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by Alan Smithee
The rise of ponies, the future of Equestria and the last human.

In a world of peace, magic and harmony, a flawed human presence may not seem necessary. When Simon returns from outer space to find his world inhabited by creatures with an almost innate perfection, he certainly suspects this to be true. As Simon discovers and documents the fate of his species, and learns how Equestria was built on the ruins of man, he fears that he will prove himself irrelevant. But things are not always what they seem, and the life of the last human may still have meaning.

New cover art by jjames10. Much thanks to him for his excellent work. Original cover art here.


Originally intended to be one scene set in one room in which the question, "Why would a human need to be in Equestria?" was answered, my theory to address the question has expanded to the scale of a small epic. I hope it works.

A lot of the concepts and facts introduced here are so vast and academic, they really can't be expressed in dialogue. Instead a number of scenes are in "written document" format to give the reader a thorough information-dump. This is a world-building fic.

I also omit a lot of the Slice-of-life, getting-to-know-you scenes you see a lot in HiE because the focus is on concepts rather than actions.

I wish to achieve the following with this fanfiction:
Create a character whose strengths and weaknesses are clear, or become clear as the story progresses.
Give the human character a compelling reason to be in Equestria based on an interpretation of the themes of the show.
Present a theory about the character of Twilight Sparkle and her intended role in the future of Equestria
Accurately portray existing characters from the show

Sources of Inspiration (This will be very long, some sources will be missed):
"The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape (Cosmic Love)" - PMV by mmmandarinorange
"Rorschach in Equestria" by Ex-Nihilos
"The Planet of the Apes" (1968)
"Slaughterhouse-Five" by Kurt Vonnegut
"World War Z: An Oral History of the Zombie War" by Max Brooks (Stylistic influence)
"The Stand" by Stephen King
"Pet Sematary" by Stephen King
"Moon" (2009)
"The Old Man and the Sea" by Ernest Hemingway (Stylistic Influence)
"The Wizard of Oz" (1939)
"King and Lionheart", song and music video by Of Monsters and Men
For some inexplicable reason, this song.
My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic, created by Lauren Faust, property of Hasbro, Inc.

Sources that DID NOT inspire this work:
Arrow 18 Mission Logs: Lone Ranger by Admiraltigerclaw

Feel free to take this premise and make it better.

I feel that this story is either going to be my "Citizen Kane" or my "Plan 9 from Outer Space". Either way it's my masterpiece.

This story is dedicated to Abby, my dog of 14 years who passed away on February 26, 2013

Everyone
Incomplete
Adventure
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
PTO

56367 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read

23 Chapters:

  1. Friendship and Harmony 2013-01-19 00:52:05 UTC
    1013
  2. An Open Letter to the Inhabitants of Earth 2013-01-24 21:38:16 UTC
    689
  3. Alone 2013-02-11 20:53:17 UTC
    2875
  4. Return 2013-02-18 21:16:56 UTC
    933
  5. Night 2013-03-24 19:10:42 UTC
    1919
  6. Awakening (Stupid April Fool's Chapter) 2013-04-01 19:37:26 UTC
    374
  7. Intersection Part One 2013-04-05 22:21:48 UTC
    1453
  8. Intersection Part Two 2013-04-08 19:12:12 UTC
    927
  9. Intelligent 2013-09-01 00:34:04 UTC
    2978
  10. Rejection 2013-09-16 22:25:10 UTC
    4236
  11. Forgiveness 2013-09-29 04:47:57 UTC
    2858
  12. Three Months of Winter Coolness : Part One of Five 2013-12-15 04:44:05 UTC
    3614
  13. Three Months of Winter Coolness : Part Two of Five 2014-03-02 05:53:25 UTC
    3786
  14. Three Months of Winter Coolness : Part Three of Five 2014-03-16 03:04:36 UTC
    3324
  15. Rescue (APRIL FEWLZ!) 2014-04-01 12:52:35 UTC
    342
  16. Three Months of Winter Coolness: Part Four of Five 2014-04-21 05:31:37 UTC
    3611
  17. Three Months of Winter Coolness: Part Five of Five 2014-07-18 05:39:28 UTC
    3687
  18. Winter Wrap-Up 2014-08-31 23:47:04 UTC
    3088
  19. Sunrise 2014-09-09 23:30:44 UTC
    1735
  20. Pinkie Pie: An In-Depth Study 2014-10-04 21:21:40 UTC
    3043
  21. A Woman's Touch 2014-12-08 03:09:21 UTC
    1891
  22. Anger 2015-04-01 04:02:00 UTC
    2003
  23. Rage 2015-08-03 02:47:13 UTC
    5988