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Forgiveness Pending

by Kiroberos
Moon Mender's adventure continues right where left off. He jumps at the chance for a new life, but will his old one truly leave him in peace? Some things are better off forgotten.


The story of Moon Mender continues after his dream of an ending ceases. He continues his struggle to belong in a world so far divorced from the only other experience he can remember, but as an outsider of truly alien mindset, will he ever be able to find a place in Equestria? More importantly, will the life he left behind give up on its death grip so easily? The most important thing to remember is that things are rarely as they seem and sometimes, some things are better off forgotten.


This story is a direct sequel to Memory Pending. Without having read that, this story might be a little strange to most, which is frightening considering how strange it is already. It can be read as a standalone story of course, but you won't get the most out of it.

Further, I’m fully aware that not everypony enjoys more mature themes, so any scenes containing things of an M rated nature shall only be released in a separate story when the time comes. This story deals with more mature themes on a whole, as a warning. This version will do its best to censor the really sensual or graphic content out, of course.

Last but not least, this story has reached this final format through combined efforts of not just myself, but many a helpful pony along the way! Here’s an abbreviated list of those involved and the rolls they played:
Kiroberos – Author (Obviously)
Julia – Editor (Corrections, Grammar, and Flow)
Azu – Beta Reader (Corrections, Flow) (Until Chapter 35)
ExplosiveBrohoof – Beta Reader (Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)
Muffinking – Beta Reader (Corrections, Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)
All of my readers for being amazing, supportive, and best of all, enjoying the world we read and write about.

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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
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Romance
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104 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 01 2012-12-21 05:04:07 UTC
    5511
  2. Chapter 02 2012-12-28 20:37:11 UTC
    5916
  3. Chapter 03 2013-01-04 22:45:48 UTC
    5745
  4. Chapter 04 2013-01-11 20:54:12 UTC
    5258
  5. Chapter 05 2013-01-18 23:02:54 UTC
    6346
  6. Chapter 06 2013-01-25 22:56:46 UTC
  7. Chapter 07 2013-02-01 22:59:06 UTC
    7999
  8. Chapter 08 2013-02-08 21:20:36 UTC
    7521
  9. Chapter 09 2013-02-15 22:49:02 UTC
    7733
  10. Chapter 10 2013-02-22 20:37:07 UTC
    6122
  11. Chapter 11 2013-03-01 18:43:58 UTC
    8625
  12. Chapter 12 2013-03-08 18:43:14 UTC
    5609
  13. Chapter 13 2013-03-16 18:29:34 UTC
    9592
  14. Chapter 14 2013-03-23 01:46:55 UTC
    11929
  15. Chapter 15 2013-03-29 23:48:03 UTC
    9590
  16. Chapter 16 2013-04-05 20:24:37 UTC
    7994
  17. Chapter 17 2013-04-09 19:05:21 UTC
    11296
  18. Chapter 18 2013-04-12 17:16:20 UTC
    10560
  19. Chapter 19 2013-04-19 17:41:30 UTC
    8168
  20. Chapter 20 2013-04-26 21:25:51 UTC
    9838
  21. Chapter 21 2013-05-04 23:10:31 UTC
    12130
  22. Chapter 22 2013-05-11 00:44:55 UTC
    10127
  23. Chapter 23 2013-05-17 17:51:33 UTC
    9049
  24. Chapter 24 2013-05-24 21:37:17 UTC
    9539
  25. Chapter 25 2013-05-31 23:26:23 UTC
    9056
  26. Chapter 26 2013-06-07 18:37:34 UTC
    6797
  27. Chapter 27 2013-06-14 23:47:09 UTC
    8286
  28. Chapter 28 2013-06-21 19:41:37 UTC
    8486
  29. Chapter 29 2013-06-29 01:42:01 UTC
    9998
  30. Chapter 30 2013-07-06 01:39:57 UTC
    11332
  31. Chapter 31 2013-07-13 00:53:40 UTC
    8963
  32. Chapter 32 2013-07-19 23:34:08 UTC
    6780
  33. Chapter 33 2013-07-26 22:19:02 UTC
    12531
  34. Chapter 34 2013-08-03 01:33:40 UTC
    11464
  35. Chapter 35 2013-08-10 00:35:11 UTC
    9162
  36. Chapter 36 2013-08-17 00:44:08 UTC
    11609
  37. Chapter 37 2013-08-23 19:52:05 UTC
    11138
  38. Chapter 38 2013-08-31 02:02:00 UTC
    7603
  39. Chapter 39 2013-09-06 20:22:50 UTC
    8780
  40. Chapter 40 2013-09-13 22:14:47 UTC
    9398
  41. Chapter 41 2013-09-20 20:50:08 UTC
    8704
  42. Chapter 42 2013-09-27 21:30:27 UTC
    10056
  43. Chapter 43 2013-10-04 20:42:22 UTC
    9951
  44. Chapter 44 2013-10-12 01:41:20 UTC
    11196
  45. Chapter 45 2013-10-18 20:02:07 UTC
    9563
  46. Chapter 46 2013-10-25 20:21:26 UTC
    12053
  47. Chapter 47 2013-11-01 23:07:10 UTC
    10119
  48. Chapter 48 2013-11-08 19:24:14 UTC
    11754
  49. Chapter 49 2013-11-15 20:31:17 UTC
    10236
  50. Chapter 50 2013-11-22 23:00:45 UTC
    11469
  51. Chapter 51 2013-11-29 22:23:49 UTC
    9966
  52. Chapter 52 2013-12-06 20:38:13 UTC
    11945
  53. Chapter 53 2013-12-20 21:26:02 UTC
    10115
  54. 2013 Hearth's Warming Short 2013-12-26 00:04:47 UTC
    6138
  55. Chapter 54 2013-12-27 22:40:46 UTC
    10771
  56. Chapter 55 2014-01-03 20:47:05 UTC
    12934
  57. Chapter 56 2014-01-10 22:08:43 UTC
    11648
  58. Chapter 57 2014-01-17 19:22:37 UTC
    12275
  59. Chapter 58 2014-01-24 19:46:56 UTC
    11414
  60. Chapter 59 2014-01-31 21:45:38 UTC
    10126
  61. Chapter 60 2014-02-14 21:23:07 UTC
    8911
  62. Chapter 61 2014-02-21 19:33:29 UTC
    13426
  63. Chapter 62 2014-02-28 19:30:47 UTC
    8058
  64. Chapter 63 2014-03-07 20:06:46 UTC
    9153
  65. Chapter 64 2014-03-21 19:33:47 UTC
    9737
  66. Chapter 65 2014-03-28 18:22:14 UTC
    8887
  67. Chapter 66 2014-04-11 19:12:51 UTC
    8529
  68. Chapter 67 2014-04-25 16:08:36 UTC
    10559
  69. Chapter 68 2014-05-08 20:12:11 UTC
    10873
  70. Chapter 69 2014-05-23 23:57:31 UTC
    9455
  71. Chapter 70 2014-06-08 20:10:35 UTC
    8898
  72. Chapter 71 2014-06-21 17:38:03 UTC
    8587
  73. Chapter 72 2014-07-05 20:08:04 UTC
    9633
  74. Chapter 73 2014-07-20 19:25:52 UTC
    12405
  75. Chapter 74 2014-08-01 22:56:54 UTC
    9533
  76. Chapter 75 2014-08-16 21:38:29 UTC
    10033
  77. Chapter 76 2014-08-30 22:43:32 UTC
    8711
  78. Chapter 77 2014-09-21 23:01:32 UTC
    7814
  79. Chapter 78 2014-10-03 19:36:28 UTC
    8498
  80. Chapter 79 2014-10-18 20:20:23 UTC
    10253
  81. Chapter 80 2014-11-01 18:15:41 UTC
    8906
  82. Chapter 81 2014-11-16 03:01:44 UTC
    8529
  83. Chapter 82 2014-11-29 19:48:27 UTC
    7780
  84. Chapter 83 2014-12-13 23:56:53 UTC
    7477
  85. Chapter 84 2014-12-27 20:24:31 UTC
    11245
  86. Chapter 85 2015-01-10 21:43:15 UTC
    12783
  87. Chapter 86 2015-01-24 20:54:14 UTC
    8722
  88. Chapter 87 2015-02-06 22:03:19 UTC
    9462
  89. Chapter 88 2015-02-25 00:08:38 UTC
    15835
  90. Chapter 89 2015-03-07 22:39:07 UTC
    8483
  91. Chapter 90 2015-03-21 22:32:00 UTC
    13051
  92. Chapter 91 2015-04-04 19:16:22 UTC
    9234
  93. Chapter 92 2015-04-17 19:40:58 UTC
    14604
  94. Chapter 93 2015-05-02 19:31:51 UTC
    12360
  95. Chapter 94 2015-05-16 18:15:02 UTC
    7110
  96. Chapter 95 2015-06-01 00:18:48 UTC
    6769
  97. Chapter 96 2015-06-14 20:43:35 UTC
    7466
  98. Chapter 97 2015-06-29 01:41:52 UTC
    8257
  99. Chapter 98 2015-07-16 19:58:10 UTC
    8082
  100. Chapter 99 2015-07-26 20:14:21 UTC
    8439
  101. Chapter 100 2015-08-08 04:54:14 UTC
    7722
  102. Ending 1 2015-12-25 21:31:57 UTC
    17882
  103. Ending 2 2015-12-27 21:13:37 UTC
    10124
  104. Ending 3 2015-12-29 22:13:42 UTC
    20298