Making dresses

by XenoJohn

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Crossover
Length: 1858

How does rarity really make her dresses out of?

Read description before reading!

What does Rarity really make her dresses out of?
today is just a rainy day in ponyville Pinkie and her friend Rarity were planing to go outside but the rain had to spoil the fun.
Then the dress maker asks Pinkie pie for help to make dresses.
and all of that seems fun right? Making dresses with your friend seems fun.
or is it?

This story is an inproving of Knit to kill.
Knit to kill does not belong to me it rightfully belongs to OrangeFly.
I had nothing to do with making making the story or the plot
The improving of the story may change the whole plot to the story.

I thought of imporving the story because there was a sh*t load of grammer mastakes and spelling errors.
like when srgt.sprinkles cupcakes before now had so many errors he had to make a new one.

That's why its more horrifing to read it because he did those corrections! :)
So still this story does not belong to me just the impoving to make the story better.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-03 22:40:01 UTC

Making dresses

Today in ponyville wasn't the brightest sunshiney happy day. Today seemed glomy and rainy. As the weather Pegasi moving the rain clouds and started stomping on them causing the rain to fall. And it was supost to be a rainy day anyways.

But that didn't stop our party pony Pinkie from having fun.

*knock*

*knock*

*knock*

*knock*

*knock*

*door opens*

"Hello Pinkie. Nice to see that you can make it in a short peroid of time!" Said Rarity as she opened the door letting the hyper active party pony enter the dress makers store.

"OF CORSE I CAN MAKE IT HERE ON TIME! If you need help from Pinkie, Pinkie comes no matter what happens!" laughted the party pony as she hopped around the dress store.

"Glad to hear it...And please dry yourself next time before entering."

Pinkie Pie looked at herself in a merrior she, is completely wet but her mane and tail are straightened making her look like Pinkamena Diane Pie. But Pinkie Pie is still that hyper, fun, smiling pony but she was rainded on.

She shuck herself and making the rain on her go to different areas around the store.

"Sorry, I'll be more careful next time when coming here. I know how you like to keep tighty in this place."

"No need for apologies Pinkie."

"So what are we doing?!" Said pinkie as she was skipping acouse the dress store.

"I wanted you to come here and help me with something."

"Help with what?" asked Pinkie

"I wanted you to help me with making dresses." said Rarity while she moved her mane away from her eyes.

"*gasp* Making dresses!? I always wanted to learn how to make dresses ever since I known you! It'll be sooooo cool! I can make a cool party dress! Or even make a Nightmare Night costume! I can make so many cool, super-duper crazy things! Its going to be awseome!" Pinkie said as she skipped around the store in glee.

"As I was saying. I wanted help making for some costumers when the rain ends."

Rarity put her hoof on pinkies mouth before she could speck.

"And before you can say something random, I made you some nice hot chocolate for you just to give you a treat before we start our work."

"OH GOODIE! GOODIE! GOODIE! I love hot chocolate soooo much!" Giggled the sugar crazed party pony.

She grabbed the hot chocolate and drank it in one gulp.

"Thanks for...Th...I...I feel dizzy...What did you pu-" Pinkie fell asleep and dropped the mug that had the hot chocolate in it.

***

Pinkie awoke and she was in a different area.

The area made her spine tingle she tried to move but something was holding her from moving.

"Wh-Where am I?" asked Pinkie.

A light turnd on. This horrified her, corpses hanged on the walls, bloodied dresses maded out of pony skin, decorations of pony corpses.

And even skined pony corpses are hanging on the wals

Bloodied manikins with pony skin made as dresses where hung on them as well.

"Good your awake." said a unknown yet familiar voice.

"R-Rarity is that you? W-Where am I?" she asked in fright.

"Well darling your in the storage room of my shop."

Pinkie was scared for a minute then puased.

She started to laugh and giggle.

"Ok this is got to be the best prank you and Dashie made yet! Scaring me before Nightmare Night, I's a little early, but You got me! And it worked trying to act that nasty nightmare about me killing Dashie! So heh can I go now?"

"Oh heavens no! I can't let you go, your helping me make dresses!"

Pinkie's fear started to creep back into her. She is nearly starting to cry.

"Please Rarity this isn't funny anymore! I get it! Please let me go!"

"I told you I can't let you go." Rarity came out of the shadows and showed Pinkie Pie the most horrific sight that she'll ever see.

Pinkie gasped at what the saw. Rarity was wearing the dress of cutie marks and the necklace of unicorn horns. But there was no pegasi wings.

"Rarity please! Your frightning me! This isn't funny anymore Dashie!"

"Whats so funny?"

"This really bad joke about that nightmare I told you and the rest of the gange about!"

"HA! I don't know where you got this as a 'joke' Pinkie! you really need to get some more humor in you, and I thought that your the element of laughter!"

"Rarity please! I'm your friend!"

"Of couse we're friends Pinkie! Your just helping me make dresses that's all." Said Rarity as she walked to a nearby table.

She was moving the table closer to pinkie. Pinkie was getting even more scared by the second of what evil envent that happened in her dreams.

The tabe had saws, bone saws, scaples, syringes, and more medical equipment where placed in a convenient lined order.

And there where electric charges there as well. That scared Pinkie the most.

Rarity put the electric charges on Pinke's arms and legs.

"Now, now dear this is only going to hurt for about Three to four minuts." She calmy said to the terrified party pony.

"Rarity we are friends please let me go!" She was at the point of crying when Rarity put the charges on her arms and legs.

"I told you Pinkie we are friends! Your just helping me make dresses there is nothing to worry about that." Rarity teased.

Rarity headed to a switch with a leaver on it, then she pulled the leaver down and the electric charges started to painfuly sock Pinkie Pie.

Pinkie started to scream in pain when the charges were shocking her.

Three minuts pasted and the electric charges stopped. Rarity grinned and her eyes sparkled as she ran up to pinkie.

"Amazing! You managed to survive three minuts of painful electric shocks! Now I can show you how I make dresses while your awake!" The dress maker said in glee.

"Now off to the scaples!" said Rarity as she went to the table of medical equipment.

She got out a large bone saw and pointed at Pinkie.

"Wh-Whats that?" Pinkie asked in horror.

"Well I'm going to saw off your cutie mark silly! So it can fit on my new dress!." Rarity teased again.

She went to the terrified party pony and started to saw her cutie mark.

Pimkie screamed in pain.

"RARITY PLEASE STOP!!!"

She completely sawed off her cutie mark. Rarity went to the table with the equipment and grabbed one of the syringes and headed back to Pinkie.

"Wh-Whats that?" she said through out the pain she is in.

She injected her with the needle.

"Well sweety this is to make the pain to go away. In about a couple minuts you wont be able to feel anything before your ribe cage." she camly said to her tortured friend.

"WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!? I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING WRONG TO YOU!? Did I?"

"Well why I'm doing this is because I need to cut off you cutie mark so it can be apart of my new dress. Then I need these scaples to cut you open and take out your orgins and skeletion and use your skin for the dress part! And no Pinkie you did nothing wrong that will make me do this. But this is the way things have to be Pinkie."

"R-Rarity?"

"Yes my dear?"

"I...I want to go home." She opened sobbingly. She was confused and horrified that one of her own best friends are reenacting those horrable events that was in Pinkies dreams.

"Come on dear. Your just helping me make dresses there is no reason to cry about it."

Pinkie cried again

***

The drug took effect and Pinkie couldn't feel anything below her rib cage.

Pinkie Pie was scared byonde the limit she was crying and sobbing.

Rarity readied her scaple and headed to Pinkie who was sobbing though the pain and the horror.

*DING DONG!*

The door bell rang.

"Who could it be now?! I'm trying to make dresses!"

She stabbed the scaple on the table. She took off her dress and headed to the door.

But the scaple was conveniently placed to one of the ropes on the table that Pnkie was one.

She shuck the rope with the scaple, she shuck it hard and fast enough to cut the rope freeing her right hoof.

Then she used the scaple to free her other hoof and then her back legs.

Pinkie was free.

She got her cutie mark that was cuten off she found a emty bucket placed on one of the skined ponies corpses.

She put her cutie mark in there and then of her sadness.

Her mane and tail straightened and she went to that lighter pink. Suprisingly her cutie mark did the same with its cooler.

But Pinkie was still sane but she was terrified and sad at the same time.

She heard the dress seller come back down the stairs. Pinkie Pie looked all over the place. But the only weapons where there was those medical equipment.

Too late. Rarity was already down stairs and starring at Pinkie with a angry face.

Pinkies only weapon was the bucket with her cutie mark in it.

Rarity made a scream and charged her with a knife. Pinkie waited for the right moment to strike.

*WAM!*

She hit Rarity with the bucket. There was a huge dent on it.

Pinkie found bandages in a box beside the table that she was tided on.

She put on the bandages on and didn't hesitate to exit the storage room.

***

Pinkie Pie was free. Her mane and tail were still straightened. She saw her bestest of friend Rainbow Dash jumping on a rain cloud. It was still raining but she didn't care about that.

Pinkie Pie was going to tell her the horrors that she saw from in her dreams and in reality.

Note

If your woundering why I made the ending 'happy' well I'v read srgt.sprinkles's cupcakes about five times (I regret doing that) and said:

"You know what. Before I write this imporving I'm going to think about the ending to this story."

And I thought that 'no pony is going to die today!' so I went to fimfiction and started writing!

That's why the ending turnd out happy!

This story still does not belong to me It belongs to the oringal creator OrangeFly.

I improved it so it'll be a better story.

Because his had a lot of spelling errors and grammer mastakes.

When I read it I ignored those and then you know figured out that if he didn't make those mastakes it was a really good story.

how i figured out I copoed and pasted it to micrstof word and did some corrections and

BLAM! It turned out to be really good.

Then I had the idea to imporve his story

Dear OrangFly:

If you read the imporving of your 'Knit to Kill' story and want to comment about it be my guest!