living terror

by Soviet Power Supreme

Rating: mature
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Original Character, Rainbow Dash
Length: 1205

Rainbow dash, toughest pony in equestria, finds herself in a room of torture. What is she to do?

Rainbow dash wakes up to find herself in strange surroundings. She begins to be tortured by a hooded pony. The terror of the position she is in finally gets to her as she gets cut open by the hooded one. For this is not a nightmare or a night terror, this is a living terror.

Contains gore
This is my first gore story so i doubt its at all good but i gave it a go anyway to see if anyone liked it.

Published 2012-12-05 03:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-05 03:30:01 UTC

Nightmare

Rainbow awoke, she was laying on a cold, metal floor under a small, flickering lightbulb that shone no brighter than a match. Rainbow looked around and what she saw gave her a terrible feeling inside her guts. Blood splatters stained the walls a deep red and the entrails of other were littered over the large room she was in. Severed limbs hung from the ceiling and the heads of several ponies swung on a rotating fan that filled the room with rancid air. It was too much for Rainbow Dash, she leaned to her left and vomited violently all over the bloody floor and stayed in that position for a minute or so before she felt empty inside. A voice then rang out from the shadows, it was a low, eerie voice that spoke in a taunting way to the girl laying on the icy floor, a pool of vomit next to her.
"Ah... she's awake, honestly, i thought you'd never wake up" the voice echoed around the room so as rainbow replied, she spoke to no particular direction.
"W..w..w..who are you?" Rainbow said, trying to sound brave, though slivers of fear made their way to the surface of her voice.
"Is that fear i detect? What happened to brave rainbow, look fear in the eye and spit on it rainbow, can take on anything rainbow hmmm...?"
"I..i..im not af..f..fraid of y..y..you" Fear now taking over her voice, making itself known.
"Ohhh, you aren't scared are you? Well by the end of this, i think we will change that. Sound good?" The out of nowhere, chains burst through the walls and restrained Rainbow Dash's hooves to the floor. They tightened and lock themselves so as to provide no escape from the terror and pain that awaited her. The air grew thick with the scent of fresh blood and rotten flesh as the fan began to turn faster. Then, a cloaked figure stepped out from the left corner of the room holding a jar of red liquid that would, undoubtedly be blood. He stepped towards the trapped pegasus and crouched next to her. "Let the merry making commence!" He cheered and poured the blood all over rainbow, causing her to vomit all over the floor and to start to dry heave as she was soaked in the salty, red liquid. The cloaked figure then began to repeatedly lick Rainbow where she was coated in blood.
"You taste goood Rainbow dash, real goood" he said as he continued to lick her a bit harder this time
"Mmph...mmm...nugh...ohh..." were all the words rainbow managed to force out of her mouth as she experienced a disturbingly erotic feeling from what was happening. She began to breath deeper and quicker as the hooded pony's licking got harder and faster, but just before she began to enjoy what was being done to her, the cloaked one stopped. Rainbow was panting heavily, her tongue lolling out of her mouth like a dog.
"Now now Dashie, your not supposed to be having fun. Im going to have to punish you for that."
"Wait........how......do...you........know.....my name?"
"I have my own little secrets dashie" and on those words Rainbow Dash found herself strapped to a wooden table in a small room with a small light hanging overhead. She heard a clanging sound and looked to see what had intruded on the quiet of the room, it was the hooded pony once again, standing next to another table full of weapons and torture device.
"Oh, hello Rainbow, fancy seeing you hear." Its voice let out a low and crackly laugh "but anyway, i have been practising my anatomy skills but still havent quite perfected it yet, oh dear, i seem to have run out painkillers, a'well, looks like its going to be a whole lota pain for you" The cloaked pony picked up a scalpel from the table and slowly moved towards the tied up rainbow dash. He aimed the blade and then slowly lowered it into rainbows side. Blood spurted out from the wound and covered its owner, rainbow winced in pain but tried to cover it with a brute grunt. The blade then made its way up from the pelvis to the shoulder, creating a waterfall of blood that coated the floor and her, when the licking started again. The hooded figure licked across the fresh new wound, causing rainbow dash to wince both pain and pleasure alike. As he licked her, he slid the blood covered scalpel across the red body of rainbow dash creating a square going across the body. The figured pony then grabbed the edges of the cut skin.
Rainbows eyes go wide, " No....nononononono, dont do that, anything but than!"
"Just admit your afraid rainbow, then all the pain and suffering will stop."
"NEVER!"
"Well then...." he pulls the the skin straight off her stomach
"Ahhhhhhhh!!!" Yelled Rainbow and she started sobbing from the pain, she almost passed out. The hooded pony then returns the scalpel and picks up a cleaver and a bread knife and walks back over to his hostage.
"Now, because im generous, you have several choices. I can either let your body die from the extremely high concentration of a deadly bacteria that festers on limbs of the dead or perhaps you want me to decapitate you, instant death, quick, clean, painless or maybe you would me to cut you apart limb from limb? Your call dashie."
"Limb...argh...from...oh god....limb" rainbow answered bravely yet foolishly as she has nothing to gain from and, at the same time, nothing to lose. The hooded figure drops the cleaver and advances on the bloodied, sliced up body of who wad once the fastest flier in all of equestria. He leaned over, looked her in the eyes and pressed his lips onto hers. His tongue played around in her mouth a bit before her own tongue began to fight with his for each others mouth. They then broke the kiss and they stared into each others eyes a little longer before the cloaked pony started to saw at first her arms. The bread knife ripping through muscle and cartilage and eventually bone and then he repeated with the the other arm, Rainbow dash was screaming in agony while all this was happening, when finished, blood pouring from both like fountains. He then began to saw at her legs blood covering everything, the ponies cloak was no longer black, but an extremely dark red. When both arms and both legs were removed, the cloaked pony picked up some string from his table, attached it to the bone sticking out of the dismembered body parts and then tied them to the roof so they can hang for all his other victims to see. Just before Rainbow passed out from the pain, the cloaked pony went up to her and gave her another kiss, though this one was one of the most passionate either of them had ever had, a shame it would be Rainbows last. As rainbow drifted into unconsciousness the cloaked figure picked up the dropped cleaver, whispered into Rainbows ear
"Im sorry" held the cleaver up high and brought it down with merciful speed. Quick, clean, painless.
The End