Trixie: Take 2

Alright, I know this is probably getting annoying, and I apologize, but I really need your guys' help... I feel like that last chapter was... lacking to say the least... please leave any tips or suggestions.

For the record, yes, I have started chapter 8, but this chapter is bugging me far too much to really get started.

Thanks for putting up with this, and thank you for reading!

-MrGreat