different sides of the same coin

by Fragment12

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Dark, Sad, Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 41277

A warrior named Hysteria gets pulled into equestrian

A warrior named Hysteria gets pulled into equestria unexpectedly and let me tell you dimension travel, painful as hell for him especially when stuff attacks you as soon as you get here, so follow Fragment as he goes about making friend, breaking stuff(with those friends), and causing trouble for everyone.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-26 17:25:53 UTC

chapter 1 remember the name

Remember the name

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I woke up with a pounding headache, a new scar on my dark skin. Man those monsters are hard to shoot! I had to bring out the big guns to kill those things. I wasted too much energy and passed out on them. They were horrible. Well, just another thing to add to my memory of horrors. And yes, I know you are there watching me (which I find slightly creepy, but I have sensed worse) I guess I will ignore you for now. I may as well tell you who I am. My name is Hysteria. Weird name, I know, but  it was what I was given. What I am is an immortal and not the normal kind either, I can still die. Just like anyone but it’s much harder and every life I live, I take something away from it.

I am 6 foot 3, 195 pounds, well-muscled, 10000 years old and every time I die… Well, I normally go to a different dimension and time period. I have been through so many things, seen many things; some beautiful, some not so much. Oh, and did I mention that my eyes change color with my mood, and I can store my important weapons in another dimension? Oh one more thing. I have the title of god slayer for... well, murdering a few gods (apparently slaying gods is a big deal or something) and that’s why I am immortal. I made a deal with one. Ok, now horrors dead. Now time to watch ponies yay!

    I start on my way home and nearly crapped myself first of all because the world ripping open does not happen every day. And I am even more surprised as shadow snakes come out catching me by the legs.

“FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUck…” I say as I am pulled into the rift. *Plop* (Yes, dimensional rifts make that sound) and next thing I know is lots of dirt. (not tasty by the way) The last thing I see is well…. dirt, then I blacked out. I was awoken several hours later by a loud roar. I looked up and saw a giant purple bear thing. I was like, this thing is massive (lol massive) I think to myself, trying not to grab the bear’s attention, but being me that does not go over so well as I try to sneak away.

Well, let’s just say I have a habit of making things explode when I’m scared, and a bear that looked like it could kick Godzilla’s ass and then eat it for a snack… well it puts even me on the edge. Don’t look at me that way! I am not Krotos, I don’t kill giant oversized creatures for a warm-up. And I meet the guy. He was a dick. He killed me for no reason. I was just sitting on the ground and then he just walks up and stabs the hell out of me and that was my 12th death. Man, that shit hurt… I will…. hmm actually, I don’t know what I would do. I would rip his soul from his body, but Hades tried that and we know how that turned out, don’t we? And for those who don’t… well let’s just say he had the tables turned on him.

Enough about that off-topic. I had to sneak away. Maybe I could just fly away I thought, which made my wings respond in kind then I… WAIT ONE GOD DAM MINUTE! I NOW HAVE WINGS?! FUCK FUCK FUCK WHEN I NEEDED THEM 3,563 YEARS AGO, NO I DIDN’T HAVE THEM!! While I was ranting in my head, my wings responded to my anger. They split in two places on each wing, stiffened, and electricity hummed off them, not only startling the Ursa(not a good idea BTW) it also pissed him the hell off. Now back in my head, my rage moment over, I noticed a hot breath on my back. Awwww man… this is going to suck, I thought to myself as I was launched across the forest by a few well-placed swipes by the Ursa’s hand. I was able to dodge the claws, but not its paw. I flew for a little while, then I flew through at least three trees before hitting the ground with an earth shaking thud.

    I sighed. Yummy dirt food of the gods, just what I need. “Man do I hate the taste of dirt,” I said to the air now. Then to brutally murder that Ursa… odd, why does that sound familiar? I say to myself.

I shrug the thought off. I’ll remember later, when things are not trying to kill me. Now, let’s see what my wings can do. I start to flap them and… well the energy that was stored in them came rocketing forward, straight toward the tree in front of me, completely destroying it in a huge conflagration. I flew away from the trees I just sent up in flames.

“Fuck! These wings are nothing but trouble,” I sigh, “man, this is so not going well. I am going to end up dead before I have been here for like 10 minutes, and I almost died twice already. Jeez, can’t an immortal get a break… and that break have nothing to do with my bones. Now let’s get this shit started. I start concentrating my vision. As it seems to fragment, I turn around and look into my pocked dimensions that I use to store my weapons and (hey is that my … OMG it’s my jolly saber! The sword I made out of jolly ranchers it’s freaking awesome!) with a smile on my face, my eyes turning a light blue color. I pull out my katana.

    I feel a familiar presence in my mind. A cool female voice is heard. “Hello Hysteria. Long time no see,” said the presence.

“It has been a long time, hasn’t it? Hime or maybe you would prefer English and want me to just call you princess,” I say with a laugh.

“Ugh… you know I hate when you call me that, just call me your majesty. Maybe like that one girl did. Oh you remember that time?” she said with a trollific smile.

    “Jeez ok fine, no need to go there sweating bullets at the memory. I will call you by what we agreed on, Terra.

She smiles at that. “Thank you.”

“Know where is your sister? Where is Luxa?” I asked Terra, to which she shrugs then I hear another quieter voice.

“I am over here,” she says.

    “Ah there you are,” I say picking up a pair of black and gold fingerless gloves and a pair of shoes the same color as the gloves, which as I put them on, started to change. Going over my fingers and becoming armored for battle, the shoes going up my leg somewhat, I look at them, checking them over. Then I notice something is missing.

“Umm Luxa, where are your rings?” I ask her.

     “Oh teehee I forgot them.” She then floats 2 rings. One has a black and red emblem on it and the other has a black and orange one. They slide onto my middle fingers.

    Seeing this done, I concentrate my resolve into the rings and 2 huge black and orange flames flare out of them. They wrap around the katana, then settle around the sword as a twin colored aura, but around hands. They burn with a color-changing fire and I do a test kick.

Whoosh! flames flare as soon as I start the kick. I alert the Uras to my presence. Then with a devilish smile and the whites of my eyes turning black and the inner eye turning a yellow color except for the iris this stayed black (they only change that color in battle mode angry or if I’m serious), I yell “Yo bitch this is for flinging me across the forest!” as I send a gywumbis (it’s a word, I know cuz I say it is so there) orange flame shooting across the forest striking it in the face and some of its chest, quickly consuming it as it screams and thrashes around on the ground in pain for several minutes before the flames dissipate, revealing a giant stone Ursa. Then with another evil grin, I fly to the top of the Ursa, bring my sword to the bear and slash straight down the now-stone Ursa’s middle. Black flames pourfrom the stone. It starts to collapse in on itself as a mini black hole forms, sucking in the stone Ursa. The sky even darkens a little from the black hole. Hysteria then went around making certain that nothing was left.

    Somewhere in Ponyville…

    Rainbow Dash was flying around, moving clouds for the storm later that night until she saw a bright orange flash and heard a massive roar of pain. She thought she saw an ape-like thing with burning hands. She stared in that direction for several minutes until she heard somepony calling her name. She looked at the ground to see Twilight with the rest of her friends, except oddly Pinkie Pie yelling, trying to get her attention.

She flew down. “Hey did anypony see that?” Rainbow asked her friends.

    “See what?” asked Twilight in confusion, “We just heard the loud roar in the forest and I felt some odd magic from the forest. We are going to investigate. Why? Did you see something Rainbow?” Twilight asked her.

Rainbow Dash thought of telling her what she had seen, but decided against it. “No I didn’t see anything,” she said unconvincingly, which AJ picked up on immediately.

     “Ar ya sher bout that sugarcube?” AJ said, not believing a word of what Rainbow had said.

“Umm yes. Hey where is Pinkie Pie?” she asked trying to change the subject and luckily for her it worked.

    Twilight answered first. “We don’t know where she is. She just kind of vanished after that party yesterday. She just said bye to everypony then poof in a literal puff of smoke, she was gone. We looked for her, but she was nowhere to be found. But right now, we don’t have time to look for her. We can look later. Now come on, you fly on ahead and we will catch up soon.”

    “Ok, I am on it,” said Rainbow with a salute she then flew off, a rainbow trail behind her.

         In the Everfree forest …

Hysteria sat on a stump, checking his wounds. He was fine if you didn’t count half his ribs nearly broken. Three of them would shake as he moved. He had many cuts from all the trees he went through, and the horrors he battled did quite a number on him. He was extremely tired. He was about to take a nap when he saw an odd moving rainbow. He frowned, “Hey Terra, Luxa, are you seeing this or am I crazy?”

“Yes,” they said together. Ok… yes to which question he asked them? To both was Terra’s answer.

    Whew ok, for a second there… Hey I am not crazy!!!! I think.

“Um maybe. Ok, I am a little bit, but that’s an ok amount.” He could hear them laughing their asses off at him. “Fucking trolls!” he yelled out loud. He then thought about what he had just done.

Not my best idea in the middle of a forest filled with more than likely hostile beasts. Well as my teacher would say, “Hide in the shadows and erase your breath” as he hid in a tree, becoming nearly invisible.

“Thank you assassin training. Oh, I should also put on my ranger cloak,” he said as he pulled out a forest colored camo cloak. More words of a good teacher: “Trust the cloak.” Now Hysteria looked invisible to anyone.

   Sky over forest…

Rainbow Dash was searching for anything out of the ordinary (she meant even for the forest). She had been searching for at least 10 minutes with no luck until she heard somepony cussing on the forest floor. She then jets down to investigate.

“The buck happened here! Looks like somepony was launched several feet, threw a fireball, then started spamming random chunks of stone everywhere.”

Just then, a giant stone head broke the tree it was on and started to fall on an unsuspecting Rainbow dash.

    Hysteria’s first reaction was to squee like a four year old (not smart when you’re trying to hide) at seeing his fave pony that caused him to shake the tree he was in, which was the straw that broke the camel’s back, you could say. So ya, the tree started to break, he flipped out of the tree as fast as he could as to not get flattened like a pancake. Grabbing Rainbow in one hand on his downward rotation and shooting a laser out of his face on the upward rotation, it then exploded awesomely. He proceeded to make a bubble shield with his last grenade as soon as he landed. Stone rained down everywhere after it was done. He took down the shield and put his fist in the air, made himself hover and yelled,

“MY NAME IS HYSTERTIA AND YOU WILL FEAR MY LASER FA-“ that was then bucked with an extremely high amount of force. It didn’t push him away like you would think, it made him shake like she was trying to make all of his hair fall out with pure strength. It was like a martial arts move or something. The blow landed right into his ribs, making the three weakest ones fly out of their rightful place.

“Why u do dis?” was all Hysteria said before the pain really hit him. He blacked out… well his mind did but his body kept going.

AJ bucked the beast holding her friend. It landed with a satisfying thud and some cracking sounds. It then went proceeding to fall over.

    “Ha! Take that ya varmit. Don’t let me catch yew messin’ with ma friends again. Ah ain’t gonna show as much mercy next time.”  AJ then proceeded to walk away until Rainbow tackled her freaking out.

    “AHHHHHH AJ WHY DID YOU DO THAT OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH IS HE DEAD?! HE CAN’T BE DEAD!! HE JUST SAVED MY LIFE HE CANT JUST DIE AFTER THAT!”

    Rainbow Dash was still screaming at a now freaked-out AppleJack. Everypony else was also freaked out by Rainbow. So nopony noticed Hysteria get up at first until they all felt a chill. They all turned around to a frightening sight. Hysteria had gotten back up, but he wasn’t all there. For one, he wasn’t speaking English anymore. All his teeth were razor sharp. He wore a full set of black and red armor that seemed specifically made for him with a helm that covered most of his face, except his eyes. Steam seemed to come from his mouth. They also couldn’t see his eyes. He proceeded to roar and a huge gout of green fire that cracked with lightning erupted from his mouth. His wings were razor sharp and practically screaming from the energy in them. Rarity took this time to faint as did Fluttershy.

     Luxa and Terra looked at each other wide-eyed. “Holy shit,” they said together.

“We have to stop him!” said Terra.

“Yes we do.” Luxa nodded. They transformed out of their weapon forms.

    There was suddenly a flash of light and there stood two women. The taller one was holding a katana and the smaller, younger looking one was in a fighting stance with a pair of flaming ringed gloves.  They turned toward the ponies and waved them off. The ponies did as they were told. Twilight picking up Fluttershy and AJ picking up Rarity, they proceeded to gallop off. They turned back toward their opponent, only to see he was already in front of them with a sharp-toothed grin on his face.

       Running through the forest.

“What was that all about?!” yelled AppleJack at her friends.

Everypony shrugged. They were as confused as she was. Suddenly there was an eruption of flame behind them. One was black orange and green. Another was blue and the last was a red color.

“What in the Sam hell was that?! I don’t know or want to find out.”

  Back at newly made clearing.

Terra and Luxa are working in perfect harmony together, but even though there are two of them, they are having a tough time beating him. Terra launches a barrage of lightning fast attacks, but even at her speed, barely any attacks are getting through. Just then, Luxa appears and lands a combo on Hysteria. He proceeds to electrocute her with a palm to her stomach stunning her for a bit. She quickly recovers and sends a kick, with all of her energy in it, crashing into his head. She hit him so hard that he flew almost completely out of the forest. He lands terribly, breaking a wing and incapacitating his body, waking him up in the process.

    Hysteria looking around unable to move. What. The . fuck. Just.  Happened. He gets out before a wave of pain hits him.

“Son of a bitch!” He gets out before slipping back into darkness.

Back at clearing…

“Damn! Did you have to hit him so hard? He could be dead for all we know,” said Terra, wide-eyed marveling at how far he went.

    Luxa blushing madly, “Ahahaha sorry… I got caught up in the moment.”

Terra sighs at her sister. “All right, let’s go find him.”

    They then proceed to walk in the general direction he flew in. Several hours later, they eventually found him. After several hours still knocked out, he had massive bruises on his back, cuts all over his body, and his breathing was labored. If he was a normal human, he would be dead already.

    “We have got to save him! Some force ripped him to this dimension and we have to find out what,” Luxa said with concern in her voice.

    “But what we only know is how to fight. Hysteria was the one who could heal also and that wouldn’t even help us. He can’t heal himself because of some magic bullshit in that one world with the magic women who thought men with magic were going to break the world or something (read the Wheel of Time series and you will know what I am talking about). So after that, he couldn’t heal himself but other spells oddly are fine,” said Terra in annoyance, “but still, he could help himself with his medical knowledge. So then, what do we do?” she asked sadly.

    “I know!” said Luxa with a new fire in her eyes “Let’s send up flares into the sky and see if we can get help!” she said excitedly.

Terra thought about it for a second, then nodded in agreement. It was a good idea.

“I like it. Let’s do that and hope for the best.”

They then joined hands, pointed them toward the sky, and with the last of their strength they fired off a color changing fireball. It went rocketing upward into the sky and started shining like a star. They proceeded to pass out from exhaustion. They changed back into their weapon forms and went to sleep.

Skies over Ponyville…

    Rainbow Dash flew about, thinking of what had happened today. She was kind of sad that she couldn’t help him, so she had flown to where she had last seen him.

“Wow. What happened here?! It’s like something exploded.” She walked over to a tree. It was an odd blue color and its leaves fell out in slow motion. It looked cool actually.

She moved onto another tree. It looked normal except it looked kind of shiny like someone had polished it. She flew up and landed on a branch. It didn’t even bend when she landed on it, which she found odd. She then bit down on a leaf which didn’t even shake when she pulled on it. She started to pull with all her strength. It finally gave and hit the ground with a hearty thud.

“Dang what is up with these leaves.” She put the leaf in her pack. Then, as an afterthought, she picked up a blue one and put it into some trees that looked like they had tried to eat themselves and succeeded. The things that had once been trees, were now marbles. She searched through them until she found one to her liking. It was kind of shiny and had red flame burning in it. She found another with a blue flame in it. She dropped it in her pack, where it slowly floated into it. She looked for a little longer, finding more marbles with an orange flame surrounded in a blue flame in it, and she found one more that seemed to have a black hole slowly spinning in it, again surrounded in a blue flame. Then she remembered why she had come here.

“Oh buck I better start looking for him.” She then took to the air in search of Hysteria. “Hmm… what happened to these trees? They looked like I crashed through them. Hey, what’s up with that star? It’s really low and it’s the same color as the marbles. She proceeded to fly over there. She made it in record time, oh let’s say three seconds flat (you thought I was going to say ten didn’t you ☺) She then landed with a flourish and immediately saw Hysteria’s battered body and was again freaking out.

“Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh I have to get Fluttershy. She will know what to do. Stay here, I will be right back.” She then when racing off to Fluttershy’s cabin.

         Fluttershy’s cabin…

Fluttershy was feeding a family of squirrels when a rainbow blur came, picked her up, grabbed her medical kit, and flew her halfway there before she realized she was several feet in the air.

“Ahhhhhh!” she screamed in her tiny voice, barely heard by Rainbow Dash. “Fluttershy, it’s ok. It’s Rainbow,” she said soothingly trying to calm the Pegasus in her arms. She spoke soothingly for several minutes until she had calmed her friend down and proceeded to explain what was happening.

“Ok do you remember that thing from before?” Fluttershy nods. “Ya well before Applejack bucked him and went berserk, he saved me from being crushed. You know what happened after that?” Fluttershy nods again.

“Well what you don’t know is that he was somehow flung across the forest. He’s hurt really bad and I need you to help him.”

“What?!” Fluttershy exclaims. “But he is so scary. Did you see him after AJ bucked him?”

“Yes, I did. But I think that only happened because of what she did. You know, I don’t think it was his intention to hurt anypony, I think he was just defending himself.”

Fluttershy thinks about it for a second then nods in agreement. “Ok I will help him,” she says with a new determination in her small voice.

After a while they make it to Hysteria’s position. Fluttershy gasps in horror at his condition.

“This is just awful!” she says, checking him over. “He has 3 broken ribs, a broken wing, 7 bruises, and several scratches. I will do what I can, but after we will need to get him to the hospital.” She proceeds to bandage his body and reset his wings. she also tells Rainbow to go get Twilight so they could carry him to the hospital.

  Library…

Twilight Sparkle was reading a book called “Creatures in Equestria”. She was wondering what it was. She pondered this for several minutes before one rainbow-maned Pegasus came flying in and was trying to pull her out the door. She surrounded her friend in a purple aura, stopping her. She then set her down.

“Ok Rainbow, what’s the problem?” asked Twilight and let her friend out of her telekinesis. “Take a deep breath and tell me what happened.”

“Somepony is hurt and needs your help!” was all Rainbow got out before her friend stopped her.

“What?! Oh no,” exclaimed Twilight, “Why didn’t you say so?” Twilight proceeded to run out the door.

Rainbow sat there waiting for a few seconds with a smirk on her face until a blushing Twilight walked back in smiling sheepishly.

“Um I don’t know where to go so… umm I guess I am going to follow you…” she said to a now laughing Rainbow Dash.

“Ok one sec, that was funny. I needed that. Whew, all right lets go.” And they went galloping off in the right direction this time thankfully.

      Forest edge

“Uh what happened? Where am I and why is there a pink maned pony checking me out? I know I’m sexy, but damn,” said Hysteria groggily.

   Startling Fluttershy, she realized he was awake. She hid so fast it looked like she used instant transmission, startling Hysteria In the process.

    “What the hell?! Where did she go?!” he yelled. “That shit was scary as fuck! How did she do that!?!?!?” He moved his head as to not hurt his body more than he had already had. He looked around until he spied a shivering bush. He calmed down a little.

“Ok didn’t teleport, just hid really fast. Now to calm her down somehow.”

“Uh hello there. Did you help me?” he asked in his most soothing voice. But all he heard from the bush was one of the cutest eeps of his life.

“It’s ok, I am not going to hurt you. Shoot, I can’t even move, so can you please come out where I can see you?” As he spoke the bush shook less and less until she poked her head out of the bush.

Yes its working Hysteria said in his mind. “Did you patch me up?” he asked. She nodded meekly to him, hiding one of her eyes behind her hair. Then it clicked. His eyes widened several inches, then he put on sunglasses to hide his eyes. No need to freak out anypony. Good thing she wasn’t looking directly at him.

“NOW I REMEMBER WHY YOU ALL LOOKED FAMILIAR!” Hysteria yelled upsetting his ribs sending him onto a coughing fit until he vomited blood on the ground.

Hysteria’s yelling had sent Fluttershy scrambling back into the bush. She sat there until she heard him start coughing and then reaching she was by his side in an instant.

    “Are you okay? Turn sideways so you won’t drown on blood.” His fit passed and she put him back on his back. “You can’t exert yourself too much or you can make your wounds worse,” said Fluttershy firmly.

    Hysteria nodded. I can’t tell them I know how they are or else Boom! Hysteria thought to himself (ever wonder what happened to Pluto? There was a show about people from there and I went to a dimension where that was real and I let it slip what I knew. And well… a bunch of events happened and know there are no Pluto’s in any dimension. Yup I made Pluto extinct, sorry) ya no extinct ponies is good.

“Thanks for your concern miss?”

    Fluttershy was her barely heard reply.

   “What a beautiful name,” he said making her blush from the compliment. “Dawwwww,” he heard himself say out loud before he could stop himself. She looked at him oddly.

    “Did you say something?” she asked.

“Uh… no nothing. I have said nothing at all. Hehehe…” he said nervously. I need a distraction he thought to himself. Iiiiidddeeaaa.

“Um Fluttershy, do you like animals?” he asked, knowing the answer.

“Oh yes, very much. I take care of lots of them,” she said with a small smile on her face.

“Oh I have an animal. He is an albino actually. Want to see him? He is kind of big, but he is actually very nice.”

    She doesn’t even think about it and is already nodding her head in agreement.

    “Ok all you have to do is get a little of my blood, then do you see the markings on my arm? Wipe it on there and stand back.”

    She does as she is told. After she gets behind a tree, he starts chanting. The markings arrange themselves into the form of a phoenix, then it jumps off his arm in a flash of light and perches on a branch. It is an elegant snow white phoenix. It gives a soft coo of concern after it looks at him.

“Ah don’t give me that. You know you have seen me in worse condition and pull through. I am already being helped. Now say hi to Fluttershy, Felix.”

    The phoenix looks around until he spots the stunned pony with her jaw on the ground then looks back to Hysteria with a skeptical look on its face.

     Hysteria laughs at the look. “Yes, go say hi. Oh and the ones behind the tree also. You can come out now,” Hysteria called out.

And out came two stunned pones, also with jaws on the ground. They look from him to the phoenix and back.

Um wow can everyone from where you’re at do that.

“I don’t know. They’re dead as far as I know,” Hysteria said with a sad frown, “as far as I know.”

“Oh I am sorry for asking that. I didn’t mean to pry.”

Hysteria smiled at that. “How would you have known? Think nothing of it. It’s not even that bad anymore. It’s been 10,000 years since then…” he then trailed off, realizing his slip up. “Um forget you heard that.”

Again, jaws hit the floor. “You are 10000 years old?!” they asked him in shock.

“Well, no my body’s 25, but all together years are 10,000 today. Happy birthday to me. Yay.”

Well, seeing everypony’s in shock and I’m slowly dying, I am going to stop sitting up now. I immediately fall over on the ground. I pull out a gallon of OJ from my storage dimension.

“Fluttershy,” I moan in pain, “if I die, you can have my orange juice handing her the jug of juice.” The last thing I hear before I slip on again into darkness is Rainbow Dash telling Twilight to hurry up and levitate me to the hospital.

Well what did everybody think? And how can I improve? Criticism is wanted. Oh and if anyone wants there OC in this, just message me here or on Facebook. Just look up Aubrey Chisolm. there I am the girl pic. Ok, that’s it. Fragment out.

chapter2 i screw up

A/N: Awesome, your back! I could hug you free out of happiness! Yes, now this will have some filler on how he got his name, and here it will start to earn its dark tag. And I warn you now, this may have clop. Yes, clop. And gore probably, if I can find a decent clop writer, and it will have dirty jokes and there will be some suggestive parts in this story. Hysteria has no problems with interspecies relationships. If your 10000, you would do it too or be very lonely. I will also turn him into a pony later on. That’s it now. Enjoy!

Ponyville Library

Twilight Sparkle sat thinking about what had transpired a week ago (yes, a week and Hysteria is still asleep). She had sent a message to Princess Celestia about what had transpired in the forest at that time, and she was waiting for an answer still. Just then, Spike walks in clutching his stomach. He looked horrible, like he was going to spew his lunch. This had been going on for maybe an hour after she had sent the message.

    “Oh man, I feel like I ate too many gems and they’re coming back on me,” Spike moaned miserably. As soon as he said that, he fell over clutching his stomach. He then proceeded to give a huge belch of fire and tons of letters came spewing out, covering Twilight in letters.

    “Finally!” said Twilight as she burrowed her way out and proceeded to read one.

Dear Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student:

Thank you for telling me this so quickly. I will send Luna to search the creatures mind in maybe a week from now.

Love, Princess Celestia.

P.S I will also send a shit ton of letters so it will back up Spike. You won’t know my plan until its already happened lol.

P.P.S Hold your breath.

Twilight looked at the letter in confusion, just then she heard a belch behind her and turned around to see a wave of letters surging at her so fast she couldn’t even let out a sound and was buried.

Ponyville hospital

Princess Luna appeared in a flash of light and looked down at a sleeping Hysteria.

“Darn that sister of mine, sending me to do what she is too lazy to go and do herself. When I get back, I’m going to give her a peace of my mind,” said the irritated princess.

She then concentrated on her horn till it glowed the same color as her mane and put it to Hysteria’s forehead.

   Hysteria’s mind

Luna looked around and then chose an old looking memory. It showed a younger Hysteria talking and joking with friends. She went to another memory, but right before she went into the memory, she thought she heard something say, ‘Get out.’ Thinking she was hearing things, she proceeded.

    This one showed him crying in front of a burning woman, screaming as she slowly burned to death in an enchanted fire that seemed to not only increase the pain, but burn slower than normal. He was being held back as several men were laughing at him. Luna couldn’t take anymore. So she decided to go to the next one. As soon as she stepped out, she was hit with a strong force trying to expel her. This time, she was sure she heard ‘Get out’, but with more force and anger in its voice. She fought against the force that was trying to push her out and struggled to the next one.

    This time it showed Hysteria being dragged toward a man as they slowly and carefully pull his intestines out. It seemed they planned on keeping him alive until they got them all out. The man looked at Hysteria.

    “My son you must get away, you must leave Au-.”

Before she could hear the rest of the name, there was a loud noise that made her unable to hear. Then as soon as the father finished speaking, the noise stopped and she could hear fine again. She was pondering when suddenly she heard an animalistic scream, she turned her attention back to the memory and saw Hysteria’s brown eyes had changed color they now had yellow irises like a wolf and the whites had turned black. His body then started to glow. He screamed out and words that resonated and seemed to come from everywhere. He also had an insane grin on his face.

    Then the world seemed to invert. The colors had changed and all the buildings were sideways.

    “Then I will take it” said a voice behind Hysteria, surprising him he turned to what seemed to be a purple man wearing a purple suit.

“What?” was Hysteria’s ingenious reply.

    “Your identity. I will buy it from you for immortality and power to get back at those who wronged you,” said the purple man. “But it will-”

    “Done!” Hysteria said to the surprised seemingly purple man that on closer inspection, he was actually a dark pink color. Odd, Hysteria thought to himself.

    The man stuck out his hand, which he took and suddenly Hysteria was in crippling pain. Eventually the pain subsided and the pink man spoke. “Rise. And from this day for the only name you will know is Hysteria. It is all you will ever remember or hear. You will never be who you once were. And one more thing, as soon as you leave this place you must say a series of words to active my gift. They are of your choosing so don’t say anything corny ok? No one would like that… *looks at the readers “Right everyone?” * ok now off with you. Shoo.

And with a snap of his fingers sent Hysteria back to where he was.

    “Hmm… what should the words be?” he said to himself. He then thought back to where he had made the deal in the first place, thinking how everything was on its side and inverted. He smiled to himself.

“I got it!” He rubbed his hands together, looked at the slowly approaching men with their weapons drawn, and said in a loud confident voice, “It’s time for Hysteria mode and when that happens THE WORLD TURNS SIDEWAYS.”

He was suddenly enveloped in a black and red aura and from that stepped out a being clad in ebony armor with red arcane symbols that seemed burned into the armor.

Luna could take no more of this and stumbled out of the memory, only to feel as if a train was forcing her out of this man. The force was so strong it tossed her across the room, where she slammed against a wall and collapsed in a heap on the floor. She slowly got to her hooves and looked up only to be caught in the death stare of a berserk Hysteria.

“I WARNED YOU TO GET OUT!! YOU DO NOT PRY INTO MY HEAD! I WILL TEAR YOUR FUCKING SOUL FROM YOUR SOON TO BE HEARTLESS BODY!! THEN I WILL BANISH YOUR FUCKING SOUL TO THE DEEPEST HELL I CAN FIND, WHERE YOU WILL ROT FOR ALL OF ETERNITY YOU FUCKING BITCH!!!” he roared at her through his now sharp teeth.

Just then they say a white phoenix suddenly appear in the room Hysteria didn’t even glance at it. He just stuck out his arm, which the phoenix landed on.

“Felix,” said Hysteria, “cambio forma modo decimo (battle form 10 ).” The phoenix seemed to nod, then a flash of white light.

     After the light went back to normal, there were a pair of elegant white gloves with phoenix emblems on it along with an all-white sword with a guard that made the blade look like it was coming out of the phoenix’s mouth. He lifted the blade in the air and swung downward. Twilight Sparkle burst in, ramming into Hysteria making him only slightly cut her hoof.

    Luna screamed in intense pain. She could literally feel her soul bleeding out of her and her blood was the same color as her magic but she was in too much pain to notice. Upon hearing the scream, Hysteria snaps out of his berserk state. He then looks down and sees his hands clad in white gloves wielding his white phoenix blade. Seeing blood on the tip, he looked up seeing Twilight standing over the pained princess He then proceeded to drop his weapons and rush over.

     “Oh no! I’m so sorry I didn’t mean for that to happen. I was just so angry when you started going through my memories. I tried to warn you to get out, but you ignored my warnings. I was so angry, I couldn’t control myself and I went berserk again. For what it’s worth, I’m sorry,” Hysteria said as he began a spell to heal her hoof and stop the bleeding. As soon as he was done he looked down in shame at having lost his temper. Twilight and Luna, feeling better after her soul stopped bleeding from her body, looked at each other, then Luna started to speak.

    “I forgive you, but let’s not let that happen again,” said Luna with a weak smile.

    “I will try my best, but how could I have lost my temper like that,” Hysteria said, slapping the wall in frustration, forgetting about his gloves, so as soon as his hand makes contact with the wall, his gauntlet flares to life and the wall sounds like it screamed.

“Uh oh,” said a worried Hysteria, now sweating bullets.

    “What happened?” asked Twilight with a frown looking from me to the wall and back again.

“Umm nothing,” said Hysteria. “Just don’t touch the wall and everything will be fine.” He then lifted his hands in front of him. “Felix formita primo!” There was another bright flash and there sat Felix perched on his shoulder.

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    This startled the two mares that they both jumped back a little, which made Twilight jump straight into the wall, which without its soul was extremely flimsy. How flimsy you may ask. It kind of just disintegrated at the brush of her tail, to which she promptly fell screaming to the ground, hooves flailing wildly. I then promptly jumped right after her, I even caught her with some feet left to the bottom. Did I get a thank you? Nope she started screaming at me after we landed.

“What was that all about!?!” she said after we landed. “Why did the wall disappear?”

“Umm I kind of… sort of maybe might of… ripped the soul out of the wall leaving it without a purpose. It would have been fine if nopony touched it, but now it’s gone and well I…”

She interrupted me to scream and lecture some more, which frankly hurt my feelings.

   “That has got to be one of the stupidest, most irresponsible things I have ever seen!!!”

    By this point she was seriously irritating me so I told her off. “You know what. Fuck. You. Maybe I should have let you fucking drop if you’re going to chew me out. It was an accident. I forgot I was wearing the gloves, I’m sorry, ok? Know what? I am leaving!!! Hysteria then sped away, leaving Twilight in his dust.

Hysteria was flying for an hour pondering what to do. Suddenly he remembers.

“Fuuuuck where is Terra and Luxa? I need to find them. Ok Hysteria, concentrate. Sense them.” I start to sense something, but it seems muffled. “Odd,” I mutter to myself. I start to fly toward the signal. My search leads me to an especially nasty looking part of the forest.

chapter3

A/N: Thank you for the criticism, I will try to have them fixed and the next chapters better than ever.

   Man or Hysteria-made clearing that he doesn’t remember creating

    I had been flying around for hours trying to get a lock on where my two weapons have gone. I flew over a clearing and I saw trees of varying color. Frowning to myself, I flew down to get a closer look (and wouldn’t you know it back in the clearing, he helped make the hell. Why do we keep coming back here if that’s what you’re thinking? Then shut up, it’s important).

“The heck happened here? Looks like we went and started fighting but that can’t be possible. All I did was turn a bear to stone, destroy that stone, misplace its head, then find it later after it nearly lands on Dash, then blow it up, then scream something about my face, get bucked in the ribs and pass out from pain. I then woke up later covered in gauze around my ribs, head, and wings and bleeding from several places (good times good times) and I think that is it, at least that’s all I can remember. Let’s think about what happened and see if I missed something,” Hysteria mumbles. The rock, which, get this, is not actually a rock, but a gray-coated pony with pink and black mane, and the top part is in a ponytail and her cutie mark is a scroll being written on by a quill, rolls out of the way and I fall on my ass.

“Who are you and what are you doing here?” I exclaim as I proceed to rub the sore area.

“I could ask you the same thing you… whatever you are!” she yells right back at me. Her eyes go a little wide when she sees how tall I am. “Wows are you a hairless ape or something?”

“Wow you look like an emo. What an ape? No I am not. This body did evolve from apes, but I am not one myself. And you’re not listening anymore, are you?”

  “Nope. I stopped listening after wow, but I did hear you and yes I am an emo. Got a problem with that?”

“No problem,” I say, trying to stifle my laughter, but can’t. “Yes, no problem. It’s just kind of funny even in the land of Equestria there are emo ponies. Wow that is something that even I wasn’t expecting. Well whatever,” Hysteria said with a dismissive shrug.

“Your making fun of me, aren’t you asshole?” said the emo pony with an angry glare at Hysteria.

“No, I was not making fun of you. And my name is Hysteria, not asshole,” said Hysteria with infuriating politeness and a smile that just screamed the words: u mad?

“Ok, two can play at that game. My name is Layla and I am a poet. This is where I have recently started coming to think. I was in the middle of one when you rudely tried to sit on me.”

“Oh ya, hehe sorry about that,” said Hysteria, slightly blushing. “You kind of looked like a rock from where I was standing. Shoot, I couldn’t even sense you.” Wait a second, I still can’t. The fuck is up with that? he thinks to himself.

      She sighs, “It’s fine you just kind of surprised me, that’s all.”

      Hysteria had stopped listening by then and was again worrying about Luxa and Terra, so he decided to interrupt her. “Yes, what you were saying was very interesting. I don’t care, I just need to ask you, have you seen a sword and a pair of gloves?” I ask.

She looked at Hysteria, annoyed at his sudden change of demeanor. “Yes, I have. They are right here,” she said as she pulled them from behind a rock some distance away.

I smiled in relief that they are safe, but as I reached for them, she pulled them back with a smug grin.

“Nonono, you can’t have them. I found them fair and square.” She then pretends to think about it, then smiles like a demon. “I know, what will you give me for them?” she says. Smiling and all around, enjoying the now angry expression on Hysteria’s face.

“Now you look here you bitch. You hand them over before I blast you into oblivion,” said Hysteria as he prepared a spell to blast the smug Pegasus into nothing.

Leyla just smiled even wider as the words came out of his mouth. “Go ahead and try. Use all the magic you can, I will still kick your ass anyway, so go ahead.”

     A little unnerved by her attitude, Hysteria hesitated for a second. “What does she have planned?” he thought to himself. No what!? Fuck it, let’s just do this! Hysteria shouted, “Let’s see if you’re so smug after a barrage of my magic!!!” He then aimed at the sky and swung down unleashing a wave of deadly energy. After the smoke cleared, there she stood, fine as ever with an even bigger smile.

“Is that all you got? That attack was just sad. Hahaha, wow, I have seen better magic from an Earth pony and if you didn’t know, they don’t have any!” she said with a laugh

By this time, I was extremely angry. I kept telling myself to stay calm, but the rational part of my brain was getting kicked multiple times in the groin and was being ignored. “Well, I’m officially going to blow you up so much that… well there won’t be anything left will be an understatement.” I then start to make intricate patterns as I chant. I float a few inches off the ground and heat starts to radiate off of me and my glasses melt off my face revealing my eyes, which instead of my normal black and yellow eyes, they are black with a white flame on the inside. I pointed my hands at the bitchy Pegasus.

“All right, let’s do this! I am going to erase you.” As soon as I finish my talking a white-hot beam of magical energy erupts from my hands. It makes no sound, it just streaks toward the Pegasus and whatever it passed seemed to shift, then disappear, flicker back for a second, then disappear for the last time. I see it strike the Pegasus, but instead of destroying her, it seems to just spin around her before being sucked into her. “What the hell?!” I exclaim. No wonder I couldn’t sense her, she can fucking absorb magic. Well isn’t that a bitch. And I just wasted most of my energy on that last attack. Fuck, I am so screwed! If I fight her hand to hand,” he nervously says to himself.

Leyla feels juiced from all the power she had absorbed. “Now then, my turn. Wolf bait attack! Leyla yelled out to something behind Hysteria.

Hysteria then turns at the sound of rustling bushes, expecting the worst, and then out hops a jet-black bunny with red eyes that, after a second or two, hops over and starts punching and stomping on Hysteria’s ankles, shins, and feet, slightly annoying him even more. Hysteria just reaches down and snags the offending rabbit. He then contemplates wringing the thing’s neck, but is interrupted by a glow behind him. Turning to see what is happening, he sees Leyla glowing and what seems to be a blast of energy forming in her mouth. “Umm I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” he says, holding up the struggling bunny.

Leyla immediately stops glowing and her eyes go wide. “Wait! Don’t hurt him…” she pleads to Hysteria in a worried voice.

“First, give me back my sword and gloves and I will think about it.”

“Ok,” Leyla says, seemingly defeated. She then proceeds to toss the items over to him.

Hysteria easily catches them and then sets the bunny down and sits down trying to talk to them telepathically, turning his back to the Pegasus.

Leyla sees this and immediately fires off the stored energy in a huge gray blast.

Hysteria hears a whisper so soft that it would have made Fluttershy jealous to hear, from Terra. “Look out behind you!” she is able to get out before going back to sleep.

“What?” Hysteria says before he looks behind himself. His eyes go wide when he sees the blast coming toward him and says one word in his favorite language. Cazzo (fuck). The blast hits him, completely engulfing his body in a super-heated magic blast. He screams, he can feel his eyes boiling until the burst from the heats his skin, roasting his hair, bursting into flames. Afterward, he just collapses.

“Yes, got that bastard. He should be dead now,” Leyla says with pride. She looks to see what her handiwork had done. There is a large line of trees missing from her attack she looks until she sees a brown unicorn wearing green glasses making his way toward her eventually stopping when he was in speak distance. “Rahsaan? What are you doing here and how did you find me?” she asks him.

“I followed your scent. You know you have an odd scent, it’s like ink and sadness. Smells funny together. Ya as I was saying, I was coming here to ask you something until I smelled an unfamiliar scent like spices or something, and after that, this giant blast almost hits me. And then I saw you blast that ape thing, but more importantly, are you ok?” Rahsaan asks with concern.

“Yes, I’m fine. Just a little shrapnel got me. I will get Fluttershy to patch me up later so don’t worry about me.”

“Damn, being burned within an inch of your life hurts,” says Hysteria, freaking out the two ponies.

“H-how are you still alive?! I burnt you to a crisp!” says Leyla, seriously freaked out.

“Oh me? I am nearly dead. I just need to say something before I die.” He seems to look right at Leyla, despite not having eyes and he seems to be smiling. “I will be back. That is a promise and one thing I keep are my promises.” He then falls over and his body starts to dissipate.

Chapter 4 fuck yes i break shit

A/N Hysterias pissed that I had him killed but its ok he will get over it I hope ☹ or else he is going to kill me.

     LIMBO

    Hysteria is floating in eternal whiteness waiting for his new body. Shit I can’t believe she was able to kill me I cant wait to come back so I can return the favor he says angrily. Suddenly there is a flash of red light. All right next life lets go sempre andare avanti nell'inferno. He then walked into the red light.

       CANTERLOT Orphanage

      A young colt wakes up in the middle of the night and slowly makes his way toward the door growing taller and older with each step.

    Well that was unpleasant but dying is never pleasant for me now is it says Hysteria. Before looking at himself in a mirror he now has a black colored coat with a black and turquoise colored mane and tail his eyes still changed color with his mood but now he looked like Luna’s guards because of his draconic eyes and bat wings he also notices his cutie mark is a blue and red yin yang symbol made with lightning. Well I don’t look too bad and hey I’m a Pegasus so that’s a plus I guess he says admiring himself in the mirror but things like walking and flying make me glad I have been other species before or this would be a pain in the ass to have to learn how to do that from step one again he says I am glad no ones watching me do this that would be embarrassing he says while snapping his wing open and shut with ease.

    But unknown to Hysteria he was being secretly admired from a penthouse suit several stories up from his position not letting him see who was looking at him but letting them get a great view of him.

    Wow that stallion looks good I think I want him and what I want I get says one Fleur de Lis.

    All right now what world am he then trails off. I am back in equestria now I knew I would get my revenge eventually but I didn’t think it would be this soon alright time to get that bitchy Pegasus he mutters to him self before shouting to ponyville lets go sempre andare avanti nell'inferno. Hysteria then flies off tracing where he last used magic. Revenge fuck yes what could possible go wrong Hysteria says to himself.

        Sky’s over ponyville

     Rainbow Dash was clearing the clouds until she sees a fast moving black and turquoise streak flying threw the sky. Who is that and man can he move.

    Hysteria was in a great mood considering what had happened a day ago flying always did make him feel better. Man after I find finish this I am going to drink so much alcohol that they will put a ban on the stuff he then frowns slightly. If they have that hear I hope very much that they have alcohol ooooh or orange juice that would be good to maybe I can get my orange juice back from Fluttershy after this all right but how Hysteria mutters out loud?

    How what Hysteria hears someone ask?

    Hysteria looks toward the sound of the voice. Oh hey Rainbow sup Hysteria says nonchalantly.

    Hey how do you now my name aren’t you not from here she asks confused?

      Oh yes that you might not remember me but it’s me Hysteria do you remember Hysteria asks?

    W-what no he was an ape thing you can’t be him your hot she immediately starts blushing after she says it and he wasn’t even a pony.

    I cant oh and you think I’m hot Hysteria says with a playful smile? But I like being me its fun painful but fun wait how about I show you I am telling the truth but we will have to go somewhere more private don’t want to freak anyone out so is that acceptable he asks?

    I don’t know how do I know you wont hurt me in some way not that you could but I still want a promise that you wont try anything she says.

    Ok I will give you my word that I will not harm you there is that good enough for you?

   Ok let’s go to my house and you can show me there she says to him.

    All right lets go. They then fly of to Rainbow dashes cloud home one they go inside Hysteria closes his eyes and concentrates. All right human form lets do this. There is then a flash of light and there know stood a griffin in his place. Shit I didn’t mean to do that I wonder what wro… oh ya sorry I cant turn human until a 3 days have passed after my last death while my body regenerates so give me a week and then I can show you but give me a week then I will show you ok he asks while turning back into his Pegasus form but didn’t hear an answer. He looks over at the other Pegasus and sees a stunned expression on her face. Um are you ok he asks her?

    Y-you just turned from a Pegasus into a griffin that’s not possible and you said you died how what happened?

    Oh um I got into a little fight with a Pegasus she absorbed some of my magic and then when I wasn’t paying attention blasted me burning me to death he says bitterly.

    Who killed you though she asks with concern?

    Do you know a Pegasus named Leyla he as.

    Yes I do she is a gray Pegasus with a pink and black ponytail emo does poetry.

    Yes actually that’s exactly who I am talking about what are the odds that you would know who I was looking for ok what ever where is she he asks.

    She lives with her mare-friend Fluttershy over on the edge of the everfree forest she explains.

    Oh ok I will wait she likes mares that was unexpected but whatever hey Rainbow could you keep who I am a secret for now until I am ready to tell everyone who I am so until then call me um…. Fragment for now.

    Rainbow nods in agreement. All right Frag lets go.

   Pet names all ready dang dash you do move fast fragment says playfully (I am going to call him that from know on)

    Dash blushes furiously at his comments. Oh shut up I have nicknames for everyone y-your nothing special.

    Oh I think I am pretty special being immortal and able to use magic and such but enough of that we can talk more later for know lets get over to Fluttershy’s cottage he said while opening the door for Rainbow.

    All right lets go but try to keep up she says and flies off with a rainbow trail behind her.

    Gladly Fragment says and jets off after her quickly catching up then passing her. Race you there he then yells back.

    Oh it is so on she says then picks up speed until the mach cone appears around her until boom she does the sonic rain boom rocketing off.

    Well damn she is fast as shit she just broke the light spectrum he says in awe. He lands next to her a few seconds later. Wow I had no chance in that match but how about a rematch on the ground next time and I’m positive I can win that one.

   All right you are on she says confident she can win that one also.

    All right we can start right after I finish this we can have that rematch Fragment says as he trots up to Fluttershy’s door and opens it and walks in on a seen that leaves him speechless.

    There sat Leyla in a maid outfit and Fluttershy wearing latex with a whip on her mouth.

   Fragment has no expression on his face he just pulls out a camera Pinkie pie style and snaps a photo then his eyes turn a light blue color and he has a giant smile on his face while he closes the door and says sorry for interrupting oh and Leyla I forgive you for killing me know. He then starts hauling ass out of they’re when he passes Rainbow and yells. Race starts now go.

   Who what race ok she says then starts running after Fragment.

    Fragment hears Leyla calling and threatening him but cant understand her words because of his speed he then looks behind himself and sees Both Rainbow and Leyla catching up to him he then starts to pour on the speed and a mach cone starts to appear around him and right before he breaks the light spectrum himself he yells. Its time for a calamity burst he then glows a little bit before shattering the Light spectrum.

   He magically enhanced this rain boom so it would blast backward with more force so it blew both of them back and even ripped trees from where they stood.

    Fragment doesn’t stop until he reaches Twilights tree he then looks back and his mouth drops open. Damn he I kind of went overboard. Several trees and ponies where flung everywhere in they after math of his adequately named calamity burst.

    That was insane you just destroyed everything that was awesome but you are so screwed Dash says landing next to him.

    Eyup he says as he watches all the ponies surround him with angry looks on their faces.

    Then a white and red pony with gold on his wings flies down and announces. My name is Rendan I am captain of Celestia’s guards and you my friend are under arrest.

Wooooooo I finished this yay comment and stuff you know the drill thanks

chapter 5 pissing people off and fighting it what i do

          “Well shit I didn’t mean do break everything it just sort of happened it was an accident” Fragment says trying to get Rendan and his guards to let him go.

    “That doesn’t change the fact that you caused thousands of bits in damage,” he says back.

    “Ok then I guess I have no choice for know I won’t escape only if you let me talk with your ruler”.

    “Ha not likely that would happen” he Rendan says mockingly.

    “All right then I will just leave” Fragment says nonchalantly.

    “Oh how are you going to do that know teleport those hoof cuffs block magic and you’re a Pegasus we bound your wings also,” he says smugly.

    “Oh well let’s just see about that” he says his voice completely void of emotion. He then closed his eyes then flexed his muscles the cuffs and binds break and fall to the ground. “There I got out now I am leaving unless you want to stop me” he says His eyes changing to there black and yellow color then lets get this over with.

    “That was impressive with the handcuffs but you think you can take on all 25 of us” Rendan says with disbelief.

     “Sempre andare avanti nell'inferno or in other words bring that shit” he yells.

     They attacked when the first guard ran up and tried to buck Fragment in the chest which he simply rolled out of the way of then hit him in the back of the neck knocking him out then immediately sending the next guy flying with a well placed buck to the face.

     A few unicorns tried to hang back and lob spells at him they sent a combined lightning spell at him.

     Fragment stuck out his hoof and instead of hitting him it seemed to compress until it looked like a marble with lightning trapped inside he then preceded to eat it he concentrated and sent the energy to his human form to speed up the process from 3 days to 1 minuet. “Omnomnom wow guys that was a lot of energy in that one it tasted great but I still wish I had my other ones that where in my bag when it was torn in the fight (I know I could have put it in my storage space but I didn’t thing of it at the time I was knocked out at the time remember) I only have my Armageddon attack pill left and I would rather not use that already destroyed my own planet with one when I went insane before” he says soberly. He then rushes at them and transforms to his human form smiling sadistically and pops his Knuckles at the stunned ponies.

    “The hell are you ” one of the guards gets out!!

    “Doesn’t matter you wont remember later any way”. He then rushed at them and proceeded to beat them all with a giant bloodthirsty smile on his face. “Well that was fun for me how about you”. He looks over at the pony thrown everywhere. “I might have gone a little over bored I should heal them so they will survive and man that last Pegasus Rendan or something was strong as hell this reminds me of that time I went postal that was fun. He then turned back into a pony and went about healing them and erasing their memory of his human form (hit and run yay). “Now lets go to where they where taking me to in the first place I guess its time to go meet a monarch and maybe scream some more it will be amazing alright lets go after I learn where they live know because the that forest they lived in before not there best choice to raise a family that reminds me I wonder how Celestia is doing anyway I wonder if she is still a troll no she probably grew out of that she has a sister know seems nice” Fragment says to himself as he makes his way to ponyville know lets find the only pony the only pony that will talk to me. He then flies to her cloud home and knocks she opens the door and he asks her she tells him he then thanks her and starts to fly off but she stops him to ask a question.

    “Hey Fragment how did you get away from the guards before they couldn’t have just let you go so what happened” she asks suspiciously.

    “Uh I um there was this cat and OMG A ALBINOCLOUDMADEOFSTEAMANDOREOS” Fragment screams trying to distract her!!!

    “Huh” she says confused and looks behind her.

    Fragment then takes that time to fly off. “Amazing she fell for it time to fly my ass to the castle and have a talk”.

    One of Celestias guards comes running in looking beat up. “What happened to you a Morning Star” she asks she her guard.

    “A Pegasus flew in and asked to see you we denied refused his request he then said what if I said please we again refused him he then said not even for a friend of the family tell her Fragment is hear we again refused he then got irritated with us and started to leave until a hot headed cadet started mouthing off the Pegasus stopped in his tracks turned around and next thing we new he was in the cadets face saying you got stuff kid to bad you mouthed off at the wrong person know I am going to get in there one way or another and if you can stop me try then you know what happened from there”.

    Celestia started laughing. “That cadet managed to piss of a legend look his name up in a history book about the equestrian war with discords forces and learn something cool,” she says smiling.

    “Oh ok but um are you going to try and stop him or something,” the guard asks uncertainly.

    “Oh no my uncle Fragment will be hear soon and I don’t want to spoil his fun oh and tell the guards if they can knock him out then they will be promoted to my personal knight

That’s all have fun bye” she says waving to the guard frowning and slowly backing away.

   As you wish he goes out the door and suddenly comes flying back in knocked out. “Sup Tia you’ve grown you look great how’s life been treating you?” he asks cheerfully.

    “Life’s been good and speaking of life I thought yours ended shoot before Luna was even born” she asks slightly confused.

    “Well you know nothing can keep me down for long deaths no exception,” he says laughing slightly.

    “Oook I will except that for know but that’s not important Rendan seems to need something from me,” she says turning her attention to him.

    “Princess Celestia there is a fugitive on the loose and he is on his way hear as we speak he is extremely strong and in the room,” he says trailing of after seeing Fragment.

    “Sup bro are you ok after our battle” he asks.

    Rendan gets into a defensive stance in front of the princess. “What are you doing here?” he asks back?

    “Me I am just talking to someone that is like family and I am going to get an explanation for something soon” he says.

    “Its ok stand down Rendan my uncle isn’t here to cause any trouble so don’t worry” she says trying to reassure him.

    “What uncle so does he count as royalty than or something?” he asks.

    “Yes I guess it does in a way we aren’t related by blood but he took care of me when I was a foal Luna wasn’t even born then the war started and you know what just look it up in the history books during the war with Discord” she says.

    Rendan turns to Fragment wide eyed. “ How old are you any way,” he asks?

    “10,000 so you know old” he says with a deadpan expression.

    “Oh that old well dang” he says surprised.

    Just before another stupid question was asked a guard walks in saluting to Rendan.

    “Sir your marefriends are here to see you” the guard then salutes again and leaves the room.

    “Ok then I better get out of hear then,” he said while smiling happily to himself and then running out.

    “Ok Celestia I have a few questions I guess the first one is what did he mean marefriends plural me about that first?”

    “Oh that well our male to female population is kind of off”

    “How off” he asks.

    Oh about 20 mares to every 1 stallion off”

    Fragments eyes went wide when she said that. “Wow that is just wow so what are you doing about it?”

    “I passed a law that let’s stallions have there own harem so that females will mate and hopefully make more males so we wont die out that goes for you to so watch out when you go out there our you may end up getting snatched up my a group of mares”

    “…Ok then on to my next question I was summoned here somehow and the ritual to summon me is extremely pacific you literally need to banish an enemy with nightmare in the name and it has to be of royal blood and that enemy has to be defeated by a rainbow and that’s not all after that you need to defeat an entity of chaos again with a rainbow see its very specific I made it that way so what the hell”

    “Ah yes that well my sister was taken over buy a monster called nightmare and was defeated by the elements of harmony than a month later discord freed himself from his stone prison and started wrecking havoc and also was defeated buy the elements of harmony actually he was just defeated a couple of weeks ago so that’s what probably happened”.

    “Ok than sounds legit but dang I have only been summoned once before and that was in a place where there where lots of rainbow weaponry and you know what I’m not getting into that lets just say for a place full of colors they weren’t very nice”.

    Celestia didn’t Know how what to say to that so she decided to leave that one alone. “Ooook then well I didn’t know that there was a ritual to summon you that is kind of cool”

    “Not for me it isn’t its fucking painful I was knocked out this time this still wasn’t as bad as bad as the first time but still I was knocked out this time what ever just forget it I know you didn’t do it on purpose I just have to bitch sometimes sorry”.

    “That’s ok I know that abruptly changing dimensions can be stressful”.

    “You have no idea well enough of that I need a place to live and a job I kind of caused a mess in ponyville and I need to make it up to them” Fragment said smiling sheepishly.

    “I can take care of 2 of your problems I can pay off the damages for you and there is a house I can provide in the place you destroyed ponyville lets go right know”.

    “Yes ok lets wait what”

    There was a bright flash of light as Celestia teleported them both to ponyville library surprising twilight sparkle

    “Oh princess what a surprise I wasn’t at all expecting you”. She then noticed Fragment standing next to her. “And who is that”.

    “Oh this is my uncle Fragment he is going to be living here from know on and I have an announcement for the ponyville so could you get that set up while I show my uncle where he is going to be living”.

    “Yes princess right away but May I ask one question?”

     “Ask away my dear student”.

    By Fragment do you mean the one from the war with Discord like the one whose full name was Fragmented Terra but liked to be called Fragment or Frag?”

    “The very same why do you ask?” said Fragment.

    “Because you are literally a legend out of the History books famous for defeating 100 ponies to get to Discord and holding him off long enough that everypony could escape”.

    “Yes I did do that that was extremely hard you really know your history but I don’t feel like talking about that right know another time ok”.

    “Ok another time I better get started gathering everypony anyway”.

    “Alright then lets go see your new home then” Celestia said to him.

    They then started left they walked for 10 minuets before stopping in front of a large 2-story house.

    “This is where you will be staying unless you decide to move or something but first lets go to the town square for my announcement”.

  “Ok lead on”.

    They then walked for another 30 minuets until they saw a stage with a podium set up they then both got on they stage attracting they attention of everypony.

    “Hello my little ponies I just wanted to introduce my uncle Fragment or if you know your history Fragmented Terra”. There was a collective gasp from the crowd when there heard the name. “Oh yes one more thing he is single”.

    There was an even bigger gasp then all the mares started to stare at Fragment no one said anything until one extra exited mare screamed “dibes”!! Then they all started rushing toward him.

    Fragment watched them with wide-eyed terror before looking at Celestia and saying in a quiet voice. “You fucking troll you set me up”. Celestia said nothing just started laughing and teleported away.

    Fragment looked back at the wave of mares then started running away at full speed. “Oh Jesus oh Jesus so many fucking mares goddamn it Celestia why did you have to do that”. He looks back and sees hundreds of mares chasing him he could feel his heart rate skyrocket and could feel himself slipping into darkness. “No no no my heart rate is getting to high he is going to take over I have to calm down I got to lose these crazy mares”. He then ducks (not the bird) into an alley the mares follow him surging in at as many as they could fit at one time. “Jesus there are so many I have got to get away maybe I can get over our threw the wall”. Just then his heart seems to stop. “Oh no I have to get away now threw the wall it is then”. He starts glowing as he races toward the wall he seems to become see through as he rushes toward the way then passes threw it. “Ok know to get to the forest I can’t let them see me change.

He then races into the forest after 10 minutes of walking and jumping at shadows he finds a clearing and sits trying to calm down but is soon interrupted bye a loud roar and some crashes which set his heart racing again as he sees a hydra enter the clearing.

    “God damn it I just cant get a break today he is going to take over if this doesn’t stop”.

He and the hydra start circling each other Fragment rushes forward but is hit buy one of its heads and is flung away the hydra then walks over to Fragments downed body and starts to step on him repeatedly it was about to step once more before eating its now pulverized prey it let down its foot but before it finished something stopped it the hydra looked down with all of its heads and saw something that struck fear into its heart he was getting back up but something was different. his eyes had changed a blood red color his mane was black and red ad his coat was a pale white color he also gave of an aura of unease the Hydra started to back up from the Pegasus his eye seemed to flash a red color as he walked toward the hydra.

    “It feels great to be out and about and there is in enemy in front of me it must be my birthday or something and I am kind of hungry I haven’t had hydra in while but maybe I will just turn into nothing sound fun no I know what to do to you”. He turned into human form as he spoke he made a symbol with his hands. “Releasing restraints on abilities class A”. His eyes flashed then one big eye open up on his chest and his body started to lose its self to shadow. “Alucard taught ne this when he was still Dracula so lets have fun with hell hounds his name is cuddles and its time for his lunch”. Where his arm should be there was teeth a giant eye above them and was attached to his body by shadow it withered and growled at the hydra it then rushed forward.

    The last things that where heard was a frightened whimper sickening crunches and dark laughter.

Well what did you think of this chapter comment and rate you know the drill oh and if you have any idea tell me and I may use them in this story all right Frag out.

Chapter 6

Sup everypony, how is it going? Sorry I take so long in between chapters. Oh and the name that won is Ragnarok, the one I thought of, so…. what the hell guys... never mind, onto the story.

     Ragnarok walked around in the forest after his ‘meal’. He stretched all his limbs.  “Ah, I haven’t been out of that fool Fragment in so long. It feels great,” he said, while stretching again. “Now where am… goddamn it, I’m in Equestria again! I hate this place! It’s too cute. I can’t wait for those mega spells to hit in 200 years. Those wastelanders know how to live. But for all I know, I will have to wait, good things come to those who wait. I always say that I will never know. Wait where the hell am I? This sucks…”

He proceeds to wander around looking for his way out. After several hours of wandering, he comes across a giant hollowed out tree with a striped green and black Alicorn with a Rainbow Dash-like mane. The only difference was the color and he had Celestia’s tail that he was using as a makeshift pillow as he was slept soundly. “How nice, he looks so peaceful. Let’s put a stop to that, shall we.” He started to fly around building speed. He then did something that had not been seen in Equestria in thousands of years, the original Buccaneer Blaze. “You should look away and cover your eyes, readers.” There was an extremely bright flash of heat and blinding light. It set every tree he passed on fire, which exploded seconds later in a giant conflagration of burning wood chips.

    “Celestia spinning on Luna’s horn what is happen-.” He trailed off as he saw what was happening.

     By this time, Ragnarok had stopped flying and walked through the fire towards her. “Hi! Crazy weather we have here, right? I mean, going from sunny to forest burning is kind of excessive, but oh well it happens. Oh, by the way my name is Ragnarok, what’s yours?”

Caught off guard by his nonchalant attitude, he answers.  “Um my name is Leafin and what the hell happened here?”

    Ragnarok looks around as if seeing what was happening for the first time. “Oh yeah, the fire hmmm… nope don’t feel like putting it out. So I guess I will just go home or something.”

    Leafin couldn’t believe what he was hearing “ The whole forest may burn down and you’re thinking of going home and letting it burn?” He shakes his head in disbelief before continuing, “Wow that’s fucked up. Know what? I am going to ignore you for now, I have to put this fire out.” He then talks in a language that hasn’t been spoken in centuries. After he stops speaking, a roar is heard in the distance, and the sound of wings flapping can be heard.

    “Oh ho, seem like this may be interesting after all. I think I will stay to see how this will play out.”

    A dragon can now be seen flying over the trees. She starts to flap her wings faster than before, quickly putting out the fire. Leafin thanks the dragon in his tongue. He hears clapping behind him. He turns and glares at Ragnorok.

    He stops clapping a few seconds later. “That was interesting. I’m glad I stayed to witness that. I should start fires in a forest more often if it means I get to see interesting things like this more,” he says with a satisfied smile.

    “Wait, you caused the fire?! What’s wrong with you? You could have killed hundreds of animals!”

    “I don’t see the problem with hundreds of peop-“ he was cut off by Leafin trying to cut him in half with his halo-like energy weapons. One seemed to flow with electricity, and the other one seemed to glow ominously. As he dodged the electrical one, he pulled out a blade of his own and clashed with the second. “Hmm… somepony’s angry and apparently you can summon weapons. Nice, this could be fun.” He took to the air. “Come, let’s start a riot, shall we?”

    “I am going to kill you so horribly. When I get through with you, death will piss himself when he sees you” he says before flying after him.

    Ragnarok flew toward Ponyville, “Know what, readers, I just realized? I could have just flown over the forest and seen the brightly fucking pastel colored houses, but you know what? Fuck you, I didn’t think of it.”

    “Who the buck are you talking to? Know what, forget it. Just slow down so I can tear you a new one.”

    “Ohh kinky, but my barn door doesn’t swing that way. Sorry and slow down? Mmmmm no.” He then went even faster.

    That’s it, Leafin thought to himself, I’m going to kill him in a storm of murder death. He started to speed up in an incredible show of pissedoffedness (shut up it’s a word) and determination. He started to even catch up to the Pegasus.

    Ragnarok looked back on the Alicorn and smiled, turned around, and waved to the other pony who by now was almost within swinging distance. He started to flap his wings in an odd rhythm and suddenly seemed to be gone.

    Leafin looked around for the other pony and saw him flying sideways, and by sideways he meant that Ragnarok’s body was pointing toward Ponyville but was flying toward Canterlot. “What in the pony hell?! How in the flying fuck is that possible?”

    “You like? Took me a century to perfect. I can fly any way I want, even diagonally. Fragment has his footwork, but I have my flying.” He started on his way to Ponyville again. Every time Leafin would get close, he would use his quick shift ability to dodge his attack each time until they reached Ponyville. He flew into the clouds and darted to and fro, grabbing several dark storm clouds. One happened to have a dark black Pegasus with a black and red mane and tail sleeping on it. He didn’t take kindly to Ragnarok trying to take it and even less kindly to Ragnarok punching him in the face and taking his cloud.

    “Fuck’s your problem?” he said, shocking Ragnarok with a bolt of lightning.

    “Ow he shot me with fucking lightning that shit hurt.” He complained as he continued to put the storm clouds together.

    “Hey stop what you’re doing! Are you trying to destroy the village?” Rendan shouted at Ragnarok.

    “Ha ha, maybe a little.” Ragnarok answered.

    “Then I’m going to have to kick your ass,” he said as he as he drew his sword and flew after him.

    Ragnarok just smiled at this and said, “Bring it bitch” before flying as fast as he could and slamming into the giant storm cloud, sending an omega lightning bolt racing toward Ponyville.

    “Oh shits! Dark Lightning, stop it!”

   Dark just smiled. “I got this” he said confidently. He then proceeded to stick out his hoof and the lightning responded by diverting its course towards him and started to revolve around him. He pointed his hoof at the now stunned Ragnarok. “Everypony stand back!” Dark shouted. He  sent the bolt at Ragarok.

    “Not expecting that,” Ragnarok said before being hit by the attack.

    “Fuck yes. I got his ass, you see that shit? That was fucking epic” He said while hoof pumping.

    “Oh my god, I am going to kill you so horribly! I can’t even begin to express the pain I am going to put you in.”

    They all looked at each other then back to where they last heard the voice come from. Then they all said in unison “No fucking way. I call bullshit.” They saw him and their jaws dropped.

    Ragnarok flew toward them, clad in white and gold armor and 12 short swords made of pure energy except for one, which was on a chain in his mouth balanced on varying points on his body.

   “Um Dark, I think you will need this,” Rendan says as he hands (hoofs?) him a sword. He looks at Leafin, “Do you know how to use those?” he asks, pointing at his two swords.

    “Let’s find out, shall we?” he states simply.

“You think you can beat me in my Armageddon mode.”

    They all attack at once and well, put simply, shit happened. Ragnarok wasn’t carrying that many blades just for show. As soon as they got close enough, he became a whirling vortex of blades. He would spin and flip them without missing a beat. You would think him not holding more than two blades at once would make the ones that he isn’t using wouldn’t have as much impact.

    Rendan made the mistake of trying to stop more than one blade at a time and rushed in and was stopped cold by one. “The hell? It feels like I ran into a sledgehammer, it’s fucking heavy.”

    Just then, Ragnarok seemed to appear perched on the blade and wrapped Rendan with the chain attached to the blade in his mouth, cutting him a little, and said, “Rushing Legion style, pecial attack Biting Demon.” He bit down on the chain again, which glowed with energy and pulled. Rendan seemed to pulse and six blades flew at him. Seconds before they hit him, he was surrounded by a glow of magic and it pulled him back.

    They looked back and saw the blades seemed to make the shape of a terrifying monster biting down where Rendan’s head was a second ago. They all looked at each other and gulped realizing what almost happened.

“Thanks bro. If you hadn’t jumped in there, I would be headless” he said, reaching out for a brohoof.

    “Anytime,” he answered, returning the brohoof. “Right know though, we have some plot to kick.”

    Just then, Rendan sees somepony he knows.  He smiles devilishly “I have a plan Dark. Leafin, distract him.”

    “Ok then. Dark Lightning says let’s do this.”  He starts to lob shock grenades at Ragnarok, then a lightning bolt seems to hit him and he appears behind him the surprised Ragnarok with several shock grenades.

   Straight into Leafin who then cuts him a few times.

    Ragnarok then sees Rendan making hand (hoof?) gestures. “What the hell are you do-.”  He starts to say before something with talons slams into him knocking him out and sending him flying.

    “Fuck yes! Oswald is here. I just kicked your ass and you didn’t even know it.” He then turned toward the three ponies. “Hey I’m Oswald, part of Celestia’s stealth force,” he said, extending his claw toward Dark, then Leafin for a hoof shake.

    “Um sup? I’m Dark, that’s Rendan, and that’s actually…. I don’t know who that is. So who are you?”  He asks turning to Leafin.

    “Oh me? I’m Leafin, and can I ask you a question? What’s up with your coat and your hair?”

    Oswald looks confused for a second, then his expression brightens in understanding.  “Ah you must mean my color and my Jew fro,”  (That’s how he told me to describe his fro, don’t get mad at me ok.) he says, looking down at his black feathers and coat and the white plumage on his chest.  “My color I got from my family genes and the hair is just my preference. Why, something wrong with it?”

   Before Leafin could answer, Rendan interrupts “Sorry to interrupt, but we have to go look for him before he gets away.”

    “Oh shit, let’s go then.”  The others say at the same time and rush off in Ragnarok’s general direction.

chapter 7 i didn't see your castle there sorry

A/N:  I might not have mentioned this last chapter, but I have to thank 2K Chrome for fixing my story and also, I decided to scrap that bot idea, so don’t worry about it. And I thinks that all sooooo…. onto the story.

    “What the hell hit me? Whatever… where are those Pegasi? I still have to kill them! Wait, more importantly, I have to end this fast! I’m starting to run low on energy. I can only summon like 6 blades now.”

    “Over here dumbass! Ready to get your ass kicked some more or are you going to give up and come quietly?”  Rendan asks with one of his eyebrows in the air.

    “Ha, give up? No way! All I have to say is come at me bro!”  Ragnarok yelled, throwing his front legs wide and he stood on his back.

    Suddenly, a lightning bolt came streaking down from a cloud at Ragnarok.  He looks up at it, smiles, then throws the sword with the chain at the lightning and as soon as they collided, it raced straight up to where the bolt had originated. Then, the chain suddenly went taut.  He heard a shout from above the clouds.

    “Ha! I knew your ass was there, just had to wait,”  he said triumphantly as he pulled the chain trying to pull Dark down.

     “Hey! Let me go you stupid mother fucker!” Dark says as he flapped his wings harder, trying to get the barbed chain out of his skin.

    “But I just want to kill you as brutally as…” he didn’t finish his sentence because while he was concentrating on Dark, Rendan slammed into him.

    Ragnarok bucks Rendan in the chest sending him flying off a little ways.  He quickly charges forward, trying to impale Ragnarok on his blade, but missed as he flew with him materializing a few blades of his own.  He then deflects the several ninja stars that suddenly fly his way from Oswald, trying to get another sneak attack on him but failing as he was sensed by Ragnarok. He  blocked a strike from Leafin who had become visible trying to cut him with his blade, but only succeeding in shocking him a bit. Ragnarok had his eyes closed as he sensed them instead of using his sight as to not be snuck up on. To anypony watching this, it looked like there were several multicolored lights spinning and flying, sometimes being seen for a split second before disappearing again in a colored blur straight toward Canterlot castle, then straight through the castle.

    Celestia was sitting on her throne when there was suddenly a huge explosion. “What the hell was that!?”  Celestia exclaims, looking around for where the noise was coming from.

    Suddenly, she sees Ragnarok come crashing through a wall, shouting something about shoving a horn somewhere inappropriate before shooting a wave of water back through the hole, another explosion ensuing. There were several more crashes and explosions before Dark came flying through, making a new hole in the opposite wall. He got back up and threw several shock grenades through the holes. There was the sound of a bat hitting some of the grenades, which came sailing back into the room, and suddenly a bat came sailing through the hole soon after with the grenade still attached, blowing the floor completely to smithereens

    “Shit that was close! I almost got exploded… no me gusta,”  he said before he came flying into the room, much to Celestia’s surprise.

    “Uncle Ragnarok, what are you doing here? Why did Fragment change what happened?”

    “Um… I’m not sure there was something about being chased by mares and the-” POW! He was suddenly cut off when Oswald hit him, sending him flying.  “Ouch! Son of a bitch that’s it! Cuddles, go!”  As soon as he finished talking his shadow seemed to come to life taking the form of a very large dog.  “Felix combina formita attrezzatura, and Felix, we have got to change your name. The one you have now sucks.”  The phoenix seemed to roll its eyes before he transformed in a flash of light.  He had equipped himself to Cuddles covering him from head to toe in all white armor that seemed to burn with perpetual white fire.

    “Well shit… that does not look good,”  Rendan said, looking over at the dog.

    Ragnarok walked over to cuddles and took off his collar. “Alright boy restraint release under article three S class in 3 2 1. Go wild buddy,” he said, smiling as he took several steps back.  The hell hound’s body started to contort in odd places, suddenly there were several snapping sounds and sets of bones shot out of his body. The two that shot out of his back ended in sharp blade-like appendages with a black fire burning on their tips and the other set split apart into a pair of skeletal wings which he immediately started flapping.

    “That was disgusting to watch, but at least he can’t fly with those wings.” As soon as Dark said that, the hell hound looked at him, smiled, and the wings burst into black flames, giving him lift.  “Shit I need to shut up sometimes. Alright,” he sighed, “let’s do this.”

   “How about we not?” Celestia said as she covered Ragnarok and Cuddles in her magic.  “No more fighting, you already destroyed my castle. So as punishment, I am going to turn you back into Fragment, because frankly he is less of a dick. So bye.”  Her horn started glowing, it  engulfed Ragnarok in the same glow. He struggled for a few seconds, but was quickly put to sleep.

    His coat changed color from white to black and the red part of his mane turned turquoise once again. He stood up and stretched. “Sup everypony? What’d I miss… and why are you staring?”  Fragment said while looking from pony to pony with no expression on his face.

    “Um ya… so all we had to do is put Ragnarok to sleep and he would have turned into this guy and stopped trying to kill us?” Dark asks, frowning slightly.

    “Ya, that about sums it up,”  Fragment says nodding.

    “So if we just waited, he would have just fallen asleep on his own then?”  Rendan asks in confusion.

    “ Hahaha, oh no he doesn’t have to sleep ever. He would of just caused mayhem until somepony knocked him out.  Then I would have taken back over and all would be well again, except for all the dead people, destroyed buildings, and maybe planet, but that only happened once, so no big deal.  Nopony was seriously hurt, except for a hydra that got eaten, but that’s ok, I was going to kill it anyway. He just saved me the trouble.  And there go the looks again! Why do y’all keep looking at me like that?”

    “Because your ass is crazy take on a hydra are you on moonsugar or something?”  Leafin asked skeptical.

     “Hey, no I’m not! And don’t knock it till you see me in action. Shoot, I bet anyone of y’all could kill one yourselves, y’all certainly have the power. Here, come at me and I will test to see if you have the skills. Come on one at a time,”  he said while making the appropriate hoof gestures.

     “Oh no, there will be no more fighting in my castle. I will have to have nearly the whole thing rebuilt.” She suddenly had an idea.  “Know what? You can fight. Just in front of thousands of ponies in Canterlot to help pay for the damages.”

    “Know what? Fuck you, I do what I want!”  Fragment says standing on his back legs. He was suddenly shrouded in a sun colored aura and poof he was gone.

    “Damn she just sent her own uncle to the moon. That bitch is hardcore,”  Dark blurted out loud then covering his mouth soon after.

    “Alright, so anypony else want to disobey me? Step right up! The moon’s pretty big you know.” She paused, looking intensely at each of the remaining ponies in turn. “No one? Good, then pass these flyers out and get out of here.” They all stared at her in disbelief as she suddenly yelled in her Canterlot voice. “FUCK Y’ALL LOOKIN AT?! GET YOUR ASSES OUT OF HERE BEFORE I CURVE STOMP ALL OF Y’ALL!”

      They all started flying away at full speed.

Luna then slowly made her way into the room. “Um, Tia did you really need to threaten them like that? It’s not like they meant to destroy the entire castle.”

    “I know, but they destroyed my favorite chair. Nopony destroys my chair.”

“She.  Sent.  Me. To.  The. Moon. That’s not cool. When I…” sigh, “Whatever, I just have to get off this rock, then I am going to prank her so hard. But I just have to get off of here. I hope I packed a jet pack or something.  Alright, where did I put that hammer space?”  He glows for a second, then a door appears, which he quickly opens and walks inside. There were several bangs before Fragment exclaims, “I just realized I’m wearing sunglasses. Why didn’t I notice till now? Better take them off for now until I actually need them.  Now, where is that oooohhh portal gun. Yes, this will work. I just need something that I haven’t used in millennia.” He pulled out a custom pipbuck. It had an orange and black tribal pattern to it. He looked at it for a second before strapping it to his wrist and picking up the gun. He then activated the S.A.T.S., cast a spell on his eyes so he could see down to Equestria, locked on, and fired. It streaked toward the earth and struck town hall, freaking out several ponies.  “Got that bitch,” he says happily. He then stuck one to the surface of the moon and jumped in again. Ponies freaked the fuck out as he popped out and yelled, “Now you’re thinking with portals!”  He then walked off whistling like nothing happened.

    Everypony stared at him for the longest time until one pony broke himself from the group and asked the question on everypony’s mind.  “What in the ever-loving, crack-covered, tentacle monster fucking, (it goes on like this for at least 10 minutes, I think he is done. Let’s check) Celestia spinning on Luna’s horn, (Nope, not done. No wait! Yep, he’s done) in the wide world of Equestria just happened?”

     “Wow that was the most colorful cursing I have ever heard. And well, I’m immortal. So that’s saying a lot. And don’t you have portals here?”  He said, while getting rid of the portals and putting away the portal gun.

    “Yes, but how can you do it? You’re a Pegasus.”

    “I am older as fuck, that’s how. And wait, who are you anyways?”

    “Oh ya um… I’m Alvstrom, what do you mean?”

“Wait a sec, got to tell you what he looks like… nope fuck it, here is a pic  go nuts and ponyfic it. I don't know what to say,” Fragment said, seeming to stare into space.

    “Dude, who are you talking to?”

    “Nopony. You will just think I’m crazy if I told you. Well, if you don’t already think so already.”

    “Yep I definitely think that, but anyway, what’s with that device on your leg?”

    Fragments looks down at the device. His eyes turns a dark violet color. “This thing is something that is a reminder that I wish I shouldn’t have to. It’s a reminder that some of the some of the worst things can come out of the best intentions,” Fragment said as he trotted off, seeming to be lost in memory

    Alvstrom looked confused for a second before trotting after him. “What is that supposed to mean?”

    Fragment looked over at him sadly. “Do you really want to know?”

   “Um sure, I would like to, but first can you tell me about why the fuck your eyes change color?”

    “Know what? Fine. I guess I could tell you, just stand still.”  He then lit the (palm?) of his hoof with a small clear flame with a violet outline.

    “Wait, why..? Keep that away from me! I need an adult!”  Alvstrom managed to get out before Fragment pressed the flame into his forehead. It flared up quickly before sinking into his forehead completely.

    “And now the story begins.”

A\N: How will the story of how Fragment got his eyes go? Hmmm I wonder…

chapter 8 Resolve

A portal opened in the middle of nowhere, Alvstrom and Fragment stepped out.

    “What happened? What did you do to me?!”

    “I used the flames of judgment  on you. It lets me show memories that I am too lazy to speak, so instead watch,” he said with a somber tone, pointing down.

    Several feet below where they were standing, there was a war going on. The only thing odd about it was on two different points.  At one point, there was a human Fragment with dark brown eyes dashing around the battlefield, wearing his usual pair of gloves, except he was wearing a match of boots. They were clad in a bright golden flame.  Not just that, but instead of them being there normal orange and black, they were gold and white.

    On the other side, there was a man running around, his fists and feet glowing.  Every time he hit someone, his fist would burn right through them, and every time he kicked people, they would split in half.  Also instead of dirt, it was made of cloud (still going to say ground though).

    Alvstrom looked over at Fragment and asked, “Why do you seem so slow?”

   “That is because things are going to get very crazy and very fast. Now shut up and watch.”  They both looked then back to the battle at hand.

    Fragment was being propelled around the battlefield by flames that shot from his boots and every time he moved, there was a sonic boom behind him.  He appeared in front of a soldier who tried to swing his sword at him. He didn’t even get his blade up before Fragment’s fist smashed into him. But Fragment didn’t stop there, he forced his hand the rest of the way through the man’s chest.  He lifted the man into the air and smashed him back down.  The man seemed to sink into the ground. Then the ground erupted seconds later, thousands of blood red spikes shooting forward in waves, some killing multiple people on one spike.  He didn’t even stop to admire his handiwork, he was already in front of another one, drilling his legs repeatedly, each kick turning parts of him to stone, then sending them ripping through the other side, not just killing the soldier, but whoever was hit also. He then extended his hand sending a jet of black flames shooting forward hitting several people. Those who were hit started to contort as they were slowly sucked into themselves, blood and gore going everywhere until there were no less than twelve black holes. He made a crushing gesture with his hand and said luci ultima fermata. It got noticeably darker, then the orbs exploded, sucking anyone near toward it. The soldiers struggled in vain to get away. They actually held each other away for a little while until one of them slipped. As soon as he touched one, it exploded, sending black shards everywhere. Whatever the shards hit, a small black hole would form, absorbing whatever part it hit, killing several and wounding even more. He stuck his hand out and grabbed his wrist. Green sparks started to form around his hand, then a large emerald green lightning bolt shot from his hand. It flew straight for several feet, then started to split. Then the ones that split started to split and so on, but instead of shocking people to death, it ripped through them, impaling them on its spikes. Fragment kept fighting, working his way slowly toward the middle of the battlefield.

     On the other side, the other man was having the same results as Fragment. He punched the ground and it burst, sending magma flowing, melting all in its path. He swung his fist, sending a giant wave of air that mowed down hundreds. He stomped his foot into the ground and plants started growing out, several sending waves of gas. Everyone that was hit, their eyes changed a black and yellow color and started attacking anything in sight. Soldiers attacking soldiers, soldiers attacking teammates, there was even one attacking a tree.  And the whole time, the man kept walking also toward the middle of the battlefield.

    They made their way to the middle and stopped. They then started to speak.

   Fragment spoke first. “I’m here to kill you. Nothing would make me happier.”

    “Aw don’t be mad at me big bro, all I did was become a got and ruin the lives of billions of people.”

   Fragment’s face went stormy and he practically growled. “I invoke the rite of battle between S rank immortals.”

    “Jeez, someone’s grumpy, but oh well. I expect you should go all out first before we start, don’t you think I will do the same.”  A pure white aura engulfed him in light.

    “As you wish.”  Suddenly, a red and turquoise aura surrounded him.

     They started growing until they touched each other.  They then pushed each other, fighting for control, then the white one suddenly the man walks out. “Forma divina bitch.”

    “Ha your form names were always so cliché,” Fragment instead of it dissipating, he just stepped out of the aura in a black armor with red and turquoise lines running all along the armor in a tribal style. “Caduta della forma dei.”

  They both started walking toward each other, getting into stances, but were interrupted by a loud booming voice (yes loud and booming, it’s that loud) interrupted them. It was so loud they were knocked off balance by its force.  “YOU TWO CHALLENGE EACH OTHER TO A MATCH AND YOU DON’T EVEN WAIT FOR ME TO SHOW UP.”  They both looked up to see a black dot descending toward them.

     The other two said together, “Alright, we’re sorry, so stop fucking yelling!”

    The figure cleared his throat and started speaking.  “Sorry, I had to stop y’all before you destroy the planet. Anyway, let’s get you two to limbo, then we can begin,” He raised his hand, which appeared blurry to look at and the more disturbing it was.  “Oh wait, whose limbo are we going to?”

    “Mine!” they both said at once, then looked angrily at each other.

     “Calm down you two, I will just flip a coin,” he points at Fragment “Your heads,” and then points at the other man, “Your tails.”  He flips a gold coin and catches it.  “And it’s heads. Fragment’s limbo it is.”  He snaps his fingers.

    Everything changes, suddenly instead of clouds, they were standing on pristine white sand, water lapping at it.  But if you look into the distance, the sand abruptly stopped turning into blackened and cracked earth, the cracks glowing from magma. Just below the surface, creatures straight out of horror stories walked around.

    The man in the cloak pointed toward Fragment and said “Are you ready?”  Fragment nods.  He then points to the other man and asks.  “Are you ready?” the other man nods.  “Then begin.”

    They started toward each other again and got into their stances.

(listen to this while they fight)

They suddenly exploded into a flurry of movements. Fragment shot forward and hammered his fists repeatedly into the other man, sending him flying, sliding over the water, making a wave from the sheer speed and force with which he was sent flying.

     The man slowed himself down and shot forward, running on the water like it was solid ground and slammed full body into Fragment, then wrapped his arms around him and German suplexed him into the ground, making a crater with his body. He stood over him and started to pound his fist into Fragment, smashing him farther and farther into the ground.

   Fragment caught his fist and threw him back toward the water. The man stopped and looked back toward where Fragment was, but saw only a residual flame. Suddenly, he appeared in front of him and slammed his burning elbow downward into his face. He was hit so hard that there was a hole in the water, which exploded back upward with massive force.

    “You’re stronger than I remember,” the man commented while pulling off pieces of stone and flesh, revealing his face perfectly fine underneath. “But I think we should stop holding back and actually go all out, don’t you agree?”

    Fragment smiled at that, “Alright then, for real this time. Let’s go at it.”

    They both swung their fist at the same time, making them clash and the water under their feet just evaporated. They stood there, just pressing there fists against each other’s. The ground shook from their force.  Suddenly, they vanished.

    “Fragment suddenly appeared hundreds of miles away near a volcano, swinging his fist at what seemed to be nothingness and connected.  Suddenly, the other man was there, blocking the strike making the volcano explode from just the shock wave, spewing lava everywhere.

    They started to unload their attacks at each other.

    The man struck out with a kick that hit Fragment so hard that one of his ribs stuck out and made the grout crack from the force.

   Fragment seemed to shrug off the damage and responded by swinging his elbow that connected with the man’s chest, making a deep gash across his chest, which ice started to grow out of it.

    He just reached into the gash and pulled it out, ripping off chunks of flesh in the process and tossed it away before it spread further.  He swung his fist so fast that it seemed to teleport into Fragment’s stomach more than collide with it, sending him flying through several mountains, turning them to powder in the process.

        Fragment stood back up with his holding where he was hit, blood running down his chin. Suddenly, several spikes shoot out of his stomach and back. The man suddenly appeared in front of Fragment, sending a roundhouse kick at him, but was stopped by a huge blast of energy from his mouth.

    Once the smoke from the blast dissipated, the man stood there, his arms still crossed from blocking the blast. They were slightly burnt, but he was otherwise unhurt. “Ha what was tha-?”  Fragment, unleashing a flurry of attacks, cut him, several snapping sounds were heard after each punch.

    The man caught one of Fragment’s fist and put him in a clench.  He started ramming knees into Fragment’s making the very ground shake, even though they were 100ft in the air. He locked his hands together and pile drove him headfirst into the ground. The ground cracked and split, creating a gorge with the force.

     The man flew out and scanned the area with his eyes for signs of the other man. But he was looking in the wrong place, so he didn’t notice the blade with a chain attached coming at him until almost too late.  He was able to block the strike by summoning a blade and using it to deflect the strike, only being nicked.  Fragment floated up holding six blades.

    The man summoned five more. They both sat there for a minute before both of them sent their blades slashing at each other. Their blades hammering into each other over and over anything. They were within a mile of got turned into powder from the sound alone this went on for days until both of them were covered in blood and their blade shattered. They started bashing each other with their fists again.

    Fragment punched him in the face, breaking his nose, to which he responded by jabbing his finger into his ribs and dislocating it.

“I think it’s time to end this, don’t you agree?”  Fragment said, clenching his fist, inserting a glowing blue marble making it glow a bright blue color.

    “I agree. This has gone on long enough it ends here,” the man replied back, pulling out a completely black sword, concentrating on it for a second, getting skinnier and paler by the second, and the blade glowing more and more with a red light. “Come, this is the end.”

    They charged at each other. The man stabbed and yelled, “Devourer’s strike!”

    Fragment swung his fist and yelled, “Maximum burst!”

The blade being longer, impaled Fragment, cooking his insides.

    Fragment ground his teeth and brought his fist slamming into the others man’s chest, blowing a gaping hole in it, making him fall to the ground in pain.  He picked up the other man, thinking him dead.

    As soon as Fragment picked him up, the man threw a plant he had crushed to powder into his face, then started laughing.

    “What’s so funny?”  Fragment asked, trying to wipe the powder out of his eyes.

    “Since I can’t enslave that world, I will have you destroy it instead,”  he said before coughing several times before dying.

    “Ha finally now I get my soul,” the cloaked man said, throwing back his hood to reveal a skeletal face.  He snapped his fingers and they were back in their original planet. He looked over at Fragment. “Hey bro, are you ok?” he asked. “You should be fully healed after the battle.”

    Suddenly, Fragment’s eyes shoot open, only they were a dark black color around the outside and a bright glowing yellow on the inside. He looked around, but didn’t seem to see anything.

Suddenly, several soldiers started to run over, but before they could get near him, he yelled. He stuck out his hand and sent a huge gout of fire.

    The pony Fragment looked over at Alvstrom and said, “We should go. Things get ugly from here.”

    “Wait, you mean that powder made you go berserk and changed the color of your eyes?”

    “Yes, that’s what happened.”

    “Well, who was the guy you were fighting?”

    “My brother.”

     “You killed your own brother?”

     “Yes, to save my home, I killed the hell out of him,”  Fragment said nonchalantly.

    “Wow, that’s kind of hardcore. Anyway, one more question.”

    Sigh. “Fine what is it? After this, I’m going to sleep. Maintaining that vision took it out of me.”

    “Ok then… um what happened to that planet after you went berserk?”

    Fragment frowned, his eyes turning black on the outside and purple on the inside “Ah, I was hoping you didn’t ask that… the planet is no more.”

    “W-what do you mean by that? What happened?”

    “I killed everything, then blew up the planet afterward before I came to. Now good-bye,”  He said before trotting off with Alvstrom, staring after him his mouth touching the ground.

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A/N: This chapter wasn’t happy at all, but hey on the bright side, I went to six flags a few days ago. Kay, that’s all. Comment and rate, you know the drill… maybe.

chapter 9 backlash

A/N: Don’t be mad at my country accent, I suck at it also  ,read this story it’s legit

    Fragment walked up to his house about to open the door, his hand inches away from the knob.

    But then, it suddenly burst open and a bright pink pony pulls him in and yells, “Surprise! Welcome to Ponyville Frag… ment where did you go?” Pinkie said, looking around.

    “Hey! Don’t surprise me like that! I almost turned you to stone shit,”  he said from walking out behind a house several feet away with a turquoise ball of energy in his hoof that dissipated as he got closer.

    “Wow, that was fast! Haha, sorry about that, but it wouldn’t be a surprise party without the surprise! By the way, my name’s Pinkie Pie.”

    “Ok, hi Pinkie. I just have one question. Ok, two. The first one, how did you get in my house and how in the ever-loving fuck did you hide the presence of at least 20 people?  That shouldn’t be possible, what’s…” he was cut short by somepony putting their hoof on his shoulder. He looked over and saw Rainbow shaking her head no. “…but but but ☹.”

    “Just leave it dude, nopony understands Pinkie. Just…” she sighed, “leave it.”

     “Fine. I would say I need a drink, but there would be no point. Can’t get drunk anyway.”

    “What are you talking about? Are you kidding? Why not?”

    “I wish to put as much alcohol in front of me. I will drink it and not feel a thing.” He then smiled devilishly. “Want to try me”?

    “Heck ya! I am going to stuff you so full of booze that you will explode several times. It will be awesome!”

    “Ok, first a hard cider.”

    Fragment picked up the cider and chugged it easily. “What else you got? It tasted good, but not much alcohol. So bring the next one”

    “Alright beer next here.”  Just then, everypony else started to get interested.

     “RD, what’s happenin’? Drinkin contest or sumn?” asked Applejack curiously.

    “No, he said he can’t get drunk so we are testing that out.”

    “That seems like a bunch of shit,” said a wasted Twilight.  “I mean that’s silly. What kind of shitty curse is that?”

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    “Hahaha actually, I used to be a drunk. I was trying to get rid of the visions by drinking myself to sleep.  My friend didn’t get it and thought they were helping me and so they made it so that I couldn’t get wasted anymore.”  He seemed to be lost in thought.

    “What where the visions about?”

    They were about all the times I have either died or spit in death’s face.  Well dying and nearly dying tends to do a number on your mind and… well after a few centuries of visions I couldn’t take it. My mind broke in two and the rest is history.  Enough of this sad stuff y’all are supposed to be trying to get me drunk. Bring me the strongest thing you got and I will chug it,” he said, trying to lighten up the mood.

    That seemed to snap them out of their funk. They looked at each other for a second then nodded.

    “Umm… I don’t like that look you’re giving each other. What’s this drink made of and… you know what? Don’t care, bring to me so I can more than likely scream in pain and cry on the floor.”

     Pinkie looked at Fragment, her smile stretching past its normally monstrous proportions. “Okie dokie lokie.”  She started to back away toward the bar with the smile plastered to her face.

    Fragment looked around and noticed that everypony was smiling crazily.  “Umm y’all are kind of scaring me. What is this monster drink?”

    “It’s this,” Pinkie said, placing a bottle in front of him.  It was in a lime green bottle and it contained the darkest liquid he had ever laid eyes on. He took one whiff and his nose hairs cried out in pain and fell out. He swallowed and opened the bottle and made to pour it in a cup, but was stopped by Pinkie. “No, you can’t do that, the cup would melt. You have to drink it straight from the bottle. And you said you would drink it all, so bottoms up.”

     “But this seems like it will kill me. What’s it called?”

        “It’s called Pinkie Pie’s Insanity. Now drink it I say! All of it.” She then stuffed it in Fragment’s mouth making him drink. He started kicking, trying to stop her but she didn’t even blink until it had all gone down his throat.  She then noticed he wasn’t moving at all. “Are you ok?” she asks.

     Fragment had started shaking  “Aaaaaahhhhh holy shit my mouth is melting!! I need fire to put out this burning! Somepony tear my fucking mouth off!!! Shiiiiiit!”  Blood started leaking from his eyes and mouth.  “No! Not now, I don’t have time for this!”

    “Hold on there partner, you’s ain’t lookin so good ther.”

     “Sorry I… well me and Ragnarok used too much magic and I am still kind of damaged from being stepped on by a Hydra, that wasn’t fun. It’s coming back on me, I just need to get some rest and I will be fine, don’t worry.”

    “Ok then, if you say so. Come on Twilight, let’s get you home,” Rarity said, helping the lavender mare make her way home.

    “Ok bye! Thanks for coming. Sorry I had to cut it short, maybe we can do this again when I’m not being punished for using so much energy.” Fragment wiped some of the blood out of his eyes and yawned.  As soon as he saw everyone had left, he ran to the bathroom and vomited the mixture up and collapsed on the ground in pain. “Alright now, I need to get to the castle fast before my body tears itself apart.” He started doing calculations in his head. “Ok, so if I run full tilt to Canterlot, it will take me… about 45 minutes and I don’t have that much time. Ok then, I will just have to use that, I am going to break a few things, but oh well, I don’t exactly have the time. So let’s do this.”  Fragment closed his eyes, breathing slowly at first. It then started to speed up and suddenly veins started to show. His breath quickened more and even more veins started popping out. He opened his eyes. They were completely black. He took a step and was gone, a loud crack was heard and then another as the wall exploded outward. Fragment was off his speed, letting him easily do a calamity burst, but instead of making a ring like a normal Rainboom, it covered him in its light, making him look like a turquoise and black comet speeding down the road. Suddenly, another loud crack was heard. Fragment went even faster, disappearing, going too fast for mortal vision. He ran at that speed for nine minutes before stopping in the throne room where several explosions where suddenly heard, starling the three Alicorns in the room.  Fragment looked in confusion at the third Alicorn.  “Who are-.“

    He was cut off when the third Alicorn sprang into action by suddenly summoning a scythe and charged.

    “Naga, wait! Calm down, he is not an enemy!”  Luna yelled out trying to stop him.

    But Naga was too into the battle to hear her.  He swung his weapon at Fragment.

    Fragment watched the swing in what seemed to him like slow motion. “I don’t have time for this.” He slammed his front hooves together, creating a flash of light, which dissipated after a few seconds, revealing Fragment wearing a necklace with what appeared to be locks on it.  He  reached up and grabbed one, pulling it off with a click.  The lock glowed and morphed into a violin, which he quickly started playing. His hooves were a blur on the strings.

    “What’s happening? I feel so tired suddenly. What are you doing to me, what’s with that violin?”  Naga asked stumbling a bit.

    “This is one of my best weapons. It’s called the Myriad of Malice and whatever song I play has its own effects. Now sleep, we may speak more later.” He looked around, seeing everything in the room had fallen asleep.  “Alright let’s get that bag.”  Fragment trotted over to Celestia, picking her up and bringing her over to the door that housed the Elements of Harmony. Sticking her horn in the slot, making the door slide open, he set Celestia down gently and walked in. He walked around the Elements, going to the back wall. He put his hoof on a specific spot on the wall and pressed. The panel slid up to reveal a slot made for a blade.  Fragment got the violin and touched it to his necklace. It flashed and the violin was gone, and in its place the lock was back.  He grabbed another lock, which turned into a pure white sword, its guard looked like the head of a phoenix with the blade coming out of his mouth. The blade itself had a soft violet aura surrounding it.  He stuck the blade into the slot and twisted. There was suddenly a grating sound and the wall started to split apart, revealing a solid ebony chest to which Fragment proceeded to walk up to and open, revealing several bags.  Fragment picked one up and opened it, revealing that it was filled to the brim with glowing red marble-like objects.  “Nope,” he said before dropping it back into the chest and grabbing another. He looked inside, revealing it to be filled with black marbles. “Yes one of these.” He continued to look through the bags until he found yellow ones.  He lifted both of them to his mouth, but stopped suddenly when he started violently coughing. His body shaking uncontrollably, his eyes changed back to their semi-normal color, and the veins on his legs went away and blood seeped from several places on his body. Bones jutting from one of his back legs and three of his ribs were also showing. “Damn that blood limit breaker is brutal on my body. Now where are those vigor’s?” He looked around until he spotted where they had fallen. He slowly and agonizingly dragged his body over to them until he was close enough, then used his tongue to pop them into his mouth, biting into them.  His body was covered with a warm black and yellow flame.  He grunted in pain as his bones fixed themselves, knitting themselves back together, his eyes then stopped bleeding. He could feel enough of his magic coming back to stop his body from deteriorating.  He could also feel the damage the deterioration had caused being reversed.  Fragment sat there until his body was healed enough for him to walk. He started moving back toward the throne room, closing the doors behind him and pulling out his sword and switching it for the violin once again. He walked over to Naga and put him in a restraining lock so he wouldn’t attack again. He then started to play, everypony started to shift and move waking from their magically-induced slumbers.

    Luna spoke first. “Why where we asleep? What happened?” she asked groggily. She looked around, her eyes widening when she spotted her uncle restraining her son; She got up and raced over to them.

    “So who is this kid Lulu? I like him, he’s a fighter. Not much of a wrestler though.”  Fragment said nonchalantly.

    “That is my son and I would appreciate it if you would get off of him.”

    Fragment chuckled a bit before saying,  “Alright as long as he doesn’t attack me again.” He then released Naga and took a few steps back.

    Naga glared for a second before he turned to Luna and asked, “Mom, who is this guy?”

    “Why don’t you ask him yourself? The answer may surprise you.”

    “So what are you to me?”  he asked.

    “I am… you are my grand-nephew. Just call me Uncle Frag or Uncle or Frag. You know, whatever floats your boat. Hmm… ya know what? We should hang out? And why does it feel like somepony is trying to burn a hole in me with their eyes?” Fragment turned around to the glare of Celestia.

    “Uncle Fragment, how did you get off the moon?”

    Fragment smiled nervously. “He um… I thought we covered this like I said before. Fuck you, I do what I want! Okthanksbye nice to see you again Lulu! Come on Naga, let’s hang out, we will go for pizza.” Fragment proceeded to pick him up and threw him out the window before jumping out himself.

      Naga flew over to Fragment. “You escaped the moon? How?”

     “He…. I will tell you over pizza. Let’s go.”

    Naga just nodded and they both flew off to spend time together.

A/N:

This is what Naga looks like

chapter 10 recovery

A/N: No note today, shit I feel like my minds breaking…. again.

    “Alright, now where do we go? I can’t go back there, and I don’t really care where we go. As long as there are no pianos, I’m fine with it,”  Naga said with a shrug.

    “Alright then to a pizza pla….”

    “Um, Uncle Frag are you ok?” Naga turned around, not seeing him. “Uncle Frag, where did you go?” Naga said, looking around. He flew off to look for Fragment, calling his name as he went.

                       Several hours later (like seven)

    Fragment wakes up in a bed that’s not his own, gauze wrapped around one of his legs and one of his wings. “Fucking myriad, one of my strongest weapons, also the thing that’s got me killed the most 3005 years ago. I lost the ability to protect myself from it.  But me nearly dying again is not the important thing right now, it’s where the hell am I?!” Fragment yelled out loud.

    “You’re in my house. I heard a loud crash, and there you were, your leg and wing broken. What happened?” she asked him with a concerned look.

    “Um, I passed out and fell out of the sky because of a weapon I used put me to sleep, and I crashed and woke up here.  Oh how rude of me, my name is-”

    “Fragment, I know. I read about you in school. My name is Vinyl Scratch, nice to meet you.”

    They shook hooves, then Fragment spoke, “So what do you do? Something with music based on your cutie mark.”

    “Yes, I’m a DJ. Oh, and why were you looking at my flank, and more importantly, like what you see?” she asked.

    Fragment blushed so hard that it could even be seen through his black coat. “It’s um…. a pleasant sight I must say.”

    It was Vinyl’s turn to blush. “Wow that was very honest of you. Haha… anyway, um do you want to see my setup?”

     “Um ya ok. What type of music do you play and listen to?”

    “I play mostly electro or dubstep. And I actually like either electro or rock and what are you doing?”  (Those music genres don’t exist there, but I don’t care. So deal with it.jpeg)

    “I am getting up, what are you doing?”

    “Wouldn’t do that, your leg is broken. Or at least let me set it before you walk on it, oh my god what the hell!”  In the middle of her talking, he had got his leg and just popped it back into place.

    He then rewrapped it, making a sling to hold his leg still.  “Ok then, after you,” he said, bowing as well as he could with one leg.

    “My, what a gentlecolt,” she said in a fake Canterlot accent. They then shared a laugh and trotted off.

    Naga had been flying around, passing out flyers that said, “Have you seen this immortal?” with a picture of Fragment on the front. He felt a tap on his shoulder. Naga turned around to reveal Dark, Oswald, Layla, Rahsaan, Rendan, Leafin, and Alvstrom, where there they sat there for a second before Dark spoke up. “Um dude, I don’t know how to say this, but he was sent to the moon for annoying Celestia.” You could hear Layla laughing in the background and saying something about bananas.

    “Oh he escaped from there. We were actually going to get pizza, but he suddenly disappeared on me, and it’s been like three days, and I am kind of worried about him. I know he is old as dirt but still…”

    “Hey isn’t that him over there at the market buying flowers? And who is the mare he is with? Is that…  DJ PON3 and is he in a sling?” said Oswald with a surprised look on his face.

    “What? I don’t believe you, move,” Alvstrom said, lifting him with his ability and tossing him. ”Holy crap, you’re right! It is PON3.”

    Suddenly, Fragment sighs and turns around, looking into their direction. “Hey, you should stop spying and come talk to me if that’s what you want. I just find it kind of creepy that all seven of you are sitting there looking at me,” he said, raising one eyebrow.

    “First of all, there are eight of us, dumbass, and second, how did you know we were here?” said Layla.

    “Oh that? I can sense living things, except for you. You’re just not there. It’s kind of freaky, but whatever. Anyway, what are you all doing here staring at me for in the first place?”

     “Actually, we were passing out flyers for this event coming up soon until we saw Naga here looking for you and stuff happened aaaaand here we are. Anyway, where have you been and what happened to your leg and wing?” asked Leafin.

     “One of my weapons fucked me over and put me to sleep in the middle of flying, and so I crashed into several building and… well I got hurt and Scratchy here came and helped me out, bandaged me up. She has been a most gracious hostess and has been taking care of me while I recover.”

     “So you have been at her house, and you didn’t think to send a letter or something telling us you’re not on the moon or dead or something? That would have been nice. Well, Layla wouldn’t have cared, but we all thought you got sent to the moon.”

    “What?! You were sent to the moon? What in the hell for!? What did you do?”  Vinyl exclaimed in confusion.

   “That’s a funny story, actually, and I don’t feel like going into it.  Mmmhh… let’s just say I cussed at her. I also wanted to boop her, but she already sent me.  Also, it didn’t help that I…. well not me, but I destroyed a lot of the castle in the fight between me, Dark, Leafin, and Oswald. So the cussing was just the icing on the cake, you could say.”

    “So you got sent to the moon, but what about them? Did they get in trouble at all?” Vinyl asked.

    “I don’t know, I was on the moon. So did something happen to y’all while I was away?”

    “Ya actually, we have a tournament we have to fight in. We have a list with names that magically appears when she wants us to go get them. All of us are on here.” Suddenly, the list flashed, and Fragment’s names appeared. Everypony looked at Naga. “Well then, who else saw that coming? Anyway, in like a week, we have to meet up in Necropolis for the battle.”

    “Ok then, who am I against in this little tourney?”  asked Fragment.

    “Oh, you are first actually. And you’re against Layla and… what the hell is with that smile?”

    “Oh nothing, I just get to have a little revenge. Hahahahahah, I can’t wait for this fight.” Fragment walked off with a giant smile on his face.

A/N: I don’t feel like writing more, so until next time, Frag out.

chapter 11 Round one

watch this you will get the last part

Fragment vs Layla: Round 1

               Day of the battle

   A week had passed since the tournament had been announced, and the contestants had been training and as the week passed, a few more names had been added to the list. And now it was time for the first battle to commence. It was to be held in an abandoned necromancer city called Necropolis. Go figure it was a city that seemed to resurrect itself no matter how badly it was destroyed, making it the perfect place for their battle. So Celestia sent a bunch of worker ponies and unicorns. The workers to make a type of coliseum around it, so the ponies that came could watch. The unicorns set up a barrier and large screens of magic. The barrier to protect the spectators, and the screens to help the spectators to see the fighters when they were out of eye sight.

The day after the coliseum was built and the tickets were sold and the day of the tournament came, it was packed with ponies, especially when they heard who all would be fighting. Celestia waited a few moments letting everypony get settled. Celestia then flew into the middle of the coliseum so she could be seen by everypony in the stadium. Then she made an announcement in her royal Canterlot voice, so they could all hear her.

"Hello my little ponies! I welcome you all here to watch the battles that will take place over the next few days. The rules are: Rule 1- No fighting outside of the coliseum or you will be disqualified and then punished. Severely. Rule 2- You can only use your super modes against others who have one. Rule 3- No killing each other." Fragment made a disappointed noise at that one, as did Layla. They looked at each other before bursting into laughter, which was cut off when they noticed Celestia glaring angrily at them before continuing. "Also, last but not least, no dismemberment. Everything else is legal. Now bring out the first two fighters:  Layla and Fragment."

The two fighters trotted closer to each other until they were only a few feet from each other. Then Luna appeared in a flash of light wearing a black and white referee outfit. She trotted over, "Alright, I'm going to count down from three, then say start. Got it?" They both nodded.

“Three!” Layla got into a ready stance.

“Two!” Fragment summoned a pair of steel gauntlets that covered his hooves and some of his legs, and also got into a ready stance.

“One!” Luna's horn started glowing. “Start!” Luna yelled before teleporting out.

dubstep fight music   rock fight song   classical fight music

Layla rushed at Fragment and rammed into his midsection, knocking the wind from his lungs. She then lifted him a few feet into the air before brutally slamming him into the ground before letting go and flying high several feet into the air. She then flew straight down, but was countered when Fragment bucked his gauntleted back legs straight into Layla's face, sending her flying before he ran after her, only to see a blast of pure heat coming right at him. He was able to roll to his left, getting away with only a line in his coat being burned away. Layla charged at Fragment latching, but was smacked away by one of Fragment’s wings colliding with her midsection, making her gasp for air. He grabbed her, jumped into the air, spun, and German suplexed her into the ground, cracking it with the force. You could feel the crowd wince after seeing the brutal slam, but he wasn't done yet. Using just his back legs, he rolled himself back onto his hooves, still holding Layla, and then suplexed her again and again. He was going to go for a fourth, but was unable to when Layla slipped herself out of his grasp and kneed him in the snout, breaking it. Then, still holding his head, shot a blast point-blank into it. He flew straight through a building, leaving a gaping hole in it. She unloaded a rapid fire barrage of blasts. She kept up the onslaught until the building collapsed in on itself. "Woo I won! I fucking won! Hell yes!" Layla yelled, jumping around.

    "Hey bitch," Fragment yelled, causing Layla to turn around, eyes wide with surprise, seeing him a few feet behind her, leaning on a large grey box with a red button on the top breathing heavily. "Two words. Bass. Cannon." Fragment pressed the  button, making the box spring open revealing a large blue speaker.

"The hell?" was all she was able to say before a blast of solid sound engulfed her. When the blast cleared, Layla was passed out, stuck headfirst in a wall.

"Thanks Vinyl,” was all Fragment said before trotting off.

chapter 12 round two

Dark vs Leafin

“Ok my little ponies, it’s time for Round Two! Are you ready for that everypony?!” The crowd roared their want for battle to come. “Alright then, let’s get this thing started! This next match will be Dark Lightning against a certain someone who didn’t tell us that they were alive after a thousand years, my brother, Leafin!”

    The two fighters walked out, both facing each other. Dark had a confident smile on his face. He clenched his hoof, making lightning jump across it while Leafin had a serious expression on his face as he summoned his blades making them keeping them floating in the air and also blunting them with his magic.

    Luna appeared again wearing her ref outfit. She looked first at Dark, then at Leafin, before she spoke. First, she pointed at Leafin and asked “Are you ready?” He nodded.  She then pointed to Dark and asked him the same question to which he nodded. “Alright then, fight!” she yelled before teleporting out.

song i choose   fight music dark choose

    Leafin made the first move. He ran at Dark, taking a swipe at him with his blade, making the black Pegasus roll out of the way. Dark shooting a bolt of lightning as he rolled past, Leafin was just able to deflect it with his blade but was knocked off balance, which Dark capitalized on by grabbing Leafin’s head and bringing it down into his other hoof buzzing with electricity, sending Leafin flying, his head smoking. Then, adding insult to injury, he hit Leafin with a bolt of lightning, sending him rocketing into the air and through a cloud. Dark started to take off after Leafin, but was stopped when a dragon slammed into him. With Leafin on her shoulder, Leafin jumped down and slammed his hooves into the ground, making a wave of vines streaking toward Dark, who was too dizzy from the dragon to dodge them. The vines engulfed him and kept going, smashing through several buildings before retracting into the ground. Suddenly, Leafin saw several bolts of lightning bolt shoot straight into the air. He tensed, expecting an attack of some sort, but all that happened was the clouds seemed to get darker. Suddenly it unleashed a bolt right in front of him, blinding him for a second. He forced his eyes back open only to see a black hoof connect with his face, snapping his head back from the force. Leafin stumbled a few steps back and looked back toward Dark, only to find him gone. He appeared in another bolt of lightning, behind Leafin bucking him from behind and was gone again. The lightning strikes kept getting faster until it seemed like Leafin was trapped in a twister made of pure darkness and electricity. Suddenly, Dark’s teleporting was stopped by a blast of fire along with a swipe from a tail smashing into him, sending him flying. His body was smoking from being burned by the dragon. Leafin wasn't doing much better he was scorched and bruised in several places from the earlier attack. Suddenly, a loud sound could be heard like the buzz of a tesla coil. At first, Leafin couldn't identify where it was coming from until he saw a flickering blue light on top of a far building. Dark was there balancing on his back hoofs and his for hoofs out in front of him. Leafin’s eyes widened when he saw what Dark was doing. Electricity was flowing up one leg and down the other and electricity was arcing from one leg to the other. Small pieces of metal could be seen making its way toward him. Then Dark dropped a chunk of rubble he had been holding in his mouth between his arms. Instead of falling, it floated for a second then seemed to take in all the energy and shoot off, breaking the sound barrier, creating a rainboom that had lightning jumping across it. The rubble covered the space between Dark and Leafin in seconds. Leafin summoned a massive tree to shield him but to no avail. Dark’s attack smashed straight through the tree, connecting with Leafin and kept going. The attack and Leafin smashed into a building, demolishing it. Nothing moved for a while until Leafin burst out of the wreck, crawled for a foot or two, then passed out. Dark saw that he had won did a triple back flip before trotting off the battle field for a well-earned rest.

A/N: Round Two done. Alright, I need all the OCs except Layla and Leafin to read and respond to my blog post. It's kind of important. Also, for those who don't know, Dark made a rail gun using his abilities.i only remember like two of Dark’s moves. Read my post to know why

chapter 13 round three

DJ Bl4ck0ut vs Naga

Once again, Celestia flew into the middle of the coliseum to announce the next battle. "Ok everypony, this next match will be between Naga and DJ Bl4ck0ut."

Naga trotted out, summoning his scythe, holding it in his shadow aura, and blunting it. He turned to his opponent and his eyes widened at the pony in front of him.

He was massive. He towered over Naga. He had no mane, half his mouth was covered under a surgical mask, and was also wearing a black lab coat. He had two weapons strapped to him. One was equally massive axe, black on one side, white on the other. And strapped to his side was a butcher knife; a small sword by normal standards, but perfect for him. He unsheathed the knife and moved his mask, revealing his metal mouth, making the audience gasp. He grabbed it in his mouth, unsheathing it slowly. Then, he wrapped his tail around the axe, lifting the massive thing with contemptuous ease.

Luna appeared and walked over to DJ Bl4ck0ut. They talked for a second. Then Luna's horn glowed and the DJ’s blade glowed the same color. After it stopped glowing, DJ tested it against his skin, making sure it was blunt. When he was satisfied, he trotted up to Naga, stopping a few feet away.

Luna looked at both of them. "Ready… fight!" Luna yelled, teleporting out.

Naga darted forward using his wings to help propel him forward. As soon as he was within range, he swung his scythe in a downward arc, trying to use his speed to his advantage, but right before the blow landed, DJ Bl4ck0ut intercepted the strike with one of his own from the axe in his tail, easily over powering Naga, sending him off-balance. DJ Bl4ck0ut followed up by swinging his blade into Naga’s ribs. There was a sickening crack as two of Naga’s ribs broke from the power of the strike. Naga landed in a heap on the ground a few feet away. DJ Bl4ck0ut trotted slowly over to Naga as the alicorn struggled to breathe through the pain. When DJ Bl4ck0ut was a foot away, he reared up, preparing to stomp Naga into oblivion. Suddenly Naga's horn flared, and his scythe seemed to materialize out of nowhere and slammed into DJ Bl4ck0ut, making him stumble. Naga followed up by catching DJ Bl4ck0ut in the inner part of the scythe and slammed him brutally into the ground, cracking it from the force. Before DJ Bl4ck0ut could get up, Naga darted over, snatched his scythe from the air, and slammed his back hooves into DJ Bl4ck0ut’s side. He gripped his scythe in his front and started to slam it repeatedly into DJ's face. He kept slamming it until suddenly he was unable to pull his scythe back. Naga's eyes widened when he saw what was stopping him. DJ Bl4ck0ut had caught the weapon in his teeth, smiling with blood dripping from several wounds in his face. DJ Bl4ck0ut's smile widened before assaulting Naga with one of his forehooves, sending the alicorn stumbling away. His snout bent at an odd angle. Naga was blinded by tears from his broken snout, so he didn't see DJ Bl4ck0ut charging at him until it was too late. Bl4ckOut slammed into him, sending Naga flying. Naga slammed into the building, making an indention in it from the force. Naga struggled to get unstuck, but to no avail until Bl4ckOut came charging over. He spun around at the last second and bucked Naga through the wall and out the other side. Naga stood back up, laboring for breath and galloped into the dark building. Suddenly, everyone heard a struggle, then to eveypony’s surprise, it was DJ Bl4ck0ut that came flying out. Naga came trotting out, shadows swirling around him. Naga's horn glowed and three tendrils of shadows shot forward. Two slammed into Bl4ck0ut, but the third he blocked with the black side of his axe and was gone. "The fuck? Where did he-" Naga was cut when Bl4ck0ut came barreling out of one of the shadow tendrils. Naga tried to bring up a wall, but Bl4ck0ut slammed his axe into the wall, disappearing and reappearing on the other side, still charging. He slammed into Naga. But instead of sending the smaller Pegasus flying, it was Bl4ck0ut that was sent into the air. Naga had use his opponent’s force against him and sent him flying. But it didn't end there. Naga grabbed Bl4ck0ut and with surprising strength, started to lift Bl4ck0ut into the air. At first, Bl4ck0ut struggled to get away until he saw how high up they were. Naga kept going again with surprising strength until the air started to get thin. Then he aimed himself toward the ground and started falling. They free fell for a few seconds, then Naga started flapping his wings gaining even more speed. They soon started going so fast that Bl4ck0ut lost his axe and Naga was starting to strain with the effort, but he pressed on until the Mach cone started to form around them. Naga then started to spin until both of them where a swirling black and blue blur and that's when they did a rainboom, but instead of spreading out like a normal one, it was sucked in by how fast they were spinning, making them look like a giant twister who's point was about to touch the ground. And when it did, it was explosive. The arena was covered in shadow and powdered dirt. The crowd held their breath until the shadows parted and Naga trotted out cut, broken, bleeding and victorious. The crowd erupted into cheering as Naga flew off, somewhat unsteadily I might add

chapter 14 Round four

Round 4

“Alright everypony, this is PON-3 here to announce the next match up, which is going to be Tech Spark against Atomic Vortex." After she finished speaking, she teleported herself to her seat and snuggled up next to Fragment to watch.

Tech walked out of his corner. He was a snow white unicorn with a gray mane and tail with electric blue highlights. He also wore a pair of glasses, a vest, a watch on his leg, and a short sword at his side that seemed to glow ominously. The only odd thing about him was that a part of his ear was missing.

Atom trotted in from his corner. Atom was a Pegasus; he had a black coat, his mane was dark green with neon green highlights, the same with his tail. He also wore a green vest, a wrist band with three apples on it, a pair of sunglasses on his face, and a hilt strapped to his leg.

Instead of Luna teleporting in like normal, Pinkie Pie stepped out from behind Atom, scaring the hell out of him in the process. He started yelling the usual pinkie pie related questions wh-.

"Um Author, I think we should skip to the part where I tell them to start, ok?" Pinkie asks.

"Dammit Pinkie! Stop doing that! You know what? Fuck it, fine let's just get on with it," the author said with an annoyed sigh.

              (Skips to start of fight)

"Okie dokie lokie, I want a clean fight. Are you ready?” she asked, pointing at Tech. He pulled out his sword with his magic and blunted it with his magic, then he nods. She then points to Atom and asks him the same question. With a gesture from his hoof, a gust of wind floats the hilt into his mouth. He closes his eyes for a second, the air over where the blade would go on the hilt of his sword started to shift, then condense forming a double helix blade made of solid air on his sword hilt. He nods to Pinkie, showing he was ready.

"Then let’s get this started." She galloped off and vanished behind a random building.

Tech and Atom both started to slowly circle each other; they did this for several minutes. After a while, Atom started to get impatient, while Tech looked to be content to circle all day, and frankly, it was starting to annoy him. So he decided to strike first and charged. Atom struck out with his blade, trying to use speed to catch Tech off balance, but was surprised when Tech not only blocked him, but slipped his own blade under Atom’s neck and used that as leverage to flip Atom over and slam him into the ground, cracking it from the force. Tech then flipped over, preparing to elbow Atom, but was caught off guard when a small tornado caught him in midair and tossed him, spinning him into a building, making an indention from the force before Tech could pull himself out. Atom slammed into him, smashing them both the rest of the way through the building. Tech and Atom both landed on their hooves. They looked at each other for a split second before they both charged and clashing their blades against each other’s trying to overpower the other. Atom suddenly smiled. He then released the power he put in the blade, making it intangible. Tech, not expecting the loss of resistance, nearly fell, but was instead sent flying when Atom bucked him in the jaw using wind to amplify the strike. Tech was sent careening back threw the wall, smashing another hole through it. Tech slid a few feet before getting up, shaking his head, trying to clear it as he did so. Atom came flying at him, striking out with his blade as he did so, leaving a welt on Tech’s side as he did so. Atom flew in for another strike. Tech surprised him by flipping over his head and slamming his own sword straight into Atom’s kidney.  The hit, Atom dropped from the sky like a rock hitting the ground with jarring force, but as he hit, he tucked himself into a ball, rolling for a second before he rolled onto his feet, minimizing the damage from the fall. Atom turned around and was met with Tech’s front hoof smashing into his face, followed up by Tech pivoting on his other leg, flipping himself into the air and slamming both his back legs into Atom’s face, knocking him to the ground. Tech then galloped over and started smashing his hooves repeatedly into Atom’s face. He tried to cover up until suddenly one of Tech’s hooves got past and smashed right into his snout. Instead of retracting his hoof, he slipped it behind Atom’s head. He then picked him up and slammed him into the ground. Tech then grabbed his sword with his magic and brutally smashed it into Atom. He drew back for another strike, but was blown back when Atom hit him with a huge gust of air, sending him flying into the air right before Tech hit the ground. Atom caught him on the tip of his sword, knocking the air out of him. Atom flew straight up into the clouds, and with Tech still struggling on his blade, he started to fly in a circle as he did, so the wind started to pick up speed. Atom started to fly faster and faster until he was a green and black blur, and a fully formed tornado hit the ground. Then, something surprising starting to happen as the tornado started to turn sideways. Then Atom just let it fly. The audience gasped in awe as a snow white tornado flew sideways, smashing into it. The ground seemed to just collapse from the force being applied to it. After a full minute, the tornado dissipated, revealing Tech sprawled out at the bottom of the crater, knocked out.

chapter 15 Round five

Rendan vs Rahsaan

"Alright then bitches, let's get this shit started! The next two motherfuckers that will be fighting are Rendan and Rahsaan. Clap your fucking hooves before I rip them off,"Ragnarok said, which was answered by a thunderous stomping of hooves from a scared crowed. "That's what I fucking thought! Now, shut the fuck up, and let's get this shit started already!" He then got out of the stadium and sat in the stands with no one near him for several feet.

(Alright, this is Frag again. Well, I think I will keep that beginning :D)

The two fighters trotted in and faced each other. Rahsaan looked kind of scared, while Rendan looked determined, drawing his sword from its scabbard. Fluttershy appeared in a flash of ethereal fire with Felix on her back in a ref outfit. "Um, ok then. I am going to count down from three, and then I am going to have Felix here teleport me again. Then, you two will begin…. um if that's ok with you?" she asked, peeking through her hair with one eye. They both nodded in confirmation. "O-ok then. One, two, three!" She then vanished in a ball of ethereal flame.

Rendan shot forward, striking out at Rahsaan with lightning speed trying to take him by surprise but was surprised himself when a wave of energy in the shape of a beast came flying at him in return. He banked sharply to the left to avoid the blast and was met with a second one hidden by the first, and it slammed into him, sending him flying. He recovered a second later and shot a barrage of fireballs at Rahsaan. He was able to dodge several by teleporting and weaving in and out of buildings until one shot hit right in front of him, tripping him up before he even hit the ground. Several blasts hit him, sending him skidding across the ground, smoking and patches of fur missing. After he stopped, he got to his feet just in time to block Rendan's strike with a quickly summoned scythe. They sat there for a second, weapons locked together, struggling against each other trying to gain the upper hand. Suddenly, Rahsaan drew back making Rendan stumble. He hooked his scythe under his neck, spun him once, and then slammed him into the ground. He ripped the weapon from the ground, twirling it expertly, then struck it across the earth, making a wave of dark red energy surge forward from the weapon. It slammed into Rendan, making him fly in the air, but before he could get far, Rahsaan reversed his swing, catching him midair, slamming him into the ground. Another burst of energy from the scythe made him hit the ground hard enough to make a small crater. Rahsaan started to draw back but was caught with an unexpected flaming upper hoof to the jaw which turned into a slam when Rendan wrapped his hoofs around Rahsaan’s middle, flew into the air, burst into flames making Rahsaan scream in pain, and flew straight down, slamming him into the dust with bone-shattering force. Rendan started to fly up when Rahsaan struck him with the back of the scythe, dazing him for a second. When he looked back, Rahsaan was gone in a flash of magic. Rendan looked around until he thought he saw a shadow move behind a tall building. He shot forward at full speed and landed. He heard a snapping sound. He looked down and saw a small magical thread had been broken. Suddenly, several arcane symbols blazed to life on the building around him and exploded, making the building fall on top of him, showering him with rubble. A few minutes later, he emerged from under the pile in an explosion of fire. He had created a shield of pure heat. He had lost his sword, but other than that, he was fine. A little cross, but fine. This went on for several minutes, pissing Rendan off more and more until he literally exploded in a huge ball of fire, spewing flames everywhere. It even set several buildings on fire. They burned for several minutes until, suddenly, Rahsaan burst from one, coughing and blinded by the smoke, so he didn't see Rendan until it was too late. He was glowing with heat from his explosion from earlier, so to the audience, it looked like a star was falling atop the poor unicorn. When Rendan touched him, there was a large explosion of fire. It lasted for only a second before going out and when everyone could see again, they saw Rendan standing triumphant next to a mostly hairless unicorn.

wasn't to serious with this one but still got it done.

chapter 16 Round six

Alvstrom vs Oswald

"Hello everyone and welcome because my niece is being a lazy ass. I'm looking at you, Celestia. I am the announcer this time, so here I go. The next match is Alvstrom vs Oswald. Now I'm going home to make alcohol or weapons or clop or something. Bye!"

Suddenly, Vinyl yelled out, "You don't need to clop! You got me!"

Fragment looked over at her, a smile on his face. "Sexy time?" he asked.

"Sexy time," she said, nodding. Fragment scooped her up and galloped off at his insane speed, leaving a light streak behind him.

Luna trotted up in her usual ref clothes, a light blush on her cheeks. She cleared her throat before speaking. "Um, ok then. Let's get this started on three. One," Alvstrom got into a ready stance. "Two." Oswald took out a blunt, stuck it in his beak, lit it, and took a puff. His eyes seemed to go wide and a grin stretched across his face. "One go!"  Luna said before teleporting out.

Oswald responded immediately by taking another puff of his blunt and walking slowly over. Alvstrom, on the other hoof, lifted a chunk of earth with a gesture of his hoof and sent it flying at Oswald. He didn't even try to dodge. It stuck him in the face, knocking him off his feet. Oswald got right back up and charged and with a flick of his wing, sent several ninja stars flying with surprising accuracy. Alvstrom slammed his hooves into the ground making a wall of earth rise up and blocked the attack, but before Alvstrom could even put the wall back down, a claw shot through it and grabbed him by the neck and started slamming him back and forth, left right left right, the ground cracking with each hit. Oswald started to again slam Alvstrom into the ground, but was suddenly lifted into the air himself and was propelled straight through a building. Alvstrom stood there for a full ten seconds before galloping in, but was stopped right at the entrance by a claw on his throat. Oswald didn't look affected at all from being slammed through the wall. He drew his leg back and threw Alvstrom through the wall. Then with a swinging gesture with his wings, he sent several ninja stars ripping into Alvstrom. He cried out in pain as the sharp blades dug into his body. Alvstrom concentrated for a second, and suddenly, they all flew out of him at the same time. Alvstrom looked over and saw Oswald lighting another blunt, distracted. So, Alvstrom launched the stars back at him. Several struck home, imbedding themselves into his chest. Oswald looked at them in surprise for a second before laughing, then taking another hit of his joint. Alvstrom was taken aback by the griffin’s behavior and his ability to shrug off injuries. Oswald turned toward Alvstrom when he saw that the earth pony wasn't going to attack first and launched himself at Alvstrom like a rocket preparing to hit him full force. But seconds before, he struck Alvstrom, bunched his muscles, and shot forward using his ability to speed his charge. Before Oswald could react, Alvstrom spun mid-air and smashed his back leg into the top of Oswald’s head again using his ability to give the strike more power, and give it power it did. Oswald slammed full force into the ground, leaving a large crater in its wake. Alvstrom didn't stop there. He shot straight into the air, several feet above the ground, then shot back down. There was an explosion of dust as the earth powdered from the impact. Alvstrom got up when a wing suddenly slashed across his chest, leaving a gash across it. Alvstrom stumbled back a few steps and was meet with a fist slamming into his snout, breaking it, followed up by a kick to the jaw, sending him sliding back a few feet. Alvstrom looked back at Oswald and his mouth dropped open in shock. One of Oswald’s wings was broken and hung limply at his side. The arm he had punched Alvstrom with was broken and bleeding, a bone jutting out of the side at the wrist. Oswald looked at it for a second, then shrugged and put another blunt in his mouth and smoked, his smile returning. Alvstrom shot forward, trying to take Oswald by surprise again, but was caught mid-jump, arced over his head, and slammed headfirst into the ground. He then started smashing his fist into Alvstrom. He did this for a full minute before he was suddenly blown back. Alvstrom, using his ability, shot into the air, flying higher and higher with each second. When he finally stopped, he looked directly into the clouds and with a thunderous clap, brought his hooves together. Speeding at an extremely high speed toward Oswald, he had just gotten up from the dirt and looked up and saw Alvstrom seconds away from hitting him. All Oswald did was smile. Then, with a flick of his wing, sent ninja stars flying towards Alvstrom. He dodged them by giving himself a push out of harm’s way, or so he thought. The stars were just a distraction. As soon as Alvstrom had dodged the ninja stars, Oswald made his move. He stepped in at the last second, grabbed Alvstrom, and using his own speed and force against him, slammed Alvstrom for the last time into the ground.

ever heard of snowflame well if not well look him up or ask me.

chapter 18 round eight

Atomic Vortex VS Fragmented Terra?

The last of the first round of fighting was over and it was time for the next and so they all drew numbers and the first two to fight where Fragment and Atom after everyone picked their numbers a set of scrolls appeared in front of them in a blaze of fire one was addressed to Frag and the other to Atom. Fragment opened his first it contained no writing but two flames burned on the page one clear with a violet outline and the other was half black and half white Frag lifted his hoof and pressed it to the clear flame and was immediately covered in a clear fire with a violet outline everyone of course freaked out except Fragment the one actually on fire he just nodded his head as if he was listening to something then just as suddenly as it came the fire went out.

"Um hey dudes are you ok?" Oswald asked "You where kind of on fire there you know."

"Oh yeah I'm fine just getting a message from a certain someone," Fragment looked at Atom for a second a smile on his face. "Doesn’t worry about it just know I can't wait for out fight bro I will hold nothing back.” Oh and you should open your letter it's kind of important." he said before trotting into the arena.

Atom looked at his letter for a second opening it. Instead of fire it had five simple words. It sucks to be you. Atom looked at his letter at his letter before throwing it over his shoulder dismissively before following suit behind Frag.

"Hello every pony how are yawl today I am here to announce the fighters less see here its going to be Fragment vs Atom won't that be exciting." Applejack announced in a loud voice.

The two trotted out and stopped a few feet away from each other then Vinyl trotted out to ref. "Alright you two let's get this shit started on three. Three," Fragment summoned a pair of gauntlets for his front and back legs and pulled out the letter from earlier. "Two," Atom drew his sword and went into Cyclonic Proton form (if I fucked that up tell me) and got into a ready stance. "One." Frag pressed his hoof into the flame and it engulfed him for a second nothing happened until suddenly the flames started to fuse pressing into each other and spinning faster and faster until it created a yin yang tornado that touched the clouds and then suddenly it was gone like somepony had flipped a switch and in its place standing easily on his back legs was a pony he looked like Frag but his mane and tail were different the turquoise had replaced the black and where the turquoise had been was red like Ragnarok’s the same had happened with his tail and his normally grey eyes where a dark blood red color again mimicking Ragnarok’s in color and his cutie mark had changed and changed and changed every time Atom blinked it was different the only thing similar about them was that they were opposites and resembled a yin yang symbol in shape he also had six weights on his body one on each hoof and wing.

Ha it’s just Frag with a different mane and eye color nothing to worry about I still have my blade and so I have the reach advantage. Atom thought to himself and attacked using his wings to propel him and a blast of wind to make himself fly even faster when Atom was within striking distance he stabbed outward with his blade expecting Frag to try and block the strike with his gauntlet or dodge out of the way but what actually happened surprised him even more and also hurt a lot more. Instead of blocking or dodging he summoned a blade of his own making Atoms eyes widen with surprise and parried the strike knocking him of balance then used Atoms speed against him brought his gauntleted hoof smashing down onto Atoms head and the momentum sent Atom whose face was still smashed into the ground skidding several feet “how rude you didn’t even let me introduce myself,” with a quick beat of his wings he did a back flip and punted Atom several feet away. “You probably thought I was still Fragment with just a new mane and eye color well that’s wrong and if you make that mistake again you will be dead wrong I am not Ragnarok either my name is Reflex I am what happens when Ragnarok and Fragment work together they fuse to create well recreate me. You would know that if you listened to Frag more Atom he brought it up like four times in conversation but you just kind of brushed it off so know I guess I will just have to beat it into you but enough about that lets fight actually before that Atom do you want me to go easy?”

Atom had only been half listening until then and so he just said the first thing to pop into his head “Um yeah?” he said unsure when Reflex just nodded he gave a quiet sigh of relief at having played that off.

Reflex and Atom both got into ready stances.

Reflex  VS Atomic Vortex

Reflexes stance was odd he stood on his two back legs his left hoof held his blade and his forward right hoof was just his gauntleted hoof. They just stood looking at each other for a sec before Reflex and Atom both charged each other at the same time they both slashed at each other at the same time and clashed Reflex dislodged himself and slashed upward at Atom he dodged and retaliated with a slash from his sword that sent a blade of hardened wind in Reflexes direction Reflex slammed his hoof into the ground making a wave of orange fire erupt from the ground and engulfed the attack leaving a statue in its place Reflex then grabbed it and tossed it at Atom he crushed it to powder with a stomp like gesture he then used the  powder to try and Blind Reflex but was stopped  when he made a small black hole using his black flames to suck the powder up and then making it explode sending the powder everywhere and making a fine grey mist Atom used his wind to blow away the mist just in time to block Reflexes next attack as he came flying downward trying to crush Atom under his hoofs but Atom brought up his sword just in time to block his attack Reflex slammed into his sword with a shower of sparks Reflex brought his face closer to Atoms and said “hey you're not half bad at this fighting thing an-,” Reflex was cut off when Atom dislodged him from atop his blade and took a swipe at him. Atom was about to follow up on his Attack when suddenly something in his brain clicked he just realized what Reflex had asked him earlier “hey hold on a second are you going all out?”

One of Reflexes eyebrows Raised into the air a pleasant smile on his face as he spoke “oh nonononono why do you want me to go all out?”

“Yeah I don’t even know why I asked you to go easy on me in the first place.” Atom said rubbing his chin thoughtfully.

“It’s because you weren’t listening again but anyway are you sure?” Atom just gave him a deadpan look that made Reflex chuckle “Alright then wish granted.” Reflex stood still for a second his eyes closed suddenly Reflexes eyes flew open and armor started to cover his body until nothing was uncovered on him he then stabbed his blade into the ground and started taking off the weights he grabbed the first one popped and it off and dropped it as soon as it touched the ground the earth seemed to say holy shit that’s heavy by exploding leaving a crater in its place and causing a miniature earthquake Reflex then did the same to the rest grabbed his blade as soon as he grabbed it the blade seemed to erupt with an ominous red aura he then held it in a reverse grip and got into a ready stance.

While this was happening Atom heard somepony call his name he looked around until he saw four frantically waving ponies telling him to run the four where Luna, Celestia, Vinyl and Dark eyes all wide with fear telling him to run which of course being Atom he ignored with a dismissive wave of his hoof he then turned back to Reflex who by this time was ready.

Atom charged at Reflex full speed but before Atom could even finish his fourth step Reflex was on him blade cutting into his chest with ease even with it being magically blunted Atom tried to slash with his own blade but by the time he had finished his own swing Reflex was already to his left slamming his hoof into Atoms face he didn’t even give Atom the time to fly off he grabbed him mid flight and raked his sword straight up Atoms back leaving a long gash up his back he then sent a barrage of punches at Atom he moved so fast that Atom seemed to be trapped in a solid black twister Reflex then  stabbed the blade straight through Atom’s back he screamed in pain but it was cut short when Atom started coughed up blood Reflex then ripped his blade free and sheathed it Atom fell over clutching his wound and then asked Reflex a question “how the hell did you cut me with a blunt blade?” Atom asked.

“Cut you?” No I ate you or my blade did that energy stuff around my blade are actually billions of small void beast that can eat at an insane pace as he spoke the aura took form several people cried out in horror at the sight. “The only time they didn’t eat at you was when I forced my blade through you that was pure strength,”

“Oh one more thing why couldn’t I even touch you with my blade?”

“Because this is the form when i am whole one entity instead of two and my power is more than 10X higher than normal in this form i me again,”

Atom got back up with a determined look on his face and started to charged hit final attack

“Damn you are persistent aren’t you? Well I guess you earned this and I think you can handle it…I hope my special  consider it a gift for being so tough to use it my opponent needs to be marked by my blade or something has to get blood on it,” Reflex looked at his blade “oh hey blood lucky me,” as Reflex spoke Atoms eyes got wider by the second “Alright then lets do this it's time for the Zero beat,” Reflex lifted one of his hoofs straight into the air and the air above his hoof started to distort and pulsate  in a spherical shape with a definite rhythm as it built you could hear a faint music coming from it then the sound suddenly jumped in volume revealing the song and suddenly without warning Reflex threw it at Atom  he saw it flying at him and he tried to negate it he threw the attack he had been charging at it Reflex looked at it smiled and motioned with his hoof and made the sphere go straight around the twister and into a surprised Atom.

At first he felt fine until he heard the music then it seemed like the every liquid in his leg was trying to escape then it started to spread and intensify spreading throughout his body getting worse as it went on he could feel some of his bones even start to crack under the pressure .

Reflex watched on with a small pleasant smile on his face at Atom thrashed on the ground in pain “oh come on it can't be that bad you still have to wait for the drop.” As soon as he said it Atoms screams grew more a lot louder Reflex looked back to Atom you could see where the liquids were trying to escape from as his skin bulged in places and receded back again you could hear bones snapping as they gave under they very bone marrow inside them tried to find a way out suddenly Atom passed out from the pain and they attack with him. “And that was the drop,” after Reflex said that he walked over to Celestia and said “Alright I forfeit I’m done fighting for now bye.”

Winner by brutal as fuck knockout Reflex but forfeit so no winner on to the next one.

A/N for those of you who don't know who don't know who Reflex is here is a pic.

chapter 19 round nine

Round 9 Dark VS Oswald

“Aww come on Lulu don’t make me do this I have a physician I have to murder in a bit so I still need to train Reflex complained as Luna Levitated him onto the podium.

“You can murder them after this alright please for me?” Luna asked making her cutest puppy dog eyes she could muster knowing that even Reflex had no chance of resisting when she did it.

“Alright fine I will do it just stop with the eyes already,” Reflex said his resistance smashed to pieces. Luna just smiles happily hand him a not kisses him on the cheek and teleports off “alright then lets see who is fighting shall we?” Reflex asks as he opens the envelope “it's going to be Dark Lightning VS Oswald Really no last name alright whatever those two are fighting lets get to it,” as Reflex started walked off the podium Celestia walked over to meet him a striped black and white shirt levitating beside her, as soon as she got close enough she they started talking.

“Hey Reflex can I ask you a favor?” Celestia asked as innocently as possible.

“Nonono I will not ref for this match won’t do it no,” Reflex protested adamantly.

“Aww please uncle Reflex?” Celestia asked with one of the cutest pouty face Reflex had ever seen.

“Fine just stop with the face you're going to give me a heart attack,” Reflex agreed his resistance again obliterated. (Turns out adamant isn’t worth shit when up against cute) he then snatches the shirt out of her telekinesis and puts it on and then trotted over to where Dark and Oswald waited patiently and by that I mean Oswald was waiting patiently and Dark was sitting there tapping his hoofs annoyed and when he saw Reflex trotting over he opened his mouth to say something but was cut off by Reflex “no shut the fuck up I give less than zero fuck about what you have to say right now I am busy so I am just going to do this and leave got it good, alright on three,” one,” Dark seemed to buzz with electricity as he charged himself with power “two,” Oswald pulled out a large joint and lit it and started to smoke the whole thing in one breath the shorter the joint got the hotter the area around Oswald got “three.” Suddenly the air around the two exploded in lightning and fire.

Oswald was the first to emerge his body cloaked in a snow white flame that contrasted greatly with his feathers a large insane grin on his beak he had gone into his phoenix state it was a state where he literally got so high he burst into flames and gained hey ability to control said flames. Then Dark walked out electricity jumping across his body his mane and tail had turned a bright yellow color from the amount of sheer energy coursing through him he was in his Dark storm mode. They both looked at each other for a split second before both of them charged in and meet in the middle both slamming their hoofs into each other hoof and talon meeting in the middle making both of their element discharging violently sending them both sliding back for a second in a shower of sparks and flame but it was only a second before they were at it again slamming full bodily into each other both cloaked in their individual element one trying to overtake the other until Oswald suddenly pulled back throwing Dark off balance he then grabbed him flew up a bit and pile drove him into the earth in a huge fiery explosion but Oswald wasn’t done there he then flew into the air even higher than before and started flinging a barrage of flaming shuriken that exploded as soon as the struck something he did this for a long time laughing insanely as he did so until suddenly Dark shoot out of one of the explosions a  shield made of lightning protecting him  from the flames surprising Oswald as soon as he was clear of the fire the electricity from the shield seemed to converge on his hoof covering it in electricity as he sent it crashing into Oswald’s face sending him flying off toward some buildings still buzzing with residual energy, but before Oswald could even slam into one of them Dark was in his face firing a bolt of lightning point blank into him, Oswald didn’t just smash into the building he smashed through it so hard that the entire building collapsed in on itself, Dark sat their hovering several feet above the ground searching for Oswald and he found him crawling out of the debris a huge grin still plastered to his face with blood running down his face and body from cuts that the shrapnel that didn’t melt first hit him he then looked up and spotted Dark and took off toward him unleashing a bunch of flaming shuriken as he did so but Dark retaliated with shock grenades of his own as soon as they touched they explosion was blinding for Dark making him shield his eyes and peek out as soon as he did he jerked back in surprise as Oswald plunged a flaming shuriken straight into Darks shoulder and jumped back but not before Dark stuck him with a ball of his own electricity then the shuriken exploded  ripping a chunk of his shoulder off and ripping up his wing in he process making him fall to the ground he then started gathering energy around him as he used his wings as best he could to land.

Oswald smiled when he saw what happened and he smiled even bigger when he realized the ball of energy stuck to him was a dud and wasn’t going to explode also suddenly Oswald saw Dark fire a massive bolt of electricity straight into the clouds they immediately darkened lightning jumping ominously around then Making Oswald gulp nervously and start to fly downward so he wouldn’t get struck by a stray bolt, Oswald suddenly noticed a bright glowing on his chest he looked down to see that the ball Dark had stuck to him had brightened immensely Oswald pondered why for a few seconds until his eyes widened suddenly in realization as he looked up at a absolutely massive bolt of lightning bearing down on him. The last thought that went through his head was ‘that asshole made me a lightning rod’ he was then hit.

Dark started gloating over his win next to his opponent’s charred body when suddenly a talon grabbed him by the throat he looked over and saw Oswald once again getting up a grin still stuck to his face as he lifted Dark up and started smashing him into the ground over and over again until suddenly Dark grabbed him on the sides of his head and sent a current running through him Oswald jerked one then fell backwards eyes rolled up and smoke coming from his mouth Dark then continued his celebrating (several feet away from Oswald) before trotting of to go get fixed up.

                                    Winner Dark lightning

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A/N shit Oswald is one tough motherfucker but I guess that’s what happens when you base your OC off of a human who could get into a boxing match with superman and come out giggling like a small child.

chapter 20

Round 10

Naga VS Rendan

The battle was going to begin soon and Luna had sent Naga to go get Frag Reflex or whoever he was that day and bring him to the coliseum but when he went and knocked on the door Vinyl answered.

“Sup Naga what brings you here?” Vinyl said raising one of her eyebrows upward in a questioning manner.

“My mommy sent me to get my uncle is he here?” Naga asked in an oddly childish way.

“Um no that dude already went out saying something about a battle with some immortal called the male Nurse or the Vet no not the vet the Doctor that was it they where going to have it in a place called limbo or something and he told me tell whoever came looking for him that he would be there sooner or later and to go on without him,” Vinyl explained.

“Oh ok then thanks for telling me well I got to go bye,” Naga said as he started to fly away but was stopped as Vinyl put a hoof on his shoulder.

“Oh yeah one more thing watch out for Rendan, Reflex said something about him resonated with his Ragnarok side and he asked me to warn you.” Vinyl said a serious expression on her face.

“HA I’m not worried I got this fight in the bag but thanks for the warning anyway see ya.” Naga smiled cockily as he flew off to fight his next battle not concerned in the least about the outcome.

As soon as Naga landed Luna started bombarding him with questions “ah there you are what took you so long are you sure you want to go through with this and where is Reflex?” She asked all in one breathe.

“Ok first I was gone like ten minutes not that long second yes I do and third we have a slight problem Reflex found out that the Doctor was here and is going to go get his long awaited vengeance on him.” Naga said like it was no big deal.

Luna eyes where wide as saucers and she said one word a word that shook then entire coliseum but still one word and it was “…WHAT!” Luna then called Celestia over and told her what Naga had told her it was the same word and at much the same volume.

Suddenly all of Fragment friends and several royal guards came rushing over along with a blue Pegasus colt with a blonde mane and tail and a cutie mark of a swirling tornado “what is with all the royal canterlot whating over here what is it?”  The Pegasus asked with a concerned look on his face.

“We have a…wait who are you I don’t think I know you I know all fifteen of them but not you?”

“Oh ha yeah I am Blue Breeze nice to meet you acquaintance Princess I work with Atom and Dark on the weather we help dictate weather patters using our abilities like I can also control wind like Atom can,” Blue said with a bow.

“Oh that’s very interesting I wonder wait hold on we don’t have time for this right know we have to stop Reflex before another species gets erased,” Celestia said.

“Oh come on it can’t be that bad what’s the worst that could happen?” Layla asked with a roll of her eyes.

“Oh no ever thought about Fragment full Name Fragmented Terra broken earth his name means to leave the earth shattered into pieces and Ragnarok? His name means they actual apocalypse they both also have a few titles to their names for Fragment his is the genocide specialist and they unfeeling and for Ragnarok his are death walker and well lets just say we have an insane asylum named after him and Reflex well he has his own list but enough about that I need all of you yes you to Blue Breeze to go stop him well all of you except Naga, Dark and Rendan I need you two to fight I cant let the ponies out there know something is going on and Dark I don’t know how long this will last so you stay here I can have you getting hurt before the match.” Celestia said then grabbed Naga and Rendan in her telekinesis and threw them into the fight zone as everypony else flew off to deal with a pissed of immortal.

“Ok everypony lets get this started,” Twilight said as she trotted out wearing a ref outfit (I just imagined her wearing one as she blushes profusely…cute! XD) she then points at Naga and asked “are you ready?” he nodes she then points at Rendan and asks him the same “are you read?” he also nods “alright then fight.” Twilight shouts before she teleports away in a bright flash.

“You sure you don’t want to forfeit know I wont blame you if you do?” Naga asks with a cocky grin on his muzzle as shadows start to surround him spinning his scythe in his hoofs with practiced ease.

“I am going to buck that cocky smirk off your face so hard they will start calling you slender mane.” Rendan said through clenched teeth as searing flames danced across his body pulling his sword from its sheath.

Rendan attacked first slammed his front hoofs into the ground making a wall of flame go roaring toward Naga blind him for a second as he cloaked himself in fire and slammed into Naga slashing at him as he did so Naga was able to block Rendan’s strike with his scythe and gathered shadows around him to stave off the heat from the fire but the impact still sent him skidding back, as soon as Naga stopped he sent a wave of shadow just as Renden send a gout of fire streaking towards him the to elements collided violently both exploding upon impact with each other sending both fighter flying backwards but even as they did so they continued to fire stream after stream of fire and shadow each others way scoring hits every know and again until they both collided into buildings well Rendan smash into the building and melted right through and Naga turned into shadow and fazed through reappearing a few moments later in the middle of the battle ground, Rendan came roaring back straight through the building knocking they entire thing over in the process and slammed down a few feet from Naga heat coming off him in waves he then charged Naga one again but instead of slamming into him as soon as he got a few feet away several barbed tendrils came shooting out of his shadow stabbing into him lifting him several feet into the air in the process and smashing him into a building they the dragged him back barbs digging into and tearing at his flesh as he tried to pull them out his struggles getting weaker and weaker as the barbs tore deeper and deeper into him, Naga then summoned several more and sent them shooting one by one into Rendan making him cry out in pain with each new tendril stabbing into him then suddenly something happened Rendan cried out but not in pain no this shout was full of rage Naga looked at Rendan and what he saw made him take a step back Rendan’s coat color had changed the colors had flip flopped he then looked at the Naga tore out the tendrils stuck in him and started toward him a look of pure rage on his face he was at Naga’s throat in seconds sending his flaming hoof crashing into it he then spun around and bucked Naga straight in the jaw sending him shooting into they air Rendan then opened his mouth and breathed a stream of fire that engulfed Naga Rendan then shoot toward Naga charging his hoof with fire as he got close he then struck out with it and missed when a scythe came slashing down cutting a deep gash in his chest throwing him of balance Naga then slammed the back of the scythe into Rendan’s face  a sickening popping sound could be heard as it connected he then drew back to hit him again but was stopped when Rendan wrapped his hoofs around his neck and head butted him dazing him he then spun Nag around and wrapped his back legs around Naga’s neck and his front around his waist he then started falling spinning as he did so he then erupted into flames covering them both, a few feet from the ground he let go sending Naga drilling his way into the earth Renden then flew high into they air he flew until he reached the clouds and then started flying downward flames getting hotter and hotter as he flew, Naga had dug himself back out of the ground  lucked up and got hit a huge explosion resonating from they impact several fires scattered everywhere around the huge crater left over and in the center was a severely burnt alicorn passed out in the a smaller crater.

Rendan looked over at Naga staggering from pure exhaustion raised his hoof into they air and shouted a mighty “woo.”  That could rival Fluttershy before passing out.

                                              WINNER RENDAN

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A/N: the tournament is almost over holy crap I cant wait for the next chapter…oh wait im writing it well then I cant wait to write the next chapter XD and i was wondering if you want me to write the fight between the doctor and reflex.

Chapter 21 final round

I almost didn't even up load this chapter because of the lack of...incentive I guess.

.....................................--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------........................:::............. Reflex had been gone since yesterday and he couldn't be found even with all his friends looking for him and they tournament had to go on it was finally time the end was here the finals were about to start and Celestia had a suprise for everypony, a new stage it was called equinox it was a stage Reflex had made it for they contestants who made it to the end Celestia conjured up a portal and had the two finalist walk though, the stage was a mixture of several elements huge glaciers jutted out from a frozen plato that eventually gave way to a massive body of water several twisters roared across the water never once disturbing it surface that eventually lead to an island an active volcano spewing magma straight into the air in a constant stream dominating it and a few miles from that island sat a massive forest, as an unseen wind ran though the forest a hauntingly beautiful melody could be heard emanating from the forest.

"Wow this place is awesome," Rendan said as he looked around excitedly.

"It's cool I guess," Dark said as he also ogled the soon to be battle field with wide eyed amazement despite his uncaring attitude.

"Ha ha Yes it's beautiful but that nothing compared to what's in the clouds come on I'll show you," Celestia said gesturing for them to follow before taking off though the clouds Dark and Rendan close behind.

As soon as Rendan and Dark made it though their jaws hit the floor their was an entire steam punk style city siting on the clouds mini suns floated in they air giving off a warm heat and light and making the city glisten beautifully, light even seemed to bounce off the clouds themselves which helped to enhance the beauty of the city even more.

"Well you two what do you think did my uncle do a good job?" Celestia asked a large grin spread across her face already knowing they answer.

"This is awesome how did Reflex make all this it must have taken forever to...wait how the hell did he do this it should be impossible to...ya know what doesn't matter it's Reflex he is a myth himself and shouldn't exist so fuck it let's just get fighting," Rendan said an annoyed look on his face.

"This place is cool but Rendan dude it's obvious how it was made magic dumb ass no one has to explain shit so their," Dark said a trollific smile on his face he then noticed Rendans pissed off expression and asked "you mad bro?"

Rendan just looked at him for a sec before saying "I am going to burn off all your fur if you don't shut your face."

Dark just smiled wider and said "come at me bro I will gladly buck your face in."

"Alright you two calm down you will get to tear each others faces of in a second just give me a moment to set up so that they audience can still see you even though you are in a pocket dimension," as soon as she finished talking her horn started glowing with a warm golden color for a seconed until Celestia noded satisfied "ok you may begin as soon as I leave." Celestia then walked away a few feet before she dissapered in a flash of light.

By the time Celestia's residual light had dissipated Dark and Rendan where already transformed and in each others face Dark in his Dark storm mode and Rendan in his red coated rage mode hoofs cloaked in fire and lightning slamming into each other creating explosions that flung them back for a half seconded before they slammed back together hoofs crashing against each other resulting in another violent explosion but this time Dark was ready so as soon as the explosion happened he sent a bolt of lightning straight through the explosion that went lanceing into Rendans wings catching him off guard and dropped him to the clouds below with one of his wings singed, but Dark wasn't done yet as soon as Rendan landed on the clouds Dark crashed down on him back hoofs first lightning surrounding them as he did so and it hit with explosive force, Dark then dived straight after him, as Rendan shoot straight though the clouds going so fast a faint whistling sound could emanated from him as he fell, but instead of slamming into the ground he flipped himself over and shoot a massive gout of fire from his hoofs, that not only stopped him it sent flying straight back toward Dark until he was only about a foot away, he then opened his mouth and breathed a stream of fire point blank into his face, Dark was able to get up a small shield before he was hit he was quickly pushed back several feet until his minuscule shield shattered and he was then quickly covered in fire and sent careening toward the forest setting trees on fire as he slammed into the ground rolled and shot back up a black and yellow trail flowing behind him lightning jumped across his body as he reached out with his hoof and launched  a bolt of electricity, Rendan

started to dodge out of the was but was caught off guard when the head of the lightning curved into a hooked edge stabbing itself into Rendan electrocuting him and tearing flesh as he jerked him  into his waiting hoofs as he then brought hooves together crackling with electricity and slammed them downward into Rendan's head, they very air vibrated from the power in the strike, but that wasn't enough to stop Rendan who quickly shrugged of the pain and aimed himself downward quickly gaining speed and turning into a red blur using the momentum from Darks strike to help speed him up.

"Oh no you don't." Dark said before speeding after him and quickly catching up being the faster of the two ponies, Rendan saw this and started pushing himself harder, as did Dark until they very air started to bend around them both making them strain even harder to push past their limits until they both broke smashed through a deafening roar accompanied by two rings of light one red and white and they other black and yellow, both Dark and Rendan to they untrained eye where nothing more then speeding balls of yellow and red light with unique streaks of color behind them that seemed to be dancing in the sky and every time they collided a sound like a thunder clap would come resonating from them making anything to close either spontaneous combust or just explode electricity jumping from it, Dark and Rendan where going at it at super speed and they where using that speed to give their strikes more power an attack that would normally send one of them skipping back a bit normally sent them flying instead, Dark was on Rendan in a second and started smashing his hoof into Rendans face until Rendan grabed Darks head and brought his head crashing into Darks snout making him fly back a bit unsteadily trying to recover from the blow but Rendan didn't let up he made his body burst into flames and tackled Dark and slammed him into they island, dragging him along scrapping off pieces of skin off his back and burning his front he then threw Dark infront of him spun around and bucked his flaming hoofs into Darks chest several loud pops could be heard as ribs snapped in Darks chest making him cry out in pain as he was sent flying skipping over the water its surface exploding hundreds of feet upward from with each touch and strait into one of the twisters Rendan flew in a few seconds after but was surprised when the twister started crackling with lightning Rendan saw this and made a break for the top fighting against the vacuum and was quickly making head way until the twister started to turned a familiar black and yellow color and the vacuum increased tenfold sucking Rendan slowly back into the twister, Rendan looked down and quickly moved his head out of the way as a lightning bolt flew past he then saw Dark flying in a tight circle at the bottom of the twister he was not only speeding the twister up but was also reaching out toward the water as soon as his hoof touched it a massive stream of water shot out missing Dark by centimeters and slammed into Rendan and started to spin with him traping him in a solid bubble of water.

After he got over they initial shock of being hit by the freezing cold water Rendans ears perked when an odd buzzing sound hit his ears suddenly his eyes grew several sizes and he remembered the lightning bolt Dark had shot into they air in the beginning he then looked up and saw a sight that made his pupils shrunk to the size of pin prick what he saw was a giant dragon made of pure lightning coming from the  clouds right at him "oh my god what the actual fuck is that sweet Celestia sitting on Luna's horn with a stick if dynamite up her magic plot hole that craps happiness and sunlight this is going to hurt like hell!" as soon as he finished the electricity dragon struck in a blinding flash of white light it was over.

Dark flew to an island and laid down and as about to go to pass out but something caught his the sky started was starting to bulge outward "what the hell?!" was all Dark got out before the sky burst open and Reflex came speeding though fully armored and glowing like the sun even his eyes glowed a bright gold, and after him came the doctor so full of physic energy it was tangible in a blue aura surrounding his body Reflex and the Doctor looked at each other for a one then charged.

             FINAL MATCH OVER WINNER

$Dark lightning$

............................................................................................................................................................................................................tournaments over wow never thought I would say that, it took to so long well it's over now on to the next one passare per l'inferno

Chapter 22 a gift from the grave

Reflex charged in and swung his hoof flames coming off it meaning to have it crush through the Doctors skull but missed as the doctor as he ducked and slammed his hoof into into Reflexes chest and then sent a blast of physic energy at Reflex ripping a gaping hole in his chest and sent him crashing to the ground a few feet from Dark who was staring in shock at what had just happened.

Suddenly Reflex looked over at Dark pain etched across his features "hey bro looks like you won congrats wish I could say the same," Reflex suddenly burst into a coughing fit blood running down the sides of his mouth "here make sure Celestia gets this I will keep him busy Reflex says hoofing over a book.

"I will just hang on ok," Dark said a worried look on his face.

"Dude don't worry I will be fine I'm still immortal just in an ungodly amount of pain and quickly losing blood know grab Rendan and get going I will be fine I'm tough remember!" Reflex says with an unconvincing smile and flex which sent him into another coughing fit with an alarming amount of blood flying from his mouth.

As Dark started to galloped off only stoping to put Rendan on his back he got a few feet away before the Doctor cut them off he moved "Not so fast may I have that book first then you can go so if you please," he said sticking out a hoof for it.

"Ha yeah just since you asked so nicely no!" Dark said voice dripping with sarcasm as he tried to fly over the Doctor but was caught in a physic grip, he struggle to get away flapping his wings as hard as he could trying to get away when the Doctor suddenly let him go and spun around and threw up a shield,

Dark looked back a confused look on his face "what the he-," he saw Reflex open his mouth and roar the air distorted around him then shot forward and slammed into the doctors shield with explosive force sending Dark and Rendan flying though the portal to safety, the last thing they saw before going threw the portal was Reflex grin sadly throw a wink their way as the Doctor grabbed him in his telekinesis and make a pulling gesture with his hoofs.

outside the portal

As Dark and Rendan flew out of the portal they where caught in a yellow aura and lowered lightly to the ground as Celestia and Luna and all of their friends walked up with sad looks on their faces.

"We have seen what has happened, and are saddened by it but their is hope Mr.Lightning the book please," Celestia asked.

"Oh yeah forgot about it for a sec here." Dark said before reaching the book out to Celestia.

which she wrapped in her magic and opened it "Different sides of the same coin by Fragment12 whats up with the numbers? Anyway this is a book for my friends encase I die in a year a spell will appear in the back of this book that will resummon me to this world one again you must only gather the element and have Celly and Lulu read the spell,"it must use a ton of energy to require the elements  but it will be done, what else, Tia I need and Luna to read this spell and everypony else to make a choice but first the spell," Celestia looked to Luna as words slowly replaced the ones she had just read.

"Well you must admit our uncle writes an interesting book but I kind of wish it had pictures," Luna said a small smile on her face.

"yes he doesn't he, but I digress let get to the spell," as she said that both her and Luna's eyes started to glow one white one black and they started to speak.

"Because if the friends I have known the people I have met, I know that when I die, my legacy will live on, I know that I am not alone ," voices changed you could feel the power radiating off of their every word and then something in they air shifted and a large white and red portal opened and suddenly several odd being walked through.

The first was a tall human wearing steam punk armor with wings made of pure ice attached to his back and he gave a small wave before going to stand off to the side.

The next was a dark elf walked through this one had skin that looked like he was made of pure obsidian with a shock of white hair he also had six blades strapped to his back but his most prominent feature where his eyes they seemed to glow a brilliant gold color that as he regarded them seemed to be picking them apart in his head before he too move off to the side as well.

The portal then spit out one more person he was an odd looking man who much like discord was a patch work of different species, he looked at them for a second smiled and walked off to join they others.

then the suddenly the portal closed, only to be replaced by another this one black and turquoise and out stepped an old man with bag slung over his shoulder and a pair of gauntlets on his feet he looked over at them nodded a greeting and walked to they opposite side of the first group and sat cross-legged on the ground.

The next to walk out was an an odd being he looked like an armored bipedal lizard like creature he had a massive bow with arrows so thick you could bludgeon somepony with them slung over his shoulder and a an odd bracer like item with a spool of string in it, as he walked off to the side to join the old man one of his arrows slipped out of his quiver and in a burst of movement he flicked his wrist outward and a string flew out wrapped the arrow and put it back in it's quiver without him ever breaking stride or looking back.

Then one last person walked through he was a tall dark skinned man his hands covered in fire one orange they other blue he gave a polite bow and went to join they other two.

Suddenly the portal snapped shut and Celestia spoke "this is one last gift from Fragment and oddly Ragnarok as well you must make a choice of your teacher these beings here where some of the people who taught either Frag or Rag at one time.

On Ragnarok's side going from first to last are the Steam punk Knight who is a master of flight and spear and staff masterPermafrost," Celestia turned to the next one in line "next is the dark elf weapons master dubbed the red twister by the blood that gets trapped in his swirling blades do to his favored six sword style is Armageddon," Celestia then pointed to the last one on Ragnaroks side

"Next is well only he knows his name we just call him the Demon Halberdthe part splicing immortal his body parts give him his abilities also his enchanted halberd makes him extremely dangerous."

As soon as Celestia stopped speaking Luna stepped "ok on Fragments side we have the master enchanter, alchemist, and one of the quickest most destructive and most precise kickers ever known, he is Ragnel," she then pointed to the next one "this is Gridlock master tactician, expert sniper with a bow, and the perfect tracker," she then turned to the last man "and last but not least Mathew the elemental flame wielding combat specialist,"

After Luna finished their was a sudden flash of light and an insubstantial Fragment and Ragnarok where their smiling as they went and stood by their respective groups and said at the exact same time "make your choice."

Ok then everyone has to make a choice of a teacher because its important soooo hurry up oh and well those OC who don't read the story will be taken out so let me know yawl are still around ok so will be many less oc it would seem.

Chapter 23 Ragnel

Rahsaan woke up in an odd room looking around confused.

Ragnel was sitting in a chair, he smiled when he noticed that Rah was awake spoke "Hello their young one who may I ask are you?"

 "Hello I'm Rahsaan, where are we and why does my head hurt so much? Did you kidnap me oh god you you going to rape me and sell me as a slave aren't you help!" he then tried to run away while screaming his head off.

Ragnel was in front of Rah in the blink of an eye "if I wanted to have my way with you I would have done it while you were asleep, so calm the hell down before I knock you out...again ok just calm down and to your other question we are in my world, and for the next few years you will be training under me an-,"

before Ragnel could finish Rah was freaking out talking in a kind of frenzy. "What a few years I don't have that kind of time I have to be there for when Frag comes back!"

"calm thy tits your in another dimension time moves differently here only ten months will have passed in your world, also I wouldn't recommend trying run around right know seeing as your not a pony any more  and your body is probably still adjusting to that," Ragnel had explain all this like it was the most simplistic thing in the world.

Rahsaan just sat their stunned "s-so I'm not in equestria anymore?" Rah asked Ragnel just shook his head "I'm not even a pony anymore soooo what the hell am I?" Rah asked a little overwhelmed by all the new information he was receiving and even though he had asked he was kind of afraid of the answer.

"You are a human now like me on the planet Orion, but right know that's not important we are going to test your skills, you should be able to get up now all your skills and magic have been transferred to this body just do what you normally do in your old body and it will be translated into this one so don't worry about that,"

Rahsaan just looked at Ragnel before smiling widely and saying"seems legit," Rah got up with ease opened his new hand and summoned a small flame into it Rahsaan started to look his new body over until Ragnel stopped him.

"Here swallow this them come outside," Ragnel had given Rah a bright green pill before he walked through the door.

Rahsaan just looked at the pill for a long time before shrugging and popping it into his mouth and swallowing it, suddenly Rah fell to the ground in pain as the alchemic concoction went to work he could feel his bones adjusting and thickening inside his body and as quickly as it had happened it was gone "that freaking hurt what was that?" Rah got up and started walking toward the door moving a bit stiffly "ahh my bones feel bigger than normal what did he do to me?" he then opened the door and walked out.

As soon as Rah walked out he saw Ragnel sitting on the ground waiting for him "how are you feeling stiff? bones to big for you body?" Rahsaan nodded "good that means the ogre bones vigor is working and I wont have to hold back, now then come let's spar," Ragnel got up walked up to a pair of thick steel leg gauntlets with glowing enchantment symbols on them and slipped his feet into them and got into a ready stance.

"uh I don't know about this I wouldn't feel good about beating up an old man so I-," suddenly Rah was sent flying by a lazy kick from Ragnel he flew several yards away before he was stopped abruptly when he crashed into a tree "hey what was that for that...actually didn't hurt but still old man if you want a fight you got one," he then summoned his scythe and charged.

Ragnel smiled and took of his shirt and placed it to the ground, it immediately sunk several feet into the ground, it also revealing several scars and burns on his body, not only that his body was pure muscle not on inch of fat could be found "bring it kid lets see if we can teach you a few things."

Rahsaan and Ragnel trained together for five years he learned several alchemic recipes, his close combat increased dramatically, also after a mishap with some chemicals he added Greek fire to his arsenal, one thing he couldn't seem to get was enchanting  He learned a few minor enchantment like how to reinforce something but not to much.

Rah and Ragnel where making a potion when the portal opened Rah looked at Ragnel with a bit of sadness because as the years when by they had forged a close friendship "well I guess this is it I have to go back now," Rah said with looking at the ground sadly.

suddenly Rah felt a hand under his chin making him look up "do not be sad my friend maybe we will meet again, but that's not important right know I have something for you," Ragnel handed Rah a beautiful blue topaz that sparkled in the magically in the sunlight.

as soon as he touched it symbols flared to life on the stone and slithered up his arm and into a tribal tattoo with the alchemic symbol for fire and illusions mixed in, Rah then looked at the stone and it to had the same symbols glowing brightly on it and the words 'Procella ignis' engraved on it "what's this Pro-?"

Suddenly he was cut off when Ragnel quickly put hi hand over his mouth "I would rather you not burn my house down and set a bunch of volatile chemicals ablaze, Procella ignis or fire storm these are your words of power you say these words and the very ground under your feet will erupt in hellish column of fire, so yeah I would prefer it if you didn't do that in my house I like it this way any way it's time for you to go."

Rah nodded "yeah I guess it is until we meet again."

Rahsaan walked toward the portal but turned once more to wave good bye to Ragnel one last time before walking through and was gone.

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A/N ok whoever was thinking of changing there pick to Ragnel well to bad you can't anymore also what did you think of the chapter feedback please. and what's with all the hate I wonder I went from like 20 dislikes to 30 in like a week.

Chapter 24 Armageddon

prepare for hell bitches because it's time for

                       Armageddon

Atom walked toward the portal about to go through it until something accrued to him. "Oi who is going to tell Vinyl that Frag is dead?”  Atom asked

“.... shit," everypony else answered.

"Haha at least it ain't me see ya," he then turned back to the portal and started toward it one again until he suddenly felt a hoof on his shoulder he looked over and saw it was the image of Fragment that had stopped him a concerned look on it's face.

"Be careful the place you are about to enter is one of pure evil, revenge is the desert they serve at their dinner tables deceit, is their aphrodisiac and murder, their greeting you must be wary or your death will last a hundred years and grow worse with each year even after you lose the ability to to think of anything but pain they will warp your very body to do their bidding, now take this," Suddenly a emerald figurine stand appeared in front of Atom. "This is an astral plane gate use it to gain an animal companion they will help keep you alive through your training, that is all the help I can give now do your best to stay alive." the Frag image said.

Atom picked up the stand. "Thanks I will do my best," and with that Atom walked toward the gate.

But was once again stopped Fragments portal suddenly opened up and spit out a pegasus mare, she smacked into Atom head first sending them both rolling the mare suddenly stood up and looked around for a bit until a smile suddenly lit up her face and she started to jump up and down. "I made it through in one piece wooo," suddenly the 'ground' she was jumping on groaned in pain and started to move.

"Get the hell off me damn it, who are you anyway and how did get here?" Atom yelled as he struggled to get out from under the offending weight.

"Hmm what? Oh heh sorry about that I was just excited that I made it out safely oh  by the way I'm  evening Storm and we'll Fragment saved my life and sent me here through a portal so I guess I will be living here from now on, so who will I be living with?

"Well that has nothing to do with me so bye." Atom said and before he could be interrupted again jumped through the portal

                                         ••••••••••••••Hell...I mean Evernight same thing really•••

  Darkness, it was all could see when he looked around until a voice a few feet to his left made him jump. "This is your first test, you must survive alone in shadowlands without going completely insane, being eaten, being turned to stone, or having your soul torn from your body and enslaved forever, nothing to hard," Armageddon said a cruel smile on on his lips as Atom gulped audibly.

"Um alright but one thing why can't I see?" Atom asked waving his arms wildly.

"Ah you are blindfolded actually, heh I wouldn't have even told you if you hadn't asked," Armageddon said cackling at his own wit.

Atom scowled slightly but otherwise ignored Arma as he took in his surroundings, as he looked around Atom realized a few things, one it was pitch black where wherever they were and he could still see fine, and two he wasn't equine anymore. "What the hell it's dark and I can see better than in the day and what the fuck am I-I have thumbs!" Atom said freaking over his new found appendages.

"You my former equine bitch are a dark elf we have the ability to see in the dark among others i would explain more but right now I am tired of talking to you." and with that Arma threw down a pack of food, a water skin, and a sword, then walked away leaving Atom to fend for himself.

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Atom walked into the city well not walked he rode on a giant twelve foot tall snake with foot long fangs that would turn you to stone with a stare and turn your bones to powder with if caught in it's coils better known as a basilisk and as soon Atom and his snake where meet with a line of dark elf soldiers pointing crossbows his way. "Alright cal-," before Atom could finish his sentence a crossbow bolt came streaking at him, and two thing happened one Atoms eyes turned a familiar shade of blood red two he snatched the bolt straight out of the air while at the exact same time he threw his blade end over end until it slammed into the offending elves rib cage and then he was there in an instant, he ripped his blade out of the first dark elf and with a beautiful spinning slash severed three more heads sending them arcing through the air he then sent a compressed wave of air that slashed another straight in half, Atom seemed to sense and ducked as an elf swung two swords at his head, not expecting Atom to duck threw himself off balance seeing this Atom capitalized on that in a big way he punched out with his fist and a boost from the wind hitting the dark elf in the chest ripping a hole straight through him he then pulled his hand out and caught the falling swords from mid air and spun around to face more enemy's only to relax as his pet devoured the last enemy. "Good job Jet good girl now time to sleep," Atom petted his pet snake a couple more times before pulling out the emerald figurine stand from before except the stand wasn't empty any more a large snake adorned it Atom held it up and Jet suddenly turned into a light green mist and was absorbed into the figurine.

Suddenly Atom heard someone clapping. "Bravo what a beautiful display of brutality and I approve most highly and you have a pet as well that is good and when you leave this place she will probably be smaller when you go back to your world, but who gives a shit about that it's time to train you, when I get done with you your blade work will be deadly wait one question how many blades do you usually wield?" Arma asked.

Atom just stared at Arma blades at the ready and issued a deep bestial growl breathing heavily  for several moments slowly calming his eyes slowly turning back to their usual green color he shook his head a few times for good measure. "Right come again?" Atom said a slightly dazed look on his face.

"Fuck it just take your weapon handle and another blade and let's get training," Arma said an annoyed look on his face.

"Right let's do this shit," Atom said a resolved look replacing the dazed one.

"Yes let's these next few months will be the worst moments of your life and that new feral break of yours will be polished until you can use it at will now let's go," Arma then just walked away Atom trailing behind him.

absolute hell at least it was for Atom day after day he was put through his paces practicing his new two blade style during one of his training sessions breeze was shattered let's just say several renovations a few funerals and Arma had a few new scars to cover after that, and then a few days later it was stolen by an odd elf with dark black hair with a turquoise streak in it and a light phoenix as well as a shadow raven on his shoulders, but still Atom persevered training his  newer feral break ability Arma even found ways to train his wind abilities, eight months had passed as Atom trained and it was finally time to go home. "Man i can't wait to get out of this hell hole maybe I'll ask that mare out when I get back...but first I have to see what Armageddon wanted," Atom said annoyed.

Atom left his room and found Arma waiting for him an odd gray crystal in his hands. "Ah there you are I was told to give these to you when your training was done so here," Arma then handed Atom a pair of beautiful twin blade handles.

The first was a dark green color with a tribal wind design surrounding a beautiful emerald infinity symbol and the word Jade engraved in gold along its bottom, he then looked to they other one it was a deep blue color with a spiral design that worked it's way outward from a matching sapphire infinity symbol the handle. "They can't be can they theirs no way that's possible," Atom channeled some wind into each of the blades and they came to life the symbols lit up their respective colors and out came twin straight swords made of solid wind, Atom then felt something he could feel the hard work the days , the weeks, the months put into the weapons, he could also feel the research the countless hours spent learning and perfecting the technique, the runes, they enchantments, he could feel the care put into them he could feel the people who put their time and effort into making it, the first one was a good friend and cared for him deeply, the next one was to put it frankly honest, caring, and a hard worker, and loved him with all her heart, the last two where similar they loved him and would love him no matter what happened. "Wow these are beautiful," Atom just stared at the blades for a long while until Arma grabbed his attention and handed him a note.

It read. "Hey man it's me Fragment I heard about what happened to breeze so I decided to made you a little present, I even added a little of breeze to each of them I had a little help from a mare who cares about you cant say who no spoilers and all that hope you like it your immortal bro Fragment. P.S. I thing you should ask Applejack out;) hint hint no spoilers though.

P.P.S. Touch they symbols together.

Atom looked down at the blades in his hands and shrugged and pressed them together, as soon as they touched they flashed brightly for a second blinding Atom when he looked down at the blades again his mouth dropped open, it was breeze one again with only a few differences, the blade and handle was the same as they original but the coloring was different instead of the old green it was turquoise a mix of the two blade colors with an orange streak through the blade and the infinity symbol from before had an a crystal apple in front of it and the name had that was engraved was different it said adfligens probitas or unrelenting honesty.

"Alright that was cool i must admit, but it's almost time for you to go and there is still one more thing," As soon as Arma finished speaking he handed Atom a grey crystal.

It suddenly flared to life in Atoms hands strange markings appeared on the crystal then ran up Atoms arm until a tribal tattoo of a raging winds adorned it and words had appeared on the crystal.

"Wait don't re-" but it was too late.

"Aquilo divinus, divine wind how the bloody hell do I know that," Atom trailed off as a midnight black tornado surrounded him, suddenly on their own accord his hands slammed together and when he did that the tornado exploded outward into six large swirling vortexes of doom each going their own direction and cutting a swath of destruction to whatever they touched and any unfortunate enough to get caught up in it was torn apart faster than a swarm of pirañas could, Atom looked at they destruction he had caused. "Oops heh sorry well I guess I will get going now kthanksbye." Atom then dashed through the portal back home and hopped no one followed him through.

chapter 17 round seven

Unity vs Ragnarok

“All right every pony, it’s time for the next fight. It is somepony named Unity against… oh god… Ragnarok. Well, this will be interesting. I hope the new guy doesn’t get eaten. Anyway, enough talking, onto the actual fighting!” said a disembodied voice, freaking everypony there.

“Who the hell was that?”  Everypony, except Fragment and Pinkie, asked looking around.

“That was the fourth wall talking back to us, and that’s whom Pinkie is always talking to but don’t worry about it, that probably won’t happen again…hopefully,” Fragment said with a thoughtful frown on his face.  “Anyway, enough talk. Time to fight! Just let me get my game face on.” Fragment took a few steps back, then closed his eyes and suddenly Fragment’s coat seemed to drain of all color until it was a stark white color, and the turquoise in his mane and tail turned a blood red color. He opened his eyes, revealing his dark red eyes. Ragnarok then smiled and said, “Let’s do this and what the fuck are you?”

  “I will tell you after I kick your ass.”

Ragnarok look him up and down.  Unity’s coat was a stark white that covered most of his body except his stomach, which was covered with draconic scales that reached from his chin to the tip of his tail, which was also that of a dragon but covered in fur. It was as long as he was, maybe longer. He also had a lavender mane atop his head but didn’t end there; it stretched all the way down to his tail and ended in a thick bush at the tip. He also had a horn sticking out of his unruly mane, and he also had claws and his cutie mark was of two triangles with a in the middle on top of each other, point to point like a hourglass with a slim rectangle between them and a circle behind them that cuts about midway. “Alright then, Luna begin the count.”

“All right. One.” Ragnarok summons six blades, balancing them on different parts of his body.  “Two,” Unity grabbed an amulet around his neck and armor started covering his body. It was teal with gold embroidery and lavender bolt it also had a hooded cloak covering his armor. The cloak was also white with lavender embroidery. “Three.”  Luna then teleported out.

Ragnarok and Unity started circling each other slowly for a few seconds before they both shot forward. Ragnarok sent four of his swords spinning into the air and slashed at Unity with his remaining two. Unity blocked his attack with his forelegs with a resounding clang. Ragnarok let go and flipped over and snatched another out of the air and made a gash along the back of Unity’s armor, leaving a small cut on Unity himself. Ragnarok then made a pulling motion with his mouth and suddenly his swords came back as if pulled by strings, leaving small cuts in Unity’s armor. “What the fuck? Why is your armor so tough? I guess it’s time for a change.”  Ragnarok then pulled all his swords back to him with a quick tug of seemingly invisible strings. The blades had almost reached Ragnarok when suddenly Ragnarok was sent flying when Unity went smashing into him, leaving him clutching his chest and gasping for air. Unity rushed straight for Ragnarok, hoping to continue his attack .When he was close enough, he spun around and struck out with his tail. It hit Unity, then tried to draw back his tail but was unable to. Unity then looked behind himself and saw that his tail was trapped in a spider like web made of ultra-strong, yet thin wires. He couldn’t seem to get himself unstuck and suddenly he felt a tug, and the wires tightened and started dragging him. He went faster and faster until he wasn’t even touching the ground anymore. He kept going until he flew straight through a building, and suddenly it released him. He was able to stop himself but not before he slammed into a wall. Unity extracted himself easily from the wall, seemingly not hurt at all. He looked around until he saw Ragnarok standing a few feet in the air on what looked to be a rope woven together by hundreds of strings coming from an odd device strapped to Ragnarok’s right leg. Also, his swords were gone. In their place was an odd metal staff with holes seemingly spread randomly through it. After Unity had gotten up, he grabbed the wall he had hit and threw the entire thing, making even Ragnarok’s eyes widen in shock. He made a slashing movement with the thread device on his leg. A wave of threads came out and slashed through it with ease, but that was just a distraction. The actual attack was a ball of mixed lightning and fire behind it, which Ragnarok wasn’t able to dodge. It hit Ragnarok with jarring force. He shot backward so fast the building he slammed into fell on top of him. Unity wasn’t done there; he was at the building in a flash. He started firing blast after blast of elemental magic. He charged and fired a massive attack. The explosion was spectacular. He scanned the wreckage with his eyes for signs of Ragnarok. While he was doing that, he had snuck behind him and swung the odd staff at him. Unity didn’t even notice until he was hit. When the staff hit, there was an odd ringing like a bell had been chimed. Unity’s armor seemed fine, but Unity himself was coughing up blood.

“This staff may not seem like much, but this uses sound waves to attack, so it feels like someone is taking a sledgehammer to your insides, to know I don’t have to worry about your tough ass armor anymore.” Ragnarok then started raining down blows, and each time it connected, a bell would chime and Unity would cough up blood. Ragnarok swung his staff in a big downward swing and hit nothing when suddenly, Unity appeared behind him. “What the hell?” was all he could get out before Unity sent his claw rending into Ragnarok’s chest, leaving a long gash and making a crater with his body. He got up and struck out at Unity with his staff, but he was suddenly again appearing a few feet away with a fully charged lightning attack, which Ragnarok was barely able to dodge. He kept trying to get Unity. He was even able to trap his legs a few times but in vain. Unity would just do a small time jump and save himself, and it was pissing Ragnarok off (I mean more than usual). Unity launched himself into the air, and Ragnarok, with a flap of his wings, shot after him. Ragnarok swung, but midway, Unity slammed his tail into him, sending him smashing into the ground. Unity then used his momentum and body and slammed Ragnarok farther into the ground. He started pummeling Ragnarok even deeper into the ground. Each hit seemed to shake the earth from the force. Suddenly, Rag grabbed onto Unity’s leg and strapped an odd bracelet to Unity’s leg, and then both their bodies glowed for a second.  Unity’s armor receded back into its amulet. Seeing this, he tried to jump back and shoot lightning at Ragnarok, but nothing came out. Ragnarok then pointed at the bracelets and started to explain. “These are called warriors fetters, a legendary item that makes the two wearing them fight using only their weapons, fighting skills, but I have this one already. I just had to get rid of your magic. Now, let’s end this.” Ragnarok pressed a button on his thread device, and it started to reel inward like a fishing line, and suddenly thousands of thin threads had Unity completely immobilized in seconds. Ragnarok then took off the device and folded it back together, revealing it to be a sword handle. He then grabbed it on both sides and pulled it apart to reveal an intricate pattern of threads. Ragnarok then stuck out a hoof and strummed a few. Suddenly, hundreds of threads around Unity’s body started to cut and tear into him, making him scream out in pain. Ragnarok smiled at Unitys pain smile and started to strum faster and faster, making Unity cry out louder and louder as the crowd watched on in silent horror as he tortured Unity until Ragnarok slammed his hoof one last time onto the strings and suddenly one of Unity’s legs were sliced off.

Everypony watched the limb fall to the ground. “Oops, guess I lost then. Hahaha oh well, most fun I have had in a while. Bye now.”

Somepony in the audience screamed and that seemed to break them out of it and spring into action. Several doctors rushed out and put Unity on a stretcher, froze his leg, and rushed off.

                      Winner: Unity

But unable to participate due to recovery time

  A/N: Shit that was hardcore, yes. oh yes i'm going to start putting pics on of the two fighters so OC still in the tornament i will need your pics thx and good bye.