But... It's Not Cannon! (Formerly Story of the Rising Dawn and the Dusk's Moon)

by Silverkirby

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Human, Random
Length: 3291

Melody and Allison are sent to Equestria.

Oh my god I want to re-write this so badly but nobody will see it…

Melody and Allison are young My Little Pony fans, who get sent to Equestria as… Their own OCs?

Melody and Allison, now Dawn and Dusk respectively, try to make a stable living in Ponyville, while balancing the pressure of trying not to alter cannon events, trying to stop a unicorn from breaking the fabric of the universe with dimension teleporting, and finding a way home.

And on the way, there may be certain… 'Adventures' they'll go through.

Story now taken down from public view, but accessible to anyone who asks via link. Thanks to BigBadBari21 for being my editor originally, and all the positive viewers the story used to have.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-13 18:23:32 UTC

(1) Waking up

The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 1:Waking Up

Allyson slowly opened her eyes, taking in her surroundings, quickly noting that she was most certainly NOT laying on her small bed in the corner of her bedroom. In fact, she didn't know where she was at all.

Okay,well where am I?

She turned her head to the right, quickly pushing herself away, seeing how there was a yellow pegasus laying unconscious next to her. Ally quickly noticed that she was pushing herself away with dark blue hooves.

Holy crap! I'm a pony!... Wait, I'm a pony! YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!... Stop, don't want to go all filly Twilight.

Ally poked at the pegasus next to her and quickly noticed her cutie mark.

No, wait, can it be?

Ally flipped the yellow pegasus over, inspecting her body from all sides.

Same orange mane, same single lightingbolt cutie mark and... same scar under the left foreleg.

Ally looked at her left hoof, the turned it over, noticing the small red cut-like scar near the base of her leg.

I'm Dusk Moon, and she's Rising Dawn.

Ally quickly dragged herself over to a conveniently placed puddle. Looking back at her was a very dark-blue pegasus with deep purple eyes and a bright lime mane, shamelessly styled no differently than Rainbow Dash's, and somehow looking good with the dark coat.

Well, I have four options. One: completely go buck it and screw with life. Two: act like an out-of-town normal pony and make a living. Three: Get in contact with Celestia and intently try to get home. Or four, roll with it... Definitely choosing four.

Melody opened her orange eyes, just to be greeted by a bright sun.

"What? Where am I?" She said quietly.

"Huh?" A small voice asked. Melody turned her head to see none other than Dusk, the pony that Ally made up.

"What. What. What. The. BUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That last word was screamed so loud that even Pinkie Pie herself would be put to shame.

All the birds in a fifty mile radius flew away. That was when Melody went into a mild state of shock. After gathering her bearings, she inspected her body. "I'm Rising Dawn." She said. She tried to stand up, and fell on her face after walking about a foot.

"You kay?" Ally said.

"Yeah." Melody mumbled through a mouthful of dirt.

After finding out how to walk herself, Ally watched as Melody failed multiple times at walking. After walking for three minutes straight without falling, she yelled. "Got it!"

     "Yes. Yes you do." Ally said back. "So, should we try to find Ponyville or something?" Ally asked.

"I guess." Melody answered. "Canterlot is over there,"She said,looking at a mountain with a castle on it."so I'd guess that Ponyville is over there." Melody said, pointing in the respective directions.

"Okay, well lets go!"

(2) Into ponyville

    The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 2:Into PonyVille

Ally and Melody have been walking, or troting in this case, for at least 10 miles untill they ran into a cream colored pony with a red mane and a rose for a cutie mark.

"Hey! "The pony shouted.

Ally leaned to Melody and whispered, "Roseluck" Then turned to Roseluck and said,

"What's up?"

"I thought I was the only one out here." Roseluck awnsered.

"We are just looking for Ponyville." Melody chimed in.

"Oh, well, just follow this path and you'll eventully get there." Roseluck said happily.

"Thanks! We'll just be on our way then." Ally said, as she walked past the cream pony.

"Wait." Roseluck said. Melody and Ally turned around."What are your names?"

"Rising Dawn."

"Dusk Moon."

"Oh, well, I'm Roseluck"

"Thanks again!" Melody called as they continued. "Wow, did we just talk to Roseluck?" Melody said quietly.

"Yes, yes we did." Ally replied.

As Ally and Melody trekked the barren dirt road Ponyville came into view.

"Yay! As Flutters would say." Ally said.

"Hey shouldn't pink-" Melody started but was cut off by a pink blur hitting and clinging to her snout.  "AHHH GET IT OFF!!" She screamed.

Ally bit into the cotton candy mane of the pink party pony and dragged her off.

The pony took a deep breath then started, "HII'MPINKIEPIEANDWELCOMETOPONYVILLEIVENEVERBEENMORE EXSITEDTHENNOWEXEPTWHEIWENTANDCAUGHTONTOTHEYELLOWPONIESSNOUTCUSTHENIWASREALLYHAPPYBEACUSEIVENEVERSEENYOUBEAFOREANDTHATMEANS-"

"That we're new ponies." Ally finished.

"Yeah, how did you know?" Pinkie Pie asked.

"Lucky guess?" Melody answered.

"Oki doki loki!." Pinkie said exsitedly. "Who are you anyway?"

"Well I'm Dusk, and she's Dawn." Ally replied.

"Cool! Your names are like opisiets! And stuff!" Pinkie remarked.

"Yup!" Melody said proudly.

"We best be off then." Ally said.

"Okie dokie loki! "The party pony said as she bounced off in a way that completely defies the laws of physics.

"Well, lets go!" Melody said cheerfully.

The two former humans troted through Ponyville, seeing many different ponies, the most notable being a tan pegusus with a green and cream striped mane and a burning wooden toaster for a cutie mark standing next to a blue earth pony with a yellow mane and a roll of film with a cutie mark, and a grey earth pony, having a red-tipped blue mane and tail and and headphones, and a tombstone cutie mark, and a grey unicorn with a darker grey and red mane and tail.

"Wow." Ally remarked after being out of earshot from the tan pegusus. "That was totally the brony dance party team right there."

"Weren't they the ones who made the rainbow factory?" Melody asked. She shuddered.

"Hey, that video was good!" Ally argued.

"It was bloody. And being a pony-no, a PEGASUS doesn't help either." Melody said.

"Eh, you have a point."

"Wait." Melody said. "We can't eat meat."

Ally's pupils shrank. "No... Bacon?" She said slowly.

"No pizza either." Melody said.

They both stared at each other in complete utter shock and silence.

At this point,the pegasi were on their knees screaming,

"NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"

(3) The party

The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 3:The party

After the two Pegasai were done with their screaming, the random surrounding ponies cleared from the area. Ally picked herself off her knees with a frown.

“This is going to haunt me forever.” She said to herself, blankly.

“Still, we can live through it, right?” Melody attempted to comfort.

“I guess.” Ally sighed.I feel like I need to vent. She thought to herself.

The two sisters trotted through Ponyville, thoughts of different foods on their minds. Eventually they started noticing that less and less ponies were in the streets as time progressed.

“Hey, where is everypony?” Melody asked, looking around.

“Well, according to to the fanfictions I’ve ever read, it means something either really awesome or really bad.” Ally replied. Just then, a gray pegusus with a blond mane flew over, dropping two letters and yelling,

“Derpy delivery!”

Ally’s eyes widend at the Pegasus, whereas Melody just blinked a few times. Melody loked down at the letters.

“Ally, look at this!” She said.

Ally looked down at the letters which both had big bold letters saying:

Welcome party for Dawn and Dusk at Sugarcube Corner

2:30 PM

Don’t be late!

-Pinkie Pie

“Looks like we have somewhere to be!” Melody said happily.

The two trotted to Sugarcube Corner and knocked on the door three times. In a matter of mere milliseconds, the door opened and a pink hoof extended out and pulled the Pegasai in the candy cottage.

“SURPRISE!!!”  All the ponies shouted. The room was full of ponies and had multicolored balloons acroos the ceiling. There were streamers and confetti everywhere, and there was a large pink banner that said in blue words, WELCOME TO PONYVILLE!!!!!

“Lets get this party started!” Pinkie shouted, bouncing in the air. As some music started playing, the ponies moved around the room,some moving immediately to the snack table, some going to play party games, and some just sitting down and chatting.The first pony to walk up to them was Roseluck.

“Its you two again!” She said happily.

“Hi Roseluck!” Ally said back.

“Hi” Melody said, distantly. She was searching the room for something. After spotting a certain white and purple unicorn she left the two.

“Where’s she going?” Roseluck asked.

“Oh, I have an Idea.” Ally replied,knowingly.

“Okay then,bye!” Roseluck said as she left Ally to her own things.

“Bye!” Ally replied. She then looked around the room.

“Now where is she….”Ally trailed off.She looked around the room and spotted Twilight trotting up to her.

“Hi! And welcome to Ponyville!” Twilight said happily.

“Hello!” Ally replied.

“I’m Twilight Sparkle, owner of the Books and Branches library!” She replied back.

“I can just call you Twilight, right?” Ally asked.

“Uh, yeah! Sure! Twilight answered.

“Well, Twilight, I’m Dusk Moon, but I prefer to be called just Dusk.” Ally replied. She extended her hoof.

“Ha-I mean,hoof shake?”Ally asked,correcting herself quickly.

Twi extended her hoof and shook it. In the background, Applejack was trotting up to the two.

“Howdy pardner an’ welcome ta Ponyville!” She greeted. "Ahm Applejack an’ ah run Sweet Apple Acres!” She proudly stated.

“Uh,well hi!” Ally greeted.”Mabie we should sit down?” She asked.

“Fine wit’ me!” Applejack agreed.

“Okay then!” Twilight agreed happily.

The three trotted to a nearby table with three empty seats.

After the party….

Ally was trotting out of Sugarcube Corner with Rainbow Dash.

“Hey, I don’t have house here yet, can I crash at your place?” She asked.

“Yeah sure!” Rainbow replied.

Melody was trotting to the Carousel Boutique with Rarity, talking to her about clothes and dresses.

“-Is better on her!” Ally could hear Rarity mumble as she glanced at her.

" Lets blow this popcicle stand!" Rainbow said.

“Okay!”Ally replied. Rainbow flapped her wings, taking into the air. Ally flapped her wings a few times and flew after her.

When the two pegasai were at the cloud place-like house, they went inside.

“Welcome to the best house ever!” Rainbow said, flying into the air for dramatic effect.

“Wow, it is pretty cool.” Ally said, looking around. There was a cloud couch on the side, and several trophy cases with many trophies inside them.

“Well the guest room is in the upstairs hall, first on the left, and the bathroom is on the end.” Rainbow informed. She then yawned and stretched her wings.

“Well I’m going to bed.” She said.

“Kay then, night.” Ally replied.

(4)The Party-antother story

NOTE: Hope you guys like this chapter,which is Melody's POV from "The party".Enjoy!

The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 4:The party-another story

After the two Pegasai were done with their screaming, the random surrounding ponies cleared from the area. Melody copied her sister’s actions, picking herself up and out of the dust.

“This is going to haunt me forever.”  Ally said to herself, blankly.

“Still, we can live through it, right?” She attempted to comfort.

“I guess.” Ally sighed. I wonder if she’s okay. She thought to herself.

The two sisters trotted through Ponyville, thoughts of different foods on their minds. Eventually they started noticing that less and less ponies were in the streets as time progressed.

“Hey, where is everypony?” she asked, looking around.

“Well, according to all the fan fictions I’ve ever read, it means something either really awesome or really bad.” Ally replied. Just then, a gray pegusus with a blond mane flew over, dropping two letters and yelling,

“Derpy delivery!”

Ally’s eyes widened at the Pegasus, whereas Melody just blinked a few times. Melody looked down at the letters.

“Ally, look at this!” She said.

Ally looked down at the letters which both had big bold letters saying:

Welcome party for Dawn and Dusk at Sugarcube Corner

2:30 PM

Don’t be late!

-Pinkie Pie

“Looks like we have somewhere to be!” She said happily.

The two trotted to Sugarcube Corner and knocked on the door three times. In a matter of mere milliseconds, the door opened and a pink hoof extended out and pulled the Pegasai in the candy cottage.

“SURPRISE!!!”  All the ponies shouted. The room was full of ponies and had multicolored balloons across the ceiling. There were streamers and confetti everywhere, and there was a large pink banner that said in blue words, WELCOME TO PONYVILLE!!!!!

“Let’s get this party started!” Pinkie shouted, bouncing in the air. As some music started playing, the ponies moved around the room, some moving immediately to the snack table, some going to play party games, and some just sitting down and chatting.  Well, I have to hand it to her, Pinkie’s parties are awesome. Melody thought. She looked around, searching for the white-and-purple unicorn that was her favorite of the mane 6. She heard a distant “Hi” to her left, and half-mindedly replied with the same word. Aha! She thought, spotting Rarity. After catching up to her she stated conversation with a simple, ”Hello!”

“Oh hello darling!” Rarity happily greeted.”I’m Rarity, and I run the Carousel Boutique! And who might you be?” She asked.

“I’m Rising Dawn, but just Dawn is fine.” The young mare replied.

“I simply LOVE how your name complements your coat!” The white unicorn replied, and gasped loudly before melody could reply.

“I could come up with a whole line of dresses based off of you!” She exclaimed excitedly. She dashed to the door with Melody in tow. And by ‘in tow’ I mean being forcibly dragged by her tail.

After the party…

The two girls were trotting out of Sugarcube Corner, talking about dresses.”Did you know that once, Dusk over there wore a dark blue dress with a crescent moon over a cyan one with lime highlights?” Melody mentioned.

Glancing over, Rarity added, “But the second one is better on her!” she exclaimed.

Hearing this, she saw Ally glance over, who turned to Rainbow, whom she was with. A few seconds later the two flew away.

“Lets head to the boutique.” Melody suggested.

The two arrived at Rarity’s home some time later.

“The guest room is at the end of the hall, and the bathroom is next to it.” Rarity explained.

Melody trotted up the steps and went into the guest room. It was a simple purple room with a bed, a nightstand, and a lamp. She jumped onto the bed with a plop and quickly fell asleep

(0) prolouge

The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 0:Prolouge

"What the? Where am I?"

     Everything was white. Left; white. Right; white. Up... You get the idea.

Well, what happened last night?

     Melody and Allyson (Ally for short) sat on the floor watching My Little Pony, sitting face-to-face battling each other in MarioKart on the DS.

      "I'm gunna beat you!" Ally said competitively.

     "No you're not!"

     "Yes I am!... Crap... you're in front of me."

     "Ah ha!" Melody cheered as she hit the finish line.

     "Did I just lose to a 7 year old?" Ally asked herself questoningly.

     "Yup." Melody giggled.

     "You know what?" Ally said. "I'm going to bed."

     "Aww, come on!"  Melody said, slightly sad.

     Ally headed for her room.  She then pulled out a stack of papers, and started drawing ponies.There was Dusk Moon, a dark cyan pegasus with a lime green mane and tail, and a raining cloud that is also shooting a lightning bolt as a cutie mark. There was Strawberry Leaf, a bright pink unicorn with a lime green tail and strawberry for a cutie mark. And finally there was Rising Dawn, a yellow pegasus with an orange mane and tail, and a plain yellow lightning bolt for a cutie mark. Dawn and Dusk were two sisters that worked the weather factory. She had made these ponies when she had lots of free time,or she was just bored.

     After putting the papers in a small clear plastic box, Ally opened her laptop and opened up her emails. "Hmmm? Pon3lover123? Never heard that name before." Ally clicked on the email, and, nothing happened. "Troll." Ally said. She closed her laptop and flopped onto her bed fell asleep.

Wow, how is it that I'm still surprised that I lost? Whatever.

     The girl glared at a small black speck that had appered just moments ago and tried to walk to the speck.

Wait, that's Melody!

     The girl saw a younger girl, probably 7 years old, with dark brown hair and matching eyes.

     The girl broke into a sprint and ended right in front of Melody. As the girl tried to reach out to her, she tried the same thing as she mouthed the word  "Allyson..." Then it felt like the universe exploded, tossing her back and forth, where she opened her eyes to see a clear blue sky, and not seeing the yellow pegasus with an orange mane liying unconscious next to her, before Allyson herself blacked out.

(5)The breakdown

The story of the Rising Dawn and The Dusk Moon.

Written by SilverKirby

Edited by BigBadBari21

Chapter 5: The breakdown

The first rays of dawn filtered in through the cloudy window, falling onto the face of a dark blue pegasus. She slowly rolled over, successfully face-planting into the floor.

“Ughh… I hate mornings…” She grumbled. Noticing her voice being slightly higher-pitched, Ally’s eyes popped open. Her mind prosessed where she was, what she was doing,

And how much she lost.

Her mom, her dad, her brother, her other sister, and most importantly, her humanity.

All she was now is a joke, a small blue pegasus who does anything she wants, without a care in the world, and only rarely cares about anything. A toy on a TV show made for 6 year olds.

Ally’s eyes teared up, and she got up, and grabbed a nearby pen and notebook. She sloppily wrote a note that read,

Dear Rainbow,

Hey, it's me Dusk. I’m heading out for a while. You can probably catch me on a cloud or something.

-Dusk

A tear splattered the page, and Ally rested the pen on the paper. She flew to the nearest cloud and just sat there for what seemed like hours.

--------------------------------Melody-----------------------------------

The yellow pegasus was already up, being the early bird of her family. She was staring at the floor, silently grieving over the loss of her faimily."I need to find Ally" she wispered to herself.

------------------------------Ally----------------------------------------

Ally sat on the cloud, staring into the distance. Finally, she broke the silence, singing a song into the wind.

Do you ever feel like breaking down?

Do you ever feel out of place?

Like somehow you just don't belong; and no one understands you?

Do you ever wana run away?

Do you lock your self in your room?

With the radio on turned up so loud, that no one hears your screaming?

No you don't know what it's like, when nothing feels alright, no you don't know what it's like, what it's liiiike...

To be hurt!

To feel lost!

To be left out in the dark!

To be kicked!

When your down!

To feel like you've been pushed around!

Do be on the edge of breaking down!

And no one's there to save you!

No you don't know what it's like..

What it's like...

Welcome to my life.

Down below on the ground, a hyper Pinkie Pie was making cupcakes. When she caught the song in her ears, her mane deflated, and she slowly trudged up to her room, a never-leaving frown plastered on her face.