Mane*Mart

by MrMusicalPony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life
Length: 2938

When ManeMart comes to town, all of the ponies rush to the new market, but affects small business

When ManeMart comes to town, all of the ponies rush to the new market, but affects small business' that are already in Ponyville, like Sweet Apple Acres and SugarCube Corner. How will the mane 6 cope with the fact that their business' may be shut down as a result of operating under the shadow of a large corporate monster?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-16 02:05:53 UTC

Food Library

“That building is quite large.” Rarity told her friends as they nodded in agreement. They all looked at the building that had begun being built only a few days ago, and was almost ready.

“This here building looks like three of my barns put together!” Applejack said, as the others nodded in agreement again. “What do ya’ll suppose it is?”

“Maybe it’s going to be the new city hall.” Twilight guessed, the others nodding in agreement. She honestly didn’t know what the building was for. There were never buildings this large except for places near the Canterlot Castle. Even then those buildings weren’t used for much other than large ballrooms. Maybe it was going to be a ballroom?

“Well, we’ll just have to wait and see.” Rainbow Dash said, the others nodding in agreement.

***

Twilight walked out of the library, heading over to where the large building was almost complete. Her and her friends had agreed to meet over at the entrance, because it was the grand opening of… Well…whatever it was.

“Twilight!” Pinkie rang out as she signaled her to come join them in the crowd of ponies that were all crowded around the entrance.

She approached her friends and stood next to them as they all waited impatiently for the unveiling of the sign for the building.

“Mares and Gentlecolts” A colt on a microphone spoke out to the crowd. He walked up onto a small stage that was on the left side of the door. He had one a mini-mic set, which looked quite fancy. “We are proud to unveil our newest location of…” He paused for dramatic effect as the veil on the sign was dropped. “Mane-Mart!” The sign that now appeared had large, red letters that read MANE*MART

The crowd cheered as the doors were opened. Everypony rushed inside, as did Twilight and her friends. Twilight had no idea was a ‘mart’ was, and she didn’t exactly like the idea of it anyways. Her friends were all excited, however, so that made her feel better about it.

They walked down the pathway that led to the entrances of isles. They looked to their left and saw multiple cash registers with uniformed ponies working them. On their right they saw isles of food.

“What do you suppose this place is?” Rainbow Dash asked her friends.

“I think this here is called a ‘Food Library’.” Applejack made an educated guess. “Seeing as all of that food there is shelved up all perfect-like.”

“Fooood library.” Pinkie pie repeated.

“Fooo-Fooood Libbrrraarryyy”

“Foooooooddddd Lllllibbrrraaaarrryyy.”

“Food-Food-Food library.”

Twilight looked at her friends as they looked around the ‘Food Library’, saying its name in any fashion they could.

“It’s called a Grocery Store.” Twilight shook her head, walking up the path. Her friends followed. “The only thing is, I’ve only seen a grocery store in one place. It was when I visited Manehatten last year. I had Princess Celestia with me, and I had to ask her what it was. She told me that it was a place to get anything and everything.”

“I bet they don’t sell me!” Rainbow Dash stood up on her hind legs and put her hooves to her hips in awesomeness.

“Mommy, Mommy! Look at my new Rainbow Dash doll!” A filly rang out to her mommy. The girls looked at each other and ran to the isle that it came from.

Every single pony in Ponyville. Dolls. Everypony was a doll. Plushie dolls, regular dolls, and even dolls that you can brush their mane.

“Do I really look like this?” Twilight picked up a doll of herself with her magic. There was only one in stock. There was twenty of Rainbow Dash, however.

Rainbow Dash grinned. “I like this Food Library. It not only has food, but it also has me!”

“Applejack, the Lovable Farm Pony.” Applejack read a box that contained her. “Well. Ah don’t know whether to be scared or to be flattered.”

“I do love how they did this dress.” Rarity played with hers. Everyone played with their respective dolls or plushies, all except Fluttershy.

“I…I don’t know. This all seems…strange.” Fluttershy decided to let the others play with their dolls. She walked around the store by herself, passing by other ponies that pushed around carts of food and other things. Fluttershy looked down the aisles until she saw one named ‘Pet Food.’

Fluttershy smiled as she walked down the aisle. Everything she needed for all of her animal friends in one place.

***

“That will be fifty-two bits!” The cashier excitedly told Fluttershy as she paid for all of the food. “Would you like help getting those things home with you, mam?” The cashier pony asked. She shook her head.

“The cart will be fine, thank you.” She gave five more bits for the cart rental service. She had completely forgotten about her friends, as she was so happy that she could now get what she needed in one place.

***

“What in the hay is this?” Applejack looked at a large tub of apples, all of which ponies were loading into their carts. Each apple taken was lost business for Applejack.

“Look at all of the cakes!” Pinkie rang out as she looked at the cakes that were being sold at the small bistro area.

“Pinkie,” Applejack shook her head. “You live in a place with cakes.” She continued to watch as her business was being taken away from her. Pinkie came to this realization.

“Wait…” Pinkie’s face went to despair. “Then that means if all of these ponies are shopping here and can get multiple items, then they have no reason to go to Sugarcube Corner. Not only that, the supply here is very large which means that the amount of demand makes the prices incredibly low, which in return makes ponies want to buy them. This is a contrast to the Cakes business which only two ponies make sweets, while I’m sure a large abundance of bakers work here. With this, Mane-Mart will have better business with cakes and other pastries than Sugarcube Corner will. The location is in the middle of Ponyville and is in a nice walking distance, and not only that, ponies can get multiple things. They won’t need to go to Sweet Apple Acres or Sugarcube corner and waste all of that time going to multiple places when they can just come here for everything they need. Prices here are two times less than ours, and are easier to reach. We are no competition for the large corporation that has breached out little town!”

“What?”

To Be Continued

The Interview

“Twilight, you are the best student a teacher could have!”

“Well, thank you Princess Celestia!” Twilight played with her dolls. She giggled and played in the solitude of her library. When Spike had left to go help Rarity, as he always did, she had immediately started playing with her Twilight and Princess Celestia dolls in the Canterlot play set.

“Well, Ah’m happy for you Twi’!” Twilight tried her hardest to master Applejack’s accent. She made her Applejack doll trot up to them.

“Well, thank you Applejack!” Twilight said to Applejack. Applejack danced around in joy for Twilight and her accomplishments.

“Ah’m afraid Ah have to go back to the farm now.”

“I also need to attend to something in Manehattan.” Celestia added. They both left the plastic Twilight.

“Forever alone…” the plastic Twilight sighed.

“No you’re not, Twilight!” Twilight grabbed a black colt doll from behind the Canterlot play set. “You’ll never be alone.”

“Oh Tom!” Plastic Twilight squealed. “You’re everything I ever wanted!” Plastic Twilight kissed Plastic Tom. Suddenly, a plastic, armored stallion appeared and stole Plastic Tom away. “No!” Plastic Twilight screamed. “Dawn! Kyris! I need your help!” two plastic dolls appeared from behind the play set. A teal mare and a white colt ran after the armored stallion.

Twilight was having fun making up her own adventures with her toys, which most she made up characters for because they were only random models. Ever since Mane*Mart came to town she was a bit skeptical about the idea, but all of these toys made her happy. She secretly played with them. She didn’t want her friends to think of her as a filly for playing with dolls.

“Oh Tom, thank Celestia you’re safe.” Plastic Twilight hugged him.

“Where are your friends?” he asked, looking around.

“Dawn and Kyris are very mysterious! They help and then vanish!” Plastic Twilight continued to hug him. “We’ll get married, and we’ll live happily ever after!”

“Only one problem, Twilight,” Plastic Tom said. “We don’t have the Royal Canterlot Wedding play set!”

Twilight dropped her toys.

“To be continued!” She announced to herself. “…After I run to the store and pick up the play set!” She squealed in delight.

***

“Alright, little friends.” Fluttershy dropped the bags of food. She could get more food for less and all in the same place. She felt a little bad though, buying apples from Mane*Mart instead of from Sweet Apple Acres, but it was more convenient for her. The animals started to dig into the food. “I’m sure one less person buying her apples won’t hurt.”

***

“We’ve lost over a hundred customers!” Applejack cried out as she sat at her apple stand in the marketplace, which was almost deserted now. Other merchants had already gone off to sell their products to Mane*Mart. Applejack couldn’t do that, though, since Mane*Mart already had an apple orchard that was ran specifically for the store. What luck?

“We’re going to have to sell the barn at this rate.” She sighed. She sat there in silence, thinking. “Maybe Ah’ll have to take up something else…”

***

“Well, Applejack, I see you have a good work ethic, reliable references and a well written resume… Welcome aboard the Mane*Mart team!” The manager shook hooves with Applejack, whom was wearing a full suit. “I see you’re used to working with food, so you’ll be in charge of handling the fruits and vegetables, restocking and making sure there’s not one bruise on anything! We like to keep everything looking fresh.” Applejack nodded as he gave her instructions.

“Ah’ll do my best, sir!” She tried her best to smile, but the thought of working in a store and being ‘professional’ made her sick to her stomach. At least she wasn’t running the cash register, she thought. She wasn’t very good with math, even if all she was doing was pressing buttons. Seeing so many numbers made her mind feel stressed.

“You start tomorrow morning, early. Be here at 6’A.M sharp! Don’t be late, or else it will be deducted from your pay.”

“Yes, sir!”

***

“You got a job, sis?” Applebloom stood behind Applejack as she undressed from her interview.

“Ah had to, Applebloom. At this rate, we’re not going to be able to sell enough apples to make enough profit to live. We’ll just have to wait until Zap Apple season to come to make some more profit.”

“But what about our normal apples?” She asked. Applejack sighed.

“Ah don’t know, Applebloom.”

“Ah think you shouldn’t take this job.” Applebloom protested. “You don’t like being professional! Ah know you don’t!”

“I have to.” Applejack ended the conversation there.

***

“You’re what?!” Pinkie Pie couldn’t believe her ears. Mr. and Mrs. Cake were selling the business.

“I know it’s hard, Pinkie.” Mrs. Cake put a hoof around Pinkie. “We have no other choice though. We’re still a family though, Pinkie. We met through the business, but just because we’re selling it doesn’t mean we can’t still be a family. I think it will be better for the babies as well if we had a normal home.” Mr. Cake nodded in agreement.

“We’re both taking up jobs at Mane*Mart as bakers, so we’ll still be baking!” He smiled, lightening up the situation. “Maybe you should get a job there too, Pinkie.”

“I don’t want a job at Mane*Mart though!”

“Well, Pinkie, you’re going to have to do something! You can’t just lope around our new house all day.” Mrs. Cake told her. Pinkie sighed. They were right.

“I’ll go turn in an application…” She walked out of what was soon to be an empty building within a couple of days.

***

“What are you going to do, Rarity?” Sweetie Bell asked.

“A little bit of…competition is good, Sweetie Bell.” Rarity assured her while working on a new dress. “They may have lower prices and more clothes, but ponies only really need clothing for special occasions, and that is my specialty!”

They waited all day for a customer to come in. They hadn’t had any for the past few days, but Rarity kept that a secret from Sweetie Bell. She didn’t want to have her sister think they were financially in trouble.

“No one’s coming, are they?” Sweetie Bell glanced at Rarity, who didn’t answer. “Please answer me, sister! You don’t have to be alone on this…”

“We haven’t had a customer in over three days!” Rarity spat it out. She started to pace the floor. “We usually make quite a bit of bits a week, but we haven’t made any yet, and it’s already Wednesday! We’re in trouble, Sweetie Bell.” She admitted.

“They do sell dresses at Mane*Mart. Granted they’re not as stylish as mine, they’re still cheaper than mine. I can’t bring down our prices though to meet ours, because that would mean we would be paying more to make it than to sell it! I don’t know how they afford to do it!”

“It’s because they have multiple ponies working on dresses, and they buy the materials in bulk. They most likely have certain facilities that are specifically for Mane*Mart that provide the materials. More ponies to make them, plus bulk prices mean that there are a lot of dresses for not a lot of money.” Sweetie smiled from her knowing the answer. That didn’t make Rarity feel any better, however. “But uh… I’m sure there’s a lot more that goes into it.” Her proud smile turned to a nervous one. Rarity sighed.

“My last resort is to get a job at Mane*Mart. There’s nothing left to do!” She paced around the floor. “We have no income otherwise!”

“I’ll fetch your business dress!” Sweetie Bell obliged.

***

“You here for a job too?” Pinkie asked Rarity as she entered the waiting room. She nodded.

“It seems that Mane*Mart is affecting everypony.” Rarity sat next to Pinkie, who wasn’t happy about the situation either. “At least I’ll be working with one of my best friends.” She smiled, and Pinkie smiled back.

“And me.” Applejack walked into the room, wearing a full suit. “They made me hiring manager! Mr. Mane was having trouble with all of the incoming applications that he needed a hiring manager, and he picked me since I’m the hardest worker.”

“That means you’re going to hire us, right?” Pinkie’s face glistened. Applejack shook her head.

“I have to interview you first. Even though I know both of you already, it’s store rules.” Rarity and Pinkie noticed that Applejack’s accent wasn’t as heavy as normal.

“What happened to your accent?” Pinkie asked. Applejack chuckled.

“Oh, just trying to be a little more professional is all.”

***

“So, Pinkie, tell me about yourself.” Applejack put her hooves on the desk, professionally of course.

“Weeeelllll, I love parties and I love cake, and I love my friends very, very much!”

“It says here on your resume that you’ve worked as a caterer and an MC? Tell me about those work experiences.”

“They were fun.” Pinkie simply said with a big grin on her face. They both were quiet for a moment until Applejack started writing something down on a piece of paper.

“Thank you Ms. Pie. That’s all I’ll need. Please send in Ms. Rarity on your way out. We’ll call you if you got the job.”

“I think that went well.” Pinkie told Rarity as she walked out the door. Rarity stood up, walking into Applejack’s office and shutting the door behind her.

“Your resume is outstanding, Ms. Rarity. I’ll only need to ask you a few questions.” Rarity smiled at the compliment.

“How well do you deal with customers? Do you always try to be polite even when they aren’t? Would you say you’re a good helper?”

“Why of course!” Rarity began. “I try my best to be of the best service to every pony. While I’ve never worked in this kind of profession, I do believe I’m up to the challenge!”

“Welcome aboard, Ms. Rarity.” Applejack reached out a hoof which Rarity graciously shook.

“Oh thank you, Applejack.” She stopped, thinking for a moment. “I mean ‘Ms. Jack’. It will be so great to work with you and Pinkie.”

Applejack didn’t say anything, but only looked down at her desk.

“She… did get the job, right?” Rarity tried to look into her eyes, which were faced down at the table. Applejack shook her head.

Intermission: The Whale

Something to tide you guys over until the next chapter.

Once upon a time there was a pony and a whale.  One day, the pony started talking to the whale.

“Hey whale! What’s up?” The whale said nothing back.

“Hey whale! I’m talking to you!” But again, the whale didn’t answer. Finally the pony got so upset; he started to yell at the whale.

“Hey whale! I am talking to you!” Then the whale ate him.

Turns out the whale couldn’t talk at all.

The End

I'll probably delete this when the next chapter is out.