My little Alchemist: Edward Eranda

by Omarglez14

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Queen Chrysalis, Other, Romance, Adventure, Tragedy, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 6107

Alchemy isn't the answer to every problem. Not everything can be equally exchange

Edward Eranda* (*the chosen) is the last Alchycorn is the town named "Equinae Statera". Looking for answers he start a new live in ponyville. Meeting there, the main 6 and many other ponies. As a master of alchemy most of his abilities relieve on martial arts and his alchemy abilities; but his own body without knowing its magic itself due to fact that in his pass he crossed the "Door of Truth" a place forbidden for those before him. As a taboo, alchemy is a type of magic eradicated from Equestria by the Princess after the incident with Princess Luna. Do to his past Edward never experienced what was truly love or friendship.

Will Edward find his answers or will he be eradicated from Equestria for practicing a taboo?

Published 2012-12-30 19:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-01 23:57:41 UTC

Prologue

Prologue

My little Alchemist

Edward Eranda

Prologue
Who said that ponies aren't born with their talent? Who says that you will get then in time? That you’ll get yours when you discover what you are good? Your special talent? That kind of funny in my case. My name is Edward, I was born in a city not quite close to Ponyville, closest place “AppleWood”, the name of the city was “Equinae Statera” a place where magic wasn't what it was supposed to be; “levitate things” too easy; “Make hair grow” really?; it was replace with alchemy, science, those kind of things. You get the point of where I’m right now. Not yet, well that’s a little unfortunate.

Back when I was a little colt, I, as a unicorn was supposed to learn magic with my horn, but by me parent’s way, the town’s way, I actually never did, more like things of how to change the matter of something, make it bigger, make more useful, to make it better for the society. I was one the best, based on what my parents, teachers, friends and others usually told. They were like: “Good job son”, “nicely done”, “keep on working those tricks of your”, and overall “Don’t stop and not even Celestia will dear to touch you”. That last one was the most repeated one, as if Celestia would kill us or something like it. I was like: But isn't she supposed to help us” and they were like: “An Alicorn that doesn't care for what her people think, no Edward, she never did and she will never help us”. I never thought that the ruler of this land could be a such disgrace for all of us.

The Alchycorns, they were as important to me as the wonderbolts to any pegasi, they were a association where only the high ranks of alchemist could get in and make their own research on alchemy. I myself got in there at the age of 8 after crossing a weird and gigantic door in a white room, my said that he couldn't believe that I got out of there alive, but after that day I commonly start to get rage moments and loss of temperament, one time I almost killed a Alchycorn in the process. My cutie mark, it was something special. I got my cutie mark a few months after my birth, kind of weird to say right, but it was true. I earn my cutie mark right after 7 months of my birth. I never understood what my dad try say when he try explained to me, of how I got, what it means? Or anything like it.

My cutie mark is a cloud, a dark one, like a storm cloud; on top of it a rainbow, and on the bottom two lighting bolts. I think it represents my attitude when it comes to make decisions, or when I get mad or happy, or even how I react during conversations with other ponies. My patient is really weird, sometimes I think of it as a time bomb. Sometimes I got myself controlled and nothing will happened but, the more someone gets in my nerve the closer I get to explode and “bomb” you got yourself in a fight that you can’t escape from. My magic, well I think that I said a million times already, that I do alchemy, but in the end I know other types of this material. Some example could be: the ability to levitate things, that’s a classic one every unicorn knows how to do that one, a shield “kind-of”, which I can actually create one of many times, remember with my alchemy I can change the con-texture of what I pick to change, another could be my special “Gravity Ball” with some work and research I discovered that with some effort I can create kind of a ball where I eliminate all gravity within it, as big as a house, which is really helpful when it comes to move really heavy things. At last but not least comes my mind reading ability, It’s not my best one when it comes to use it, for some reason I cannot fully control it, so sometimes it works and let me hear that things that I want to hear and ,other times I overhear things that I shouldn't hear. There was this time my teacher was sleeping and I heard him thinking about his lover and me got him to talk to her and make them lovers, because I could hear what she was thinking and well I got to know what she liked and what she didn't liked .

Another weird fact is my body, its nothing really special about, but my dad says that its really special, its fully white, no color at all, in my legs, back, neck and in the lower part of my mouth I have these marks like stripes really red, It like blood in a way .During my last years at home, I had the opportunity to make research on my own about anything related to magic itself. I heard my stories about other ponies that were and are good at it. “Star Swirl the bearded”, a great magician in his time, a great inspiration for someone like me; but I need one that is alive, did you guess it? Yes “Twilight Sparkle” the very pupil of “Princess Celestia”, the rumors says that she is one of the best, or even the best unicorn that had mastered the ability of magic in the whole “Equestria”. I need to talk to her, I need to know her, maybe she wills the pony to find, why I got my cutie mark at my young age? Why in my town we only have access to such a dark type of magic, that even now it not consider magic? Why I’m so lonely? I will find the answers in the place where she lives, Ponyville.

Let’s do this! To Ponyville

Author's Note

Please don't start saying that this is a rip-off of other stories that also talk about FMA (fullmetal alchemist) I don't even talk about them during the whole thing,I "ONLY" use the anime as a reference to the events in the whole story and my character "Edward Eranda" isn't a copy of Edward Eric, The names come because my best friend is called Edward and I put "Eranda" meaning in "Japanese" chosen .
There are more characters than the ones put by this website.Like: Discord, Luna, Trixsi, the cutie mark crusaders, Zecura, the wonderbolts, and many more.
A better reference to my character Edward Eranda, he looks like my Avatar excepts for the clothes
I don't have any editors to check the work for me, so there will be many errors enough to throw a party. Again put then in the comments.

Thank you for reading, have a awesome day.

(Any ideas for the story, I'm open minded tell me and I'll listen) :)

Meting the main 6 of Equestria

Chapter 1

Meting the main 6 of Equestria
*Walking* Walking definitely is not what I love to do the most, but is what I have to do if I want to get to Ponyville, have much time have I being walking already like three or four hours maybe. Wow is really far from Statera to Ponyville, just like that one time I had to go to Canterlot like three time the same day, but the distance weren’t the same; from my town to Canterlot is like ten hours walking and three in train. This travel is like running against the wind, “Not getting forward, just backing up every second”.*Jumping* Hey I think I can see somepony over there. Why in the name of the philosopher's stone is that pony just jumping around? Well at least is the first one seen in my whole voyage, I think I’ll just walk towards him and make some conversation. Wait a minute, is that Pinkamena Diane Pie, that one crazy earth pony that went to magic mirror pond and made huge amounts of clones of her. Why does karma hates me? Like really couldn't just be somepony like rarity, or even fluttershy. *Stops walking*

E.e: ummmh, excuse me Pinkamena
P.p: ……..
E.e: Pinky Pie?
P.p: ……
E.e: Pinky Pie!?!?!
P.p: Hey there, who are you? Let me guess, a friend of Twi, she has a lot of friends. Are you? Are you? I think you are, you’re a unicorn like her, you do magic too, all unicorns do. Are you? Are you? Show me!!, show me what can you do? Show me!!, show me!!
E.e: Pinky are you ok?
P.p: Wait, you are that one unicorn; Edward Eranda, right.
E.e: wait a sec, how in the name of Equestria do you know me name, I haven’t even mentioned it, Let me guess you heard from the incident of Celestia and the quimera. (I thought everypony had forgotten about that by now, it had being like a year already)
P.p: no, silly.
E.e: Then, how you know my name?
P.p: He told me* (* referring to the narrator)
E.e: who? (Is Pinky already making her particular nonsense entries?)
P.p: don’t worry you can’t see him
E.e: then how should I know that he or she is there?
P.p: Hey, you know what this calls for? A party!
E.e: (-_-) Can we cut this topic, and get a little more serious.
P.p: you are new here so you need a welcoming party, but you are also famous, so also a celebrity party, but wait, you are also a friend of Twi, so also a reconciliation party
E.e: WHAT are you talking about?!?!
P.p Party Cannon!!
Sfx: puff and explosions
E.e: Where did you even got it from? (0_o)
P.p: Oh, I never leave home without my party cannon!!
E.e: (-___-)
P.p: Oh my gosh. Hold on to your hooves – I am just about to be brilliant! Let’s go to Twi’ house and do first the reconciliation party
E.e: ….. Yeah I think it will be the best (she is really friendly, I really love that, but wow she really gets annoying sometimes)
P.p: Okey-dokey-lokey, lets gooooooo!!!
E.e: But, where we are specifically?
P.p oh you silly, for reason you just got inside Applejack’s farm, but really how didn’t she notice you, are you spy, I love spies, I have an idea: let’s create an spy Agency for crimes and mysteries. I love mysteries, do you love mysteries? Do you? Do you?
E.e: Pinky, can’t we just go to twilight’s library
P.p: Okey-dokey-lokey, lets gooooooo!!!
E.e: ok, let’s go then.
*Start walking*

5 minutes later

Town Square
Sfx: Screams and loud sounds

Alright, at last I got inside the main part of Ponyville; I’m still with the question of how I got inside of Applejack’s farm, and one she didn’t saw, because this is the Apple Bucking season so she should at least had seen me like a hundreds of times, and the other thing is how I didn’t notice I was in there, seriously other ponies had told that I could easily recognize for the size of it and by the house of the apple Family. Well in the end that didn’t helped a lot, so let’s just continue with the tour. Everything seems alright, a lot of ponies like I could have expected from this place, but something is really creeping me right now, where are the main 6 of this thing? Like Applejack wasn’t in Sweet Apple Acres, Pinky is with me but a while ago she was in there, I haven’t seen Rainbow Dash on a cloud or something like it, Fluttershy is in the other side of Ponyville, so I guess she is there. Rarity and Twilight maybe in their respective houses, but other ponies told that in days like today they are in the park or just doing what they do best: talk to each other.

E.e: hey pinky mind if I ask you a question?
P.p: you just did.
E.e: (-__-) a real question
P.p: Ok, tell, is it something special, is it about the spy agency, you want to do it I know you would like to do that….
E.e: no pinky, I was going to ask you what you were doing in Applejack’s farm.
P.p: ooh I was looking for her, for some reason she was not with princess Celestia and the others this morning when we told her to be there
E.e: wait you guys know princess Celestia (wow Twilight is really more than just a pupil for the princess, lucky me not being able to be anything like it to her)
P.p: you silly, never heard of your princess.
E.e: no I mean, you had visited her castle before, right?
P.p: well yeah we are the chosen ponies to hold the power of the “Elements of Harmony”, I represent” Laughter”
E.e: (yeah I kind of guess that before you had to tell me), but still what were you guys doing there?
P.p: Princess Celestia told us to look for the elements of harmony to stop Queen Chrysalis, again.
E.e (O_o)…… again?
P.p: yep, bad guys never learn, do they?
E.e: that’s “ucking dangerous, let’s get back to the research for the elements, QUICK! *Start running*
P.p: hey, what a about Twi?
E.e: (Did she really ask me that question?) we’ll look for her later; let’s get back to the elements.
P.p: Okey-dokey-lokey lets gooooooo!!!
E.e: hopefully no pony has been injured. Last thing a want to have is to “transmute” something into medicine. For the love of Celestia I hate doing that.
P.p: …..Trans…mu…te?
E.e: (dammit why did I say that, now that’s going to be another problem) don’t worry is a thing a mine.
P.p: like my party canon
E.e (face hove palm) yes Pinky, like your party canon.

Clock Tower

20 minutes later

Sfx: Explosions and lasers shooting
Queen Chrysalis: Well, well my little ponies. It seems that you can actually take on a fight with my changelings, but what about me. Want to take a try, Twilight Sparkle, HAHAHAHA
Fluttershy: Twilight somepony is coming this way.
Twilight: Where in the name of Equestria is Pinky and Applejack? I can’t hold Chrysalis forever, Rainbow have you seem her.
Rainbow D: Nothing Twi, we’ll have to wait while they come. (I wonder what are they doing? Hopefully looking for the elements that remind to be found) Hey Twi, wait I see Pinky with another pony coming this way, who’s that guy?
Twilight: Oh come on Pinky, I thought you were smarter than this, Hey Rainbow any idea who is this pony.
Fluttershy: Twilight, I think… I think he can help you.
Queen Chrysalis: Why you even bother? It won’t help win this battle, you should just pay more attention to see your fully destruction
Twilight: That will never happen, not in my watch
*Walks into the fight*
E.e: neither on mien.
Fluttershy: ….Twilight... he is acting weird
Queen Chrysalis: (what’s this aura?)
Rarity: Oh look what we have here, at least one last gentlecolt is still alive, what’s you name darling?
E.e: Twilight Sparkle, if you allow me, I would like to help you.
Rarity: (Did he just ignored my?)
Twilight: I don’t know you, why should I even bother talk to you or asking for help
Sfx: aura changing.
*getting closer*
E.e: Because if you don’t you will die.
Twilight: …. Who are you?
Fluttershy: He’s Edward...
P.p: wait don’t you know him Twi? He is Edward Eranda. He can do Alchemy 
Twilight: Edward Eranda, who is Edward Eranda? Some famous pony of something like it.
Rainbow D: What’s alchemy? And who is this guy?
Queen Chrysalis: So that’s you name, Eranda
E.e: I see you have brought some chaos with you, not very particular of you.
Queen Chrysalis: what you mean? You pawn.
E.e: Discord is supposed to be the one that brings chaos, you only bring changelings and try to fool every pony with you changing ability, you are in my book the sneaky one, not the chaos maker.
Fluttershy: What about Nightmare moon?
Queen Chrysalis: Are compering me to that clown, I’m far stronger than him.
E.e: Is that so, then why is mane 6 needed the 6 elements of harmony to beat him and not you.
Rainbow D: ooooooohh, low blow my friend.
Rarity: Of all the insults I had hear in my life, this one is the cleverest.
Twilight: Did he just insult her?
Queen Chrysalis: Why you? I kill you!
E.e: Alright, then do it. I won’t move a muscle. I dare you to laser blast me with all you power!
Queen Chrysalis: I you insist, then take a taste of it.
Twilight: Don’t, she will kill you, not even Celestia could resist her attacks.
E.e: but the thing is, I’m not Celestia (Sfx: horn glowing)
Rarity: Now that’s a brave pony, show her what you got.
Queen Chrysalis: Take this!
E.e: Everypony get out of this area, quick!
Everypony: RUN!!

I knew what I was doing, after all, those years training myself as alchemist I got the opportunity to learn how to predict the movements of my enemies to make a better counter to their attacks. Just by looking at Chrysalis’s face I would tell that she will miss the shot, I got to take the chance to put my alchemy to action. First of my shield not to defend myself, but to reflect the blast so it didn’t explode with the ground some make damage to the city, then a alchemy circle around Chrysalis area to sealed her, after that a gravity ball to leave her with no oxygen to breath and get stunned there making the perfect opportunity to the mane 6 the chance to use the elements of harmony and putting her in a solid stone statue and never after come back.

Sfx: fires the blast, gets reflected
Queen Chrysalis: What!?!?!
E.e: Surprised? Look down my little “pawn” and learn what is truly magic, RELEASE! *touches the floor*
Sfx: Alchemy circle gets activated
Queen Chrysalis: ALCHEMY
E.e: At least you know about it, get to sleep in zero gravity.
Sfx: gravity ball gets create around Chrysalis’s body area leaving the area with no air to breath
Queen Chrysalis: agh… agh….. Who… are… you..?
E.e: The last of the Equinae Statera unicorns, the “Alchycorns”
Rainbow D: Coooool
Rarity: Now that’s a fine name for a gentlecolt, like him.
P.p: what are the Alchycorns? Hey Twi you know everything what’s that?
Fluttershy: I...I actually know about those ponies.
Twilight: For the first time ever I actually don’t know about that; Hey unicorn explain yourself, who are you? And what are you talking about?
E.e: If you want to know fist finish the job, then I’ll tell.
Twilight: what job?
E.e: I just stunned the Queen, but just for a while. Use the elements to seal her away forever.
Twilight: …Then what? Why should we trust you?
E.e: You don’t have to, I just did what I thought, if it was not. Then you all will make the next movement; after I came looking for you.
Twilight: (This pony is really powerful, I think even more than what I am. I think I have to thrust him, for now. He doesn’t seems like a bad guy, but that aura change in him is really creeping me right, his eyes are white, like the time when I was a little filly in the Canterlot text. Something here is for sure, that’s not his normal way of acting, more like a second personality. I think I can trust him) But wait, what about Applejack?
E.e: She’s coming this way
Twilight: How you know? I can’t see her anywhere, hey Rainbow Dash, can you see her?
Rainbow Dash: Nope, not even in a long distance
Rarity: I can’t see her either, my dear can you explain yourself, I’m quit lost right now
E.e: Rainbow you can’t see her in the distance, stop lying, you’re even not looking in the right direction, she’s coming from behind me.
Twilight: How you know, I can’t see her either.
E.e: You don’t need to see her, can’t you listen to her screams, smell her presence, see her running towards us.
P.p: Can you taste her
Twilight: (Pinky, stop making nonsense. I’m trying to understand what he is talking about)
E.e: (smiles) she is here.
Sfx: Aura changes back to normal, galloping sounds

Holy princess Luna, this pony Rarity is really getting my nuts, giving me indirect compliments to a few tricks that I did there, and calling me “Gentlecolt”. Wow, of all this years in Equinae Statera no even the ugliest mare would want to be around me and now Rarity the finest of all mare based on that catalog that I read a few years ago about clothing and fashion, is saying those things to me like a was her friend seems my birth. WHAT IN THE NAME OF LUNA IS GOING ON? But well, that doesn’t matter right now. Applejack is coming so they will use the elements and sealed away Chrysalis and then…*Faints*

?????

1 hour later

Twilight: Well, hellooooo there. Mr. “Alchycorn” wake up.
E.e: umm my head, where am I? (Let me guess Twilight’s library, yeah I can clearly see it, that big and fully surrounded by books house of Twilight Sparkle)
Twilight: Well, in a hospital of course, you were really in a bad health condition, after doing first the shield, then the gravity ball and the circle of magic, plus those kinds of predictions about Applejack.
Spike: If you really did that then from now on you’re the second coolest pony in my Pony List
Fluttershy: Are you ok Mr. Eranda?
E.e: (DAMMIT) Yes, fluttershy thank you asking; hey wait a minute! What happened to me? What do you know about my predictions? Where is Applejack? What happened to Queen Chrysalis?
Rainbow D: I told you Twi? Only the ponies that try to predict the future ended up losing their minds. But well who listens to a Pegasus that is always doing whatever he likes to do.
P.p: I do
Rainbow D: Hey Twi does Pinky knows the word sarcasm?
Twilight: I think she doesn’t. (The question is, do you Rainbow Dash?)
E.e: (-___-) will somepony answers my questions, and no I haven’t lost my mind “Pegasus that is always doing whatever he likes to do” Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow D: I still say you're nutty, but hey, I've done lots of nutty things.
Twilight: We all have done “nutty” things in our lives Rainbow. But getting to your questions “Mr.Alchycorn” if it’s fair to call you by that name
E.e: That it’s not my name, my name it’s Edward Eranda or just Edward. The name Alchycorns comes to the first unicorns that learned the art of “Alchemy” some years ago after the incident of Nightmare Luna and Princess Celestia. Just if you are wondering “Alchemy” is a type of magic create by the Alchycorns themselves, the magic is like a diagram where everything that exist has a value in the whole universe; what alchemy does is exchange the existing material for an equal value of the material chosen. A good example was the aura changing in my body an hour ago I guess.
Spike: Hey, what’s that thingy you called “aura”
E.e: Is like your mood but this one you see it with some skills, and can even tell you how a pony thinks or acts with that aura. For example you “Spike” your aura is more like relax and hard worker dragon that likes to help others and almost never lies. Is that you Spike?
Spike: Wow, well yeah that’s awesome. Can you teach me how to do that?
E.e: Maybe later
Twilight: (How did he got the time right, this guy is really weird, but smart at the same time, I have to keep an eye on him if I want to learn some of this things, and this of the aura is making more nervous. He doesn’t even have to talk to us to guess who we are.) Yes, an hour ago. Can you explain a little bit more about it and how did you do it.
E.e: I could do it, but I think the one that has to make the questions and get some answers is me don’t you think.
Twilight: Well, what can we tell you that you haven’t seen on you predictions or guessed already?
E.e: Well, before I start just to clarify those “predictions” as you called is just an exchange between cells in the marks in my body and some black holes in my brain, letting me see some events that will happened in a few minutes after the present. For example now Rainbow Dash in going to scream because the wonderbolts are going to enter the room
Rainbow D: wait, what?
Sfx: Knock, knock. Screams
????: Rainbow Dash you haven’t done your 500 laps around the wonderbolt academy yesterday!!! Now you are going to do 10000 laps for punishment!!! No excuses!!!
Rainbow D: FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Main 5: (O_o)
Spike: Well, that is for sure a mad coach.
Twilight: But, if you can do then basically you can predict the future, and change it at you will, am I right?
E.e: Not really.
Rainbow D: WHAT DO YOU MEAN NOT REALLY?!?!?! You just told what was going to happen few seconds from happening.
E.e: That’s the thing Rainbow Dash, just “FEW” seconds before it happen, and it’s not free to do that. I can do it my will whenever I want to do it, but it hurts in the end to do it.
Rarity: What do mean by “It hurts” darling?
E.e: You see the marks in my body. I was born hundreds of these; with every time I predict something that is going to happen I can either pay with blood or sacrifice cells in these parts of my body.
Twilight: What do you mean by pay with “Blood”?
E.e: I have to sacrifice parts of my body.
Twilight: (Is he really that bound to alchemy that his own body pays for his sins)
Rarity: I think I now know what you meant by “hurts”
Spike: "Argh!"
E.e: Well… Yeah you can say that.
Twilight: (He is hiding something, he hesitated in there. Even though I shouldn’t into his mind this early, he seems kind of sad right now, maybe later) Is Something wrong?
E.e: No,… just… thinking.
Fluttershy: Tells us Mr. Eranda.
E.e: Just Edward, Edward will ok to be called.
Fluttershy: Well, Edward is there is something wrong just tell us, this is a hospital after all. We can get you some help.
E.e: Thank you for the offer Fluttershy, but I don’t need physical help. After all I can…
Rainbow D: WAIT! Don’t tell us that you can heal yourself. Awesome, that so cool.
E.e: (Rainbow Dash, tell you something, you sure are cute when it comes to “predict” my words) Well, I can… I… have these potions which can make my body regenerate faster
Twilight: (Totally not lying) ummmh, well just to wrap up this conversation. Yes Applejack is here, but for some reason she is really mad with us (I just wonder what really happened to her to her act with us like before. I really have to talk to her.) and Queen Chrysalis was send to the Canterlot’s Prison.
E.e: I see, well then I guess my questions are over, and you all’s too, right? *gets up*
Fluttershy: What are you going to do now Edward? Are you going to leave Ponyville?
E.e: No Fluttershy, I think I’ll stay for a bit longer if some nervous pony will let me of course *staring at Twilight*
Twilight: (How does he knows that I’m nervous about his presence, is it that obvious?) ummmh, well it’s not my problem if you stay or not. After all is not that bad to have another unicorn friend *blushes*
E.e: Well if you say that, mind if I ask you a question.
Rarity and Rainbow Dash: (is he ever going to talk to us or at least let us jump in the conversation)
P.p: (Are you reading my mind? awesome)
Twilight: (Now what do you want? Like really you just came to this city with no reason and now demanding things. Well I shouldn’t be with him like this, after all he just another pony to meet and have friendship with. Is this a message from the princess to my studies) Ok, tell us what you do want?
E.e: (*gulp*, what is wrong with these ponies? I really have to control this mind reading ability of mien) Well, as you may guess, I consider myself an Alchycorn. Alchycorns have done throughout the years, hundreds of research books about this matter known as Alchemy. I had read some of these books, but I want to know more about other types of magic and not only Alchemy. I will be honest with you all; I don’t know any other type of magic either that you saw me do early.
Rainbow D :( Why do I have the impression this pony reading our minds, hey Edward blink me is you heard this) so what do you mean by this. Let me guess you want Twilight to be your tutor
E.e: (Oh you little… you really are cute when it comes to predicting my actions) *blinks* Well, Rainbow Dash. I came to Ponyville, because other ponies throughout my voyage told me that if I want to learn great magic “tricks” and get better with my abilities I should go to Ponyville’s library and talk to its librarian. They told me that she was the best in the whole Equestria and had even studied with the Princess herself. I never thought that it Twilight Sparkle.
Spike: So Twilight is really popular?
E.e: Yeah if she is the pony that this other ponies were referring to my then right now she is in the top ten strongest ponies in the whole of Equestria.
Spike: Awesome
P.p: (Hey, stop reading my mind, I don’t want you to know my plans for your parties)
Rarity: (Oh this pony sure knows what he is doing in here, maybe I talk to him later)
Twilight : (what are you implying with that? *mad mood*) Oh well, so other ponies in Equestria talk about me. Am I that famous?
E.e: Well would be if you had beaten “The Great and Powerful Trixie” twice in a row
Mane 5 and E.e: *laughs*
E.e: So Twilight Sparkle, pupil of Princess Celestia, would I have the honor of being your student at least during my time in Ponyville.
Twilight: (He really is a gentlecolt, coming from someone that just saved our lives and tries to impress us with his talents and now wants me to be his teacher this day just can’t get any better; and now that I think about he can be my teacher too ) Ok I think I can teach some of my “tricks” *blushes*
E.e: thank you Twilight Sparkle.
P.p: (Hey, you know what this calls for?)
E.e: (-__-) Don’t do it Pinky!
Spike: Do what?
P.p: A PARTY!!!
Sfx: Laughs, explosions, talkings

10 Minutes later

Twilight’s Library

Rainbow D: (Hey if you want ever to hang out with me, see me under Cloudsdale I usually go there to practice if you want to go of course. It will make you 20% cooler you know) So Edward where are you going live? Or better yet with who? *Blushes*
Rarity: Well, Darling if you need a bed I can give you one. Sweetie Belle is with the “Cutie Mark Crusaders” group if her, so you can sleep in her bedroom tonight.
Fluttershy: Well… Mr. Edward if you want… you can go to my house too... if you want of course.
Rainbow D: (Don’t look at me, you are a unicorn and unicorn can’t sleep or even live on clouds, so sorry) …
P.p: Me, me, me. Come to my house. I have a lot of space where you can sleep and discuss with me the plan (Spy plan, reading my mind again jajaja)
Twilight: Well, I can talk to spike to see, if he lets you stay of course.
Spike: (Twilight what are you thinking?) Hey Twilight, I’m watching you.
E.e: ehm, I think I will just make my own house.
Mane 5 and Spike: (O__O) WHAT?!?!?
E.e: Guys you know I’m a unicorn just to start I can levitate things, I can transmute simple materials into more complex ones, and I can make my gravity ball so that I can hold heavy things in the air for a good time. 
Rainbow D: (Not even twilight as I have known can do that all alone) you sure about that.
Twilight: You have to be kidding me.
Rarity: Out of all the great things that could happen, this is the! Greatest! Possible! Thing!
Everypony around: (-___-) Really?
Rarity: je, je, je
Twilight: You sure you don’t need any help of us.
E.e: nope, you guys can even watch me making it. The only thing that I need right now is a place where to make it.
Twilight: That’s up to your choice, you can live in anyplace you want, just make sure you don’t bother other ponies of course.
E.e: Ok then, what about next to that school?
Rarity: Wait, next to the elementary pony school? (Well either he really likes little ponies or his want to teach them his abilities)
Twilight: Well, sounds good to me
Rainbow D: Not the best choice in my opinion, but after all it’s you opinion your choice.
Fluttershy: Ok… well Mr. Edward I wish you the best for your new house and welcome to your new home.
Rarity: Welcome. (Hopefully he stays long enough to talk with about his town)
Rainbow Dash: Welcome. (I wondering how many cools things and stories you have to tells us)
Twilight: Welcome. (One of these days I’m going to asking to teach me his tricks and he calls his magic)
P.p: Welcome. (Wait for the great parties that are waiting for you)
Spike: Welcome. (Well, a new unicorn for my cool unicorns friends list, I have a lot of questions for him)
Applejack: Welcome To Ponyville ^depressed mood^ (why in hay did I even came to this place)
E.e and Twilight: Hey Applejack.

Ok this is getting really awkward. Applejack just appeared from nowhere and is really depressed and might try talk to her now. As for the others Spike seems to be a nice guy I’ll take any chance that I get to talk to him, make a better friendship relation between him and me, and maybe even get some better info about this town and get the best out of it, because I might even live the rest of my live in here so I would love to meet everypony. As for the others, I really like who I get with all of them specially Twilight and Rainbow Dash, both of them are in away treating me as their best friend. Despite what they think, does not really coordinates with what they say. Rainbow, I think she really likes me as a friend (I think it’s because of my magic is cool to her) and Twilight because she wants to learn my magic. Yeah, it’s what they all say “friends with benefits”, but without the benefits; and no, no those kinds of benefits. I think my voyage has come to an end for now. Maybe tomorrow I’ll try to talk to the other ponies of this town and also the ones around this place. I wonder how many cools ponies live around here, talking about cool things I almost forgot Rainbow Dash is right now the only pony that can do a “Sonic Rainbom”, I might check that out in these days when I go to see her place.

You looked for me in the dark,

I drowned in the sea.

The warmth of your friendship I seek,

I never approach where you were.

Author's Note

1st chapter finally
Legend:
* *: this sings means an action
( ): this means a thought, except for the moments in which Edwards talks to himself
^ ^ this means the mood of the talking pony

there some symbols trying to make faces, like this one :)

Thank you reading