Adorable No More
By Imagination Creations
Warning: This story is graphic and set in the world of Grimdark ponies. If you are uneasy or faint hearted by blood, torture, explicit sex, or the demining of certain MLP characters, turn away now. The Grimdark Ponies featured belong to their respective owners and I use them only as backstory.
Everything has gone to shit. Fluttershy said cooped up in her cottage. It all began with the disappearance of her best friend Rainbow Dash. She was found later in a cupcake… a cupcake Fluttershy ate. She and the rest of her friends found out that Pinkie Pie had done terrible things to her, and baked her into cupcakes. Afterwards, Pinkie, or Pinkamena as she now calls herself, went into hiding.
Like a trail of dominoes, the rest of her friends fell down a dark path. Applejack became a shut in, barricading herself and Apple Bloom within Sweet Apple Acres. Rumors spread that she is now an alcoholic. Big Macintosh slaughtered a bunch of fillies on their farm, which might explain why Applejack became a shut in. Rarity was so terrified by Pinkamena that she never left her boutique. Instead of making dresses, Fluttershy found out, Rarity now enjoys a savage beating that makes her orgasm. Sweetie Belle has gotten swept into her sadistic sex life.
Even Ms. Cheerelie has gone bonkers. An accidental fire left several of her students: Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails dead. Investigators discovered that they were murdered by Cheerelie. Her response was only, “They were weeds that needed to be pulled from the root!”
Later on, Fluttershy overheard a conversation that Rainbow Dash was at the center of a conspiracy called the Rainbow Factory. She ran the place and murdered young Pegasus ponies that didn’t graduate from flight camp. This conspiracy was proven true, devastating Fluttershy.
Determined to save her friends like she did from Discord, Twilight Sparkle has tried to figure out what to do. Alas, it was a fool’s errand. With everything going on, Fluttershy is taking the worst of it. Her best friend was murdered, and she ate her, and she killed hundreds of foals a day! Her friends were no longer the same. Perhaps worse of all, Fluttershy’s animal friends had left. Sensing the changing atmosphere, the animals fled to search of greener, more pleasant pastures.
There was truly nothing left for Fluttershy. A deep depression took her. She never ate, hardly slept giving her dark circles under her eyes, bathing became a once in a while thing, and she made friends with a knife. Fluttershy had several knife gashes along her right arm and one on each leg near her groin. What was there left?
Today was another grim day. It finally occurred to Fluttershy that she needed to eat. Going into her kitchen, she found that it was raided by the only thing in her life that didn’t change; Angel Bunny. He ate everything in the kitchen due to Fluttershy’s incompetence. Angel was still fussy as he was before everything went wrong.
Thanks for saving me something you little, fucking rat. Fluttershy groaned. “Looks like I’m going to have to go into town and get some food.” Fluttershy grabbed her bags and put it over her flank. She left her house and flew over to Ponyville market.
Ponies in Ponyville had changed along with the Main Six. They were ruder. Because of this, Fluttershy was reluctant to go into town. Hunger drove her there however, and she had to face the changed ponies. Unfortunate for her, the ponies knew of her depression and her cutting routine. She has been given the name, “Cuttershy.”
“Lookit here!” said a stallion. “It’s Cuttershy!” Fluttershy dropped her head and made her way through all the ridiculing ponies. It’s not long before Fluttershy grabbed her food, along with Angel’s, and returned home. While she had gotten herself a decent dinner, she only got Angel simple pet food.
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Fluttershy poured the food pellets into a bowl and presented it to Angel. The white bunny didn’t approve of the food. He kicked it over in a huff. Angel spotted that Fluttershy had a lettuce sandwich with a cherry on top. He jumped up over to Fluttershy and snatched the sandwich away from her. He dug his teeth into the sandwich.
You bitch! Fluttershy was tired of Angel’s nonsense. In fact, she was done with everyponies rude nature to her. Since when did everypony become a bunch of bastards? Something inside Fluttershy told her to retreat to her room, cry, and give herself a new mark. Another side of her told her to take action.
The yellow pony left the kitchen and trotted up to her room. She saw the knife that was stained with her blood. Mesmerized, she took it by the handle. Edging the knife to her wrist, she made the attempt to make herself bleed, hopefully this time she’ll bleed out this time. Fluttershy stopped before making the incision.
She took the knife with her out of her room. She returned to the kitchen where she found Angel gourging himself on the sandwich. Fluttershy was overtaken by an ambition she rarely dreamt about. Now, it was coming true.
Fluttershy grabbed the rabbit by the ears. She brought Angel close to her face. An insane look was in her blue eyes. “Want something?” Fluttershy asked in her adorable tone. “I’ll give you something that you deserved a long time ago!” Fluttershy raised her knife and pointed it at Angel. Fear gripped the white rabbit; he kicked and throbbed, trying to escape Fluttershy’s hold. It was too late.
Searing pain filled every nerve in Angel’s body. Fluttershy’s knife had cut into his stomach. He looked up at Fluttershy; she couldn’t stop smiling. The red from Angel’s blood glistened in her eyes. “Let’s make this fun.” She said. The knife made its way upwards, creating a long gash. Unable to move, Angel could only suffer.
Fluttershy tossed Angel on the table and opened the gash. She saw his tiny little organs, even his heart, beating at a super-fast rate. “How cute.” She stated. I should kill him right now! No… no… he should suffer. Suffer like me! For some time, Fluttershy felt the world and everypony in it giving her nothing but pain. It was time to return the favor.
The pony with blood on her hooves took Angel and slammed him against the wall. She then reached for a hammer and two nails. She pinned the nails into Angel’s hands, blood dripping from the wounds onto the floor. His guts were free to fall thanks to gravity. They were still working, but it was excruciating pain.
Angel tried to groan and scream, but the air was slowly leaving his lungs. Fluttershy mocked Angel, leaning her ear in closer. “What’s that?” she asked. “I can’t hear you.” laughter came out of her mouth. The smile that was planted on her face was the first true smile she has had in months.
“Time to spread my new enthusiasm to everypony.” Fluttershy said. “Isn’t that a kind thing to do?” she giggled.
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Returning to the market, Fluttershy was determined to give the first pony who mocked her a beating. However, nopony was even acknowledged her presence there. They’ll say something sooner or later. In the meantime, Fluttershy was still hungry. She floated over to a cherry stand and told the filly in charge, “I want a full bag of cherries.” The young, tan pony with a farmer’s hat looked at Fluttershy.
She filled up a bag of cherries and presented it to Fluttershy on the table. “That’ll be five bits.” She said. Fluttershy smiled menacingly. “Sorry, I don’t have any money. You can just give me the cherries though.” she began to reach for the bag, and then the cherry pony pulled it back.
“No money, no cherries.” She said. She pointed her hoof at the pink mane pony. “Come back when you have the money, Cuttershy.” That was the word Fluttershy was looking for. Fluttershy grabbed her knife and jammed it into the pony’s hoof. The pony found herself pinned to her stand. She let out an ear shattering scream that alerted everypony in the marketplace.
Tears streamed down the pony’s cheeks as she glared at the blood oozing from her hoof. She turned to Fluttershy who had a grim smile across her muzzle. Then Fluttershy grabbed the pony by the back of the head and brought her closer to her. Their lips touched each other. The cherry stand pony try to draw herself back but Fluttershy kept her close. It seemed that Fluttershy was enjoying it very much.
The lunatic Fluttershy pulled the knife from the pony out slowly, only giving her more pleasure in the pain the pony was suffering. It was out; the pony dropped to the floor and cried.
The ponies in the marketplace all stared in horror. “Anyone else want to say something?” Fluttershy asked. The ponies backed away, even though they were far enough away. They no longer saw a depressed cutter standing before them. No—this was far worse than that.
“I’m adorable no more, aren’t I?” Fluttershy grinned widely. She saw the fear in the ponies’ eyes, just like Angel. Fluttershy turned back to the stand and grabbed her cherries. After devouring a few, Fluttershy saw the terrified expressions of the ponies she passed. It was almost like having a power over them. An imaginary light bulb lit up. “Time to go see the Mayor.” She said.
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Town Hall has seen its better days. It was lacking color, the shutters were broken, and the area around it was dirty. It hasn’t looked this bad since Derpy was hired as a clean-up crew member. It didn’t matter to Fluttershy; she waltzed into the building and up her way to Mayor Mare’s office. She knocked on the door. “Mayor? We have to talk!” she demanded. No answer. Fluttershy knocked again and still no answer.
Frowning angrily, Fluttershy opened the door. What she found didn’t faze her. Mayor Mare had committed suicide. She hung herself from the ceiling fan. Fluttershy could only think of the reason why she did this. Perhaps Mayor Mare saw that her beloved town was going down the crapper and she tried everything to fix it. She couldn’t handle it anymore.
“What a coward.”
Outside, the ponies heard glass breaking and a loud thud on the ground. Some shrieked, others ran to the source of the sound. They found the Mayor’s lifeless body on the ground covered in glass and blood dropping from her eyes and mouth. They were sickened and horrified.
“Somepony dispose of that!” they looked up and saw Fluttershy flying from the broken window. “I’m your new mayor. Anypony got a problem with that?” she growled, drawing her knife and pointing it to everypony. With grimacing faces, the ponies shook their heads. “Good,” Fluttershy said. “You’re all going to love me.” The psychotic Pegasus flew back up to the office and settled down. She couldn’t believe how happy she was.
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The filly opened her eyes slowly. She groaned in pain. “Vat—vat happened to me?” she said in a German accent. It was none other than Photo Finish. Photo had noticed that she was stripped of her dress and hung from the wall by chains. “Vat is going on?”
From the corner of the room, Fluttershy presented herself. “Hello again.”
“Ah, my dear,” Photo was relieved. “Help me down.”
“I don’t think that would be appropriate.” Fluttershy said. “This is going to be your biggest photo session ever!” In front of Photo Finish was a camera, the same one she used to take pictures of her models. “Since you made me into a star, I have to reward you somehow.”
Fluttershy grabbed her knife and wasted no time. She dug the knife into Photo’s breast and carved letters. S-L-U-T. Photo screamed in pain. “I don’t understand!” she screamed. “Vy are you doing to me?” Fluttershy didn’t respond; she continued with her work. She marked her arm with another insignia: her own name. Fluttershy had branded Photo Finish with her name.
While this was going on, Fluttershy would stop and take a picture. Each picture had Photo in a miserable state and no smile. “You aren’t smiling!” she screamed. The knife gleamed and showed Fluttershy’s expression. “I’ll fix that.”
Fluttershy put the knife into Photo’s mouth and lunged it through her mouth, creating an upwards gash that looked like she was smirking. “Now the other.” Fluttershy did the same thing and completed Photo Finish’s smile. Blood was draining from these gashes and Photo’s teeth were stained red. The pictures continued.
After a few more cuts and brandings, Fluttershy released Photo. “Suffer like I did!” she spat in the light blue pony’s face. Two stallions came into the room. “Would you like us to take her out?” one asked.
“Yes. Get that dead weight out of my office.”
“Yes Mayor Fluttershy.” The stallions picked up Photo Finish and escorted her out of Fluttershy’s office. Sitting at her desk, Fluttershy observed the photos she had just taken. She saw the misery of Photo Finish and it filled her up with glee. “These are a keeper.”
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Dozens of stallions were lined up outside of Fluttershy’s office. Some seemed eager, others resentful. What they were waiting for was some “Special time” with the mayor. Then two stallions emerged from the office. They were sweaty and wobbly. Fluttershy followed them. Her mane was messy and a big satisfied grin appeared on her face.
“Alright, that’s it. Seven hung stallions is my limit. Go home; you all disgust me!” some of the stallions moaned and the others were happy to leave the line.
Fluttershy has gotten more than just mean the past few weeks; she has gotten a lust that can’t be satisfied by one stallion. Since everypony in Ponyville was terrified of what Fluttershy would do to them, they just follow her every order. The way, Fluttershy thought, should’ve always been.
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The weeks dragged on and Fluttershy was feeling more and more queasy. Every morning, she had to rush over to the toilet and puke. She had weird cravings. And she cried more and more than ever before. She knew what these signs were. Just to be on the safe side, Fluttershy flew to the hospital, where Nurse Red Heart examined her.
“Well, these results don’t lie. You’re pregnant.” Red Heart announced.
“I can’t be pregnant!” Fluttershy shouted. “Check the test again!”
Red Heart showed her the clipboard, proving that she was pregnant. Angered, Fluttershy grabbed the nurse by her coat. “I want an abortion!”
Red Heart laughed. “You’re past that stage. What’s inside you is permanent right now.”
“You whore!”
“I’m the whore? You go around banging ten stallions a day, unprotected.” Red Heart snapped, which is a bad thing nowadays. “It’s not my fault your life sucks so much!” before she could continue, Fluttershy grabbed the nurse’s tongue and also grabbed her knife. “Shut up.” She said. Fluttershy decapitated Red Heart’s tongue and threw it on the ground.
Red Heart crawled over to her tongue, slipping on the blood coming from her mouth. Fluttershy made her way from the hospital.
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Pregnant? I can’t be… I can’t raise a foal! Fluttershy had become a monster. If she found out before everything that she was pregnant, she’d be delighted. Now, it’s just a useless abomination in Fluttershy’s head. She was close too. She could feel the unborn foal kicking around. How can she get rid of it?
“Twilight!” she shouted. Opening up her wings, Fluttershy dashed along the grey clouds till she saw Twilight’s library. She landed and burst through the door. Inside she found Twilight, face buried in a book.
“Ah, Fluttershy!” Twilight closed the book. Her hair was frizzled and out of luster. “So glad you can come over. I hear you’re having a baby! Congratulations!”
“No.” Fluttershy responded. “I want it out. And what better unicorn to do that than you.”
“What?”
“Use your magic to get rid of this little thing!” Fluttershy demanded.
Twilight responded loudly, “I’m not killing it! That’s murder!”
“Don’t care. Just do it!” Fluttershy shouted. Twilight’s response was still no. Twilight was always an unbelievable pain in the flank. It got on Fluttershy’s nerves; and ask anypony, it’s a death sentence if you do that. Fluttershy lunged over at Twilight and pinned her on the ground. “Now listen here you virgin nerd, get this brat out of me or I’ll tear you fucking heart out!”
Frowning sadly, Twilight answered, “That happened a long time ago. But I still won’t do it!”
Fluttershy began to punch Twilight, leaving several hoof shaped bruises. “Spike!” Twilight cried. “Help!”
Her little assistant dragon jumped onto Fluttershy and grabbed her by neck. Fluttershy tried to buck off Spike, but his claws dug into her neck, securing his grip. Regaining her balance, Twilight tried to come up with a way to restrain her: ropes, her magic? Then she saw that Fluttershy had finally gotten Spike off. She grabbed him and pushed him against the wall, her knife on his neck.
“I always wanted to see how dragon guts worked.” She grinned evilly. There was no choice. Twilight’s horn glowed with her magic then a beam of magic shot out. The magic shot struck Fluttershy in the head. Her entire body fell numb; a release of everything. Fluttershy fell down to the ground on her back, no longer moving, eyes open and dull.
Spike took a breath of lifesaving air. He joined Twilight in looking over fallen Fluttershy. Sadness was what Spike sensed from Twilight. “You OK, Twilight?” he put his claw on her shoulder. Twilight shook her head. “I couldn’t save any of them…” she somberly said. “Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie… and now Fluttershy.” Tears formed.
Without those five ponies, Twilight’s life wouldn’t have changed for the best. Now they’re gone. “I’m so sorry.” Twilight leaned down and stared deeply into eyes. Deep down, she still saw the shy pony she first met.
Then Fluttershy’s hooves reached for Twilight and clenched around her neck. She began screaming with a psychotic look in her eye. A burst of blood emerged from her nether region. “That’s it! The baby!” Twilight said. “Spike, you need to deliver it!”
“But—that’s gross!”
“Spike! Now!” Spike went down to Fluttershy’s groin and spotted the foal’s crown. “I see it!” he gently reached in and began to pull. Fluttershy’s anger was so focused on Twilight that she didn’t even noticed that she was dying from childbirth. She wanted Twilight dead and she’ll die first before she does.
Spike had gotten the foal out halfway. This is so gross! He thought. But he had to pull through.
Air was barely getting into Twilight’s lungs. Fluttershy’s grip was really tight. But it was slowly loosening as her baby was draining her life. Spike had finally pulled the foal from Fluttershy. With his claw, he severed the umbilical cord. With that snap, Fluttershy had died. Her body fell limp again and she was no longer moving.
Twilight took massive inhales of air, trying not to pass out from the lack of air. She heard the crying of the foal and saw that it was safe in Spike’s arms. “It’s a girl.” He said. Twilight walked over and looked at the little foal. Her coat was light brown, she had a white mane and her eyes were green, like giant emeralds. Fluttershy might have been lost in this world, but this little miracle surely doesn’t have to suffer. “Pack your things, Spike.” Twilight announced. She used her magic to pack several books away into her back and some food.
“Where we going, Twilight?” Spike asked as he gave the foal to Twilight and packed several of his belongings into a back pack.
“Somewhere far away from here.” Twilight and Spike took the foal and out of the library. They made it out of Ponyville, the town gripped by a grim and dark atmosphere. There was another problem, the foal’s name. “What are we gonna call her?”
Twilight thought. “Little Miracle.” She said. “Little Miracle.”
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A butterfly with pink wings flew awkwardly into the library. It landed on Fluttershy’s chest, its wings suffering from holes. How it made it so far is anyone’s guess, but its time had come. The first thing it ever saw was Fluttershy, and now, the last thing it will ever see is Fluttershy.
The End
Author Commentary: Sorry, I'm new here and still dont know how to make changes in the edit pages. Hope you liked the grimdark story. Sweet Nightmares.
--Imagination Creations
