The Misadventures of Storm Gate and Shadow Blade

by Fallen_Valkyrie

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash, Original Character, Comedy, Pinkie Pie
Length: 4633

Two pegasus brothers move to Ponyville, and continuosly try to find they;re place

Storm Gate and Shadow Blade are new to Ponyville, after a warm and unusual welcome they are treated to the normal Ponyville experience, well as normal as can be. The brothers continually try -and occasionally fail- to meet new friends and explore Ponyville as they strive to establish their place in society and learn to adjust to their new home. A continuing series (hopefully)

Published 2012-12-12 05:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-18 05:53:21 UTC

New Beginnings

One day, after hours of apple bucking, a tired but satisfied Applejack began walking her way across the fields of Sweet Apple Acres. Quietly and happily she congratulated herself on her work "I told Big Mac I could finish bucking the southwest fields before day's end." she took a moment to look at her surroundings, the equestrian autumn had just started and the leaves were just beginning to turn, the annual Running of the Leaves would happen any day now. Applejack was too tired to concern herself over such things; she tipped her hat and moved to a shady tree, she had earned herself a rest.

After a few moments there was a rustling in the tree. Applejack looked up drowsily just in time to see a small rainbow tail poke out from one of the branches above her.

"Rainbow, What have I told ya about sleeping in the apple trees?"

"Oh sorry AJ, I just finished practicing my amazing new stunt. It seriously has got to be my best one ever, anyway this tree was really comfortable and I just fell asleep."

"Well try not ta', it's harvest time and the apples er sensitive to disturbances"

At that her rainbow friend playfully stuck her tongue out at her knowing full well that she would continue to sleep in the trees, albeit more secretly.

Almost magically, with a speed that defied space-time, Pinkie Pie was bouncing in front of her two friends. She was full of excitement and it was near uncontainable.
"Hey guys, what are you doing? Are you busy? I just found out some great news and I just had to tell you," at this she began bouncing even more excitedly.

"Well howdy Pinkie Pie, what's got you so dern excited?" She had been waiting for the question and the answer exploded out of her. "There are two new ponies in town! So you know what that means!"

A.J. and Dash looked at each other and then back at their pink friend, with mutual excitement and a bit of hesitation they replied "A party!?"

Outside of Sugar cube Corner two Pegasus brothers were walking through Ponyville, having just moved from Las Pegasus they were taking in their new surroundings. They were both fairly tall for pegasi, yet still smaller than other stallions. The younger brother was a grey pony with a simple black mane and a tail to match. The older Pegasus was black, his mane and tail were both black with a single red stripe running through them, and the tips of his feathers were also colored the same red. He wore goggles on his head, being a race pony it was a common habit of his, and he walked ahead of his brother making small talk with the ponies around him.

"What do you think of the new town Shadow Blade?"

"I don't know Storm Gate; I was happy where we were. Why did we move again?"

At this the black pony turned to face his brother, sighing he stopped to explain the situation again.

"Well first of all, the race circuit in Las Pegasus has been overrun with scandals and I don't want to be an affiliated with any of that. Secondly, it’s the only place that we could find any work to support ourselves, plus I heard there's somepony here that could help me find a new performing or race group."

They both continued walking until a group of ponies trotted up to them, it was Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. Rainbow was the first to speak; she was looking over the two pegasi and recognized a familiar symbol on the elder pony's goggles.

"Wow are those the official Wonderbolts goggles? They only made like 25 of those, that is so awesome, where did you get them?"

He smiled, noticing she was very cute when she was excited "I'm gonna guess that you're Rainbow Dash, right?"

"Nah! Really? She’s obviously the only rainbow colored pony in town." Shadow Blade said sarcastically.

She laughed at the comment and smirked, her proud attitude replacing her fan girl outburst; she zoomed into the air with a quick flip and struck a pose "The one and only, the best and fastest Pegasus in all Equestria, how'd you know?"

"Yet, she's still not in the Wonderbolts." Shadow Blade mumbled smugly, his brother chuckling softly.

Before she knew it the black pegasus had flown up behind her, surprising her when he spoke.
"Every Pegasus knows about you Rainbow Dash, so far you're the only one able to perform the Sonic Rainboom, which is really impressive." he smiled, knowing he was feeding her ego with the compliment, but cockily added "As for the best and fastest, well that has yet to be seen."

She looked at him fiercely and with determination in her eyes, but her concentration was broken by her friend.

"Will y'all two lovebirds get down here; we're busier than a bee in a flower shop right now."

"Yeah Storm Gate, we still have a lot to do today" Shadow Blade added. Storm Gate quickly returned back to his brother's side, Rainbow remained in the sky, perched on a cloud watching them both.

"Well howdy, I'm Applejack, it's a pleasure ta meet ya, If ya ever need anything just come ta Sweet Apple Acres, we're always happy ta help the new pony folk in town."

They both smiled and nodded at her, and the purple unicorn standing in front of them walked closer. She spoke with practiced precision and a hint of authority "Hello, my name is Twilight Sparkle. We heard you two had just arrived and we wanted to be the first to invite you to Ponyville. As Princess Celestia's star pupil I thought I was more than qualified-"

As she was talking she was cut off by a flash of pink, a gust of wind following it as it arrived in front of the two pegasi. A very happy pony stood in front of them, smiling the biggest and sincerest smile anypony could ever imagine. She took in one gasping breath and began to speak quickly.

"Hi there I'm Pinkie Pie, I saw you two fly into town and I just knew you'd be lonely because you didn't know anypony, so I thought to myself, Pinkie it is your responsibility to make sure these ponies have a great first time in Ponyville, so I started cooking and planning, because I work at the Cake's shop and..."

As she continued to talk about her plan and the many different ways to frost a cupcake the pegasi shot a curious look at the purple pony smiling behind her pink friend. She nodded and looked back at them "Just go with it" her face seemed to say.
With that they looked back at Pinkie Pie, who was just wrapping up her story.

".... I think the blue frosting went best with the purple cupcakes, oh but anyways you two are new in town and the best way to meet everypony is with a party!"

As soon as the words were spoken she raised her hooves into the air and balloons fell down from who knows where, streamers and confetti erupted from prepositioned locations and everypony in town gathered to the square for another great Pinkie Pie party.

"Well there goes our afternoon huh Shadow Blade?" Storm Gate whispered before they were both led into Sugarcube Corner.

Sugarcube Corner, 10:00 P.M.

After much partying, the last of the ponies had left and the two pegasi were both very tired, their bellies stuffed with cake and their legs sore from dancing. Although Shadow Blade, not completely content with the party, wished it had lasted a little longer, but his brother said it was time to go. They looked at each other, knowing they had to find a cloud to sleep on for the night, expanding their wings, ready to fly, but just before takeoff, Pinkie Pie stopped them with a question.

“Hey! Do you guys have a place to stay tonight?” said Pinkie Pie.

Shadow Blade then replied “Well, since we’re pegasi, we can pretty much st…OWW!”
Shadow Blade was interrupted by his brother punching him on the wing.
“No, we don't,” Storm Gate quickly replied.
“Oh! You can stay with me!” Pinkie Pie said kindly.
“Thanks Pinkie, we really appreciate it. We promise not to bother you much” His brother looked at him strangely when he said that.

As they were trotting back inside of Sugarcube Corner, Shadow Blade leaned towards his brother and asked “Why exactly are we staying here, with her?”

“Because, today had the clearest skies I’ve ever seen. I don’t want to be flying around in the dark all night looking for some clouds to sleep on, plus she seems harmless enough. What’s the problem?”

“I don’t know, I mean it’s okay to hang out with a complete stranger at a party, but staying in their house, all night, that’s just weird.”

Pinkie stopped herself in front of them and opened a door; the brothers hadn’t noticed that they had already made it upstairs; the pink pony was humming as she led them into a room.

“I don’t necessarily have a guest room but, you guys can sleep on the couch in my room,” Pinkie said in a very happy tone.

"I call dibs on the couch," Storm Gate said quickly, "looks like you're sleeping on the floor."

Shadow Blade sighed, "Fine."

"Well thank you again Pinkie, we really appreciate it.”

Storm Gate settled himself on to the couch, it wasn't as comfortable and soft as a cloud but it would do for one night. Plus he was satisfied with that fact that he was better off than his brother, who was at the moment trying to find a comfortable spot on the hard wooden floor, the pink pony watching him settle down and giggling.

"Do you want a pillow you silly pony? No need to sleep on the bare floor Shadow Blade." she smiled and threw a pillow towards him, the tired grey pony turning just in time for it to hit him in the face. He looked up a bit irritated, his brother laughing softly, and the pink pony smiling down innocently "Oopsie, sorry about that. Sleep tight you two."

"Thanks," grumbled Shadow Blade as he curled up on top of the pillow.

The next day, the two pegasi were up early and beginning to leave, their pink host still snoring softly in her bed, tired from her amazing party the night before.

"Come on Shadow Blade, we should go before she wakes up, leave a thank you note or something though." Storm Gate quickly straightened up the couch and grabbed his goggles from the table, struggling to carefully put them on with his hooves

"Unicorns have it easy with their fancy magic," he grumbled.

Shadow Blade then proceeded to make a note for the pink pony.

"Dear umm... Well it's some sort of food /color combination isn't it? Um Pinkie Pastry? Yeah, something like that. Anyway, thanks for your hospitality last night, me and Storm Gate appreciate it and if you see me again, remind me that I owe you one. Sincerely,
Shadow Blade"

The pegasi soon left Sugarcube Corner, content with their welcome the day before. Storm Gate thought it would be best to finish what they started yesterday and build their new home in Ponyville.

"Shadow, I'm going to go talk to the mayor and the head of the weather division in order to get the building permits for our new house. You go find a good spot to build it, I'll meet you back here in an hour or so." the black pony then proceeded to walk outside and spread his wings, the thermals quickly running through his feathers and aiding in his swift takeoff. "I love being a pegasus," he thought as he zoomed toward town hall.

Shadow Blade was not a very responsible pony; whether this was due to laziness or just the fact that nopony really asked him to handle assignments by himself. He was with his big brother most of the time and as such was not very independent. That being said, his plan B was to blow off the entire assignment and the responsibility in general, and get something to eat. By that time Pinkie Pie was barely waking up from last night, rubbing her eyes with her hooves and letting out a small yawn. As she slowly opened her eyes, she was surprised to see Shadow Blade still in her bedroom.

"Shadow Blade? You're still here?" Pinkie Pie yawned

Shadow Blade got startled by the sleepy voice behind him and responded quickly

"Oh! Hey, umm... Pinkie Parlor, right?"

"Actually, it's Pinkie Pie."

"Right, Pinkie Pastry. Anyway, do you know where I can get some food around here?" Shadow Blade questioned.

Pinkie proceeded to giggle out loud, although he wasn’t quite sure why.

"What's so funny?" Shadow Blade questioned.

Pinkie stopped and smiled at the confused Pegasus
" Silly Shadow. You know for a blade, you're not very sharp."

"Why's that?" the still confused pony asked.

"Because, you were sleeping in one the entire time!" giggled Pinkie Pie who had already thought of a fun day ahead of her if one or both of the pegasi stayed over.

"We can have cupcakes and, muffins and, ooh! Cookies and..."
Pinkie Pie continued on as she dragged Shadow Blade into the kitchen. Shadow Blade was barely listening to Pinkie Pie because he was thinking about the fact that he was going to have sweets for breakfast. His brother wouldn't normally allow him to do that, so he knew that a day with Pinkie would be a bit different than usual.

By that time, Storm Gate had already made it to the town hall, landing softly right outside the door; he pushed his goggles down around his neck and walked in. He was immediately greeted by the ponies inside and stood looking up at the large open building before him. It was much bigger than it looked on the outside and there were ponies everywhere, they all looked rather busy but he supposed they were there for similar reasons to his. With that thought in his head he went about his business.

The meeting with the mayor was uneventful, boring really. He really hated business and formal meetings but he knew it was necessary and that he couldn't trust his brother to get it done. He waited in line for what seemed like hours and spent the time making stories in his head. The Ponyville building code, while extensive, was quite lenient and he was approved by the mayor quickly. With his papers in hoof he just had to get the building site approved by the leader of the local weather division. If he could find her.

Rainbow Dash spread her wings, the warm air quickly became trapped under them, she closed her eyes and let the air carry her quickly up into the sky. When she opened her eyes she was high above Ponyville, Canterlot was clearly visible in the distance but she had no business there today, or anywhere really, she was free to do as she pleased.

She landed on a cloud, sitting down and looking at the clear skies in front of her. She was planning, visualizing each of her stunts, performing each one in her head before making them reality. She crouched down her flank held high as she prepared to fly. "And now introducing the newest member of the Wonderbolts, Rainbow Dash!" the announcement was made in her mind and she flipped off her cloud, zooming into a backwards loop before pulling her wings in tight against her body. She fell, and continued to fall and smiled. She counted the seconds in her head and flared her wings open at the last moment. Mere inches from the ground she pulled into her super speed strut, weaving through the scattered trees in front of her. She rolled to one side in order to dodge the low hanging branch and then zoomed back straight into the sky the rainbow trail still slowly dissipated from the trees behind her. The cyan pony quickly back flipped back on to the cloud she started on, feeling happy with her performance.

Her ears flicked back, she heard something, just a faint sound but it was there. Her ears moved to locate the sound and her eyes followed suit. Was that... Clapping?

The black pony stared up her; he was clapping and smiling up at her. "I know I'm not a Wonderbolt, so my opinion isn't important, but I have to say that your performance sure was impressive," he shouted.

"Oh, well thanks. I didn't think anypony was out her, it's usually where I'm come to practice." Rainbow slowly glided down to him, she was not quite smiling but was obviously content with herself.
"What brings you out here...?”
"Storm Gate," he interrupted, "we didn't really have much time to talk before."
"Yeah yeah, I remember, you're the new pegasus in town. Anyway, as I was saying what brings you out here?"

"Well, actually, you do Rainbow Dash." He smiled at her and sat down, pushing his goggles back up to the top of his head, it was a nervous habit of his. “You’re head of the weather team right?"

"Yeah so?" she seemed to yawn out, her wings twitching with unused energy.

"I just need you to approve some paperwork so my brother and I can get our house built."

"Paperwork? Nopony gets me to do paperwork," she replied, already bored with the idea. "Unless," an idea quickly came to her mind "you race me."

Storm Gate smiled, he was never one to shy away from a challenge. He reached up ad lowered his goggles down over his eyes. “Alright Rainbow, You’re on.”

Author's Note

Thanks to the one or two - or none as it will probably be- who actually read all my dribble. I'm just looking for feedback, both negative and positive. It's my first story and i know it's not super interesting but i do have plans that I hope to follow through with if atleast one person likes this and wishes me to do so
If you read this or even take a glance at it please leave a comment as to why you did or didn't read it. Thank you kindly

Finding Home

The sky was clear in front of them, the two ponies both tense with anticipation. Their wings twitched, their muscles strained, their vision focused ahead of them.

"Where to Rainbow?" the black pony asked impatiently.
"We'll end at Sugarcube Corner; I'll see you there in what? An hour?" she smiled cockily "this pony has no idea what his gotten into," she thought.
"Don't be so cocky; don't you know that Rainbows always come after the Storm?"
"Yeah yeah, quit your talking, we go on 3." she was getting irritated, but she wasn't worried, she wouldn't lose. She never did.

"1..." Their wings spread open, the wind blowing through them.
"2..." Their legs dug into the ground, ready to propel them at any moment, Rainbow looked over to her opponent, he was tensed, focused, she smiled "This will be easy."
"3..."
Both ponies burst from the ground and flew straight towards their goal. Rainbow had the early advantage; she had remained close to the ground, barely gaining any altitude at all. She had chosen speed and distance over any real strategy. Normally a race pony would have a more formulated plan, but Rainbow was easily fast enough for her devil may care tactics to work in her favor.

Storm Gate had taken a different approach; experience had told him exactly what the blue Pegasus was planning. If what he had heard about her was true, he was clearly at a speed disadvantage. He shot off at an angle, gaining altitude and ending up high above Rainbow Dash, it had cost him some distance but if he remembered the land the way he thought he did it would pay off in the long run.

Rainbow's wings pounded the air; forcibly pushing it behind her and propelling herself further and faster with each beat. She glanced behind her "Ha, no sign of Storm fake anywhere and he said he was a racer." She smiled, but was in a way disappointed. She sighed "I was hoping for a bit more challenge."
Then she saw the shadow.

High above her Storm Gate had begun to make his move. His shadow spread over the rainbow Pegasus who was still flying low among the trees. They were approaching the outskirts of the forest, Ponyville was coming up in front of them, the trees were getting thicker, and the drop was coming. The black Pegasus had recalled that the edge of the forest they were in led into a deep valley and was a straight shot into Ponyville. He smiled, he only had one shot to dive his way in front of Rainbow and reach the finish before her.

The blue Pegasus had begun to gain altitude, avoiding the trees and low hanging branches that were sure to slow her down. She flew faster; Sugarcube Corner was within her sight.

Storm Gate folded in his wings, he streamlined his body for maximum efficiency, and he dove. He accelerated quickly, gaining on his rainbow opponent in no time at all, he laughed. There was no way he could lose this race, she was at most 300ft in front of him and the finish was a mere 400ft beyond that. Rainbow glanced over her shoulder; she was surprised to see her opponent so close to her. She quickly looked around her, accelerating as much as she could. She eyed a nearby cloud and smiled deviously, she banked ever so slightly and took one last look at her opponent, she raised a hoof in his direction and saluted him. Then she kicked the cloud.

Storm Gate barely had time to register his opponent’s gesture and raise an eyebrow before the cloud hit him. He was immediately slowed down; he had been flipped upside down and was now falling flank first into the ground. Rainbow made her landing in front of Sugarcube Corner; she turned to face the sky just in time to see the results of her little scheme. The black Pegasus had managed to flip himself back around, he was getting close to the ground. He flared his wings but the quick decrease in speed only spun him out. He fell quickly and hit the ground. He rolled past a laughing Rainbow Dash and right through the doors of Sugarcube Corner.

He crashed into the walls of the small room, his body laid out against the wall, his back legs up against the wall and his head on the floor. He was clearly disoriented. He glanced upwards the rainbow pony staring down at him. He sighed "That was a dirty trick, but I guess there were no rules huh?"

"Well, technically not." She smiled, looking down at her defeated opponent. "Are you alright?"
"Yeah, ugh..." he struggled back up to his feet; he fell back over clumsily, his knees shaking from the impact.”I'm pretty resilient. Since you won I guess you deserve some recognition, even if you did cheat." she looked at him with confusion, unsure as to what he was thinking. If he tried anything...

Storm Gate smiled at the confused mare before him, he sat down and reached up for his goggles. He pushed them back up over his head and took them off, he then motioned for her to come near. Reaching above Dash's head he smiled and lowered the goggles down over her, letting them rest just above her eyes. He smiled and spoke quite dramatically.
"You have won my respect Ms. Rainbow Dash, and with that I give you my official Wonderbolts goggles, they are yours until the day I win them back." He smiled at her and laughed. "Trust me I will win them back."

"Yeah well good luck with that, but thanks."

Suddenly there was a noise from the kitchen, and quickly ran out two ponies. Crumbs from various sweets stuck to the chocolate and frosting on their fur. Storm Gate sat back, put his hoof to his face, and sighed. "This won't be good," he thought.

"Hey Storm Gate, Hey Storm Gate, Storm Gate hey. Pinkie and I have been eating cupcakes." the grey pony was jittering violently.
"Shadow you know you aren't supposed to eat sweets. Did you even find a spot for our house?"
"Well no, we've been eating cookies and cupcakes and pastries and Pinkie was telling me all about her parties."
Storm Gate sighed, "Honestly, you had one job. You couldn't even do that for me. "
Pinkie Pie finished eating her cupcake and bounced over to her unexpected guests. "Oh hi Dashie, Storm Gate, what brings you here?"
"Hey Pinkie Pie," the blue pony responded, "He had a bit of an accident on the flight over here."
"An accident is a bit of an understatement don't you think?" the black pony glanced over to his brother who was bouncing uncontrollably behind the counter, humming to himself. "Pinkie, how much did you let him eat?"
"Oh, I don't know Stormy, two maybe three dozen cupcakes, I usually start my day with at least twice that many."
"Pinkie, I'm not going to pretend that I understand how your digestive system works, but I need to get him home. Oh wait I can't," he snapped and turned to his brother, "because somepony didn't do their job."
"Chill out, Storm Cloud we can get that house built in no time at all." Rainbow smiled, pushing down her new goggles. "There's a clearing not too far from my house, you can build there. It's already been pre-approved for construction by the weather team."

"Alright, fine let's get going." Storm Gate grabbed his brother by the wing and dragged him along behind them, Pinkie bouncing up by their side.

"Hey Dash, do you want to do something fun later?"

"Maybe Pinkie, we're a bit busy right now though."

"Oh okay, how about you Storm Gate?"

"Pinkie the only thing I want to do right now is lay down and sleep."

The black pony realized he was no longer dragging his brother and turned to find him talking to the Pinkie.
"We could go and pull pranks and you show me more places to eat around here. That sounds like fun." Storm Gate turned away, he had given up at that point.

"Where is this place Rainbow?"
"It’s right over this hill. My house is right there."
She pointed her hoof in the direction of a large cloud structure; it was clearly visible to them. Its rainbow fountains and columns stood out against the clear sky.

As they approached a team of pegasi had already gathered in the clearing, they each had a cache of clouds, ready to begin the basic construction. Each Pegasus grabbed a cloud and flew it to the building site; they quickly had formed a foundation. They sculpted each piece separately and attached the prefabricated pieces to the ever growing structure. Within a few hours the house was built, it wasn't much to look at but the finer aesthetic details would come later. For the moment, at least they had a home.

Author's Note

Part 2 of my "Series" I don't know whether this is keeping anyone's attention but I'll probably continue you on. I have another story out that people are seeming to favor, and yet another in the works anyway thanks for reading