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Rejuvenate

by Kody910
[Second Person Fic] You only wanted life to be simple, but one betrayal too many makes it impossible

[2nd-Person Fic starring you and Fluttershy]

You wanted to live your life simply, make the best for yourself, and maybe make a few friends along the way. But with one backstab too many, you find that last point to be impossible. You make it a point to never put too much faith in your so-called "friends," and you wonder if you'll ever be able to trust again.

Will the kindness of a simple mare be able to turn you around?

Author's Note: I've read a few 2nd-Person fics around, both on here and elsewhere, so I thought "Why not give it a shot?" My first fanfiction, not only about ponies, but about ANY sort of material, so criticism is welcome. If you spot grammar issues or whatever, I'll try and get them all sorted out as well.

Why Fluttershy? Well, she's my favorite, of course. That, and I've yet to develop a story for any other character thus far.

As for content? It won't be incredibly saucy, and some foul language is about the worst I'll throw into this, so don't worry too much about that.

So sit back, and enjoy the ride! I hope you do, anyway....

Art by ~Lucia-Conchita on DeviantArt.

Teen
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
OF

23582 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2012-01-16 21:01:11 UTC
    90
  2. Chapter One: Collapse 2012-03-23 01:36:31 UTC
    2348
  3. Chapter Two: Awaken 2012-03-23 03:30:54 UTC
    1613
  4. Chapter Three: Greetings 2012-01-19 22:55:51 UTC
    4006
  5. Chapter Four: Confrontations 2012-01-26 02:18:59 UTC
    5709
  6. Chapter Five: Regret 2012-02-03 02:44:25 UTC
    3343
  7. Chapter Six: Memory 2012-02-14 20:28:08 UTC
    6212
  8. Epilogue 2012-02-14 23:30:29 UTC
    261