Metroid V: Equestrian Frontier

by OmegaMetroidBrony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, Adventure, Crossover, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 10199

Unofficial pony sequel to Metroid Fusion.

After the events of Metroid Fusion, Samus is now facing the consequences of defying the Galactic Federation. The once legendary hunter becomes the hunted. Thanks to PonyofTacos for letting me borrow his idea to build upon and giving me a few ideas. Hopefully I won't butcher his idea. MLP, or Metroid (Though from what I've been hearing since it's release, The Other M already did that.). Also this won't be exactly like Metroid Fusion, I'm going to add a (few) feature(s) from the Prime series into this, well mainly the scan visor at the moment.

I know it's a sight for sore eyes but hey, I'm barely a writer, but art is COMPLETELY out of the question. What could be a better title image than that? Also, in case you are wondering, I won that fight.

Published 2012-12-14 02:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-24 03:44:03 UTC

Beginning Where Fusion Left Off

Samus stared intently at her holoscreen, a stern look plastered on her face.

"Samus Aran, the galaxy's greatest bounty hunter," a sickening sarcastic voice issued from the screen. The figure that supposedly owned it was just a silhouette on the display. "Bah, the galaxy's greatest bounty hunter wouldn't interfere with peaceful research and the advancement of the Federation's goal of galactic peace."

Samus's face turned to utter disgust at the blunt lie that befell her ears. She couldn't believe that after her ordeal with in the B.S.L, who ever was speaking to her, attempted to make a poor excuse to cover up the Galactic Federation's true plans concerning the hidden operation destroyed by the Hunter and the rampaging SA-X.

"Such transgressions won't be taken lightly Aran," the voice continued in a threatening tone.

A bounty contract, open to any and all, suddenly replaced the silhouette. Samus jumped slightly, startled at the instant appearance of the bounty.

The Galactic Federation is offering 500,000,000 credits for the capture or death of Samus Aran, bounty hunter gone rogue. The body/person(s) must be presented to the Galactic council. Negotiable bonus can be requested if the target's Power Suit is (mostly) intact upon presentation. WARNING! Target is heavily armed and EXTREMELY DANGEROUS!

Below the bold print were several pictures of Samus in her Fusion Suit. While she didn't care in the least, one detail that unnerved her was that the suit was in the Gravity Suit color scheme. The bounty contract dissipated and the mysterious silhouette reappeared.

"I guess you aren't the least bit intimidated are you?," asked the voice. It sounded pleased as if some one left the speaker a pleasant surprise. It made Samus want to wipe, what she was guessing was a smile or some kind of smirk, off the person's smug, ugly mug they called a face. "Why would you be? You're the almighty Samus Aran! Vanquisher of the Space Pirates! Protector of the Galaxy! Champion of the Luminoth!," the holoscreen silhouette proclaimed mockingly. "All those silly little titles mean nothing to anyone. You're a criminal and a traitor who the lawful eye of the Galactic Federation will be searching for and it's fist will crush you! Don't think you can escape the grasp of the Federation for long Aran."

Samus smiled underneath her helmet as the screen vanished.

I've seem Zoomers more intimidating than that fool.

"I hope you're actually thinking this through Samus," said the robotic voice of the A.I.

"What do you mean by that Adam?," inquired the Hunter, curious at what her former commander's computerized form had to say.

"This is a Federation bounty hunter class ship remember?"

Samus's eyes pin-pricked. That detail had slipped out of her mind and she knew Adam was on to something.

"They'll just track the ship and it'll lead them straight to you. You'll have to abandon or destroy this craft on an alien world and find a place to lay low for a while."

"I'm not going to run. I don't care if they capture me," the now fugitive bounty hunter responded haughtily. "I know one of them is going to understand. Surely one of them must."

"Maybe, maybe not," the computer countered. "The corruption of the Galactic Federation may extend farther than either of us may anticipate. It wouldn't do the galaxy any good if it's protector was executed, imprisoned... or experimented on."

Samus felt a chill go down her spine when she heard the last bit. She knew the Federation would do almost anything to get a hold of her unique Power Suit. The Hunter could see it in the eyes of every man or woman of science she passed by. They all wanted to rip the Chozo battle suit off of her body to learn how it works and recreate it's functions for their own goals.

"So Adam, where do we go from here?," asked Samus lamely. Even though running isn't her style, it was the only option that seemed logical at this point.

"Well," started the A.I.,"a course should be set for a planet on the fringe or outside of Federation controlled space. That should keep them busy long enough for you to ditch this ship and head further away from any sort of lead to your location."

"So I should head for the Kriken Empire's territory then?," suggested the bounty hunter smugly.

"This isn't a time for playing around Samus," retorted Adam. "You're in grave danger as long as you're in this ship traveling through Federation controlled space."

Acknowledging the true danger and how much Adam wanted Samus to be continue existing in one piece, the former bounty hunter plotted random co-ordinates outside of space and ignited the the warp drive.

Twilight Sparkle's observations of the heavens above had just begun. Through her enhanced telescope she could see nearly anything in the night sky. The lavender unicorn was observing the darkened sky realm as a way of relieving stress. There was something mysteriously soothing about staring at the darkened sky filled with twinkling lights. Every now and then a meteor streaked across the dark void wearing it's bright gown of light.

Twilight smiled softy at the darkened heavenly realm above her tree library. Some times she wished that some kind of celestial being would drop from the sky and visit. Even if only for a few minutes, she would love to hear of the tales it had of it's travels through the abyss of space or just have a friendly chat. Though the educated unicorn knew that was an impossibility as the creatures were of legends as ancient as the princesses. She then restarted her focus on the void filled with tiny, twinkling lights. For a few minutes Twilight observed the realm above with the utmost pleasure until she felt the need to remove her eye from the telescope lens. The brilliant unicorn blinked her right eye a few times to rid it of a dry feeling. After returning her eye to optimal moisture she stared back up at the sky with out the telescope. The unicorn had the good fortune to spy a shooting star. Every once in a while Twilight would indulge in allowing herself to give in to those old pony legends and myths by closing her eyes to wish upon a falling star.

Shooting star, I wish that a being from another world would visit me. Just once, please, for a few minutes. That's all I ask.

The purple unicorn opened her eyes once again to see that the streak of light had disappeared. She felt a twinge of excitement at the fact, since legend tells that the stars falling to the earth disappear when wished upon to fulfill that desire. The little spark of hope was then extinguished with cold, uncaring logic.

You forgot that meteors burn in the atmosphere and that most don't even make it to the ground. Besides it's just an old pony legend. Everypony knows most legends aren't real.

"But some are," whispered Twilight to herself silently. With that said, the unicorn trotted off to bed.

Author's Note

So this is kind of a first for me so go easy. Also a brohoof to PonyofTacos for a bit of idea sharing.

Close Encounter

Samus was currently descending through the planet's atmosphere. From all the observations and scans made by her and Adam they determined that the planet had not been touched by the machines of people foreign to its earth. Also a strange unidentifiable energy was interfering with some of the ship's smaller electronics. Aside from that, the landing would probably go smoothly.

"60 seconds til we enter optimal airspace to begin searching for a landing zone to abandon ship," reported Adam.

Samus cringed at the word abandon. Not that she ever experienced being left for the unknown, but the thought of losing Adam again tugged at her heartstrings.

"Surely you don't mean completely abandon right?," asked Samus hopefully. "The electronic interference on this planet will probably keep them at bay for a while right?"

"Yes, I do mean completely abandon," responded Adam in his robotic voice. "This isn't Aether where all signals are completely blocked. Sure the tracking signal will be weakened but it won't be completely gone."

The once legendary bounty hunter sighed. She knew the A.I. was right. There's no way the Federation was going to let a weak signal be of any hindrance to their goal.

"Is this truly the end? I only reunited with him a short while ago and now here I have to give him up again. Though he won't be completely gone this time."

"Samus, I've detected a suitable landing zone in an opening in the forest below us. I'm piloting the ship there now," announced the computer.

Samus didn't respond. Her mind was busy formulating her next course of action, but mainly it was also trying to accept the fact that Adam wouldn't be with her for much longer.

The golden sun slowly rose into the sky. It's rays of yellow light pushing the darkness of night to the other side of the planet to give the other side's inhabitants rest. Also, the actions of the star awoke a refreshed Ponyville. Ponies were beginning to rise from their slumber and cast off the warm blankets in exchange for nourishment. At Fluttershy's cottage things weren't as peaceful and drowsy.

Fluttershy was huddling in a protected corner of her tree home, shaking at the events of last night.

"No,no,no,no... nothing landed in the Everfree Forest and walked out no,no,no,no,no! Such things don't happen!," Fluttershy told herself quietly. "The only things that travel in and out of the Everfree Forest are ponies!"

Logic would not win over her fearful personality.

"But that... that... that thing did! Oh dear Celestia please let my animal friends be safe."

A soft thumping noise started to make it's way closer to her location. With a squeak of fright the light yellow pegasus curled into a ball. The thumps drew closer until they ceased at what sounded to be about a meter away. After a few seconds Fluttershy opened one of her eyes a smidgen to see a rather annoyed Angel Bunny with his arms crossed.

"Oh, it was only you," the animal loving pegasus said with relief. "I thought it was that thing that walked out of the forest last night."

The bunny rolled it's eyes in disbelief. He knew that creatures do no simply walk out of the forest.

"You don't believe me?," Fluttershy asked curiously. "Didn't you hear that loud roar last night?"

Angel shook his head. He also pulled out a pair of earplugs and put them in his ears and pretended to sleep. This habit he and the other animals started when the Cutie Mark Crusaders spent the night at the cottage.

"Wha...?"

That was all Fluttershy could say before she succumbed to the delicious folds of sleep that had slowly piled up on her. Angel face palmed and put a blanket over the sleeping pegasus. It appeared that he was going to have to feed himself and all the others.

Applejack isn't crazy, blind, or one to hallucinate but she swore she saw something in the orchard 30 seconds ago.

"I'll be a rotten apple fritter if Ah didn't see somethin' over this part of the farm," she quietly told herself as she went to inspect the row of trees.

The apple farmer slowly walked through the rows of trees, searching the soft ground for hoof prints. She didn't see any but there were some disturbing impressions that sunk rather deep in the moist earth. They were deeper than even the prints of Big Macintosh and no pony in Ponyville has that kind of weight. Goosebumps began rise up all over Applejack's body, sweat slowly formed under her coat, and the feeling of being watched pervaded the farmer's mind. It was nearly broad daylight and yet the tan pony was unnerved and on edge.

"Celestia have mercy on me for being such a coward but dang it if there isn't something creepy runnin' around the farm."

Applejack continued to follow the mysterious impressions a ways till they abruptly ended. Applejack observed the rather large amount of leaves that were disturbed off the tree where the holes stopped. She gulped and slowly looked up into the canopy of the apple tree. Fortune had it that nothing was perched on any of the tree's branches. With a sigh of relief the apple growing pony trotted back hurriedly to her duties.

Samus hated playing hide and seek with the creature but she didn't know how the entity would react. Years of experience have taught her to always be vigilant, even when the situation appears harmless. She activated her Scan Visor and attempted to learn more about the quadruped. Not much information came up besides it's common name, pony, and that compared to other equines in the known galaxy, it has higher brain functions, that are on par with a human.

"Interesting. That explains the structure which can be assumed to be a barn. There's probably more than that one walking around here somewhere so I need to tread carefully if I want to keep the situation green."

Deeming the situation safe, Samus dropped from her perch with a mezzo forte thump into the brown earth. The former bounty hunter began to slowly back track the pony's path. As she slowly progressed through the fruit tree forest, there was a sudden roar similar to that of an engine, albeit not as offending to the ears. Before the armored woman could take cover, a rainbow shot through the sky above at a magnificent speed in the direction of the barn.

This ought to be fun. Now I have to avoid drones. If these... ponies have super sonic drones then why don't they have space craft? At any rate stealth is going to be a lot more difficult. Ugh, I hate not knowing friend or foe.

Once again Samus began backtracking the path, now using the trees as cover.

Author's Note

Well I didn't think the first chapter was pony enough to be submitted so I added this to ensure a safe review. Hopefully this chapter isn't worse than the first.

On the Look Out

Pinkie Pie had been inspecting every element of Ponyville for nearly three hours and nothing out of the ordinary, besides her Pinkie Sense going off bit too often and rather violently, was observed. What ever her gift of foreseeing the future was predicting, it was a doozy and a half consisting of severe body tremors that rocked equine's body like a 8.0 earthquake immediately followed by a spontaneous somersault jump that left pink party starter dizzy and disoriented.

"What in the name in the moon and the sun is making me do this? Sure its fun for the first three times but after a while it's starting to make my eyes spin for too long..."

Now entering the market, Pinkie slowly trotted through the crowded area of the town, brushing past familiar faces til she spied her ultimate destination in this sector of Ponyville, the Apple Acres fruit stall, operated under that watchful eye of the Apple family. Applejack was on deck today, which the party pony was counting on. Quickening her pace as much as she could with out disturbing the other market goers, Pinkie Pie rushed over to her farming friend.

"Howdy Pinkie!," greeted Applejack cordially. "Ya'll right? You look a bit... rustled," she commented concerned over her pink friend who's appearance was starting to look a bit disheveled, which was a rather rare occurrence.

"No," sighed Pinkie sadly. "My Pinkie Sense is picking up something HUGE and I can't find hoof or mane of it!"

Immediately after the last word was released from her mouth, without any visible warning, the mysterious ability sent the pink earth pony into a massive amount of shaking, causing other ponies to watch with concern. As quickly as they started, the tremors ceased only to let the the poor equine jump into the air and perform several rapid forward somersaults. Pinkie successfully landed back on her hooves albeit dizzy and having great difficulty standing.

Applejack stared wide eyed and jaw agape at the little performance. She didn't know what to say about such a display of Pinkie's gift. She's seen the odd ability give her pink friend violent tremors, now known as a doozy, like the day Twilight just stopped using science to understand the Pinkie Sense and roll with it. This combination of body movements the farmer witnessed had to be a double doozy.

"Wow," Applejack said stunned. "Ah don't know if I have anything to say about that little display there, but Ah can tell ya somethin' strange that might be the cause."

Pinkie's eyes stopped spinning and her balance reset immediately. She then dashed in front of her blonde maned friend putting her face uncomfortably close.

"What is it? I need to know! My Pinkie Sense is starting to drive me nuts!"

"Well uh," Applejack nervously began, while slowly making distance between her face and Pinkie's,"Ah saw this really odd, brightly colored critter in the orchard earlier. When it noticed Ah spotted it, the thing ran off deep into the field. What ever it was, it sure made deep prints, boy they were deeper than any I've seen Big Macintosh make. Ah followed the trail of 'em the thing left, it must be able to fly or somethin' cause the prints don't just suddenly stop. You have no idea how disturbin' that is to me."

Pinkie's brow furrowed with heavy concentration. Applejack's strange creature sighting was indeed a helpful insight.

"So my Pinkie Sense is going off because of some new creature? No, that can't be right unless it's something from the Everfree Forest--

The pink party mare's concentration was shattered by a blood curling scream.

"Oh sweet Celestia!," shouted Applejack. "Some pony needs help our help! C'mon Pinkie!"

With that said, the two Elements of Harmony galloped off in the direction of the scream to lend their assistance.

Samus finally skidded to a halt behind one of the wooden buildings of the town. She had just sent the area on red alert. A pony had chanced upon the bounty hunter who was attempting to sneak through the village and let off a rather nasty scream, then proceeded to faint.

"Ugh. I thought I was in the clear too. Great, now there's going to be search parties and drone recons everywhere."

She was right too, as the thunder of a herd of probably crazed creatures running could be heard coming towards her position. Frantically, the Hunter searched for a place to hide. Fortunately, there was a container of some sort close by in he alleyway big enough to hide in as the Morph Ball. With out further delay Samus morphed into her ball form and hopped into the hiding spot. By the sound it made when the ball hit the bottom, the bounty hunter inferred that the container was made of some sort of metal.

"Hopefully, the inhabitants won't find me in here. As much as I hate being stealthy and despite my trigger finger itching like crazy now, it would probably be best to stay out of any fire fights. I don't know if I can reload or recharge anywhere.

Outside the now known to be metal container, the denizens of the town ran past, not even looking in the direction of the hidden bounty hunter. Samus thought she could hear frantic voices, angry shouts, and commands of search and destroy.

"I must've really tripped over the wire now. That sounds like a massive, angry search party...

It seemed like forever till the noise of voices and thunderous running ceased. When it did Samus cautiously peeked over the brink of her hiding spot. The alleyway was clear in all directions, so the hiding Hunter ditched her hiding spot to continue her venture deeper into the town.

Twilight restlessly trotted back and forth in her room. Spike was away on royal business, the library occupation was as slow as always, and she wanted to do something but didn't know what.

"Some many places to and I don't want to go to any, an entire library that I've already read, all my other friends are probably working, and the spells I want to train, I need Spike's help. Luna help me please and find a way through this time of boredom."

As if on cue, the front door slowly creaked open grabbing enough of Twilight's attention to make the unicorn pause and turn it's head in that direction. A few seconds passed before footsteps could be heard signifying an entity was entering the library.

"That's odd. Ponies usually walk right in... but who ever it was waited a few moments. Were they checking if any one was here? Maybe I should go look.

Twilight took a few steps closer to the edge of the niche that was her room. From her near omnipotent perch she could see everything in the library including the tall orange, yellow, and red presence that had invaded her home. The lavender unicorn wanted to scream in terror,but a stray thought quelled her fear.

"So the legends are true aren't they?"

Closer Encounters

Samus took one of the numerous books off the shelf that was carved into the wall. She scanned it curious as to what the symbols on the cover would reveal. The scan failed to translate the writing. A small obstacle such as that wouldn't stop the Hunter from trying to learn any information from the bound ink and paper. Opening to a random page, Samus began the search for illustrations. Fortune had it that the random page she flipped to had one. It consisted of a pony, with something on it's forehead highlighted, and what appeared to be an apple under going metamorphosis into a round object.

"Oh hello! I---"

Samus rapidly spun on the spot to face where the voice originated. Out of habit she took aim with her arm cannon as well. The frightened pony she found in her line of fire squeaked a frightened "Eep!" and flinched. The Hunter used the window opportunity to book it out of the structure. Once she was out on the street, she blindly ran in a random direction and began formulating a new plan of action.

The direction the Hunter chose took her towards a wooden structure with a roof that appeared to be constructed of edible treats. Samus's curiosity got the better of her, causing the bounty hunter to stop and scan the building's canopy. The information she acquired added a few more questions to her pile. The scan revealed that the materials used in the construction of the roof emanated an unknown energy, protecting it from the elements and wildlife.

"Hiya!"

A pink face had teleported uncomfortably close to her visor. It's bright, light blue eyes stared into Samus's own.

"What in the name of Luna's monocle are you?," it asked, curious about what she was talking to. "Are you the thing making my Pinkie Sense go off the hook?"

Besides a barely audible pop and a gasp coming from above, the area was completely silent. Samus couldn't answer the rather strange question she was asked.

"How did that thing get there? What's a 'Pinkie Sense'? Why---"

"Why are you thinking about this instead of talking to me?"

Samus didn't think twice about turning tail and running, anything that can communicate to her through her mind should be avoided at all costs.

"Where ya goin'?," the presence behind her shouted.

The bounty hunter ignored it and activated the Speed Booster, leaving the entity far behind. She proceeded to weave her way through the town, turning left and right at random. She stopped after reaching what appeared to be the town's center. The complex in front of her was taller and more elaborate than most of the other structures in the area.

"Hey freak!"

Samus spun around to face a pony, this one was cyan with wings attached to it's back. It hovered roughly the bounty hunter's height.

"I've heard there's something weird running around town and you fit the description," it said in a raspy voice. "Now why don't we do this the easy way and you come along with me? I'm sure we can smooth things out."

The Hunter remained silent, contemplating the consequences of following a flying pony also checking if it had any telepathic abilities.

"Come on now," the pony said impatiently. "You don't want to make this difficult."

"It's getting restless."

Deciding it was better to face the music, Samus took a step towards the flying pony.

"Good, now follow me," the pony said soothingly, motioning the Hunter forward.

Samus walked slowly to the pony, whom was drifting backwards. She had only taken a few steps before the pony winked randomly. The Chozo hybrid raised an eyebrow of suspicion under her helmet.

"NOW!," it shouted excitedly.

Samus frantically searched left and right spotting nothing. Her futile search only lasted a couple seconds before a cage landed with a thud around her. The pony had lured her into a trap.

"Gotcha!," the flying pony cried gleefully. "Excellent work everypony! Now one of you go tell Applejack we found her stalker and the other go get Twilight, she would love to see this thing."

"Should've known something was up, why was I so stupid? Now I'm caged like a common Space Pirate."

Samus sighed, frustrated at her idiotic decision making. Through the clouds of self reprimanding thoughts a brilliant idea forced it's rays of sunshine through.

"These ponies are low tech remember? This cage is probably iron. Just freeze and blast! It's worth a shot any ways."

Samus fired her Ice Beam at the opposite wall of bars. The Metroid killing beam iced the bars over slightly.

"What in the name of Celestia's sunglasses are you doing?!, her flying pony captor cried out, alarmed by the sound of the weapon firing.

The Hunter fired one of her two hundred fifty missiles at the metal bars. They shattered like a frozen Metroid. With a fist pump and a small jump, Samus escaped her prison.

"OH NO YOU DON'T," her former captor cried angrily.

Samus gave the pony a wave good bye and dashed off in the opposite direction. The flying pony following in hot pursuit. The Speed Booster's red aura began to form around the bounty hunter. She smiled confidently knowing few creatures can run or fly at such a speed with out assistance.

"Ha! You can't out run me! I'm the fastest pegasus around!"

The Hunter turned her head to the right to see the rainbow maned, now known as a pegasus, pony flying along with her , its face sporting a scowl. The once legendary hunter of the Space Pirates skidded to a halt. Her pursuer following suit.

"Why did you have to go make everything difficult?," the pegasus complained. "I could have been napping...."

Samus tuned out the rant, attempting to raise her Arm Cannon. Her opponent wasted no time charging her before she could line up a shot. The Hunter barely dashed out of the way. With a quick spin, the bounty hunter faced her attacker and fired her Arm Cannon once, uncharged. The extremely cold, waving beam made contact with the pegasus's face as it turned around for another charge attack. With a loud "Gah!" the pony's wings closed shut and the creature fell to earth with a thud.

"W-w-w-what th-th-the? H-h-h-how c-c-can I b-be c-cold?," the pony questioned, chattering from the piercing chill.

Samus decided it was time to make a get away from the scene. Before she could make her move, a purple energy wrapped itself around her body, minus her head, binding her in place.

"Sidehoppers," she muttered to herself.

Backtracking

"Well Twilight Sparkle, I am just as knowledgeable as you are about the creature," the royal Princess Luna finally admitted defeat. The lunar alicorn had read the letter Twilight had sent and decided to lend a hoof. "Even at my age, I've never seen such a unique creature. Does anypony know where it origiated?"

"Fluttershy claims it came out of the Everfree forest after something landed there.," responded the lavender unicorn excitedly and a little worried.

"Landed?," Luna asked, surprised and curiosity rising. "Did she mention what direction it came from? Was it above the Everfree before it landed?"

"Yes," the genius unicorn answered. "She said it flew over her cottage and then a short distance into the Everfree Forest."

Luna's face changed from surprised and curious to worried. Her royal coat dampening slightly.

"Twilight, round up your friends immediately," ordered the Princess sternly. "Tell them we're hunting down something critical to solving this mystery. I'll watch over the beast in your absence."

The lavender unicorn dashed upstairs, calling for Spike to assistance in gathering her best friends. The lunar alicorn directed her full attention to the entity with in the magic bubble. Currently it was sitting against the opposite side, as if watching for one wrong move.

"If you can speak, do so now," ordered the lunar princess in the Royal Canterlot voice. "What ever secrets you are withholding will be revealed in due time."

The presence with in the magical bubble just gave her a blank stare with it's single, odd green eye.

"Nothing? I guess we'll just have to see what you've hidden in the forest," the alicorn concluded her little interrogation disappointed.

Samus trudged between her captors, her arms folded across her chest plate, restrained by a strait jacket of dark blue energy.

"Everfree, odd name for a forest. It must be where I landed my ship. From the sound of their voices, it must be an intimidating place for them."

A short while later, the party of ponies and captured bounty hunter reached an entrance to the dreaded woodland. The ponies paused while Samus walked slowly ahead, not caring the least for the unknown dangers.

"Just look at how it walks into the Everfree forest," a high class accented voice erupted from behind, alarmed by the Hunter's simple action of walking into the darkened forest without stopping.

"That does certainly say something about it," agreed another voice the armored woman knew belonged to the purple pony. "But we should probably keep a close eye on it."

"Keep a close eye me here? Ha!---"

Samus landed on her rump with a soft thud and an "Umph!" before she could make break to her ship. Something of incredible strength tugged her backwards. She twisted her head just enough to see a beam of energy, the same color as her restraints, dragging her back towards the leader of the ponies.

"Omega Metroids. Now they have me on a leash."

"Take us to where you landed," ordered her handler, the energy and flight empowered pony. "Or I'll be forced to cast an unpleasant control spell. You don't want me in your mind do you?"

Samus returned to her feet, having caved to the threat, as she wished to keep her inner sanctum free of intrusions.

"Isn't that a little harsh Princess?"

The surprised bounty hunter turned around to see the light purple pony defending her.

"Twilight, I know that you don't like the idea," the dark blue pony said trying to sooth the underling. "But sometimes you have to use a bit of force."

"Not that much!," the smaller of the two argued back.

"As one of the rulers of Equestria, I will use any means necessary to keep the land and ponies I love safe, even if it that includes entering the mind of that creature."

The ruling pony's angry, authoritative voice silenced all rebuttal of the mind invading strategy. It also achieved in visibly disturbing the group.

"I apologize for that outburst," the leading pony said in a gentler,quiet voice. "Protecting Equestria is a stressful part of ruling. I know that's a poor excuse but it really does stress me out when events like earlier today," the dark blue pony gestured to the cyan one, "are reported and somepony is injured by an outside force."

"Don't sweat it princess," a country accented, voiced said soothingly. "We all have our moments but right now we need to focus on that critter there."

All attention re-centered on Samus, who stared back from behind her green visor.

"Will you comply with our request?," inquired her dark blue captor in a gentle voice.

Samus, left with no other options, nodded. The pony smiled, pleased that the tugging and pulling of mind control was unnecessary.

"Also do not think about running," the ruling equine warned. "Your on a leash that's as long as two of my out stretched hooves." The pony reached out with one of it's forelimbs. "Double it in your mind for a visual if you want."

"And if you do escape I'll be right here with you."

A chill traveled down the bounty hunter's spine, when she heard the other voice in her head. She stared at the owner which only gave a smug smile. Samus gave the dark colored pony an angry scowl from behind the semi-transparent glass of her visor. With out further incident, the Hunter gestured for them to follow her into the sinister, darkened woodland.

The trek through the forest wasn't long. In fact it was just over a dozen paces to the opening from which Samus had landed.

"Whoa..."

From the pony perspective they were seeing a marvel, an alien technology way beyond their own leaving them gawking in amazement. Samus used this window to bee line for the hatch, her leash and restraint dissipating due to her handler's amazement at the space craft. The bounty hunter quickly made it to the familiar spot under the ship activating the lift. With a sarcastic goodbye wave she entered the ship.

As soon as the lift got her into the cockpit Samus dashed for the controls to activate the ship. The familiar hum and beeps of Federation tech soon filed the small space and the bounty hunter collapsed into the pilot seat.

"What are you doing back here Samus?," the robotic voice of Adam asked. If it had any tones to it, the voice would probably sound angry. "You were supposed to leave this ship far behind, not return to it!"

"Change of plans," responded the Hunter. "I'm ditching this rock for a Chozo world."

"That would be impossible, the ship is nearly running on fumes," the computer informed the Chozo heir. "You wouldn't even make it out of the atmosphere."

Samus had to restrain herself from slamming her fist into the arm rest.

"Since inter-galactic travel is not possible I suggest resuming ground operations," said the computer.

"I guess I'll just remain in here then," the Hunter concluded. "I accidentally started hostilities between me and the local sentient species here. I'll just sit here till the Feds hunt me down and go out fighting."

"By local sentient species you mean the rather colorful equines that followed you here?," the computer asked.

"They're more than just small horses," Samus retorted annoyed. "Some have the capability of near super sonic flight or energy control equal to the Chozo. Some can even access and control your mind."

"If this is true, which I'm doubting, then try to make amends with the creatures," suggested Adam. "They could be a valuable allies when the Federation arrives."

Samus the Lone Wolf, took this in to consideration. Just like Adam, the computer usually had brilliant ideas and strategies. Creatures with abilities and powers like those ponies would indeed be worth while to befriend.

"I guess you do have a point there," the Champion of the Luminoth agreed. "Warm up the engines just in case I need a quick get away."

Without further ado Samus walked back to the hatch to confront her former captors.

Author's Note

If you didn't catch on in the previous chapter, I'm using colored italics to represent outside voices that talk to the current viewpoint's mind I.E. Pinkie Pie to Samus in the last chapter. Anyways they didn't have a dark blue so I used the darkest one they had.

Federation Cutscene 1

The Admiral entered the dimly lit meeting room. The long table's chairs empty and the only occupant being a mysterious man in a suit, back turned with his hands folded across, staring out of the high window. The sun was perfectly angled for an identity masking silhouette.

"So you think you're up to the challenge Admiral Hollander?," asked the man indifferently. "You should know that this is no easy task by any means. Not even the one hundred percent rated bounty hunters would accept this job."

"Yes," replied Hollander confidently. "Everyone knows how I became leader of the 52nd Fleet."

"I know of your spectacular victories in the NH-231 system campaign," commented the man. "Your ingenious strategies and superior commanding abilities led the Federation to victory against the heavy Space Pirate holdings there."

Admiral Hollander smiled as the unidentified man complimented his work. The campaign sent his ship and crew to the depths of hell and back, him keeping it in one piece. For such death defying feats, he was promoted to Admiral and given the reigns of one of the Federation's smaller fleets.

"How ever, this mission requires the utmost ruthlessness and care," the man told Hollander, his voice cool and distant. "Your foe is a one woman army, armed to the teeth with devastating weapons and abilities, not to mention training more rigorous than even our most specialized troopers."

"So?," Hollander held firm against the intimidating description. "What could she possibly do to a ship in orbit or an entire fleet?"

"You're underestimating your opponent Admiral," scolded the silhouetted man annoyed. "Aran is incredibly resourceful. Remember her report on her second Zebes mission?"

A chill ran down the military official's mind as he recalled the footage captured by the hunter's helmet, the logs and data she recorded, and ultimately how it only took her nearly 4 hours to accomplish the stupefying feat.

"Do you now understand the true danger of this mission?"

"Of course," responded Hollander. "I'll prep my fleet---"

"No," commanded the man. "Sending a fleet, even a small one, is an unnecessary drain on resources. Take only your most elite troops and your best ship. Dismissed"

"Yes sir," Hollander answered. He turned around to exit the room.

"One more thing before you go Admiral," the man had apparently decided to mention last minute. "Your secondary objective is to bring back Aran's power armor mostly intact and recover any Chozo technology on the planet she currently inhabits."

"Yes sir."

With out further interaction, Admiral Hollander walked out of the meeting room, selecting his most elite crew and ship in his mind.

Samus blasted another one of the wooden wolves away with a Super Missile. The beast's body exploded into small flying wooden splinters due to the explosive's epic punch.

"How many of these things are there?," she called out to the ponies as she fired a Super Missile once more at a new target.

"I don't know," responded a worried country accent amid the chaos of running and attacking ponies, wooden wolves, and bounty hunter. "This must be a large pack."

"Don't worry there can't be more than a few left, we've already taken out a dozen of them," the purple pony shouted through the roars, hoof steps, and explosions. "Well you've taken out a dozen."

"A few left? One of them must be an alpha male. That should be an interesting fight."

"You're enjoying this a bit too much."

Samus paused for a moment to look for the dark blue pony. One of the remaining wooden wolves used the opportunity to pin the distracted bounty hunter down. The rabid animal was heavier than she expected, her struggle for freedom futile. The beast tried to sink it's teeth into the bounty hunter's neck. Fortunately for her a destructive beam of dark blue incinerated the rabid wooden entity before it could do so.

The Hunter gave her savior a thumbs up for the assist, resulting in a confused look as a response.

"That's the last of them," reported the blonde pony. "Now let's leave before they piece themselves back together."

The rest of the group collectively agreed.

"Don't think you're out of trouble because you assisted us in combating a pack of timberwolves," the taller dark blue equine told Samus rather cordially.

"We can talk about my "punishment" later, but right now I need to take care of a couple small details," the Hunter said to the lead pony

The bounty hunter again dashed to the gravity lift of her ship, but this time, to recharge instead of trying to make an escape.

"Back again I see," the computer greeted, though if it had emotion it would most likely be somewhat angry.

"Well I do have to recharge," the armored lady replied. "You're the only recharge station on the planet."

"Don't make a habit of visiting me to recharge," the computer scolded. "You need to be as far away as possible from this ship. The Federation isn't likely to sit around and wait for you to be ready."

Samus brushed off the computer with a distracted "Okay" while she recharged her missiles and energy.

"This is serious!," it said with increased volume.

"Don't worry Adam," the bounty hunter told the computer cheerfully as she headed for the gravity lift after renewing her energy and missile reserves. "I think I've started to smooth over the rough patches with those ponies. Forced teamwork usually does that."

"So you believe this... alien ... is hiding something?," Celestia asked her sister concerned.

"Yes I do," Luna confidently replied.

"What makes you think so?"

"The fact it changed it's disposition so quickly. When it was captured, the alien was silent and rather hostile. After it disappeared into it's..." The lunar alicorn couldn't think of a suitable word for the large, metal object the creature led her and the other ponies to. "Anyways afterwards it was rather friendly and talkative. Such changes in behavior do not happen with in minutes."

"Pinkie Pie has been reported to do so," countered the elder sister.

"Pinkie Pie is Pinkie Pie, no pony is sure how she works," argued the younger sister. "Please you have to understand." Luna was now getting a little desperate. "There is something sinister about that being, I don't know what it is yet but my mind is screaming to me that something is going to happen."

"Your plea isn't falling on deaf ears," Celestia soothed. "We should investigate further about who this alien is and why it's here. Do you know where it's lodging, if at all?"

"Your student Twilight Sparkle said she would provide a room for it," Luna informed her sister nervously. "She appeared to express interest in it. More so than the rest."

Celestia put on a grave face. She didn't like the idea of her personal student housing an unknown and possibly dangerous entity.

"Don't worry Luna," the solar alicorn again tried to calm her sister. "We're going to try to unravel this mystery as soon as possible."

"Thank you," the alicorn of the moon said gratefully before trotting off to raise the moon.

Updates and Cupcakes, So Sweet and Tasty

Author's Note

So it's been a little over a year without an update. Yeah, sorry about that. I just haven't been feeling like much of a brony for a while. It was kind of on and off sort of deal. Anyways, the update is finally out, not that I decided to work on it until recently, it's been written and rewritten several times over the past year and well... This is what I got. So hopefully who ever is reading this will enjoy it.

Updates and Cupcakes, So Sweet and Tasty

"So far nothing unusual," Celestia telepathically reported from her invisible perch above the dessert table. "Though the food looks dangerously tasty."

Luna suppressed a groan. "We're not here to eat cupcakes, we're here to keep an eye on that thing."

"Well cupcakes provide the energy to sustain these stealth spells for extended amounts of time," the elder playfully argued. "Not to mention all this telepathic communication. I'm starved."

"You'll freak out any pony who sees one being eaten by nothing," the younger reprimanded. "You need to keep that sweet tooth in check and take this more seriously other wise we'll cause a huge scene and everything will go down hill from there."

"How can you be serious at a Pinkie Pie party?," the solar princess demanded to know. "Can you not feel her party magic emanating from, well, everywhere? It really removes the weight from your shoulders."

"No, I cannot, but-- WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Luna had to hold her jaws shut to keep her from screaming as she witnessed her sister swoop down and snatch a cupcake from the table.

"See? No pony noticed," the invisible snacking alicorn said happily.

"Alright, that's it, you need to either restrain yourself or leave," the Princess of the Night ordered. "I'm sorry, I know you usually aren't so... reckless... but I can't risk you giving us away."

"Oh Lulu, you really need to just relax, have a cupcake, and listen to the music," Celestia advised.

"Maybe when Equestria isn't in danger," the younger sister growled. "But right now you need to leave and let me continue observing the thing."

"Fine!," the elder pouted and silently made her exit.

"Finally," a relieved Luna muttered to herself. "Now, what are you really up to?"

The alicorn decided to do a little eavesdropping, but her target was at the other end of the hall. She needed to to be closer to hear anything but getting there would be rather difficult as the spell didn't make her intangible nor completely silent. Luna started her way towards the human, keeping to the more open spots in the crowd. The princess was nearly close enough to listen to it's conversation when she felt her consciousness brush with one that was familiar, yet still alien.

The Princess of the Night froze in place as the human also took notice of the invisible bump. It quickly looked left and right, looking for her.

"Something wrong Samus?,"Luna heard Twilight ask.

"No," Samus responded. "I'm alright."

"How could I forget one of the most basic laws of telepathy?! Once connected the two minds can feel the other. Great, now she doesn't need to see me to know I'm here. I better put some distance between us."

The hidden alicorn started a slow retreat, while the human still darted its eyes around the room, searching for the slightest detail that would expose her. She didn't take more than two steps before a loud gasp locked her in place.

"OhmygoshyoumustbenewtoPonyvillebecauseI'veneverseenyouaroundherebefore!HimynameisPinkiePieandIjustLOVEmeetingnewponies!"

Luna loosened her muscles, relieved she wasn't discovered. She glanced at the new arrival out of curiosity. The pony was a bright white unicorn mare with a grey cotton candy cloud mane, not unlike Pinkie's own magenta one. Her cutie mark was covered by a travel garment. Her eyes appeared to be purple.

"So Dusty Feathers, what brings you to town,?" the pink party hostess asked with her usual enthusiasm.

"Dusty Feathers? Why does that name ring a bell? I feel like know her, but I just can't remember how or why,"

The princess watched the unfamiliar, yet familiar mare trot towards the table stacked with all the baked goods and pick out a heavily frosted cupcake. The pony quickly took a bite of the pastry and turned her head in Luna's direction. The alicorn couldn't help but feel a little unnerved.

"Of all the places to stare at, why stare here? Isn't there anything more interesting than this spot?"

Dusty Feathers then gave the invisible princess a wink. Luna shot a glance behind her just in case there was a decent looking stallion behind her that the other pony was winking to. She discovered nothing but the wall.

"She knows I'm here?! But how..."

The pony gave the alicorn mischievous smile as she levitated another cupcake off the table. Luna's eyes pin pricked when she remembered exactly who Dusty Feathers was.

Samus knew the Princess was hiding some where. Her eyes scrutinized every detail for any sign of the dark blue equine.

"What are you looking for?"

The Hunter turned her head to find an unfamiliar pony standing next to her.

"Oh, where are my manners," chuckled the equine. "I'm Dusty Feathers, it's nice to meet you."

"Samus Aran, likewise," the bounty hunter responded. "Though you can just call me Samus."

"Samus, I'm sorry if I sound rude but, I've never seen any thing like you before," Dusty said. "My head is just buzzing with questions for you to answer."

"I'm sorry but I've had enough questions for a while," the human said to the unicorn. "But I won't let you go empty handed, well hooved in your case, I'll tell you this. It's a big place out there. You'll meet new friends, enemies, and intergalactic communities. You'll go through thick and thin with them, learning all kinds of stuff, but," Samus paused, "You'll need to also keep yourself and your community in check. Internal corruption will doom everyone."

"Wow," the pony whispered in awe, "I wonder why none of them have come to visit, well the friendly aliens at least."

"I couldn't tell ya," the bounty hunter answered.

"Oh well," Dusty sighed. "I guess I've bothered you enough for now, thanks for your time."

Samus gave the unicorn a little wave before she returned to the sea of ponies.

"I can't shake the feeling that there's something odd about that pony. She seemed so unafraid, considering all the others' reactions, and what's with the bags? Hrm... I need a cupcake to help me think."

The Hunter made her way to the table piled high with desserts. Everything looked equally delicious whether it was a slice a cake or a cup of pudding.

"If I were you I'd go with one of those."

The human turned around to find Dusty Feathers behind her. Her hoof was pointed to a group spectacular rainbow frosted cupcakes.

"Yeah, one of them right there. They're really good!," Dusty recommended enthusiastically. "Visually appealing and perfectly sweet. You couldn't ask for a better treat."

Samus picked up one and took a bite.

"Not bad."

Remembering her earlier thoughts, she decided to press a few questions on the matter.

"Hey Dusty," the Hunter casually called out.

"Yeah?," responded the unicorn.

"Sorry about being nosy but, why are you carrying those bags around? Take a load of your shoulders and rest up for a bit," The bounty hunter suggested. "It's a party after all."

"Oh, my saddlebags?" Dusty responded a little embarrassed. "I'm afraid that I might leave them somewhere around here and go on my merry way later without them."

"Seems reasonable," the human agreed. "So, where are you going?"

"Canterlot," the pony answered happily. "My sister recently gave birth to a lovely daughter. I'm just making my way there." Dusty suddenly gasped. "Oh dear, I need to find an inn for the night! I need to catch the earliest train to Canterlot!"

"Then you'll want the Jolly Donkey Inn," Pinkie Pie informed as she appeared from nowhere. "It's right across the street with a big sign of a laughing donkey. It's nicely lit up so you can't miss it."

"Thank you so much Ms. Pie," the relieved pony gratefully thanked the hostess.

"Don't mention it, your smile is all the reward I need," Ponyville's pink party thrower said with a smile of her own. "Also, tell them Pinkie Pie sent you, it'll make your already enjoyable stay even better."

"Thanks again," Dusty gratefully spoke. "I hope I'll see you two again soon!" Without further ado the unicorn quickly made her way to the door.

"Oh darn, I forgot to tell her to say to her sister I said congratulations," Pinkie pouted with disappointment. "Oh well, no point in crying over a dropped cookie."

The pink pony promptly trotted off to take part in some more party antics, leaving Samus to herself once more.

"Well, tonight has been interesting so far with all the fainting and strangeness, but most importantly I've built bridges and maybe, just maybe, increased my chances for survival. Hell, maybe if I can get things back to normal I could visit every now and then,"

Deciding to continue the positive trend, Samus finished her cupcake and made her way towards the crowd. She has a lot of ponies to meet.

Ain't No Party Like a Pinkie Pie Party

"Warning!"

Samus's eyes slowly opened as the robotic, feminine voice disrupted her from one of her rare, peaceful nights of slumber. A bright, glowing green holo-message blurred slightly by sleep greeted her. A soft rustling indicated the luminous text had slightly disturbed the pony and the baby dragon sleeping close by. The bounty hunter whispered several voice commands to change her suit's settings and open the findings of her armor

"Internal scan complete. Unknown global energy has slightly mutated your damaged DNA! No negative effects currently identified. Continued saturation of unknown radiation not recommended. Seek immediate medical attention and proper shielding!"

Any traces of sleep vanished from the Hunter's body and mind.

"Damaged?! Mutated!? This is worse than a fighting a Berserker Lord in the Power Suit. How can my DNA be damaged in the first place? I restored it to pre-vaccine status! Everything should be fine!"

Samus's mind raced to find a cause to her latest woe and greatest set back to her plans. Nothing she could not think of a logical cause.

"Great. Who knows how this will affect me? Hopefully it won't be too much of a hindrance like a Metroid's vulnerability to the cold, but wishing for nothing to happen isn't going to reduce the odds. I'm gonna have to step up my game when things get ugly."

Her frantic inner sanctum gradually slowed down, but only left the bounty hunter staring at the darkened ceiling of the tree library, unable to return to the warm folds of sleep.

"This is gonna be AWESOME!" Pinkie nearly exploded with party energy. "All of Ponyville is gonna be here for the biggest party EVER!"

"Wow," Rainbow Dash uttered astonished at the party wonderland inside Sugarcube Corner. "Where in all of Equestria did you pull all of this from?! I've been to every one of your parties and I've never seen any of these banners!" The pegasus gestured to one of the hanging tapestries marked with an unknown symbol resembling a dark blue ball with an orange colored lightning bolt going through it.

"They're new, I made them myself," the party legend said with a big smile. "I hope you like, Samus." She gave the human a mischievous wink.

"Yeah... I... I do...," the human replied nervously as it stared at the decor.

"Score one for Pinkie!"

"And all these fountains!," Rainbow continued. "I thought you only had one for chocolate!"

"I have my sources," Pinkie replied, a sly smile forming on her lips. "Now I believe it's time for this 'little' welcome to start. You ready Samus?"

"Yeah," the human answered nervously again. "It sounds like a party of this scale isn't common. Why are you making such a big fuss over me?"

"Because silly," the eccentric earth pony said with chuckle, "We have to make sure yesterday is completely erased from everypony's mind. There's few greater amnesia tools than grand parties like this and second, you're the first human EVER to enjoy one of my trademark Pinkie Pie parties. Prepare yourself! I hear ponies!

"I heard this is the biggest party she's ever thrown!," Lyra gossiped at an unnecessary volume as she and her two companions trotted to the festivities. "Sugarcube Corner won't even be recognizable!"

"Calm down Lyra," Bon Bon chuckled. "You're getting way too ever excited for a 'Welcome to Ponyville' party."

"This is more than some party," Colgate piped up from Lyra's left. "The guest of honor is supposed to be some one from far away, like REALLY far away!"

Bon Bon said rolled her eyes at the two excited unicorns chatting loudly beside her. Soon Sugarcube Corner was visible, glowing with warm light.

"See?," the treat making earth pony pointed to the unchanged party house with a triumphant hoof. "Nothing special. That gossip you two have been hearing was a complete lie."

"So?" retorted Lyra. "We still haven't seen the inside."

"It's probably the inside everyone's been talking about," the dentist backed up her lyre playing friend. "I'm sure Pinkie Pie wouldn't change the way Sugarcube Corner looks."

"Well in five seconds you're going to push open that door be disappointed," Bon Bon responded annoyed.

The trio of friends walked up to the saloon style doors, pushing them open nonchalantly.

"Wow," they uttered in the same fashion as Rainbow Dash before them.

The massive hall used for huge parties appeared to be a circus of decorations, treats, and other miscellaneous festive items. Fountains of every kind unleashing an endless flow of edible liquids, streamers enchanted to slowly change between the colors of Rainbow Dash's mane, treats fit for all the princesses to delicately snack on rested at the far end of the massive room and much, much more for the eyes to gaze upon.

"Is some kind of royalty moving to town?," Lyra asked her friends, looking at one of the banners and it's strange symbol.

"Nope," answered Pinkie Pie rising from nowhere. "It's just a little somethin'-somethin' I put together for Ponyville's newest resident."

"Where are they?," Colgate asked confused. She only saw familiar faces among the ponies.

"She's mingling over there," their hostess pointed to a rather large crowd of Ponyville residents. "Why don't you go say 'Hi'? I'm sure she would love to meet you guys."

"Tha--"

The three ponies were interrupted by an explosion of magical, sparkling confetti erupting from the eccentric party thrower, teleporting her elsewhere.

"That's definitely new," a startled Bon Bon said.

"I think she got my eyebrows," Lyra laughed.

"I don't know about you two, but I'm gonna meet this big shot new pony," their flustered light blue friend informed them, the tip of her mane slightly singed..

"Oh come on!," the lyre player cried out slightly agitated. "You didn't find that funny at all?"

Her dentist friend trotted towards the newcomer's location, ignoring what she said.

"Hey wait up!," called the light green unicorn, going after Colgate, with Bon Bon close behind.

The trio trotted towards the larger crowd.

"This new pony must be as popular as..."

Lyra paused mid-sentence, her mouth oddly agape and eyes wide as dinner plates. Colgate and Bon Bon gave their friend annoyed looks.

"Stop gawking like that," the light blue unicorn commanded the light green one.

The lyre player dropped to the ground.

"Lyra!," her companions cried out in alarm.

A large crowd had formed around the three.

"C'mon Lyra get up," Bon Bon whispered to her downed friend, worried.

"Pinch me," the fainted unicorn whispered back.

The earth pony pulled her head back slightly, bewildered.

"Pinch me!," Lyra uttered again, her voice a little louder.

The candy making earth pony's concern was replaced with annoyance at her friend's uncouth behavior.

"Get up you're making a scene!," Bon Bon hissed.

"Don't worry, I got this," came an unfamiliar voice. "What did she say?"

The earth pony turned her head to find the owner of the voice. She completely understood the reason for Lyra's sudden drop to the floor.

"This can't get any worse can it? Seriously! I didn't do anything! Well I didn't do anything last time either but I'm at a brightly colored party this time! How does that cause them to faint?!"

"A pinch you say?," asked Samus in a tone completely opposite of her frantic mind. "If that's what she wants."

The earth pony nodded and the bounty hunter pinched the foreleg of the fainted unicorn. Immediately afterwards, the equine was back on it's hooves, jumping for joy.

"I knew it! I knew it! I knew it!," it shouted triumphantly. "I knew humans were real and you all called me crazy!"

"What?! How could it know about humans if I'm the first and only one ever to have been on this planet?"

Samus felt a squeezing sensation on the lower region of her abdomen. The pony was in an awkward embrace with her for a couple seconds and then it let go.

"Ihavesomuchtoaskyou!Wheredidyoucomefrom?Howdidyougethere?Whatareyouwearing?Aretheremorelikeyou?Howmanyhumansarethere?CanIaska..."

"I'll be MotherBrain's mother if this didn't bolster my chances of acceptance here"

Author's Note

Thank you CDR for that wonderful, idea filled comment. It got me rolling again. Also thank you every one who's posted one of those lovely constructive and telling-me-you-are-enjoying-this comments.