Erebus: Episode 1: Surprise! Surprise! Surprise!
(9/10 Equestrian Critics Society)
Erebus:
The Sun and Moon no longer shine over the alabaster walls of Canterlot. A darkness long forgotten has begun to seep through the cracks and erode the morality of those it touches. But at the edge of the light there is shadow, holding back the darkness
Episode 1: Surprise! Surprise! Surprise!
The Royal Sister Music Hall is reopening after being closed for renovations for almost two years. Everypony whose anypony will be there, including two ponies who haven't shown their faces in Canterlot for nearly a decade. Some scars can be painful no matter how old... others can be down right deadly.
Many thanks to those who helped:
Ponky for helping with the characters, inspiration, and editing.
Steel Wing for editing my mess of words.
Saddlesoapopera for more help with characters
Doomande For constantly putting up with me.
Eventorizon For more help Pre-reading
Awesome art by: Rattlesire
16 Chapters:
- Scene 1 2013-02-02 19:39:56 UTC2039
- Scene 2 2013-02-02 19:40:06 UTC568
- Scene 3 2013-02-10 00:11:45 UTC824
- Scene 4 2013-02-12 18:22:14 UTC777
- Scene 5 2013-02-12 22:09:24 UTC1278
- Scene 6 2013-02-13 09:05:49 UTC1582
- Scene 7 2013-02-15 12:49:58 UTC1065
- Scene 8 2013-02-15 16:05:12 UTC700
- Scene 9 2013-02-15 22:45:27 UTC880
- Scene 10 2013-02-15 22:53:11 UTC1066
- Scene 11 2013-02-18 11:52:43 UTC1003
- Scene 12 2013-02-19 17:16:04 UTC932
- Scene 13 2013-02-20 23:22:44 UTC1209
- Scene 14 2013-02-22 11:29:07 UTC631
- Scene 15 2013-02-22 20:58:59 UTC405
- Epilogue 2013-02-23 22:31:32 UTC752