The Treasure of Oooh.

by Froglover06

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure
Length: 1320

A story I have been writing about a treasure, in a dungeon, in the land of Oooh...

A story where the gang has to recover a treasure in a land far away. So, they read a book about it first.
Note: The chapters are really short, but hopefully the story its self wont be!
Other Note: My first fanfic.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-03 01:35:39 UTC

Chapter 1: A Legend

One day, a lone Pegasus named Shadus was studying the land of Oooh from a dusty old book. She had found an article about… “Treasure!?” she blurted “Hmm…” She thought “What could this be?” She studied the page and came across another article. “A dungeon!?” she yelled. “There’s a dungeon?” She was stunned for a second, and then recovered with a sharp “Well, the more challenge the better!” She studied, and studied, and studied! And finally she just pooped out and thought “Long night… Well! Off to bed! I have a lot ahead of me tomorrow!” And with that she trotted off to bed. Before Twilight could continue, Rainbowdash interrupted “Is that it?” Twilight replied “Yes, for this chapter at least.” “It was pretty short…” Rainbowdash mumbled… “Anyway!” said Twilight “Chapter Two, the book!”

Chapter 3: The Ghost

“Hello!?” Shadus yelled. “Do you have my book!?” Suddenly a clear, glowing pony stepped out of the bushes “AAAAAAAAAAAGH!” Shadus screamed. “Who are you!?” “Huh, I would’ve just tackled the thing…” interrupted Dash, nervously. “A ghost Dashie?” asked Rarity. “Well…” replied Rainbowdash. “That’s what I thought…” said Rarity “Guys!” yelled Twilight. “The story!” the ghost pony greeted the frightened Shadus… “Do not be spooked, for I have your book and wish to help you find the treasure.” It said. “W- Who are you!?” Shadus asked, frightened. “I am the ghost of Oooh…” it replied. “Well… Do you have a name?” Shadus asked calmly. “Twi-Star.” she said. “That’s odd…” said Twilight. “My name is Twilight… And my cutie mark is a star…” “Um, sugarcube…” Said Applejack… “Oh my!” blurted Rarity. “What, what is it!?” Asked Twilight… “Ooooooh cool!” said Pinky Pie. “What is happening!?” screamed Twilight. “You are… Uh…“ said Applejack “Glowing, wow!” Interrupted Rainbowdash. “Aaagh, what!?” asked Twilight. “Fraid Dash is right…” Said Applejack. “Spike!” Twilight yelled, “Take a letter!” Spike rushed into the room. “Wow!” He said. “Spike, this is an emergency!” Twilight said. “Oh, right.” Spike said “Spike, writ- Aagh!” Twilight disappeared into a small implosion. To be continued…

Chapter 4: Booked

Twilight appeared inside the story, she talked funny too… She saw the ghost…  “Twi-Star” She said… She noticed this recreation of the story and looked up, hoping she would see her friends. Just a dark sky awaited her eyes…

Chapter 5: Cliffhanger Continuation

For her friends though, it was different. “Twilight, We see you!” Rainbowdash yelled. “I don’t think she can hear you.” said Applejack. “This sucks.” said Spike, “Spike!” yelled Rainbowdash “Write this!” Seconds later Spike finished the letter to Celestia. “Alright, done.” He said as he set the letter on fire facing the window… A few more seconds later all the ponies, and Spike, started glowing with cyan magic. “Whoa, I think we’re being teleported!” said Applejack. “Spike quick, grab the book!” yelled Rarity.  Spike did just that, and not a second later they whizzed out of Twilight’s tree house. To no surprise they were teleported to Princess Celestia in Canterlot. “What’s this about Twilight, being sucked into a book?” Celestia asked confused, maintaining most of her seriousness.  “Long story” Rainbowdash said…

Chapter 6: Royal Reading

“And then she started glowing, and imploded!” said Rainbowdash. “And we looked at the book to see her replacing Shadus in the story!” Applejack blurted, “See for yourself!” Celestia opened the book “Oh my…” she said, “This is a big problem…” she looked at the short page to see Twilight in the story, looking at Twi-Star the ghost of Oooh. “I think we should continue reading.” Said Celestia, “And then we shall see what happens…” so everypony calmed down and listened as Celestia read the next parts of the story.

Chapter 7: That's a Funny Name

“Twi-Star huh?” said Twilight. “That’s a funny name…” “My name does not matter, what matters is the treasure of Oooh!” said Twi-Star “Oh, right.” said Twilight “I totally forgot!” “Well here is your book, Twilight” said Twi-Star “Who’s Twilight?” said Twilight, “My name is Shadus!” “Not really…” said Twi-Star, “But I will call you Shadus, if you please.” “That would be nice… Twi-Star…” Twilight replied. Twilight grabbed her book in her mouth, and placed it in her saddlebag.

Chapter 8: Oooh

“Thanks… For giving me back my book, and stuff…” said Twilight “No problem!” said Twi-Star, “Shall we?” she said “Shall we what?” asked Twilight, confused. “Explore the land of Oooh!” replied Twi-Star “Oh… Right…” Twilight said dumbfounded. “How?” she asked. “Come with me!” replied Twi-Star. “Okay… So what are we going to do?“  Twilight’s question was answered by the world disappearing. “Uhh…” she said “What just happened?” “We are traveling to Oooh, didn’t you read the book?” Twi-Star asked. “Not all of it.” replied Twilight. “A ghost of Oooh is required to travel.” replied Twi-Star “Oh…” said Twilight… After about a minute or two, the world appeared again. “So this is Oooh?” Twilight asked. “Yes.” Twi-Star replied. The rest of the terrain of Oooh started to appear, along with a big gate and two royal guards. “I’m the ghost of Oooh by the name of Twi-Star, and I have brung a visitor.” said Twi-Star. The guards just nodded and opened the gates. “Wow… You must be quite the royalty in Oooh…” said Twilight. “Yes, all ghosts of Oooh are royal.” said Twi-Star. The ponies noticed a sudden glow. “What in tarnation is that!?” asked Applejack. “I don’t know…” replied Celestia. It got larger, and larger. “It’s going to blow!” said Rainbowdash “Get behind my desk!” said Celestia. Boom! It exploded… And a pony came from that explosion too. “Shadus?” asked Celestia, shocked. To be continued…

Chapter 10: Wow, Just Wow

This is not a chapter at all, more of a... Vote, of sorts... If you want me to continue this, tell me so in the comments. If not, do the same. I like this story, but I don't know where to go from here on out. Suggest where I should go with this...

Chapter 2: The Book

Shadus awoke to the sun Celestia had raised glistening in through the large window. “Wait… How old is this book?” interrupted Rainbowdash. “Years…” replied Twilight. “Then Celestia must be old!” chuckled Rainbowdash. Twilight scolded. “Dash, that’s rude!” She said. “Sorry…” said Rainbowdash. “Anyway!” said Twilight “Back to the story!” Shadus yawned and crawled out of bed… “I guess it’s time to hit the books.” She muttered. “She really should just read them!” interrupted Pinky Pie. Shadus slowly wobbled over to her desk… “Huh? It was right here! The book! It’s missing!” Shadus yelled… She looked… And looked… And looked… And just gave up… “Let’s go find Miss Smith…” Shadus thought. So she got herself together, and flew out the window into Ponyville. She flew until she hovered over Sweet Apple Acres. Then she dived down to look for Miss Smith. “What? Granny Smith? Huh…” mumbled Applejack… “Miss Smith!?” yelled Shadus “Are you home?” “Ehh?” said Miss Smith, “That you Shadus?” she asked. “Yes, I’m looking for my book.” Shadus replied “I’ve seem to have lost it!” “Whats’t called?” asked Miss Smith “It’s a big dusty book called Oooh.” Shadus replied. “Haven’t seen it, sorry!” said Smith “That’s ok” said Shadus “I’ll find it, bye Miss Smith!”

“Bye Shadus!” Miss Smith replied.

Shadus flew back to her house to be greeted by a note. “What’s this?” she thought. “I know what you are looking for. Meet me at the Everfree forest entrance at midnight. Signed, –A friend.” She thought for a second and yelled “Oh nuts! Its 11:55!” She flew away to the Everfree forest entrance, just in time too…

Chapter 9: Another Problem

“Celestia?” asked Shadus. “Wow!” Celestia just stared at her in awe, and then she decided to speak up. “Shadus?” she asked “How did you get here?” Shadus just plopped into the air for a second and thought… “I…” she said “I don’t remember…”