
Debts
Diamond Tiara, after hearing a counterintuitive fact at school, pays off all of Sweet Apple Acres' debts. But after the filly's scheme gets out of control, can Diamond swallow her pride and help a blank-flank's family out of the mess that she put them in?
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This is my first published fanfiction, so I'd appreciate any and all feedback. Leave your rating or a comment, because I'm sick of looking at this for errors or improvements.
I have since edited this, so hopefully it flows a bit better. Leave criticisms regardless!
Another edit, this time fixing a few grammatical mistakes, nothing major.
Vectors by EROCKERTORRES: http://erockertorres.deviantart.com/art/Apple-Sad-279674222
…And NimbusThePoni: http://nimbustheponi.deviantart.com/art/Diamond-Tiara-Feels-Bad-Mare-294553683
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