The Love of a Symphony

You don't want to read this, but I need you to. The version of Octavia I will present is more modern then what most authors show her as. I wanted to make her unique and fresh, originality counts. Alongside that, my editor said a few bits of it were confusing, and it's really hard to edit a lot of what she pointed out. But, that doesn't mean I edited a few things myself to add more purpose. She's a nitpicky editor, so, what she showed me was for the next fic.

Speaking of my next fic, it will not contain clop. I want to write an 'everyone' fic for those who don't enjoy the sex portion of my fictions. Besides, I want to work on not using swears and junk. I know most of you guys probably aren't sailors.

Anyways, I'm sure there's a few things I'm missing that she mentioned... Oh, yes, the orchestra piece. I'm not very intelligent on that portion, and most of it I just wiki'd on what instruments are within an Orchestra. If my descriptions of it are bland to those who are professional players, I'm very sorry. I wanted to try something new, and I hope it doesn't offend you. Sorry if it does. :c

Also, I'm going to continue practicing 2nd person. Hopefully, next time, it is a lot more appropriate and legible (believable too) for you guys to feel more immersed.

So, enjoy the fic. I'll point out anything else in the Author's Notes.

Also, here's a picture from Regidar:
If you can't see it, here ya go.