But I'm a Monster?

by Bloody Blackness

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Romance, Original Character, Comedy, King Sombra, Queen Chrysalis, Discord, Human, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 1405

A monster, that used to be a normal guy, ends up in a land with talking ponies?

A guy named Gale falls from the sky and lands near ponyville. Twilight saw what looked like a falling star, then gets her friends to go check it out. Gale is a Werewolf with a good amount of control over his inner beast, but he is a Vampire as well, that can resist the thirst to a degree and feeds off of animals, other Vampires, and other Werewolves. But what will the six think of him if they find out. Oh yeah, forget to inform that his lovey dovey, easily made jealous, Vampiric little sister Reassa comes into the picture sometime as well.

first fanfiction, please be gentle. I'm new to the whole writing thing... so yeah. if it suck, tell me, if it's GOOD then please tell me.

Published 2012-12-09 03:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-10 07:34:57 UTC

Chapter 1

CHAPTER 1

Twilight was studying the sky, admiring the beauty of the stars and the moon. As she looked at them, she thought about her friends and how lucky she is to have them. She loved all of them; Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rainbow, and Spike. Generosity, Honesty, Laughter, Kindness, Loyalty, and... um... I guess Spike would be Greed-but that's beside the point.

“Its a nice night to stargaze,” she said to herself as she setup her large telescope. She was watching the stars through the scope when something passed her sight, she took a step back to see what that could have been. She can see something falling out of the sky, she looks at it through her telescope to see a creature engulfed in red and black flame. The flaming creature is headed towards the ground headfirst, it seems to be peacefully unconscious as if the fire that covers him doesn't hurt at all. “what is that thi-,” she was cutoff by the impact of the falling creature. It had landed in a forest, “oh no, the Everfree, I should check to see this is about,” with that said she goes to round up her friends just in case she needs help.

Gale's not doing so hot at the time, he's in the middle of a 20 feet crater in the forest. And if he's not mistaken he just fell from the sky... THE FUCK!!! “What the hell, when did I fall asleep, when did I end up in the sky, and when the fuck was everything so colorful,” as he starts to stand he smells something coming his way. Out of nowhere these wooden wolves jump out of the brush, they made of wood... 'fuck it' with that thought almost as if on Que one leaps for me. In the blink of an eye, wooden beasts is in half and Gale's right hand is covered in blood/sap. The wolves back up, they didn't even see him move. He smiles, “good, I needed frustration to get rid of.”

“I telling you girls, I've never seen anything like this, so watch out,” Twilight warned her friends as they walked to the crash sight.

Rainbow looked exited, “I wounder it is, I hope it's looks as cool as you said, Twilight,” Rainbow exclaimed, thinking of it looked like.

“Am a lil' creeped out at th' thought of that there monster yu' tolled us about, I mean a red an' black flamin critar (KO you know what, I can,t do it. I'm sorry, it's hard to type AJ's accent. Just imagine it) I mean a red and black flaming creature, sounds to me like bad news,” said Applejack.

“Yes I know, but that's why we need to go take care of it,” Twilight said with determination, then the six came to a clearing in the trees made by the impact.

What they saw shocked if not frightened them. A creature standing on two legs in the middle of the crater, dead timberwolves all around him ling in they're own blood/sap. The creature had two arms of which were bathed in sap, he had one hoof (foot) on a barely breathing wolf's head. He was just looking at it, then with a sickeningly wet crunch... he crushed it's head.

Chapter 2

CHAPTER 2

Killing those wolf things was easy, though that is to be expected when I'm the one fighting. They were slow, weak, and fragile, I don't like killing as much as I act like I do, but I have no idea where I am so I'm running on instinct. I've seen Vampire lairs filled with body and blood all over the walls, I've seen grotesque creatures eat living people, and I've seen demons mold about 30 corpses in to masses of flesh that come alive just for fun. But I have not seen wolves made of wood and their blood is like sap, 'I'm gonna have fun cleaning that off me,' I thought with sarcasm. Then I put my foot on the last wolf's head, it looked at me as if I were a monster. And it has a right to, I am by all rights a monster. All of a sudden I feel bad for doing this, but I can't take it back and the wolf's wounds are to great. ' I might as well put it out of it's misery,' I thought, then I use my foot to crush it's skull. I finely realized I was not alone, as I heard gasps to my left.

He killed it, just crushed it's head with ease and the six had no idea who or what it was. Then it looked in their direction with a look that five of the six just thought was scary as buck, the one of them that could recognize the expression was AJ. But of course she was still terrified of him, so she did not dare move, none of her friends did. Then one spoke.

“Um... did they attack you...” Fluttershy almost whispered, to every one's shock, Even Gale was shocked to a degree.

' They. Can. Talk... Holy shit, that's new and their ponies with horns and wings no less. Hah, what a trip,' Gale thought, then decided to answer. “Yeah, but I'm fine. I hope I didn't scare you and you're friends,” Gale paused to see they're reactions. Their jaws dropped to the floor in a cartoonish manner, he then continued, “can you please tell me where I am, I think I just fell from the sky. I don't remember making plans for skydiving through the atmosphere,” he finished.

“Your in Equestria Mr...” Twilight said.

“Gale Attain, and you,” said Gale.

“My name is Twilight sparkle, and these are my friends,” said Twilight, getting more comfortable around him. This Gale was now less scary and more interesting then anything. He wore tattered pants, his hair was a mess, but the tips of his hair were spiked and the color was the same as rust. He was tall, very muscular, and his skin was a pale gray. His eyes were blood red and the whites of his eyes were black. But what scared and saddened her was the amount of scars he had. It seemed unnatural for anything to have that many wound and sill be alive to this day. 'He looks like he's be through more then I can imagine,” she thought.

“I'm Fluttershy, it's... it's nice to meet you,” Fluttershy introduced and again shocking her friends. 'What is he, he's not bad, I can feel him good will. I don't know why, but I'm not afraid to talk to him,' she thought in confusion.

“Name's Applejack” AJ said in a slightly defensive tone, like she was going to keep an eye on him. 'That look that he had, it was the same Big Mac's when he had to take care of those little animals eatin our stock. He looked like he didn't really enjoy it,' she thought feeling conflicted.

“Uh... I-I'm Rainbow Dash,” stuttered Dash, not knowing what to say. 'what is this guy, he can't be real, so much muscle, so many scars. He killed these bloodthirsty timberwolves and he doesn't even have a scratch,' Dash thought completely stunned.

“I am Rarity, a pleasure to meet you're aquanauts Mr Attain” Rarity elegantly said with a small bow. “I have no clue what he is but his fashion is... simple, and yet it still complements him for some reason, is it because of his body? All in all he is very interesting,' she though.

“Hi I'm Pinkie Pie and I like parties, do you like parties, I bet you do like parties. Oh my gosh, I don't know you that means I get to throw a party for you. It's going to be so fun, there's going to be dancing and cake and mmmhhhmmmhhhhmhmmhmhmhmmmmhhhh.” Pinkie was silenced Twilight's hoof in her mouth.

“Sorry about that, so um... what are you exactly Mr. Attain?” Twilight asked.

“Hm, if I tell you, you have to tell me to things; what all of you are and where I am. Deal,” Gale said to her with kindness in his voice. 'I have no idea where I am, but I sense little to no ill intent from them, so it's best to just be nice,' he thought to himself and put on a smile.