Chrysalis' return

by Lutair

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Tragedy
Length: 747

A new colt comes to Pony vile to train under Twilight sparkle and ends up dying in the fight with Chrysalis.

A story of someone who dies dfending Equestria for the fate of all colts and mares someone who defeats Chrysalis once and for all

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-12-19 03:52:10 UTC

The beginning

Luitar Shendart was a young colt unicorn his magic skills were poor and weak and he studied all day never made any friends and all ways stayed in the library. One day Luitar was given a message to head to Pony Ville to be taught magic by Twilight Sparkle the unicorn who possessed the Sixth element of harmony: Magic.

As soon as Luitar got the letter he instantly started packing his belonging and the books he would want to show twilight (even though she probably knew them) Luitar decided to bring his amulet along that he would travel everywhere with the amulet was a white gem attached to a metal white chain. After he was done, he said good-bye to his mother and father and walked to Pony vile alone he preferred that anyway on his way many strange things were happening I would not go into detail because it would take up five pages of papyrus material. Once Luitar arrived at Pony vile Pinkie Pie was standing there at the gate once she saw him she instantly gasped and ran to get her welcoming stuff, Luitar was afraid and ran to the nearest bush and jumped in. once he knew the coast was clear he headed to the library knowing twilight was there. Once there twilight was glad to see him as if she had known him her entire life. Spike was there as always he was Twilights assistant. “It’s nice to see you Luitar we can start your teaching right away if you’d like.” Twilight said Luitar responded with delight “Really? Let’s begin.” They had studied all night and day learning new spells together even Luitar was surprised twilight was learning a few things herself. When the week ended, Luitar had gotten used to being outside and talking to people he made some friends and was the happiest colt in town. Pinkie pie was still preparing the welcoming party since she did not get to do it when he first entered Pony vile. Luitar was happy when the party was thrown because he knew he had friends and he felt at home there, although he felt homesick after the tenth day there. He was surprised when he parents came to pony vile with packages and a moving carriage they had decided it was time to move from cantor lot to Pony vile. When his studies with twilight were finished she said “I had a great time with you Luitar and I hope you continue your studies so you’re a lot more prepared for what would happen”. Luitar nodded and responded with a calm tone “you are the kindest mare in Equestria.”. She responded to this “Not a chance princess Celestia is a lot more kind than I am. Although I am very kind” She smile and laughed and then after a while stopped and said goodbye as Luitar left. For some reason when Luitar left he decided to go to the everfree forest the darkest woods in Pony Vile and the most evil place he knew. Once he walked in, he felt better about his fears and started to laugh at the scariness as Pinkie pie told him too “Giggle at the ghosties”  and he felt a lot better when he found a nice place to rest as he had been walking for hours, when he sat down he was struck by lightning. Instantly the poor colt fell unconscious. A mare came by and picked Luitar up and took him out of the forest and as she did it bright yellow feathers fell, When Luitar woke he saw himself in the hospital Rainbow Dash and Applejack where standing at his bedside scared. Luitar said with a low voice “what happened?” Rainbow responded, “Someone took a cloud and struck you with lightning.” “Only a Pegasus can so we need to find out which Pegasus did it” added applejack with a small grin. Luitar instantly sat up and got out of the hospital bed. “I need to find out who and why.”

Applejack shook her head and responded, “You shouldn’t rush yourself being struck by lightning isn’t as cool as they say”.  To this Luitar responded, “I know that! Just help me get to twilight.” To this the mares helped him to the library and twilight as happy to see me but was also frightened to see his singed back. “What happened Luitar?” she asked “I was struck by lightning” he responded. Meanwhile back at the