a magic shield, “Try all you want! You won't be able to touch me” said Twilight confidently.

The boss laughed.

“What’s so funny?” Twilight snapped.

The boss raised his cloak to reveal Spike tied up.

“Spike” Twilight yelled.

The boss pulled out a knife and pierced Spike’s stomach.

“Stop it!” Twilight screamed.

“You want it to stop, just surrender”

The boss pushed the knife in further.

Twilight lowered her shield, “Stop! I surrender! Please stop...”

The boss shackled her and removed the knife form Spike.

“You, dragon... When Blaze appears, tell him we’ll be waiting at Canterlot castle”

The boss laughed in victory and left with Twilight.

End of Chapter

Final Chapter

Final Chapter

Location: Pony-ville

Time 14:46

“Oh no, I'm too late...” said Blaze as looked at Twilight’s house.

“B-Blaze you got to save Twilight” cried out spike.

“Spike are you ok?” Blaze asked as he picked up spike.

“Blaze go to Canterlot castle now!” Spike pleaded.

“But what about you?” Blaze asked, cornered for Spike’s health.

“There’s no time the others will die if you don't leave now!” Spike demanded as he try to push Blaze.

Blaze nodded and headed out.

“Well boys, tonight we eat like kings. You know this never would of happened if you just burned Twilight” the boss smirked.

“Go to hell! You will lose today and I hope the princess has a cell with your name on it” Twilight snapped.

The boss slapped Twilight, “Talk to me like that again and cut your tongue out! In fact any of you talk again and I’ll cut every one of your tongues out! You got that!”

Fluttershy began to cry.

“Oh we have a cry baby do we...” the boss said as he walked up to Fluttershy. “...I’ll give something to cry about...”

The boss raised his knife.

“Boss wait... we’re here” commandos spoke.

“Luckily you...” the boss snapped.

“Halt who goes there!” a guard interrupted.

“Smasher, do your thing!” The boss commanded as the colts walked there way casually to the throne room. Many guards tried to stop them but all failed to smasher’s might. The doors flew open.

“What is the meaning of this?!” demanded Princess Celestia.

“Well your Majesty, lets just say, we have a trade these pony’s lives for the elements of harmony and no tricks” Celestia’s horn began to glow.

“Psy-Psy quickly...” the boss snapped.

“What did you do to me!” the Princess asked.

“Wouldn't you like to know?” the boss laughed. He continued, “So do we have a deal?”

Twilight spoke out, “Don't do it! The elements are too powerful! You cant give them up!”

The boss smacked Twilight, “What did I say about talking now open wide”

“Don't you even think about touching her you insane foul” demanded Blaze as he walked in to the room.

“Oh good, Blaze Blue, now the show can begin...”

Blaze glared at his former boss.

“You lost just surrender...”

The boss began to laugh “Oh no Blaze, I never wanted any treasure. That was only a bonus for me. What I want is revenge. Now smasher, kill the girl!” smasher raised is hoof and Fluttershy began to cry heavily.

*Smash*

Fluttershy’s chain fell apart.

“I'm sorry boss but I can’t kill her... I quit...”

Smasher picked up fluttershy and removed the rest of the chains and backed off. The boss began to worry when the sound of chains and locks being undone echo in his ears.

“What are you spineless cowards doing?”

Commandos spoke out, “Sorry sir but I joined to be a thieve, not a murderer. I'm out...”

“So too” said the twins.

“I'm out as well” said Psy-Psy.

“Fine then I'll do it myself...”

The boss giggled as he raised his knife. Then Blaze launched a fireball at the insane pony which knock him across the room and set his cloak a-light.

The boss tossed his cloak of reviling his flank which was blank!

“Look-y here, the great leader of the colts never got his cutie mark” giggled Blaze.

“You’ll pay for that!” the boss said as he charged at Blaze who prepared for the fight of his life.

The boss tried to attack Blaze with his hoof but Blaze jumped to the side, landing on his front two hooves and bucked the boss in the face. The boss got up and swung his front hoof at Blaze. Blaze stood up on his back hooves so he could use his front hoofs to defend himself. The boss threw his hoof at Blaze, Blaze dodged and tried to swing back. The boss just dodged his head to the side, bite down on Blazes leg and punched Blaze in the stomach with his hoof. Blaze became winded and stopped putting up a fight for a moment. The boss then beat Blaze down the kicked him hard across the room into a wall.

“Hmm... you fight just like your father” the boss smiled.

Blaze looked at him with a confused look, “What do you mean?”

The boss began to laugh, “Did no-pony tell you, I killed your parents. Oh and I will tell you this, there nothing more satisfying then seeing a fire mane’s flame go out”

The boss laughed louder. Blaze stared as if all the happiness had just been sucked from his soul. Blaze’s mane began to grow.

“I'll murder you” he muttered.

“What was that Blaze?” the boss chuckle.

“I’LL MURDER YOU!” screamed Blaze as massive wave of energy pulsed from him. The wave knocked everyone back, even the princess was surprised of the power. Blaze charged at the boss and hit him in the head with his hoof. Blaze swung again, the boss pulled back to dodge but Blaze countered the dodge by head-butting him in the chest, his mane burning him severely. The boss winced at the pain the burning caused and held his stomach. Blaze the smacked him in the head, swiped his legs the kicked him hard towards a wall as he fell. Blaze then ran up to him as he tried to recover and kicked him against the wall. He then punched against the wall and then pinned him to it as he began to chock him.

“Go on Blaze... Show the world your power...” the boss chuckled.

“Blaze stop it...” Twilight pleaded.

“He won’t stop now. His heart if full of rage and sadness” the princess stated.

“What do we do then?” Twilight asked.

The princess turned to Psy-Psy who nodded as her horn began to glow.

“Blaze stop this now” spoke Princess Luna as she entered the room and used her power to restrain Blaze.

“LET ME GO! HE HAS TO PAY!” Blaze screamed.

The boss giggled, “What’s the matter Blaze? Don't you what to revenge your family?”

Blaze began to break free from Luna's magic.

“Sister... He’s too strong...” Luna groaned.

“Enough Blaze!” Celestia commanded as she forced Blaze away with her magic.

“Guards! Take the lunatic away” Luna commanded.

As the guards shackled the boss he spoke out, “You’re a disgrace to your family blaze...”

Celestia put Blaze down. Blaze began to cry. Twilight approached Blaze and hugged him.

“I know you’re upset but revenge won’t remove the pain...”

Blaze looked at the group of ponies began to smile

“You’re right Twilight. Thank you all for what you have done form me. You have all been so nice to me and now I know that I still have a family”

Commandos looked at Celestia and asked, “Princess, I believe that I speak for all of us when I say we’re sorry for all that we have done...”

The princess smiled, “I know and I’d like to thank all of you but especially you Blaze Blue. Your loyalty to your friends has not only saved their lives but also stopped the greatest crime gang in all of equestrian history”

“Hay, I know what this call for! A party! Oh, oh, and we could bring all our friends!” Pinkie Pie shouted.

“You know that might not be such a bad idea” Blaze smiled.

“Are you sure blaze?” thunderous asked.

“Yeah, we’re not the most popular ponies right now” Tornadus stated.

“That's the point. Think about it, a public appearance with the Princess’s, presuming they like to come, may make some ponies change their mind about us” Blaze stated.

“You know he’s right” said  Twilight.

“Yeah come on you guys! It will be fun” said Rainbow enthusiastically.

“It will be the perfect time to make some friends” Psy-Psy pointed out.

The colts nodded and they all left, getting ready to party. As they did Blaze thought to himself, “This is definitely my new home...”

The End

Blaze blue fire mane chap 1

Mlp fanfic Blaze Blue fire-mane

By Hurricanepigeon/Russell hockey

Chapter 1

“OK class today we are going to learn about fire-mane's” Cheerilee announced as the class looked puzzled. Cheerilee started her lecture.

“Long ago there was a proud race of ponies known as the fire-mane's. Fire-mane's had the amazing ability to control fire to use it as a tool or they absorb it to increases their power”. As Cheerilee continued explaining a question quickly popped into Applebloom’s head.

“Miss cheerilee, are there any fire-mane's alive?” Apple bloom asked.

“Well I uhh don’t really know Applebloom. Some ponies say that they all perished after the great war but others believe that one is left a dark and twisted pony that wont think twice about killing you”. Then the school bell rang. “Class this week homework is a 250 word report on the great war for Monday” Cheerilee told the class and everyone moaned as they left.

“So what cutie mark are planning to try today?” Scootaloo  asked all pumped up.

“We could try juggling” Sweetie Belle stated.

“Yeah” Scootaloo yelled. “Lets go then” continued Scootaloo.

“I umm can’t I'm mighty busy with my chores and stuff” Apple bloom nervously said as she backed away from her friend.

“Well you got to then we will see you tomorrow then” Scootaloo replied.

“OK then” Applebloom mumbled as ran towards Sweet apple acres, with her friends waving goodbye.

 “I'm home” Applebloom yelled.

“Your home early today sis! Let me guess you got a lot of homework you need doing and you what me to help?” Applejack asked in a peppy mood.

 “Of course sis, why do think I would waste a day like today. Quickly sis, Miss Cheerilee said that there was an evil fire-mane alive but no-pony really knows. Do you believe that sis?” Applebloom asked.

Applejack paused to think. “Well now that you ask, I have heard ponies saying that they been robed by a gang of criminals and every time they say one mane was burning blue but that’s just rumour right AB”

“Right sis, just a rumour” Applebloom stuttered

“But still, some rumours are true” Applejack tough to herself. “I wounder if it true”

Location Canterlot

Year 2010 one year before the return of Nightmare moon

Time 00:03

“Are you sure they’re all asleep” asked a mystery colt

“Yes boss, there are no lights on and I can't hear any-pony” replied the silver Pegasus

“Good. In 2 minutes the Catastrophic Colts strike!” grinned the mysterious leader of the Catastrophic Colts

End of chapter 1

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

Location Canterlot Castle throne room

Time 08:00

One of the royal guards burst in to the room he was in a panic and was screaming.

“Princess Celestia! Princess Celestia! I have an urgent letter for you!”

“Well let me see” the royal Alicorn asked.

“uhh right yes, there you go your majesty. I will return to my post then”

He galloped off in rush as the princess wondered why he was so frightened. She began opening the letter and read to herself.

“Dear Princess Celestia, in one hour I will be standing out side the mane entrance. My reason for this is because I have decided to turn my self in. I will be alone and I will not fight back but you may use as much force as you deem necessary. Blaze blue fire mane”

The princess was stunned but quickly ordered the guards to capture the fire mane in case he was lying. As the the bell rang on the ninth hour the gates opened, reviling the princess and about 100 guards the princess proclaimed.

“So it is true then. Guards, shackle him” Then as guards did so, a large crowed gathered and talked among them selves as the fire mane entered the castle to the royal Cort room. He didn't speak a word as he took a seat waiting to be trialed. He looked around as the large crowed took their seats and the royal Princess look down form her balcony.

“Silence in the Court room” the judge yelled banging his gavel. The room became silent. The judge continued, “Blaze blue you have been found guilty of dozen crimes against in many parts of Equestria. How do you plea?”

Blaze with a sorrowful look on his face “Guilty your honer”

The judge decreed “Very well then. I sentence you to” before he could finish judgment he was interrupted be a small familiar voice.

 “Wait don’t punish him!” The young unicorn continued, “This colt saved me and my family. I can not and will not allow him to be punished”

After hearing that, blaze’s ears perked up and he looked at the young unicorn as she continued to speak, this time directly at the princess

“Princess you have always said to give others another chance but you refuse to give blaze one?” The crowed was in shock. No one has ever heard such a young pony question the princess. The Princess then spoke “Very well then. Instead of previous judgement I decree that if the fire mane blaze blue can go one year without committing any crime, he will free but if does commit a crime, he will be guilty of all crimes. Do you accept the terms blaze?”

“Yes your Majesty I do” blaze replied. As the court room emptied, the princess gave blaze a neckless that allow the princess to see blaze’s every move.

“So where are you going?” the young pony asked. Blaze smiled.

“I don't know until I get there and thank you” as blaze walked off, the young unicorn waved goodbye..

End of chapter 3

Epilogue

Epilogue

Journal entry 14

“It’s been one month since the Catastrophic Colts split up and i have finally brought my own house in ponyville i still work on the farm but Aj gave me a raise so I cant complain and some days I visit my friends.

Vinyl still her over the top self and every time i visit i all way get drag out to a club or something and most time i'm caring Vinyl back to her place and i have finally got good at poker so now I don't lose all my money on that game.

And sometimes on my travel I met Trixie we are lot closer now in fact I am aloud to just call her Trixie which apparently is an achievement but we manly just have lunch and talk and some ponies say that we make a cute couples an thinking about she is nice when you get to know her so never know it might work out.

I don't get to see Soarin and Spitfire much because but when I do its all ways a night to remember and Soarin of course gloats about how he saved my life and in a way saved the world Spitfire on the other hoof asks allot more about my past but I don't mind as long as its not to personnel.

The colts are dong great Smasher when in to construction demolition, Commandos joined the royal guards. The twins are now Manehatten best whether team when there not fighting and Psy-Psy stayed in Ponyville and works with Rarity in the fashion world which none of us saw coming.

and Spike made a full recovery I made a new enemy  tree hundred and fifty six I will have my revenge but other than that every one happy.”

the true end

thank you for reading and i hope you enjoyed it

and S0W Cobra/Aaron Simner who edit most of it.