The Adventures of Louisiana

by AdventurePony

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Comedy, Adventure, Discord, Princess Celestia
Length: 1291

A new pony is in Ponyville, but it's strange to him, can he get used to it? Maybe, but he soon finds that Ponyville is more then meets the eye.

There is a new pony in Ponyville, but he isn't sure he likes it there. Little does he know that his friends and family will need to work together to save all of Equestria. But in the meantime he needs to just bring himself around to be himself in Ponyville. Will he be able to live in a place with plenty of ponies or will he lose his patience and move back to the Ever Free Forest.

Note: This is my first fan fiction, it will get better as it goes, so give me a chance

Published 2013-01-26 01:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-26 01:00:01 UTC

Ponyville

NOTE: This story is now cancelled. I wrote this a long time ago, so if you want to read this piece of crap go ahead, but don't expect me to continue it.

It was the end of a hard days work and everypony was tired, there where three ponies out working outside, there was a stallion that has a mint green body and a brown short mane and tail, the other is a mare that has a yellow body and a blue regular length mane and tail, both where unicorns and they were brother and sister. The stallions names is Louisiana and the mare is named Surran and the Pegasus's name was Anniefly, Anniefly was a tan colored pony with a lighter tan color for her mane and tail.

Today was a thinking day for Louisiana, he was thinking about this and that. He was thinking about how the children and he made little lookout forts in the Everfree Forest. He was thinking about the Manticore that lived near he seemed a lot nicer than others.

"I wonder how the children are doing." he asked." We haven't seen them all day. Where do you think they could of gone?"

" We're right here." The smaller voice called out. And two children rushed out, neither of them had there cutie mark.

" Did you have fun today?" asked Sarran.

" You bet!" said a young colt named Darus. Darus has a dark blue body and a short mane and tail that was a dark and lighter shade of blue.

" What did you do." He asked

" We went into the Everfree Forest and went adventuring."

"You did? Did you see any animals?"

“Birds, squirrels, bunnies and one Manticore.”

He went into the kitchen and opened the medicine cabinet and the food cabinet to see if they needed to go and get supplies. “We have plenty of food, but we could go and get a little more herbs and medicine.” He said.

" Sorry, but it's your turn to go to town.” Surran said

"Fine.” he said “I will go first thing in the morning, that way I have plenty of daylight"

The next day after breakfast, Louisianan got ready to go to town for some supplies.

"Oh, I forgot to tell you you'll need to go to Ponyville." said Surran

"Why?" he asked

"There was an accident in the supply area in indianapplis ."

" Well," he sighed "at least it's a little more country like. Well, that is a little more than Indianapplis ."

After saying a couple goodbyes, he trotted of toward Ponyville. Once he arrived in Ponyville he was interested.

" Ponyville has changed since the last time I was here." he said.

He didn't know where the market was, so he asked around.

" Excuse me," he asked a pink pony with a pink mane and tail that resembled cotton candy. "I was wondering if you could..."

" I've never seen you here before!" The pony shrieked. "I'm pinkie pie, I know every pony in Ponyville so if I haven't seen you before that means your new, ARE you new, huh huh huh."

" Yes, I'm new." he struggled to say.

" Did I come on too strong I'm sorry. I'm just a pony who is really hyper.” she said in a cross between apologetic and sad way.

" No no it's okay, I’m just not used to ponies like in Ponyville. I usually go to Indianapplis."

" Oh, so we're good?"

" Yeah, we're good."

" Were you wanting to know something?"

" Um, actually, yes, I was wondering if you could help me get to the market?"

" Oh, that's easy, just follow me."

As they walked to the market pinkie started asking questions.

" Where did you come from?" she asked.

" The edge of the Ever Free Forest."

" Any family who live with you?"

" Two family members and three friends."

As they approached the market he started to think about things he hadn't thought of before, maybe he should...

" Well, we're here." said pinky interrupting his thoughts.

" Huh, what? Oh, thanks, Pinkie, was it?"

" Yes pinkie pie." she said "Well, I'll see you around... You know what, I don't know your name."

" Louisiana." he said

" Louisianan, you sound like a geologist or maybe a cartographer."

" I'm an adventurer."

" Oh even better!"

"Well, see you later."

"Goodbye."

After Pinkie left, he got back to thinking.

"Maybe my family and I should move to Ponyville? Let's see what are some advantages? Let's see, we don't need to walk so far for supplies, it's close to our main adventuring, if we come out of the woods after a treasure hunt ponies may talk about us and maybe some ponies will want to come on some adventures." He thought to himself as he shopped for supplies.

After he was done shopping he was still thinking about his choice, maybe we should move here. The thought kept churning in his mind.

As he was walking home, he saw a violet pony reading a book while coming up the street.

" She looks like she's really into that book." he thought to himself.

When he was almost to the edge of town, he heard a voice call out, "Twilight, wait up!" the voice shouted as if they needed to see this "Twilight" pony fast. Just then an orange pony darted around a corner and bashed right into him. After they both gathered their senses the orange pony helped him up.

" I'm a-might sorry about that," she said, her accent was more noticeable when she was talking instead of shouting "and I'm sorry I can't stop and talk, I have to catch up to my friend."

" Oh, that's ok, I'm just stopping by!" he called out to her as she took off.

Once he got home, he saw one of his Pegasus friends fly off.

" Where did he go?" he asked

" He was called off to Filly Delphia, said he had to leave A.S.A.P." said a filly named Lilyfly, Lilyfly is a Pegasus who had a brother and a sister, the sister was Anniefly, her brother is Georgiefly, Lilyfly had two shades of pink for her mane and tail and her body was a darker pink. And Georgiefly was off doing work for the family most of the time.

" He flew to Filly Delphia? That doesn't make my choice easier." he sighed

"What choice?" asked Surran

"Oh, well while I was at the market I got to thinking, maybe we should move to Ponyville."

"Uh, Anniefly can you and the kids head inside while Louisiana and I talk?" asked Surran

"Sure." Anniefly answered

"Thanks."

After Anniefly and the kids went inside Surran turned to Louisiana.

" ARE YOU SERIOUS! Why would we move to Ponyville?" she asked

" It's changed, Surran!"

" Yeah, right, once a town full of mean ponies always a town full of mean ponies."

" That was just the market, and you know how they try to scam people, it's changed."

" You're right, I guess it could of changed."

" Tell you what, we'll go check out Ponyville together, around how long, maybe..."

" One hour."

" You really want to be there that long?"

" I'll take my chances."

" So tomorrow we'll go to Ponyville."

" You bet."

After they discussed when to go to Ponyville, they went inside, ready for the next day.

Author's Note

The pegasi, Lilyfly Anniefly and Georgiefly where not created by me, they where created by a friend but they gave me full permission to use them in my story.