Celestial Love Book 1: Odd Re-post

by LunaLover1990

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Slice of Life, Sex, Human
Length: 7441

A young man from Earth falls through a strange portal, and enters into a relation ship with Luna.

When a young man named General Smiddy falls through some kind of unknown portal and ends up in Equestria, he meets the ebony-blue Princess Luna, who he has always been in love with, and asks her out to dinner. Before long, dinner escalates into something more.

Rated Mature for Sex and infrequent vulgar language.

I re-posted the book because I messed up something in it when trying to edit the chapters. Hope it's better now.

Published 2012-12-06 12:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-22 07:46:10 UTC

The Seed Is Planted

Hi there. My name is General Smiddy, and I've got a story to tell you.

I craved companionship growing up, as I had very few friends. I loved science, history, and reading, but was mocked by kids in my school and all over my hometown for it. It was because of this that I became a brony.

I started out as a closet brony, afraid of being harrassed even more by the bullies. But, one day, after hearing a song on youtube, made by a brony, for bronies, I felt better about my bronydom, and I began expressing it at school, at home, all across town, everywhere! I didn't care who knew, I didn't care if they called me shit like "ponyfag", or, "horse fucker", or any of that crap. Actually, nobody really made fun of me that much for being a brony, and I mostly just ignored the few insults I received.

As a brony, I of course had a favorite character. That character was Luna. I had always felt a connection to the moon, even when I was young, so I guess it made sense that Luna was my favorite character. But, it was more than just liking Luna. I... I loved her. I knew she wasn't real, so I didn't even think to myself that I loved her, but... I knew that I loved her, deep down. I just... I knew that it would just make me seem like a freak if I said I loved a cartoon character, but... Aw fuck, I just... I couldn't help it. I was in love with a technicolor pony, and it was weird, but... I didn't mind.

One morning as I was getting ready for school, I looked through the window. The crescent moon that early morning was beautiful. As She peeked her head through the window, I noticed that an odd light surrounded the moon. The light was growing stronger and stronger. Before long, the light was blindingly bright. Finally, when I could see again, who else should I be looking at but Luna, the pony I was in love with. "Who are you?" She demanded, extremely angry. I looked around, and I noticed I was in some kind of bedroom. I walked around a bit, arousing more anger from Luna. As I looked in an emerald mirror, I couldn't believe what I had become: I was an alicorn with only my front hooves and no rear. A scaled fish-tail was in their place. I was probably about 17 hands high, 6 hands long. I had alabaster fur, ruby red eyes, and blue-and-red mane. Upon my flank was a cutie mark that matched me well, both here, and in the real world: A trident.

I just stared at my reflection and what I had become. As I looked at the me-that-wasn't-me, Luna spoke again, angrier this time, stating, "Again, who are you, and what in Equestria are you doing in my bed chambers?!" I just turned and looked at her, dumbfounded to see the pony that I was in love with face to face. I just stuttered, choking out, "Uh... um, I, uh... Oh... God..." I was scared shitless. I didn't know what to do! I wasn't awkward around the opposite sex of my own species, but then again, I wasn't in love with any of them. Plus, I mean, I had just gone from a human getting ready for school to a fish-tailed creature from a technicolor cartoon! I mean, you couldn't really blame me for being confused.

It was then that I realized I was blushing, and I looked away in embarrassment. 'C'mon, you jackass, say something! ANYTHING!' I thought to myself, confused. Finally, I looked at my hooves, and spoke. "Good Princess," I began, still a bit frightened, though I was much more confident. "My name is Sir General Tridentus. I would be delighted to tell you my story, but I must say, you are even more beautiful in person."
"B-beaut...? What do you mean?" She asked, blushing a bit.
"Well, Good Princess, it's just, you are the most beautiful mare I have ever seen! I mean, I have only seen pictures of you, but, well, in person..."
"Beautiful? Why, there has never been anypony who said such a thing to me... I-I do not know... I mean, I am quite flattered, of course, but... Good sir, are you just toying with me? I certainly hope not, as I do not take kindly to those who tease me..." She replied, warning me with a threatening tone to her voice.

"Of course not, My Beautiful Princess! You are the most beautiful, most divine mare I have ever seen! Good lady, I just... Oh, my, I will of course tell you my story! But first, I must ask you: Would you please join me this night to sup? I just, I would like to get to know you. And of course, I will tell you who I am over the meal. Please, just agree, and I will be happy to tell you everything you want!"

The dark blue mare relaxed a bit when she realized I was serious, and she agreed, saying, "Well... I suppose so. I mean, it could not hurt. But mind you, I will not have anything improper!"

I grinned at her softly and replied, stating, "Oh, Good Princess, you don't have to worry anything of it! I'm a proper young stallion, and I don't plan to try any such things with you..." I chuckled a bit and continued, joking, "Unless, of course, you wanted to. Haha!" After that, Luna frowned a bit, then returned to her smiling expression and giggled a bit as well, knowing I wasn't ACTUALLY suggesting anything.

"Very well then," She continued, a wide yet refined grin upon her face. "I suppose I shall have dinner with you. Shall 7:00 P.M. at Fish Scales & Hay Hooves do for you, Sir Trident?"
"Anything for you, Good Princess. Oh, but if you will excuse me, I must be going. There is, eh, something I must attend to. I bid thee adieu!" I spoke as I turned to walk out the door. As I closed the door, I heard her swoon a bit, and I smiled, glad I had been able to get her to dinner. I left the castle and flew down to Ponyville, hoping to be able to get a job and somewhere to stay while I was here. I knew it might be a long time before I got home.

The Time to Sup

I ended up flying down to Sweet Apple Acres and talking to Applejack. "Well, shoot," She exclaimed at the sight of me. "Ah ain't never seen nopony like you. Wha's yer name, stranger?

"Oh, uh, my name is General Tridentus. I'm what most might call a, sea alicorn. My people are a bit rare, so most have forgotten we even exist. But, in any case, I would like a job on your farm here, ma'am." I replied, a bit unsure of what to say. "Well then," Applejack continued. "Ah guess ya'll could herd the animals that stray from their grounds. They can be a bit difficult to control, but nothin' a strong fella like yerself can't handle. Right?"
"Right. Thank you very much for the job." I replied, glad to have the job. "Well, I'll be going now. Got to find somewhere to stay while I'm here. Good bye, ma'am."
"Well, alright then. See ya'll another time!" She said as I walked away.

As I flew around Ponyville, I was concerned about what I was going to do, and how I would get home. But, since there wasn't much I could do at that moment, I simply kept looking for somewhere to stay. It was about an hour before I came across the ad for a room.

For rent: 1 room, 130 bits a month, full bedroom, half bath. Inquire at the Carousel Boutique; Ask for Rarity

Well, after that, I flew right on over to the Carousel Boutique. When I got there, I walked in. Instantly, I was greeted with a smiling pink- and lavendar-maned unicorn filly. "Hi there mister! My name's Sweetie Belle. Can I help you?" The young unicorn spoke with vigor, cute yet startling. Despite the shock I felt at Sweetie Belle's surprising greeting, I put on a smile and chuckled. I spoke, saying, "Oh, my, well hello! Well, ah, is Rarity here? I noticed the ad about a room being for rent, and I needed somewhere to stay."
"Oh, sorry," Sweetie Belle replied. "She's actually not. I know you're probably in a hurry, but if you want, you're welcome to come in while you wait!"
I looked at a nearby clock. It' said it was only 3:00, so I nodded as I said, "Alright. Thank you." and followed the little unicorn inside.

As I passed through the door, allowing my tail to become visible, she didn't stare in astonishment. Most ponies here had stared when they saw me, so I was surprised. But, nevertheless, I never asked her, and she never said anything.

As I walked through the shop, I realized not only how beautiful the dresses Rarity made truly were, but also that she made more than just dresses and outer clothes. Oh no, apparently, she also made lingerie, gloves, boots, saddles... Pretty much any clothes that could cover a pony's body from hoof to ear! I was just... Amazed by the colors! There were reds, blues, greens, violets, yellows, mixtures, even colors I'd never seen before! It was amazing. I almost weeped at the beautiful colors there. 'Hmm...' I thought to myself. 'Maybe, if I were to be in a relationship with her, I could buy some things here for L-'
"Excuse me, mister!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed.
"Wha?" I replied, snapping out of my trance.

Sweetie Belle giggled as she spoke again, asking, "Would you like a little tea?"
"Oh, uh... Sure, thank you! Thank you very much." I said, still a bit dazed. She smiled and then quickly ran off into a small room that I assumed was the kitchen. Once she got there, I got up and started looking at the different dresses and clothing. I touched each gently, as if I was handling an antique pot, and each time it touched my hoof and leg, it was softer than anything I had ever felt before.

"Finding things to your liking?" Sweetie Belle asked as she appeared from the kitchen again, holding a tray of tea and tea cakes. "Oh, eh..." I started, confused. "I'm, not really looking for anything, just... Looking at these dresses and clothes, they're just... So soft."
"Hehe. Well, they are made of the finest silk in all of Equestria!" She said as she handed me a cup of tea and a single pastry.
"And what kind of silk, pray tell, would that be?"
"Moonsilk." She replied with an almost frighteningly-happy face. I just grinned at the response and nodded my thanks as I began to slowly sip the tea. "Mm. Jasmine, my favorite. Thank you." I just sat there beside the small unicorn as we awaited the return of Rarity. Finally, at about 5:30, the door opened and Rarity came in, eliciting a cheer from Sweetie Belle.

"Rarity! Rarity! Someone answered to that ad you put up!" The young filly yelled as she embraced her big sister in a hug. "Oh, really? How wonderful!" The violet-maned mare said in her usual accent. "I certainly hope they're available! Now, where is this kind p- Oh my..." As Rarity gazed over my horn, wings, and tail, she immediatly started asking all sorts of questions. "Who-who are you, what are you, where are you from, blah blah blah blah!" Was all I could make out before Sweetie Belle suddenly stopped her. "Oh my, I've forgotten my manners. Please forgive me." She said.

"Uh... Sure. No sweat." I replied as I grinned slightly, trying to make the mare feel better.
"Oh, my, well then, um... Ok, let me begin. As you probably know, I am Rarity. And you are?"
"Tridentus. General Tridentus. But, honestly, I'd prefer General please." I returned.
"Alright then. So then, General, what type of... Um, pony are you?"

"Sea alicorn. Rare breed of pony. I don't blame you for being amazed, we've been thought to be extinct for thousands of years now. I'm actually not 100% sure about my breed myself. I've not lived in my ancesteral homelands at all, I've read very few of the tomes of my people... I just, don't know what to do with myself. But, in any case, a certain situation has landed me here in Equestria with all sorts of other ponies, and I need somewhere to stay. So, do you think I could stay here?"

"Hmm. Well, can you afford the rent?" She continued. "Because, if you might have trouble, I can lower the rent just a bit to help you out."
"No no, don't worry about that, I can afford the rent just fine." I chuckled to her. I noticed that occasionally she would still glance over at my tail.

I knew it would probably time for me to leave soon, so I looked over at the clock. 6:00 PM. "Woah, I need to go now." I exclaimed.
"Excuse me?" Rarity asked.
"I have to go. I am having dinner with Princess Luna!"
As I ran out the door, I could hear her whisper, "Wha... L-Luna?" In shock. I chuckled a bit and began flying so that I could make it to the Canterlot ristorante in time.

.....

I arrived at the restraunt at 6:50. Coincidentally, Luna arrived at the same time. "Good evening, Good Princess." I said as I bowed before her. "Good evening, Sir Tridentus. Have you accomplished what you needed to get done?" She responded, curious. I nodded calmly as I said, "Oh yes, don't you worry. And again, I must thank you for agreeing to dinner." As the two of us walked in together, the other restauraunt patrons stared in wonder that somepony was with Princess Luna, even more surprised at what kind of pony it was with her.

Once we made it to our table, the waiter came immediately. "Good day, Madame and Mosieur. How are you this eve?" He asked us.
"Quite good." I replied, smiling at the quick service.
"Likewise." Luna said.
"Very well then," The waiter continued. "What could I get for you all to drink?"
I thought a minute what would be good, then I decided. "Could I get a glass of your best vintage of Clover wine?" I asked. I had tasted wine in my world, but wondered what it tasted like here in Equestria. "Very well then. And you, Princess?"
"I suppose I shall have the same." She said with a sligt grin. I was surprised, but said nothing.
"Well, I suppose you might as well just bring a full bottle then, please." I continued, grinning.

Upon the request, the waiter nodded kindly and hurried away to retrieve the wine. As we read over the menu and waited for the waiter to return, I began to tell Luna my story. "So then," I started. "Let me tell you about who I am. In truth, I'm not General Tridentus. I am actually named General Smiddy. I'm part of a species called humans who live in a different dimension. We are very different than ponies. We are like furless apes who stand upright. In that world, ponies are very different from here in Equestria. Ponies aren't very colorful, they don't have wings or horns, and they don't talk."

"But," I continued, optimistic. "In my world, we can see Equestria and the people of Equestria. There is... A cartoon called My Litle Pony that shows you all. It has had several different happenings. It's exactly like everything here in your world. And, Luna, I... I'd always liked you in the show." I could see Luna beginning to blush, and I could feel the heat of my cheeks copying the action. "I've always felt connected to you, and I've always wanted to meet you. And, now that I have met you, I have to tell you this, for I might never get a chance to tell you again."

I came closer and whispered into her ear, "Luna... I-I think I'm in love with you." As I pulled back far enough to see her expression, I realized she had a discontent look on her face, and I knew I had messed up. "Oh, Luna... I-I'm so sorry! God, I'm such a fucking idiot, I must've just freaked you out! I'm sorry, I'll just pay the bill and go. I... I am so sor-"
"No. Do not go." She replied, interrupting me.

"Wh-what?" I replied, shocked.
"I-I said don't go. General, I cannot explain this, but... I feel connected to you as well. And, General, I think I..." And a moment later, she leaned in and pushed her lips to mine. That... That told me everything that I needed to know.

The Truths of Love

As we headed back to the castle that night, we continued to embrace and kiss eachother, a bit drunk from the wine that the restauraunt had served. Between the two of us, we drank an entire bottle of the Vintage 61 wine, and we could taste the sweet, syrupy taste on eachother's breath as we locked lips. We didn't actually say we were together, but it was pretty much implied.

Luna and I both knew that the rumor mill was a great danger for any couple, so we decided that we would keep our relationship a secret for as long as possible. We would hang out together alot, but we just let people think we were good friends. The first night, after we got back from dinner, we went straight to her room and locked the door. She actually was a gamer, apparently, and so we spent a few hours playing games. She had all sorts of amazing things! She had World of Unicraft on her computer, she had Poncraft on her PegasusBox, Pony of Persia: The Sands of Time on her PlayStable 2, and classic Ponio games on her Pontendo 64!

I shocked her by beating her in games and challenges when we played multiplayer. I was an amateur gamer, but somehow I kept beating her, despite her greatest efforts. "Wow, you are good! I've never met one who could beat me in such games!" She exclaimed after the 23rd Ponio vs. Peguigi battle we had.
"Hehe, guess I've just got a bit of talent!" I said as I blushed. Suddenly, I closed my eyes and opened them back up to see her looking at me seductively. "Ehehe... Wh-what're you lookin' at?" I asked her, frightened a bit by the sudden change in her additude. "You." She began, coming closer. "You are just so... Handsome. I... I want you... T-to take me."

"Woah! Luna, hey... I'm, flattered by such an offer, but... Luna, we've known eachother only a day. I mean, don't you think we should wait?" I responded, surprised. It wasn't that I didn't want such a thing... I did more than anything, but... I mean, I wanted to get to know her before I did such a thing with her. "No," She continued. "I do not want to wait. I want to do it right here, right now. Please!" I didn't want her to beg, but I couldn't bring myself to do it.
"L-Luna, look. You're drunk. I mean, You're beautiful, and... I love you, but... I want us to do this when we're both ready. I just... I don't want the two of us waking up tomorrow and regretting this." I said it with all of the gentle kindness I could, though Luna still began to cry.

"Oh, Luna, p-please, don't... Look, I'm just not ready for it just yet, but... If you want, we could just... Sleep with eachother tonight. Not have sex, just... Sleep together. I'm sorry, it's not that I don't want to... You know, but, I want to be ready, and I want you to be ready. Ok?"

Luna thought a moment, then wiped her tears away and put on a smile. "Okay then. I suppose this shall have to suffice for the time being. And, speaking of sleeping..." She yawned. "I think I should get to sleep. Would you like to join me?"
I smiled kindly and agreed, saying, "Alright then. But nothing more, just sharing a bed." She lay down upon her bed, and I joined her with a gentle sigh. I embraced her deeply and allowed her to drift off to sleep. 'Ah,' I thought to myself. 'This is... Wonderful. I'm not only in Equestria, but I'm here, in bed, with Luna, the mare that I love. I'm not sure what kind of dream this is, but I never want to wake up.' Suddenly, I realized this could be a dream, and I bit my leg.

"Ow!" I whispered. 'Well, not a dream. Thank God.' I felt Luna shift a bit as she snuggled in deeper. I allowed her to do so as I nuzzled her soft neck. Before long, I also dozed off.

.....

The next day, I woke up early, and heard somepony knocking. I woke Luna up too, and so, to prevent any rumors, I hopped on the PlayStable and popped in a game in 3 seconds flat while Luna went and opened the door. "Oh, hello sir guard. What do you need? Me and my new friend were just playing on my system and I would like to get back to that soon." She proclaimed. "Oh, of course Your Majesty," The guard replied. "We're just making sure you are okay. We had heard you had gone out for dinner with somepony last night, and I was sent to make sure you had gotten back safe and sound."

"Well, as you can see, I'm just fine. Thank you for checking in on me, but I need to get back to the game, make sure General isn't trying to cheat or anything." The dark blue princess replied. She closed the door and walked back. I had chosen the game out of the pile that was not only her favorite, but mine as well, apparently: Super Ponio Brothers 3! I giggled at that, because, ironically, in the real world, I wasn't a huge fan of Mario, but in Equestria, I loved the ponified version.

"So then, General... About last night, and how I tried to..."
"Yeah, I know, I know. It's alright. You were drunk, you couldn't help yourself." I grinned at her, reassuring her that I was okay with her attempts to seduce me the night before. At first, she just blushed in embarrassment, then she smiled back. "Well, I am glad you are so kind and forgiving. And... I am glad you want to get to know me before you... Take me. You are quite the gentleman." Suddenly, she brought me closer and kissed me passionately.

We both got killed by Ponrahna Plants on the game, but we continued kissing despite the death. I allowed my tongue to writhe into the yet-unfamiliar territory, and Luna welcomed it. I ran my tongue over the sensitive skin of her mouth, and I enjoyed the taste of her breath. But a moment later, we broke the kiss and continued to play the game.

"Want to go PVP on WoU after this, Luna?" I asked her.
"Ha! You are on!" She replied. As we played the game, I let my wing cover her, and she accepted it gratefully.
'Hehe... Just a few days ago, if anybody had told me I would be doing something like this... I would have called them nuttier than squirrel shit. But now...' Suddenly, she let her head lean against my shoulder dreamily.

.....

A few hours later, I was flying with Luna to a new gamestore I had heard was in Fillydelphia. It was called Ponio Omega, and it had all sorts of edited versions of Super Ponio Bros. and Legend of Pegazelda. I told Luna to pick out any games she wanted and I'd buy 'em for her. She insisted that it would be rude of her to let me do such a thing, but I told her I wouldn't let her spend a single penny. I would buy everything for her here, no matter what the price.

I decided I might as well grab a few things for myself. "Hmm... Dr. Whooves: Welcome to the Universe?" I started, "Sounds cool. I might just get this..." As Luna continued to look for games, I checked how much money I had. 400 bits. More than I thought. Since I had plenty of money, I bought the 30 bit game and waited for Luna to finish looking.

"Hey Luna," I said as I walked over to the ebony-shaded blue alicorn. "You found what you want?" I looked at her hooves and was surprised to see she only had 2 games. One was an edited Ponio Bros. game (it was the Nightmare Night version), while the other was a love game. It was called Choices in Romance. "Oh, uh, yes. I am ready to go if you are, General." She replied. I nodded and just walked over to the counter with her.

"And we'll take these too, please." I said as I handed the bits to the worker. He bagged up the items and handed them to us. We walked out of the store in a joyful skipping motion. We flew into the air and turned towards the capital city of Equestria. She leaned her head on my shoulder as we flew. "Mmm. I love you, Luna." I whispered.
"And I, you." She replied in a soft tone.

We flew off into the sky as the sun began to set. "This is going to be great..." I mumbled in joy.

.....

That night, I stayed with her again. The night after I would have to stay in the room I'd rented from Rarity, but tonight, I stayed with Luna. It was mostly a repeat of the previous night. Video games, make-out session, et cetera. But, at about 9:00, things changed.

When 9:00 came along, the power suddenly went out and the heat went off. Now, normally that wouldn't be a problem, but a horrible storm was coming. It got extremely cold, and we were both shivering. I noticed she was cold, so I pulled her closer and embraced her in an attempt to warm her chilled body. She immediately snuggled up closer to me and left herself to me.

I could feel how cold she was. She felt as though she were made of ice. I knew she must have been feeling great pain from the cold, so I drew my wing across her and cloaked her with it. As I did so, she nuzzled my neck lovingly. I finally felt her stop shivering, and her flesh began to heat back up a bit.

"Are y-you okay?" I asked, shivering a bit.
"I am f-f-fine. Now I am, anyways. Thanks to you." She replied. She looked at me longingly, and I smiled. I kissed her deeply, hoping to help her some more. Thankfully, it worked. The love that I put into the kiss warmed her, first starting in her lips and muzzle, then her shoulders, and before long, I could feel it emanating all over from her.

Finally, I broke the kiss. "Luna... The power probably won't come back on for quite a while, so... Are you tired?" She nodded. "Then let's sleep. I've got a big day planned for us tomorrow." As we settled into the bed, I held her close and let her move into a comfortable position. She allowed her head to rest upon my chest as I wrapped my legs around her soft back and chest. "Good night, my Beautiful Princess..." I whispered as I dozed off.

.....

The next morning, I woke Luna bright and early. "Luna. Luna, come on, wake." I gently said. "Wake up now, love!" I couldn't think of a way to wake up the deeply dozing mare. Finally, something came to mind. I nibbled her left ear gently and tickled her cheek. It seemed idiotic, but it worked. She woke giggling to the sudden sensation. "Stop. Stop! Hehe, stop, General, please! I am awake! Please!" She begged harder and harder, but I just kept tickling her. She tried to push me away, but I kept it up. Amazingly, this continued for a solid 15 minutes before I finally stopped, leaving her hair rough and disheveled

"Oops..." I continued. "Maybe you should, eh... Fix your hair. Sorry 'bout that!"
Luna smiled as she replied, "Oh, it is alright. I will just take a shower right quick. Please just give me about 15 minutes, and I should be right out!"

I waited calmly for her to finish when I started looking around in her game cabinets. When I looked in the cabinets, I found some interesting games. Learn to Make the Love, Sexy Time, Love on Me... All sorts of pornographic video games. "Oh my... Wh-what is... Oh God!" I was just shocked by what I was seeing. I put the games back into the cabinets, blushing.

When Luna walked out from the bathroom, wrapped in a linen robe, she noticed her cabinets had been opened. "Oh dear..." Luna started, blushing. "I... Suppose you saw those, then?"
"Y-yeah." I said awkwardly. "Uh... Sorry about rummaging through your cabinets. I was just, eh, looking to see what games you had that I hadn't seen, and... Well, that happened. Ehehe!"

As Luna blushed, she finally started smiling as she said, "Oh... That is alright! I am sure you were bound to see those eventually! Oh, but I am so ashamed. But, if it makes it any better, I never used those so I could... You know. In fact, I've never done... That."

I chuckled at how she stumbled over the embarrassing word. "You mean... Masterbating? Don't worry, I believe you. You're too sweet and innocent to have tried such a thing!" Luna smiled and blushed again, giddy both that I had forgiven her, and that I had complimented her in such a way.

"Well, in any case," I continued. "I'll go shower right quick, and I'll be right back out so we can go out for the day."
I walked into her bathroom and closed the door. I went right to the shower and turned the faucet. I had always preferred hot water to cold, so I turned it up as hot as I could. As the searing hot water burned my flesh, I gritted my teeth and grabbed a bar of soap.

As I scrubbed my skin with the fragrant lye, my skin slowly adjusted to the burning drops going and didn't feel quite so much pain. When I went to reach for shampoo, I realized that there was quite an assortment. There were scented female shampoos, musky male shampoos, all sorts of things. Before long, I decided on an oak-scented men's musk. I squirted the gel into my mane and scrubbed it in gently-yet-thouroughly.

Suddenly, I heard an odd noise outside, and I heard Luna scream in pain. I jumped out of the shower, wrapped a towel around myself, and burst through the door to see what was going on.

Well, it didn't take long to see what had happened. There was some kind of squat creature attacking Luna. It had 4 legs and 2 arms, stood about 2 feet tall, and had a hideous shark-like head. The beast was ripping at her flesh and trying to cut her eyes out.

The sight of that made my blood run cold. I ran towards the beast and knocked it into the wall. I stomped on it's chest and it began to bleed a dark fluid that was different than any regular blood. I broke the beast's left arm, but it ripped at my exposed leg, and I began to feel excruciating pain. Finally, not caring what happened, I stomped as hard as I could on the little bastard's skull, causing it to crack.

I ran over to Luna and helped her get up. I noticed that the only damage done to her was a small scar on her face near her left eye. "Luna," I started, trying to wake her up. "Are you ok?" Luna didn't open her eyes at first, drawing some fear from me. But, finally, she opened them and spoke. "G-General? Aagh! My face! My face, it is burning!" She cried in pain.
"Calm down, calm down 'hon. It's alright. Let's just get you to a doctor or something." I slowly walked her to the castle's medical office.

When I got her in there, I just led her with me to the receptionist. "What happened?" The receptionist asked, surprised by the still-bleeding scar on Luna's face. "We can explain that later, just get us to the ER so we can help her!" I replied. The green-coated mare helped me lead Luna into the ER until we got her onto a gurney and started pushing. I followed the mare until she got to a small room with a single bed within.

"Just stay here, the doctor will be here in but a moment." The mare said as she trotted off. I helped Luna into the bed as she winced in pain. I gently touched her face, barely grazing the flesh with my hoof before she cried out in pain. "Aaugh!" She cried as I put pressure upon the scar.

"Oh, sorry, Luna." I said, moving my hoof away from the scar. She continued to wince a bit as a silver-coated unicorn with a stethoscope cutie mark walked in. "Hello, you two. I am Dr. Enos." He started. "I will be aiding you today. Now then, what is your problem?"
"Oh, well you see, Doctor, Luna and I were playing some video games in her chambers when something jumped out of nowhere and attacked! It left some scratches on my leg, and it cut Luna's face." I pointed to the wound. The doctor examined the wound for just a moment, then brought out some kind of golden sututre and silver lighter.

He began to cauterize the wound. Luna didn't seem to feel a thing, surprisingly. She just laid there with her eyes shut. Slowly, the wound began to close. Before long, it was almost completly closed, but wouldn't go all the way. Next, the doctor took the suture. He slowly began to thread the curved needle through one end of the wound and out the other, doing his best to get the wound closed all the way. Finally, after about 15 minutes, he had finished suturing the wound.

Next, he put away the suture and lighter and took out a bottle of rubbing alcohol. He poured some into a small rag and started dabbing at the skin around the scar and anywhere on the scar that looked like it might get infected. He repeated this step about 2 times, then put a linen bandage overtop of the scar. "Make sure she gets plenty of rest. You can go now." He said.

I nodded my thanks to him and quickly got her out of the bed. They brought a wheelchair so that it would be easier to get her around. I put her into it and began back to her chambers. It only took me five minutes before I got there. As soon as I was there, I lifted her out of the chair (with some difficulty) and laid her down on her bed. I wrapped the blanket around her and let her go off to sleep.

.....

About 8 hours later, Luna woke up, mumbling something. "Mmm... Genra... Mmrrrr..." Was all I heard. I realized that the scar must have had some kind of effect on her. I trotted over to her bedside and sat down beside her. "Sleep well?" I asked, a bit of sarcasm in my voice. "General... Y-you... Saved my life." She said.
"What?"
"You... Saved me... Cut... Wouldn't quit... Bleeding." It was then that I realized she was right. Right up to when the doctor started suturing the wound, she was still bleeding. Within an hour, she would have bled out. "General... Th-thank you... So much. I-I... I love you..." She stated joyfully. I smiled and embraced her, nuzzling her neck.

"Oh, Luna," I continued. "I love you too! Oh, Luna, I love you so much!" I wrapped my legs around Luna in a loving embrace. Before long, she returned the hug. We just laid there, embracing eachother in love, glad we were together.

.....

That night I thought I should stay with Luna, to keep her safe, but Luna said she was okay. With a great bit of reluctance, I finally left her and headed to Ponyville. I flew slowly this time, a bit upset that I wouldn't be able to take care of Luna if anything happened.

Within ten minutes, I reached the Carousel Boutique. I walked in and saw Rarity. "Good evening, Miss Rarity." I said. "Oh, good evening, General. Good to see you have returned for your room. I was starting to think you had changed your mind!" She replied.

I smiled at her and shook my head. "Of course not. I was just staying with a friend for a couple days." I responded. "Hope that didn't cause any trouble." Rarity shook her head and grabbed some a metal tray.
"Would you like some tea?" She asked. I shook my head and thanked her as I walked into the room I had rented. Upon closing the door, I saw how colorful the rooms in her boutique and house were. There were all sorts of reds and blues and greens...

"She must decorate the rooms with her extra cloth." I said outloud to myself. I looked around the room. It was relatively plain, but nice. A bed, a closet, a small bathroom, and a tv set. It was fairly late, so I just went to bed. Normally, if I was back on Earth, I'd probably watch some tv late into the night, but I was exhausted from the eventful day, so I didn't have the strength to do that. Within moments, I fell asleep on the soft matress.

.....

Well, things continued a bit like this for well over a month. Wake up, hang out with Luna, come back, go to bed. Wake up, hang out with Luna, come back, go to bed. Over and over again, it happened just like this. It was unchanging, but I didn't care. I liked doing this, so long as it was with Luna.

On about the 34th day after I came here, things changed. I arrived at Luna's at about the same time, but wiser. Over the past month, I had learned more about her than I could ever dream of. I learned her favorite entertainment, food, drink... I even found out things right down to her favorite video game character! I thought I knew more about her then I did myself, and it seemed that she felt the same way. That night, after our 27th match of Ponio vs. Pegazelda crossover battle on PlayStable, things became romantic. I had bought some sunflower wine (Luna's favorite wine) for us to share.

After 4 glasses or so, we were both still relatively sober, as it was a weak wine. Even so, our words were a bit slurred. "Luna... Shweetie, I... I think I'm ready for you." I said, holding her in my legs.
"Rrready for me to what?" She asked.
"I mean, I think I'm ready. We've been together a long time, and I think I've learned enough about you... For ush to have sex." I blushed as I said this, though that was partially due to the fact that I was drunk.

"Oh..." She said, blushing and smiling.
" 'Oh' what? Is something wrong?"
Luna simply giggled. "No, nothing is wrong. It is just... I have waited for so long, and now that you're ready... I'm just so excited, while at the same time surprised! I... I want to start." I nodded to her and we began to kiss, starting the session. It was time. We were both ready, and it was time for us to know eachother.

Make Love, With Love

We slowly and passionately kissed eachother, our bodies heating up. The whole time, Luna moaned softly as my lips touched hers. "Oh, my..." She said when our lips parted one time. "I... I don't deserve you, my love. I-I've done so many horrible things in my life, I shouldn't have such a wonderful stallion."

I frowned a bit at that. Then, I continued smiling and speaking. "Well, to quote a great person from my world, 'You don't love a person because they're perfect, you love them in spite of the fact that they're not.' I don't love you because you are perfection. I love you because you've got your own imperfections. Our mistakes are what make us normal. And while some people might make worse mistakes than others, all people have a chance to redeem themselves and earn somethng for themselves. You have redeemed yourself, Luna, and thus you've earned my love. Just as I've earned yours."

As I ended my monologue, Luna began to cry joyful tears and nuzzled me again. I kissed her upon her soft cheek, and she shivered at the simple-yet-loving gesture. As she moaned, I nuzzled her chest, and before long, Luna spoke again, saying, "My body is ready." I grinned wickedly at that and slowly started with her. I started peppering her entire body with kisses. I began at her soft, furry neck, gently moving down her body. Next, I kissed her fuzzy chest, Making her moan warmly. As I moved lower and lower down her body, she would moan louder and louder. Finally, I reached her belly. As I kissed her soft, amethyst teats, my teeth grazed the flesh.

"Oh!" She cried out at the sudden ccontact.
"Oh, sorry, you okay?" I asked, concerned about that.
"Again." She said.
"What?"
"Again! Bite me again! Bite me harder!" I quickly obliged, happy to obey the beautiful princess. I bit her much harder, though not hard enough to draw blood. She cried out at that, but she didn't tell me to stop. She seemed to enjoy this as part of the foreplay. Before long, she was panting long and hard.

Finally, the foreplay was over. I eased my self into her. First, my glans entered slowly into her marehood. "Ah!" She cried out, seemingly in pain. "Oh, what's wrong?" I asked her.
"Oh - ah! - nothing," She replied in between cries. "It is - ah! oh! - just... I am a virgin, so, - ah! - it hurts a bit!" I continued to thrust gently and nodded to her. "Well, I guess that's something else we have in common." I continued, beginning to grunt. "I'm a virgin, too! Well, I was... Until - ooh! - now, anyways." As I continued to thrust into her, she gasped and cried out in both pain and pleasure. Before long, the pain must've stopped, because she started to just moan in ecstasy.

As she continued to moan, I felt her walls grow extremely moist around my shaft. Before long, I felt a pressure and heat growing up in my loins. "L-Luna... You're wonderful!" I cried out. As I continued thrusting in and out, in and out, she began bucking her hips forward, bringing me further in as I buried myself into her.

The pressure in my loins and now my shaft had grown too great. I couldn't hold it back any longer, and I burst. At the sudden sensation, Luna's walls closed in on me and tightened. Suddenly, her body copied the motion, cumming all over my penis. I pulled out of her, and we both laid back on her bed, tired from our first experience. I looked at the sheets, and sure enough, there was blood, evidence that this really was Luna's first time.

"Luna... I-I'm so glad that my first time... Could be with someone as wonderful as you." She nodded and replied, saying, "I feel the same way." As she nuzzled my neck and laid her head against my chest. Before long, we both fell asleep.