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A new kind of flier

by Karlsson
K is a pilot, second in command of the Grim Reaper squadron. He brings death from above on Earth. Is that a good fit for Equestria? Will he be able to find a purpose in a in a world full of colorful, peaceful, talking ponies?

I wrought down the first parts during the summer of 2012 after having the most awesome dream ever.
This is a human in Equestria story where a pilot called K is in focus. He flies a fictional plane that I call F35-2s. It is based on the existing F-35 but it has two seats and improved performance.
The story starts out with Ks arrival to Equestria where he after a few road bumps quickly makes new friends amongst the ponies of ponyville. One of them takes him in to her home, another one studies him and his technology and one pony has to bring her A-game if she is to keep her cocky attitude in one piece.

That is what I have posted so far in the first four chapters that where edited by a friend that is now to busy continue. I am currently working on part five and six but it is slow going because I only wright when I feel like it and I am always getting stuck, I just don't feel that I am not that good of a writer. (I think I need a co-writer who could help me out at times.)
And remember that this is the very first story I have ever wrought down EVER. So I would encourage constructive criticism. I am also In need of an editor who can at least correct spelling, grammar and punctuation but it would be great if someone could re-wright this to make it more appealing to the reader.

Teen
Incomplete
Human
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
SRMA

12477 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Arrival 2013-03-15 21:41:04 UTC
    1164
  2. First day 2013-03-15 21:44:24 UTC
    4250
  3. First night 2013-03-15 21:46:35 UTC
    3482
  4. Race day 2013-03-15 21:50:54 UTC
    3581