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Storms on the Horizon [Rewrite]

by Windflight
Rumble doesn’t have friends, and with the prospect of a new school on the horizon, he tries to accept that he’ll never befriend any Ponyville foal. But not all ponies are truly as they seem, and Rumble must find out what he really wants i

Rumble is twelve. For almost five years he has lived in Ponyville with his brother Thunderlane. They have a new life with new ponies, a new family, far from their first home – but Rumble has never seemed to fit in amongst his peers in Ponyville or Cloudsdale. The end of his last year at the Ponyville Primary School is approaching, and with it what Rumble hopes will be a new lease on life: a distant secondary school where he might start afresh and finally find his place.

But life isn’t as simple as that, and Rumble knows it. As Rumble approaches his goal, storm clouds gather and the path he has chosen for himself seems unclear. Foals he hardly knows begin to finally reveal their true colours, and Rumble must decide what he really values in life, and whether he can put his trust in the ponies that once left him in the dust.

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
ORFTF

4958 words: Estimated 25 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Chapter One 2013-09-05 13:49:36 UTC
    1785
  2. Chapter Two 2013-09-30 09:10:34 UTC
    1398
  3. Chapter Three 2013-10-30 11:33:22 UTC
    1775