Making dresses

If your woundering why I made the ending 'happy' well I'v read srgt.sprinkles's cupcakes about five times (I regret doing that) and said:

"You know what. Before I write this imporving I'm going to think about the ending to this story."

And I thought that 'no pony is going to die today!' so I went to fimfiction and started writing!

That's why the ending turnd out happy!

This story still does not belong to me It belongs to the oringal creator OrangeFly.

I improved it so it'll be a better story.

Because his had a lot of spelling errors and grammer mastakes.

When I read it I ignored those and then you know figured out that if he didn't make those mastakes it was a really good story.

how i figured out I copoed and pasted it to micrstof word and did some corrections and

BLAM! It turned out to be really good.

Then I had the idea to imporve his story

Dear OrangFly:

If you read the imporving of your 'Knit to Kill' story and want to comment about it be my guest!