The Place Were Only Time Can Tell

by inkwing firequill

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance
Length: 207

This is my first story and i will explain my different conflicting styles of writing.

I'll be truthful if your looking for an adventure this is not the one for you. This is one that I've worked on for awhile. Thank you for all the FIM fic writers that gave me the inspiration.

Any comments are welcome. Be critical but not mean please.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-09 19:46:55 UTC

The Begging

"What do you"*hic*" mean I can't have any more." The white mare swayed side to side in here chair, not finding a common balance point. "Look here if i can pay..."

"Lady you've had enough look at you you can't even hold your glass." That mean old pegasus she thought, he needs to lay off. Just then a colt walked up behind her.

"Are you Firequill?" the colt quarried. "If not, do you know were she is?"

"How in the hay do you know"*hic*"who... I ... I aaaaaaa" with that she passed out from all the alcohol and the mysterious colt figured she was also really tiered.

"I'll take her home" the colt told the bartender. "She'll be safe with me." The bartender just nodded  in agreement. After he got her to his friends house since he lived in a cloud home. He grabbed a blanket from the empty bedroom and laid it over her while she slept .

"Good night ... sis."

That night she had a dream. She was still a little filly not even a month old. She could see her parents fighting and then she looked to her side and saw a pegasus fast asleep then it faded to black.